Revise this to make it more persuasive and formal
Many cities and towns have community gardens--places the city council sets aside for people to rent garden space and plant a few veggies or flowers. The question, though, is whether they are totally useless or not. To evaluate this, it is important to look at how much time and how much money are needed to set the garden up, what it takes to maintain the gardens, and whether people use them and benefit from them. When you look at the big picture, community gardens in most large cities are awesome. However, as someone who visits the community garden in my small town every now and then, let me tell you, it is pricey, dicey, and seedy but not in a good way, a real waste of space.
Usually, city gardens need to be built from scratch. That means cities must buy and haul in all the materials for the garden beds. If these are raised beds. They must buy bricks or lumber. Sometimes organizers of community gardens will get lucky. Someone will donate materials to them. They still must have it moved on-site, though. Also, many community gardens require loads and loads of dirt and fertilizer, plus, an irrigation system. It takes a lot to make a garden from zilch. The costs can far outweigh the benefits in small communities. Larger cities can make this work. They have more options for materials. They also have more people using the completed garden.
The next important thing to look at is how the community keeps up the garden. Often community gardens require their renters to spend a certain amount of time weeding and watering the garden. While this might sound good in theory, my experience is that people rarely follow through. They usually start out doing a bang-up job in the spring during planting time, but then their lives get more and more swamped, so they disregard this commitment. If a city is large enough to have someone on site. Maintenance is not as big of a deal. However, in my small community garden, no one is ever around. In fact, weeds are the reigning “vegetable” growing in our community garden. This makes our town's community garden a waste of time.
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Write a poem comparing your teenage life to something else. Must be 10 lines or longer.

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My life is really boring sorry this is not a poem but I need points

Answer:

Explanation:

teenage life and the sky

the sky goes light when its feeling bright and happy

i go light when i feel bright and happy

the sky goes dark when its feeling down

i go dark when im feeling down

the sky rains when its not okay

i cry when im not okay

the sky thunders as if its angry

I rage when i'm angry

the sky hails when its having a breakdown

i sob when im having a breakdown

(im not a poet but its something)

Please help by midnight

Dramatic irony is when the _______________ (or the reader) seems to know more about an event, a situation or conversation than the characters. It creates tremendous ______________ with the text.

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Answer: Audience; Suspense

Explanation: Readers are also considered the audience of a story, because they're the ones witnessing/reading the story and what's transpiring. Dramatic Irony is suspenseful because we know what happened or what's going to happen and it builds tension when waiting for what's going to happen to happen or waiting for the narrator to realize what we already know.

The answer is audience for the first one and suspense for the second one.

PLEASE HELP WILL MARK BRAINLIEST!!

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Answer:

singular only and second person

The answers are :
-Same form for both singular and plural
-Second person

Is this a good story? (My teacher wanted us to make a story and my story is still to be continued.

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Im so sorry, I can't understand your handwriting.

But Im sure that whatever you wrote is a good story.

Answer:

yes this is pretty good I like how you asked a question to the reader. ;)

Explanation:

While hurricanes are known as typhoons and cyclones in different parts of the world, they are all the same type of storm. These tropical cyclones all form the same way. They form above warm ocean waters near the equator and use warm, moist air as fuel. This fuel allows them to continue to grow and rotate at faster speeds until they hit land. Once they hit land, they usually slow down because they no longer have the warm, moist air to fuel them. Although they slow down, they still move at speeds that allow them to cause great damage.

Hurricane Irma is a recent storm that touched down in the United States, forming from a tropical wave in the Atlantic Ocean. This wave lead to rain showers and thunderstorms, and eventually, the showers and thunderstorms became organized into a system. This created a low pressure area, allowing a hurricane to form. Hurricane Irma continued to grow as it moved across the ocean. By the time it hit the Caribbean, it was a Category 4 hurricane. It continued to change in size and speed. Finally, it touched down in Florida as a Category 4 hurricane before gradually weakening in power and dying in Missouri.
Hurricanes are a severe weather occurrence. Some hurricanes stay small, while others become more powerful until they touch down on land and start to lose power. However, hurricanes can still be catastrophic once they make landfall. Because scientists have learned so much about how hurricanes form, they are able to monitor them and warn people to take precautions if a hurricane hits in their area.

Based on the information in the text, why is it important for scientists to inform the public about the category of a hurricane that is going to hit a specific area?
Question 1 options:

Scientists can warn the public about how powerful the hurricane will be and how much damage it may cause, which allows people to prepare.

Scientists need to warn the public about the category so that the people from the area it hits can compare it to other hurricanes they have experienced.

Scientists travel to different sites of hurricanes and want to inform the people from the area that they are collecting information about the hurricane.

Scientists collect information about each category of hurricane and want to learn about the effects of the hurricane from the people in the community.

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Answer:

it is A

Explanation:

I only need help with these 2 questions!!
1. A phrase or group of words that has a specific idea that is different from its direct, iteral meaning is a _____________________
A. idiom
B. isotope
C. icon

2. The formula that we talked about in class to help determine if we are making a good inference is:

A. I say, we say, you say
B. It says + I say = and so...
C. sun + sand = fun

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Answer: 1. A, idiom

2. B, it says + i say = and so

Explanation: 1. an idiom is a sentence like “that was a piece of cake.” was it actually a piece of cake? no, it means it’s easy. an idiom is something that does not relate to the actual meaning of the sentence, therefore being #1’s answer

2. i wasn’t in your class so i don’t have much of an explanation for this it’s the one that makes the most sense

1. A, idiom
2. B, It says + I say = and so...

How should you close an opinion essay?
A. with a concluding example
B. with a short summary
C. with your last reason
D. with a final thought

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I think its D not really sure though

Which words from this paragraph help the reader understand the meaning of the word "elite"?*You can use a dictionary to help you answer this question.A) country's finest examples B) are ready to complete C) enter the stadium D) beam with pride

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Answer:

A.) country's finest examples

Explanation:

elite typically means the best, so when saying the country's finest examples, you are saying they are the best

Stay safe! <3

Your answer would be (A). Good luck

In the book Murdrer on the Orient Express
The inconsistency that Poirot points out in MacQueen's testimony is that Ratchett was in the dining car at 8:00 p.m.

False
True

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The answer is false

“He had Brown Hair. Not golden like then knights in the story, and his eyes were dark as rivers. The glory was his face.”

Why did the author choose to use the word "glory" in the phrase "The glory was his face"? Please don’t answer just for points.

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Maybe like happiness? Or that he has in honor for his hair maybe. I’m not positive though
The golden hair made the other knights seem glorious. With the character looking different from others his glory came from his face which was distinct from other characters

Curled at his breast, he sits there while the sun
Stripes the red west
With its last light: the chipmunk
Dives to his rest.
Which statement does not explain how the stanza helps create meaning in the poem?

The image of the chipmunk "dive[ing] to his rest" shows that the chipmunk is sluggish and unmotivated.

The description of the sunset describes the coloration of the chipmunk.
PLS HELP! ASAP!
The line lengths vary, which suggests the chipmunk's movement: quickly running, then stopping and watching for danger.

The last lines explain that the chipmunk hides out from danger once the sun sets, shedding light on his behavior.

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Answer:

The statement that says "Curled at his breast, he sits there".

Explanation:

he's just there. he is unmotivated until the sun is almost  gone

Considering the heroic qualities we discussed today, why was Claudette not considered to be a strong candidate for the NAACP case against bus segregation laws?

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Claudette was not “fair skinned“, she didnt have good hair and she was pregent which let to her not being as famous as Rosa Parks (sorry if this is wrong)
My cat is a baddie with no fought for laws

In the story Alice at the caucus race.-Answer the following questions-

1.Write a character sketch of the Mouse
2.Briefly describe the incidents that led Alice into the caucus race.
3.Alice thought the whole thing very absurd .Briefly explain the situation.

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alice thought flying was a good idea

ASAP ILL MARK BRAINLIEST!!!!!
I have to fill out this box about Spain's Climate Change problem. Please help?!!!!!!!!!

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Answer:

(Famous Person's quote here) which adds to the argument of Spain's climate changing. The world is using up too much energy and it is making all the places around us have climate change, especially Spain. We could not litter, not use so much electricity, or we could donate to Spain to help them with their need of resources

by the way ... got any grapes..?
(finish the song)

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Bumbumbubmum duck song
Answer:
Yeah I got grapes

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to the very next day

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bum bum bum bumm buddy baddy bee bum

Explanation:
Haha I used to sing this song as a kid !!!

Read the excerpt from "Mami and Papi."

Mami didn’t know any better, and I had yet to learn not everything I heard was true, so we reacted in what was to become a pattern for us: what frightened her I became curious about, and what she found exciting terrified me. As Mami pulled her feet onto the rungs of her rocking chair and rubbed the goose bumps from her arms, I imagined a world of fascinating creatures slithering underfoot, drawing squiggly patterns on the dirt.

Which type of conflict is demonstrated in this excerpt?

individual vs. nature

individual vs. individual

individual vs. self

individual vs. society

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i think it may be individual v society bc in the excerpt it states "mami didn't know any better... i had yet to learn not everything i heard was true..." and they reacted in a way that becomes a pattern

The kind of conflict that has been demonstrated in the given excerpt would be:

b). individual vs. individual

Types of conflict

The various types of conflict are employed by the author to give complexity to the narrative and make it more interesting.

In the given excerpt, the kind of conflict that the author has displayed would be "individual versus individual."

The reason behind this is that a clash among two characters can clearly be witnessed through the provided descriptions.

Thus, option b is the correct answer.

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What is one of the ways watching live drama connects the audience members to each other?
- They all bought tickets for the show.
- They all laugh if something funny happens on stage.
-They all sit together as they watch the play.
- They all like the same actors.

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Answer:

they all like same actors

Explanation:

I only need help with these 2 questions

1. A phrase or group of words that has a specific idea that is different from its direct, iteral meaning is a _____________________
A. inference
B. idiom
C. isotope
D. icon

2. The formula that we talked about in class to help determine if we are making a good inferrence is:

A. I say, we say, you say
B. It says + I say = and so...
C. Character + setting = plot
D. sun + sand = fun

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I was going to ask you if you were ok with that
They are both B , hopes this helps you;)!!

Write a paragraph analyzing the author's purpose for writing “Is Our Gain Also Our Loss”. PLEASE DONT ANSWER IF YOU DONT KNOW THE STORY JUST COMMENT PLEASE

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Answer:

we need a link to do the paragraph

Explanation:

Identify an important theme within the story about justice or responsibility. Explain how this theme is developed throughout the story. Cite specific evidence and quotations to support your answer.
The story is Public Opinion” by Kunwar Narain
Write an essay responding to the question above. In your essay:

Establish a clear thesis statement that responds appropriately to the essay question.

Support your thesis with details and quotations from the text.

Analyze how the details you provide contribute to the text.

Use transitional words and phrases to create cohesion and clarify relationships among ideas.

Include an introduction that provides context about the text/topic, and a conclusion that explains the significance of the ideas presented.

Use a formal style and correct grammar, punctuation, and spelling.

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Answer:

hi

Explanation:

HELPPPPPPPP PLLLLEEASE Correct = First = Brainlest

Select the correct answer.

Which topic could you use in classification writing?

A. Describe how to cook over a campfire.

B. Analyze why teenagers love fast food.

C. Describe ways to raise money for a class trip.

D. Explain why adults dislike loud music.

E. Explain why teens prefer driving or taking the bus more than biking.
PLEASE HELP ME THIS IS URGENT

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A. i guess as classification writing breaks the subject into small parts
I believe its C because I just had this question in my class like 3 weeks ago and got it right

How is you day ^^
A: It's going great
B:good
C;Not the best day
D:eh

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Answer:

B: good

Explanation:

Please help is super important!
"A wise man will not leave the right to the mercy of chance…"

In this context, what does the word chance mean? (5 points)

Select one:
a. Luck
b. Forgiveness
c. Incidence
d. Privilege

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Answer:

A: luck

Explanation:

hope i helped im sure thats what it is

In the context Change means luck

Please describe an obstacle you’ve overcome
short and simple


Miku Nakano here

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Answer:

I NEED POINTS UWU

Explanation:

UWU CUTE GIRL HMMM....

Answer:

Talk to her,

Explanation:

cuz it looks like she needs your help on studying. (✿◠‿◠)

Rewrite the following sentence to correct the dangling modifier.

Sentence: Without your work duties, your home should be a place to relax.

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Answer:

Without your work duties, a place to relax should be your home

Explanation:

Can someone please help me with this?

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Has more than one subject and verb combination

PLEASE HELP ME 20 POINTS!!!THIS IS A ESSAY!!!

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I don’t understand what you want answered
So what are we answering? And if it’s an essay how long does it have to be?

HELP ITS DO TOMORROW I NEED A RELIABLE ANSWER??????

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Aye can we get a pic of it?

I need help on this question please!

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Explanation:

i think state your opinion is answer but am not sure

Item 10
Read the novel excerpt.

Superhero 101: A Dog's Day

Trace was still thinking about the conversation with his grandmother when he stopped so abruptly that Liam literally collided with him. “Hey, what gives?” Liam asked. “You were this close to wearing my ice cream in your hair. Why’d you stop?”

Tia and Blade had continued walking, but now they were headed back toward their friends to find out why they had stopped. Blade immediately noticed Trace’s countenance and followed his gaze. She was the most intuitive and observant of the group. Suddenly, she gasped.

“What is wrong with you two?” Liam, who was more interested in saving his ice cream than saving the world, asked before they had a chance to explain.

Trace spoke in hushed tones, “Look, over there. It’s Casper. He’s supposed to be in prison. What is he doing at the pet store?”

Liam and Tia looked toward the pet store as the four friends dodged into an alleyway, trying not to look too conspicuous. Casper was obviously in disguise himself with his dyed brown hair and beard. The last thing the group needed was for Casper to realize that he had been spotted by his nemesis. The last time he and Trace had met, Trace and his friends had thwarted Casper's plot to create a deadly toxin designed to help him take over the world. That was three months ago, and now it looked like he had somehow escaped from prison and was up to something equally menacing and ominous.

Casper was leaving the pet store and getting into a car, so the friends hurried to their car. They followed him to an abandoned pet-food manufacturing plant at the edge of town. Once Casper ducked inside, the four friends did the same but were soon confronted by an angry pack of dogs. Trace motioned for his friends to come close to him as he created a shield around them. He remembered the time when Tia had used her superpower to make the group invisible. They had been running from Casper and his henchmen. “Tia, make us invisible!” Trace shouted.

However, the friends’ scent wasn’t invisible, and the dogs could not be deterred. The dogs followed the friends as they made their way to where Casper appeared to be manufacturing something that smelled awful.
Read the sentence from "Superhero 101: A Dog's Day."

"What is wrong with you two?" Liam, who was more interested in saving his ice cream than saving the world, asked before they had a chance to explain.

How does this sentence characterize Liam?


It shows that Liam's superpowers have not kicked in yet.

It shows that Liam is the funny, quirky one of the group.

It shows that Liam is not a superhero but is just friends with the superheroes.

It shows that Liam is not as sensitive as the others in the group.

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Answer: The answer is "It shows that Liam is not as sensitive as the others in the group."

Explanation:

The person below me or above me is wrong. On the test it is marked wrong

The sentence that characterizes Liam:

D). It shows that Liam is not as sensitive as the others in the group.

"Superhero 101: A Dog's Day"

The last sentence most successfully conveys the traits possessed by Liam because he lacks thoughtfulness and consciousness.

The details demonstrate that the other members belonging to his group had a sense of sensitivity while Liam lacked that level of sympathy and tactfulness.

Thus, option D is the correct answer.

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