Can someone Proof read and tell me what I did wrong with my essay? I got a 50%
Book: A long walk to water
Question: What are the similar struggles that Nya and Salva face?
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Answer:

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Explanation:

Chapter eight of Linda Sue Park's A Long Walk to Water showcases Nya and Salva's struggle to find water and food for their group. Their perseverance creates a connection with the theme because they refused to give up on their search.

This is just a rewrite. You could try and avoid sentence fragments like, "[i]n Nya's section, Nya is struggling with water." You could join that sentence with the following one.

McCarthy quotes Stalin and Lenin… to convince communist sympathizers to join his cause against communism. to point out how communist leaders promise a good deal but rarely follow through. to support his argument that communism has already infiltrated most of Europe. to support his claims that communist and non-communist states cannot exist in peace.

Help please be quick!!
Yesterday, two _____________ malfunctioned.
Both of the __________ screens froze and went blank.
called the technician, and he said to plug the charger into the ________.
One of the _________ chargers stopped working. I was extremely frustrated because I had a lot of work to complete.
Computers, computer's, computer, computers'

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__________________________ 19. True or False? Without wetlands as places for migratory birds to rest, some birds would soon become extinct.

What is the best definition of "tribulations" in the following sentence? "We experienced a host of tribulations on our trip to India: the airline put our luggage on the wrong plane, someone stole our rental car, and we both got sick the day after we arrived." *
A. expenses, debts
B. crimes, assaults
C. fears, insecurities
D. woes, miseries

In Chapter 4, since Dill had just arrived for the summer, he got the privilege of the first ride in the tire.

True
False

Emily realized the sentence contains a pronoun error. Which sentence below corrects the error? A.The pack of wolves returned to his or her den. B.The pack of wolves returned to his den. C.The pack of wolves returned to our den. D.The pack of wolves returned to its den.

Write a summary of what takes
place in this excerpt of text.

Which word could best replace discarded in Paragraph 2 without changing the meaning or tone?
A. Purged
B.
Rejected
C
Removed
D
Abandoned

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He told me as if thinking aloud, "Abdul! I know you have to go away to grow. Does
the seagull not fly cross the sun, alone and without a nest?"
1. Who is 'he' in the above extract?
2. What values of the narrator's father is revealed in the above lines?
3. Who has quoted the following quote “Does the seagull not fly cross the sun,
alone and without a nest?"

If you could change one thing in the world what would it be?
1 Paragraph

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Which are types of context clues? Check all that apply.


synonym clues

contrast clues

example clues

narrative clues

explanation clues

Multiple choice

In English, the pronouns you, he, she, we, me, they, and them are lowercased. Why do you think I is the only pronoun that is never lowercased? Check all of the answers you agree with.

because I is the most important pronoun
because a lowercase i looks strange by itself
because a capital I is easier to write
because of a different reason
because of no good reason at all

Describe your ideal job.

What is an indigenous goose

How are context clues used?

Which of the following sets of words contribute to the sense of paradox in the passage above?

men who despise the habit: common to southern people
native of Iceland: common to southern people
supple in appearance: being in fact
active and supple: scarcely moved his arms

Here is the story and the questions are below it

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In South Dakota, Pine Ridge Indian Reservation is as big as Delaware and Rhode Island combined. It has some of the highest poverty rates in the United States. For three years, it has also hosted shows with music written for an orchestra by high school students.


"It's really a great thing to see these kids, and the pride that the reservation has in having these kids be stars," said David Gier. He is the music leader of the South Dakota Symphony Orchestra.


The yearly music academy is one part of the Lakota Music Project. It's a program developed with the orchestra and musicians of the Lakota Native American tribe. The goal is to create cultural cooperation, teaching people about the Lakota and the orchestra.


"Through music, we are able to show a side of us that nobody gets to see," said Emmanuel Black Bear, a singer. He has been part of the Lakota Music Project since 2009. The native people have "a rich culture," he said. "I wanted to be a part of something where we could show the positive side of our people through music."


Black Bear is bringing the Lakota Music Project to Washington, D.C. Native flute player Bryan Akipa and nine members of the South Dakota Symphony are also going. In October, Black Bear will perform at the Smithsonian's National Museum of the American Indian and at Washington National Cathedral. It is for a festival hosted by the PostClassical Ensemble. The goal is to show Native American influences on American music.


Matching Two Different Types Of Music Together

The Lakota Music Project "deserves to be more widely known," said Joseph Horowitz. He is the PostClassical Ensemble's leader.


The project began in 2005. It was soon after Gier started with the orchestra. He wanted to develop community programs, and he learned about tensions in his new community between Native and non-Native Americans.


Gier approached local leaders and experts. One was Ronnie Theisz, a writer of books on Lakota culture. The two men talked about creating a project.


An idea came one snowy evening at Pine Ridge. Some of the orchestra's musicians met with the Porcupine Singers, a drumming circle on the reservation. They played music for each other.


Gier said the keeper of the drum talked about singing old songs and passing on tradition to younger people. It was the main thing both groups shared.


There are plenty of differences, too. The timing of the two types of music is different, said Black Bear. "In the beginning, it was kind of difficult to match them together."


Hearing The Music Instead Of Trying To Change It

The first Lakota Music Project tour, in 2009, set themes for the concerts. Theisz became a leader on the project. He suggested grouping the concert around love and death, joy and sadness, with music from each culture. The second half had new works on Lakota themes.


The Lakota Music Project is coming to Washington because of Horowitz's support of the Indianist movement. It was in the early 1900s. American composers wrote music based on Native American themes. Horowitz calls it "a major American cultural event that's been totally forgotten."


From the Lakota point of view, however, the "Indianist" movement inappropriately uses Native American customs. It's based on a misunderstanding of Native traditions, they believe.


"Even when they loved to take source music from different Indian tribes," Theisz said of the Indianist composers, "they didn't appreciate it." They wanted to try to improve it, he said.


"We're trying to counter that," he said. "Hearing the real music is part of the project."


The Lakota Music Project's focus remains on building bridges through music.


"It's just human connection," Gier said, "and feeling like we can make a difference."






Question 1

Refer to the Newsela article "The Lakota Tribe Wants to Educate People Through Music Project."


Part A


What is an implied idea in the article??




A. The Lakota Music Project seeks to improve upon the music of different Indian tribes.


B. The goal of the Lakota Music Project is to emphasize the differences between Native American music and European music.


C. The Lakota Music Project is a product of the Indianist movement.


D. An outcome of the Lakota Music Project is that people of different cultures learn how much they have in common.


Question 2

Part B


Which two sentences from the text that best support the answer in Part A?



A. “The Lakota Music Project's focus remains on building bridges through music."


B. “[The Indianist movement] flourished in the early 20th century as American composers based works on Native American themes.”


C. "Native music is more freestyle," said Black Bear, who has been part of the Lakota Music Project since 2009.


D. "Its goal is to spotlight Native American influences on American classical music."

Part A What is a theme of "Stray"? People who work hard are less likely to want to keep a pet. A family's financial situation can affect the decisions it makes. A family should make financial sacrifices for their pets. People should put their children before their pets.

When sentences include coordinating conjunctions, they should not
use

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How has our society been developing
write in six points​

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What is emphasized in the poem that is absent from the painting? PART B: How does this affect the meaning?
Text " Landscape with the Fall of Icarus"

1. Lines 1–30: What is the main activity on each of the three floors? What details reveal the danger of fire on each floor? Book: triangle fire factory, no options just writing

does anybody know these answers ? i’m literally struggling lol. it’s for the story “The Chrysanthemums”

How are communities shaped by their surroundings

Microphone feedback kept blaring out the speaker's words, but I got the outline.

Withdrawal of our troops from Vietnam. Recognition of Cuba. Immediate commutation of

a student loans. Until all these demands were met, the speaker said he considered

himself in a state of unconditional war with the United States Government.

I laughed out loud

- Tobias Wolff, "Civilian"

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Why does the author choose this specific tone in order to achieve their purpose?

What is Melba Beal's known for? Please type in a complete sentence.

13 hours and 12 minutes.