Read the following passage, which is lacking in vivid description, imagery, and dialogue. Rewrite the passage to include description and dialogue in a way that helps convey a nervous tone.
Passage
My brother Felipe and I walked up to the abandoned house at the end of the street. Felipe opened the gate, and we walked forward. We walked all the way up to the door and knocked, but no one answered. I leaned over the railing and looked in the window, and it was pretty empty in there. Then there was a noise inside the house, and we left.
Answer:
My brother Felipe and I walked up to the abandoned house at the end of the street. We was both shaking and filled with fear. Felipe opens the gates slowly and we walked forward. Both of us wasn't ready to go into the abandoned house. We both new it was creepy enough to make us cry. We walked all the way up to the door and knocked, but no one answered. We tried to open the door but it was locked. I leaned over the railing and looked in the window, and it was pretty empty in there. I could only see a table and some empty bowls on it, assuming it was a kitchen. Then there was a noise inside the house, sending a chill down both of our sounds. It sounded like screaming. Finally, we turned and left, looking behind us to make sure we wasn't followed home.
Explanation:
Question 1
Part A
What is a central idea of "We're Going to Mars!"?
NASA has started providing public transportation to space.
Private companies have begun setting up colonies in space.
Living on Mars will be less expensive than living on Earth.
NASA has a strategy underway to colonize Mars.
Question 2
Part B
Which detail best supports the answer to Part A?
“NASA's costs are much higher. It thinks that such a mission would ultimately cost $1 trillion.”
“Phase 1: requires that we build bigger and better spacecraft. This will transport the crew with all of the supplies it needs to survive.”
“NASA currently has plans to send a human mission to Mars by 2033. There are five phases, or steps.”
“Once everything is in place, the colonies are established, and deep space travel is normalized, someone could move to Mars for as little as $100,000.”
Answer:
the answer for part a will be :
NASA has a srategy underway to colonize mars.
the answer for part b will be :
Phase 1: requires that we build bigger and better spacecraft. This will transport the crew with all of the supplies it needs to survive.
Explanation:
i hope it helped :)
One thing snow leopards can't do is
A. climb trees
B. roar
C. see in the dark
D. hear well
Answer:
B. Roar
Explanation:
Hope this helped :)
Would you rather be the richest person in the world and hate what you do, or have an average wage and love what you do?
I would have an average wage and love what I do, because I'm still making enough money to get by. And happiness in the end is better than materialistic self love.
what makes a hero? in Flying Dreams: Women Airforce Pilots of WWII.
(choose more than 1 answer) What strategies should writers use to help organize their ideas for an informational essay?
Select all that apply.
A. Create a research plan.
B. Make an idea map.
C. Make an outline.
D. Create a thesis statement.
B.
C.
While all of these are important to writing informational essays, the question is how to organize ideas instead of anything else.
Which of the Code of Hammurabi punishments are used today? Which are not?
Answer:
Hammurabi's code required accusers to bring the accused to court by themselves. Unlike today's laws it is required by law for the accused to show up to court. Hammurabi's code and today's laws both offer protection of property and different punishments for different crimes based on severity
Explanation: not for sure but hope this helps
Answer:
I studied this awhile ago so forgive me if I make some mistakes in this response
Explanation:
Maybe the if you hurt someone, you will get punished.
For example, if someone punches someone in school, you could get detention. Pretty sure we still have that one around
Not sure about the things that are not used today, sorry!
Read the passage below from The First Men in the Moon.
I gave him an outline of the democratic method.
"When I had done he ordered cooling sprays upon his brow, and then requested me to repeat my explanation conceiving something had miscarried.
In the passage above, what does the underlined portion help the reader infer about the Grand Lunar?
He is a harsh leader.
He is in poor health.
He is angered by Mr. Cavor.
He is confused.
Answer: A. He is a harsh leader. I hope it helps :)
Which of the following is an example of an introductory statement?
A.In conclusion, it's only through time that we will find a solution.
B.However, too many people are using our resources.
C.The logging will continue.
D.To begin with, all of the trees in the rainforest are suffering.
Answer:
D. To begin with, all of the trees in the rainforest are suffering.
Explanation:
It says Begin always look out for Begin
please help I will mark brainliest!!
“ Rural villages located near factory complexes rely on the contaminated water for drinking, washing, and cooking. These villages have become known as “cancer villages” because of their high rates of cancer and death “
( all you got to do is form this sentence in your own word please don't make the same as ^ )
Answer: There are factories located near rural villages that contaminate water. These villages have been named "cancer villages" because they use this contaminated water which causes high rates of cancer and death.
Explanation:
I hope this helps
Answer:
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In The Outsiders, how does the character of Cherry Valance help bring out Ponyboy’s character?
Answer:
She shows him around town and helps him unite with her freinds
Answer:
She befriends Ponyboy early in the novel and helps him to see that Socs are people, too. After Bob dies, Cherry plays a minor role as a liaison between the two gangs. Ponyboy always keeps in mind her contention that, despite the superficial differences between them, the Socs and greasers see the same sunset.
Explanation:
lol easier to see
Which of the following spelling words contain three syllables, including a single vowel syllable in the middle? Select all that apply. (GIVING BRAINLIEST)
Senator
Origin
Medicine
Chocolate
Vertebrate
Public
Answer:
all of them except public
Explanation:
Answer:
1. 3. 4. 5.
Explanation:
last question sorryr
You are in an art class at school. The teacher tells the class that today each student is to paint a painting of their best friend in the class. The class is uncomfortable with this, and one student points out to the teacher that some kids will have lots of kids painting them, and other kids won’t be chosen at all. The teacher insists that this is what the students should do. Almost all of the students don’t want to do this.
What should you do?
Is it disrespectful to disagree with your teacher?
With your parents?
Your friends?
Can you disagree and still be respectful?
Answer:
yes you can disagree but still be respectful
Explanation:
Which three countries did Salva travel to in this chapter?
Ethiopia
Kenya
Africa
Sudan
(I'm pretty sure its ethiopia because of the gilo river)
also its talking about chp 12 :)
Y’all I wasn’t trying to scam you I was just saying ok chill ♀️
Answer:
ok chill
Explanation:
Answer:
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Explanation:
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Answer:
jeeeez i have seen soooo many answers like these
Explanation:
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Imagine that you are writing a news article for a community newspaper about the need to build a community center. What information could you give in your article to help influence people to build the community center?
T^T i'm so bad at english...
Answer:
When writing a persuasive piece, like this one, it's best to include positive effects of the center, some examples of those effects, and of course, the influential part where you encourage the reader to rise up and take action. This is the part where you convince the reader to help raise money and/or build the center.
May someone read the story and help with part A and B please !!!!!
will give brainlest .
Answer:
the story is not clear dear
What is the main problem with this conclusion paragraph? Thesis statement: Middle schools should offer a class about how to succeed as a teenager.
Main points: Teenagers have new responsibilities, such as driving and getting a job. People change in their teenage years more than in any other life period. Successful teenagers make successful adults.
Conclusion: Being a teenager is not easy. Teenagers need to prepare for their new responsibilitles, the changes they will experience, and thelr eventual lives as adults. Middle schools can help students get started on a new chapter in their lives.
O A it is missing one of the main points
B. It does not have a satisfying close.
OC. It does not restate the thesis.
D. It ados new information
Answer:
the answr is b
Explanation:
please mark this answer as the brainlest
Which theory, proposed by Alfred Wegener, became the foundation for the theory of plate tectonics?
A. the theory of spontaneous
B. the theory of evolution of species
C. the theory of continental drift
D. the big bang theory
Answer:
b
Explanation:
theory of continental drift
Humans have been migrating for thousands of years. You might remember that the earliest modern humans date back 200,000 years to Ethiopia. In the first migration, humans entered the Eurasian landmass and then moved along the coast to India, Southeast Asia and Australia. Scientists aren’t sure exactly why our early ancestors left Africa about 60,000 years ago. Most likely, sudden climate changes were a main factor.
How long have humans been migrating?
A. 2,000 years
B. about 200,000 years
C. about 60,000 years
D. 1,000 years
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Answer:
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“With man this is impossible, but with God all things are possible.”
Answer:
yes true
Explanation:
Answer:
Yes
Explanation:
I agree
In two paragraphs, describe your service project. Include details about the project’s execution from start to finish. Describe what you did, where your service project took place, who was involved, and what the
outcome was
Answer:
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the book Murder on the Orient Express
In Chapter 3, what do M. Bouc's thoughts reveal about him?
He does not think the mystery can be solved.
He is certain that the murderer has left the train.
He is concerned about the murder making his company look bad.
He is certain that Miss Debenham committed the crime.
He thinks the murderer must be British.
Answer: try this
He does not think the mystery can be solved.
Explanation:
Think about the types of media discussed in this lesson. What strategies for persuasion could be used to convince someone to act or believe something?
Coupons
Emotional appeal
Boring images
Fear-based images
Descriptive language
Answer:
Emotional Appeal
Explanation:
It would make more sence to get it set mentally in their brain. Like make them feel it and hear it at the same time.
whats your pronoun im learning about it now mines is she/them/they/her/
Answer:
im her/she
a and d
Explanation:
Answer:
I use she\they
Explanation:
An example of geeking out is when someone: O A. plays games with friends on weekends. B. creates an online network to rate videos. c. sends a sibling a link to a funny website. O D. researches the population of various cities.
Answer:
D: researches the population of various cities
Use the the letters of your first name to make an acrostic poem. Be creative!
The following is an example of an acrostic poem with my last name. YOU use your FIRST name.
You will use words, or phrases to describe yourself, but they MUST begin with that letter...
This is Mrs. Miller's example...
M- makes her students work hard
I- interesting and intelligent
L- laughs loudly
L- likes to watch netflixs
E- enjoyable and entertaining
R- reading teacher extroidinaire!
Answer:
C - aring
H - elpful
A - dorable
R - elaxed
L - eader
O - utstanding
T - rouble sometimes
T - hankful
E - njoys alot
Explanation: