Can someone Proof read and tell me what I did wrong with my essay? I got a 50%
Book: A long walk to water
Question: What are the similar struggles that Nya and Salva face?
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Can Someone Proof Read And Tell Me What I Did Wrong With My Essay? I Got A 50% Book: A Long Walk To WaterQuestion:

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Answer 1

Answer:

Hey. Good luck

Explanation:

Chapter eight of Linda Sue Park's A Long Walk to Water showcases Nya and Salva's struggle to find water and food for their group. Their perseverance creates a connection with the theme because they refused to give up on their search.

This is just a rewrite. You could try and avoid sentence fragments like, "[i]n Nya's section, Nya is struggling with water." You could join that sentence with the following one.


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__________________________ 19. True or False? Without wetlands as places for migratory birds to rest, some birds would soon become extinct.

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True I’m pretty sure.

Write a summary of what takes
place in this excerpt of text.

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I’m not writing a summary for this

does anybody know these answers ? i’m literally struggling lol. it’s for the story “The Chrysanthemums”

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1. the Tinker

2. Elisa

He told me as if thinking aloud, "Abdul! I know you have to go away to grow. Does
the seagull not fly cross the sun, alone and without a nest?"
1. Who is 'he' in the above extract?
2. What values of the narrator's father is revealed in the above lines?
3. Who has quoted the following quote “Does the seagull not fly cross the sun,
alone and without a nest?"

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This question is incomplete. Here's the complete question.

Read Wings of fire by Abdul Kalam

He told me as if thinking aloud, "Abdul! I know you have to go away to grow. Does the seagull not fly cross the sun, alone and without a nest?"

1. Who is 'he' in the above extract?

2. What values of the narrator's father is revealed in the above lines?

3. Who has quoted the following quote “Does the seagull not fly cross the sun,  alone and without a nest?"

Answer:

1. Abdul Kalam´s father

2. Kalam´s father shows that he understands Kalam´s need to go study at the district headquarters in Ramanathapuram, because he needs to make a good life for himself. The example of a seagull flying by itself without a nest refers to his understanding of his son´s needs.

3. Abdul Kalam quoted his father in his autobiography “Wings of Fire.”


1. Lines 1–30: What is the main activity on each of the three floors? What details reveal the danger of fire on each floor? Book: triangle fire factory, no options just writing

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On the eighth floor, the cutters cut lightweight cotton fabric called lawn, which "burned as easily as gasoline". On the ninth floor, workers sewed the fabric using machines on tables so close together that there was "only a narrow aisle" between rows. On the tenth floor, the shirtwaists were inspected, packed and shipped. The tenth floor "also held the showroom and owner´s offices."

Explanation:

Describe your ideal job.

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my ideal job is a personal assistant. i think it’s pretty simple and the check is pretty good :) it’s when you buy things for someone from you expensive places then you get paid (this isn’t my ideal job but i did it to help you)
My ideal job is doing an boutique business, because I believe It is easy to start, easily manageable by even one person, requires comparatively small amount of capital to start, engages the creativity and passion of the owner to a great extend. It's a business that isn't price sensitive, one that won't compromise the client experience to save a few dollars. It's competing on service, quality product and sensory experience rather than price.

Help please be quick!!
Yesterday, two _____________ malfunctioned.
Both of the __________ screens froze and went blank.
called the technician, and he said to plug the charger into the ________.
One of the _________ chargers stopped working. I was extremely frustrated because I had a lot of work to complete.
Computers, computer's, computer, computers'

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Answer:

Yesterday, two computers malfunctioned.

Both of the  computers screens froze and went blank.

called the technician, and he said to plug the charger into the  computers.

One of the  computers chargers stopped working. I was extremely frustrated because I had a lot of work to complete.

Computers, computer's, computer, computers'

Explanation:

Microphone feedback kept blaring out the speaker's words, but I got the outline.

Withdrawal of our troops from Vietnam. Recognition of Cuba. Immediate commutation of

a student loans. Until all these demands were met, the speaker said he considered

himself in a state of unconditional war with the United States Government.

I laughed out loud

- Tobias Wolff, "Civilian"

a а.

Why does the author choose this specific tone in order to achieve their purpose?

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Answer:

The sardonic tone in the passage helps the writer to achieve the purpose of mocking the political speech.

Explanation:

The given excerpt is taken from the book titled 'In Pharoah's Army: Memories of Lost War' written by Tobias Wolff. The book is an autobiographical account of the writer of his days of duty in Vietnam War and it's effect on his life.

In chapter 12 'Civilian' of the book, Wolff mocks the political speech being transmitted over microphone. In the given excerpt, the author has created a sardonic tone. This sardonic tone is used by the author to achieve the purpose of mocking the political speech. The short sentence at the end of the passaeg creates the mocking of speech and forms the sardonic tone that the author not just laughed at the political speech but laughed out loud.

Emily realized the sentence contains a pronoun error. Which sentence below corrects the error? A.The pack of wolves returned to his or her den. B.The pack of wolves returned to his den. C.The pack of wolves returned to our den. D.The pack of wolves returned to its den.

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Answer:

D.The pack of wolves returned to its den.

Explanation:

When we are referring to an animal or an object, we must not use the pronouns "she / her" or "he / his" as these pronouns are specific to human beings. In this case, animals and objects are referred to with the pronoun "it". The pronoun "our" is also used for a group of human beings and never for a group of animals or objects.

In this case, the letters A, B, and C do not have the correct way to use a pronoun that refers to a pack of wolves. If wolves are animals, the right pronoun for them is "it / its" as shown in the letter D.

Multiple choice

In English, the pronouns you, he, she, we, me, they, and them are lowercased. Why do you think I is the only pronoun that is never lowercased? Check all of the answers you agree with.

because I is the most important pronoun
because a lowercase i looks strange by itself
because a capital I is easier to write
because of a different reason
because of no good reason at all

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because I is the most important pronoun

Answer:

ace

Explanation:

right on edge

can some help you will get 10 POINT and a 100 more

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Answer:

I think for a better chance at education, or political freedom.

Explanation:

Which word could best replace discarded in Paragraph 2 without changing the meaning or tone?
A. Purged
B.
Rejected
C
Removed
D
Abandoned

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Answer:

D. Abandoned

Explanation:

How are context clues used?

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Answer:

context clues are used to find the definition of a word that you dont understand

You need to underline key phrases and ideas in the sentence. And also look for words that give you synonyms, antonyms and examples.

What is the best definition of "tribulations" in the following sentence? "We experienced a host of tribulations on our trip to India: the airline put our luggage on the wrong plane, someone stole our rental car, and we both got sick the day after we arrived." *
A. expenses, debts
B. crimes, assaults
C. fears, insecurities
D. woes, miseries

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Answer:

d is the aswer

Explanation:

The best definition of "tribulations" in the following sentence is - crimes and assaults.

What are tribulations?

According to Christian eschatology, Jesus mentioned the Great Tribulation as a sign that would take place at the end of the world in the Olivet Discourse. The Great Tribulation, as described in Revelation 7:14, is the time period that Jesus foretold.

Verse 38 to verse 39. Because I am convinced that nothing—not even death, not even life, not even angels, not even principalities, not even powers, not even things in this world or things to come—not even height or depth or any other living thing—will be able to take away from us the love of God, which is in Christ Jesus our Lord.

The Heavenly Dao was punished with heavenly affliction. The Heavenly Dao would call forth heavenly suffering against any being that attempted to escape the bounds of the Heavenly Dao in order to eradicate it

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can someone pls tell me what this is

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Answer:

The second one

Explanation:

It is better put as a symbol and it makes sense.

How are communities shaped by their surroundings

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Explanation:

The environment shapes us unconsciously in more ways than we care to admit. Humans are profoundly social beings and as a result, most of us are constantly surrounded by people and desire social acceptance. For example, one of the most powerful influences of the environment on the person is that it is the cultural environment that determines what a person in that culture is. The environment varies with culture and history and impacts the person that gets in contact with it. We learn to engage in childhood while interacting with our social reality and then is when we learn that we have to follow conventions for social interactions.

And because we are social beings we are highly influenced by those we surround ourselves with. Not only that, but we are also influenced by the natural environment that surrounds us. Everything influences our way of thinking and our opinions: the climate influences our mood, the pollution influences our health, and the natural resources might affect human survival.

What is Melba Beal's known for? Please type in a complete sentence.

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''Melba Pattillo Beals, one of nine African-American students to integrate Central High School in Little Rock, Arkansas, in 1957, answered questions from students in February 1998 & 1999 during live interviews. Today, Melba is a successful author and speaker, but as a teenager, she encountered many obstacles in her effort to receive an education equal to white students in Little Rock. She and the rest of the Little Rock Nine were the focus of a bitter fight that became a major event in American history.''

What is an indigenous goose

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Answer:

It's a goose that is indigenous...

Explanation:

JK...it's a type of geese that had been a delicasy for indigenous people way back when..

Answer:

For many Indigenous Peoples, goose was a common delicacy and important supplement to the diet. Goose continues to be important to many cultures. In addition to being used as food, goose was also caught for its feathers and bones. Goose hunting was extensive among Northern Cree.

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In Chapter 4, since Dill had just arrived for the summer, he got the privilege of the first ride in the tire.

True
False

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it's true ............:

Part A What is a theme of "Stray"? People who work hard are less likely to want to keep a pet. A family's financial situation can affect the decisions it makes. A family should make financial sacrifices for their pets. People should put their children before their pets.

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Answer:

A family's financial situation can affect the decisions it makes.

Explanation:

"Stray" tells the story of a girl who, when rescuing a stray dog, cannot stay with him because the family does not have enough financial resources. The girl's father warns that she can help the dog to recover (the dog is injured and malnourished), but due to their financial condition, the dog could not stay in the house. This saddened the girl a lot, but this decision had to be made in the name of the family's needs, which shows that the financial situation has a lot of influence on decision making.

Which of the following sets of words contribute to the sense of paradox in the passage above?

men who despise the habit: common to southern people
native of Iceland: common to southern people
supple in appearance: being in fact
active and supple: scarcely moved his arms

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Answer: The answer is active and supple: scarcely moved his arms

McCarthy quotes Stalin and Lenin… to convince communist sympathizers to join his cause against communism. to point out how communist leaders promise a good deal but rarely follow through. to support his argument that communism has already infiltrated most of Europe. to support his claims that communist and non-communist states cannot exist in peace.

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Answer:

to support his claims that communist and non-communist states cannot exist in peace

Explanation:

McCarthy claimed that communism's greatest flaw was that its only religion was immorality (or Immoralism as he called it). He quoted Stalin to emphasize the fact that communism repudiates Christianity and that communist values oppose Christian values. Communists cannot live in peace with Christians and will not accept Christian democracy, and they will fight against them to impose their communist doctrine.

He also claimed that the greatest threat to America wouldn't come from actions of communists abroad, instead, it would come from traitors within the nation.

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Which are types of context clues? Check all that apply.


synonym clues

contrast clues

example clues

narrative clues

explanation clues

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Answer:

contrast clues + narrative clues

Explanation:

ans      b an d contrast an narrative

Explanation:

If you could change one thing in the world what would it be?
1 Paragraph

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I would change anybody who isn't in jail rightfully would be in jail and anybody who is in jail wrongfully would be free. There are so many people who are in jail now who don't deserve to be because they didn't do anything wrong, they were wrongfully convicted. However, there's still so many other inappropriate people, murderers, robbers, school shooters, child abusers, anybody who sells another person, who are out on the streets doing the unimaginable. While People who have been in jail for a long time suffer for those types of crimes. Lastly, that's why the one thing I would change would be people who deserve to be in jail go to jail and the all the other innocent human beings are let out of it.

Explanation:

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If I could change one thing in the world it would be global warming. Us humans have been talking about saving the world for so long, yet the Earth continues to deteriorate dah by day. The ocean is polluted causing animals to have inflamed lungs or be caught in plastic and choked to death. The air is polluted from the gas let out by factories causing some of us to have unhealthy lungs. Our streets are littered with trash, not a day goes by where you don’t see a cola can on the side of the street. The polar caps are melting, and soon some states won’t be here anymore. As our Earth deteriorates because of what us humans have done to nature it leaves a bleak future for us.

(Hope this is okay, correct me if I’m wrong with the examples of global warming)

13 hours and 12 minutes.

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Answer:

wait wut- what ur question.

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help me I'm stupid idk anything

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Answer:

XD

Explanation:

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When sentences include coordinating conjunctions, they should not
use

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Answer:

BRAINLIEST PLS I NEVER HAD ONE

Explanation:

When joining two words or phrases with a coordinating conjunction, do not use a comma.

What is emphasized in the poem that is absent from the painting? PART B: How does this affect the meaning?
Text " Landscape with the Fall of Icarus"

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Answer:

The moment when Icarus' wings melt.

Explanation:

In the poem we can see the lines "sweating in the sun / that melted / the wings’ wax "that portray the moment that Ícaru had his wings melted by the sun. These lines are not portrayed in the painting, but show the tone of tragedy that the poem and the painting seek to portray. In writing these lines, the poet adds the despair of Ícarus in contrast to the lull that ensues in the landscape when he falls overboard and no one notices.

Answer:

son formas no convencionales de emplear las palabras

Explanation:

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How has our society been developing
write in six points​

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Answer:

well one because of tourism and wildlife our country earns foreign exchangebecause of the exports such as flowers tea machinery our country earns extra moneybecause of proper education we have good lawyers good doctors who do their jobs wellbecause of the extra money and from the exports and tourism and wildlife the government has developed roads and as reduced the occurrence of accidentsbecause of the extra money the government has established good schools good hospitals and good institutions toosorry but that's all I can manage

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In South Dakota, Pine Ridge Indian Reservation is as big as Delaware and Rhode Island combined. It has some of the highest poverty rates in the United States. For three years, it has also hosted shows with music written for an orchestra by high school students.


"It's really a great thing to see these kids, and the pride that the reservation has in having these kids be stars," said David Gier. He is the music leader of the South Dakota Symphony Orchestra.


The yearly music academy is one part of the Lakota Music Project. It's a program developed with the orchestra and musicians of the Lakota Native American tribe. The goal is to create cultural cooperation, teaching people about the Lakota and the orchestra.


"Through music, we are able to show a side of us that nobody gets to see," said Emmanuel Black Bear, a singer. He has been part of the Lakota Music Project since 2009. The native people have "a rich culture," he said. "I wanted to be a part of something where we could show the positive side of our people through music."


Black Bear is bringing the Lakota Music Project to Washington, D.C. Native flute player Bryan Akipa and nine members of the South Dakota Symphony are also going. In October, Black Bear will perform at the Smithsonian's National Museum of the American Indian and at Washington National Cathedral. It is for a festival hosted by the PostClassical Ensemble. The goal is to show Native American influences on American music.


Matching Two Different Types Of Music Together

The Lakota Music Project "deserves to be more widely known," said Joseph Horowitz. He is the PostClassical Ensemble's leader.


The project began in 2005. It was soon after Gier started with the orchestra. He wanted to develop community programs, and he learned about tensions in his new community between Native and non-Native Americans.


Gier approached local leaders and experts. One was Ronnie Theisz, a writer of books on Lakota culture. The two men talked about creating a project.


An idea came one snowy evening at Pine Ridge. Some of the orchestra's musicians met with the Porcupine Singers, a drumming circle on the reservation. They played music for each other.


Gier said the keeper of the drum talked about singing old songs and passing on tradition to younger people. It was the main thing both groups shared.


There are plenty of differences, too. The timing of the two types of music is different, said Black Bear. "In the beginning, it was kind of difficult to match them together."


Hearing The Music Instead Of Trying To Change It

The first Lakota Music Project tour, in 2009, set themes for the concerts. Theisz became a leader on the project. He suggested grouping the concert around love and death, joy and sadness, with music from each culture. The second half had new works on Lakota themes.


The Lakota Music Project is coming to Washington because of Horowitz's support of the Indianist movement. It was in the early 1900s. American composers wrote music based on Native American themes. Horowitz calls it "a major American cultural event that's been totally forgotten."


From the Lakota point of view, however, the "Indianist" movement inappropriately uses Native American customs. It's based on a misunderstanding of Native traditions, they believe.


"Even when they loved to take source music from different Indian tribes," Theisz said of the Indianist composers, "they didn't appreciate it." They wanted to try to improve it, he said.


"We're trying to counter that," he said. "Hearing the real music is part of the project."


The Lakota Music Project's focus remains on building bridges through music.


"It's just human connection," Gier said, "and feeling like we can make a difference."






Question 1

Refer to the Newsela article "The Lakota Tribe Wants to Educate People Through Music Project."


Part A


What is an implied idea in the article??




A. The Lakota Music Project seeks to improve upon the music of different Indian tribes.


B. The goal of the Lakota Music Project is to emphasize the differences between Native American music and European music.


C. The Lakota Music Project is a product of the Indianist movement.


D. An outcome of the Lakota Music Project is that people of different cultures learn how much they have in common.


Question 2

Part B


Which two sentences from the text that best support the answer in Part A?



A. “The Lakota Music Project's focus remains on building bridges through music."


B. “[The Indianist movement] flourished in the early 20th century as American composers based works on Native American themes.”


C. "Native music is more freestyle," said Black Bear, who has been part of the Lakota Music Project since 2009.


D. "Its goal is to spotlight Native American influences on American classical music."

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Answer:

Part A Answer: D. An outcome of the Lakota Music Project is that people of different cultures learn how much they have in common.

Part B Answers: A. (The Lakota Music Project's focus remains on building bridges through music)

and D. (Its goal is to spotlight Native American influences on American classical music)

Explanation: I had the K12 test and missed these, but these are the correct answers! I hope this helps, but I might be a little late. :(

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