Hi people of the internet, I want your opinion on a thing I wrote. See I needed to write endings for something and I want to know if it is good enough to turn in. I hope you like them. :)

1. ...Her right arm lay on the cushioned parapet before her. She raised her hand, and made a slight, quick movement toward the right. No one but her lover saw her. Every eye but his was fixed on the man in the arena.

He turned, and with a firm and rapid step he walked across the empty space. Every heart stopped beating, every breath was held, every eye was fixed immovably upon that man. Without the slightest hesitation, he went to the door on the right, and opened it.

Behind it, to the surprise of the youth, was a small wooden platform on a pole. The fine lady high in the air on the platform, with the tiger circling it, trying to find a way up to her.

He was very confused. Was this new? He assumed he had to try and save her. Why did his lover direct him to this door? Unless the other door held a worse fate. He knew he did not have much time, the tiger had not noticed him yet. How was he going to get up to her? Then he saw a plank of wood in the corner of the dungeon, just long enough to reach her. But to get to the plank he would have to pass the tiger, which was sure to notice him.

There was no other way, he had to run for it to the plank. He bilt up all of the courage he had, and sprinted for the piece of wood. The tiger had spotted the youth as he predicted but he did not look back. He got to the wood plank and grabbed it. Just then he heard the tiger feet behind him. With one swift movement he turned and hit the tiger full in the face with the piece of wood. With the tiger temporarily dazed he ran for the beautiful lady on the platform, set the plank up, grabbed her hand, and ran as fast as he can for the door out of the dungeon and to fresh air.

The tiger, now recovered, was right behind them. The youth new the tiger would cach them soon, but they were so close. The door was right in front of them. The youth and the lady both jumped out of the dungeon and closed the door hard on the tiger. They were met with great applause. The youth looked up at his lover, and smiled, and she smiled back.

2. ​...Her right arm lay on the cushioned parapet before her. She raised her hand, and made a slight, quick movement toward the right. Her father, the king however, saw this slight movement of his daughter's hand. He could not believe that she could love such a man. This youth knew quite well that he was not at no circumstances allowed to be with his daughter.

The more the king thought about it, the more angrier he became. The youth was halfway to the door when he shouted out;

¨Wait!”

Everybody, pulse, his daughter looks at his majesty.

The king continued; ¨ I think, for the crime of loving my daughter, which he fully knew he was not permitted to do. He is not allowed to have a trial of chance.

The youth was standing in the arena, obviously not knowing where the king was taking this. The king now addressed the guards at the sides of the arena.

´´Gards! Open the left door, and let justice be served.´´

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Answer 1

Answer:

It’s really good!

Explanation:

I didn’t notice any spelling mistakes other than in the last line: “Gards” should be “Guards“. Your pacing was very nice, and the story was incredibly interesting. I think it’s definitely good enough to be turned in.


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What is the direct object and the indirect object in this sentence? Somebody at the office gave the salesperson the correct address.

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Answer:

direct : somebody  and indirect : salesperson

What could you say to yourself to get you to focus on the present, on what’s happening on that moment?

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Answer:

Hi there~

The answer would be: to look on my past life.

Looking at my past life gives me the motivation to focus on the present and enjoy every moment, especially wit the people I love and care about.

Hope this helps

Minisugarr

Explanation:

I would say grow through what you go through

Hannah paid $3.20 for 16 ounces of potato chips. Hank paid $3.23 for 17 ounces of potato chips. Who paid less per ounce?

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Answer:

hannah payed less i believe

Explanation:hope this helps sorry if its wrong

Answer:

Hank.

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help me(my fav is dua lipa-new rules)

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Answer:

The song new rules is by Dua lipa it was first released by 2017. The song became top ten on the US Billboard Hot 100, peaking at number six. The song is about rules for girls to follow about guys. Why do you like it is up to you.

Explanation:

Answer:

i l0ve dua lipa and all her music

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Questions 1 - 7 are for "A Life Sworn to Serve."

What is the main idea of this selection?

A

The author respects police officers, and would like to become one.

B

Many people have conflicting views of the work police officers do.

C

Most police officers take pride in their work, even though it is stressful and demanding.

D

A police officer's job is so demanding that studies have shown effects on their brains.

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Answer:

A

The author respects police officers, and would like to become one.

Explanation:

The above is true going by the fact that, the contributions of the police officers in the society despite the challenges he or she due pass through daily. This led to the interest and respect which the author has for police officers with the aim of joining them.

Please help me When I traveled to Spain, I loved seeing Flamenco, a
Spanish type of dance. The dancers were constantly
moving, and I can only imagine how tiring it must be!
would love to learn one day!
What purpose does this author have?
A. To express thoughts
B. To explain something
C. To persuade
D. To entertain

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Answer:

The answer to your question would be A

A its A its A its A its A its A

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Answer:

A

Explanation:

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Question 4 of 20 Which argumentative claim is most effective?

A. Feeding cats on a regular basis is important for keeping them healthy and energetic.

B. Evidence shows that people domesticated dogs long before they domesticated cats.

C. Cat owners should be forced to keep their cats indoors because cats overhunt bird species.

D. People have mixed opinions about whether cats should be kept indoors or allowed to roam free.​​

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Answer:

The answer is B.

Explanation:

This is because it is the only answer choice that is using the correct words and is in the correct style.

I hope this helps! ^^

Read the introduction to a personal statement. Usually, when people talk about "rocky” relationships, it’s with a frown, but mine has enriched my life. I became fascinated with rocks when I was really young, and throughout my childhood you could usually find me with my pockets bulging from whatever stony treasures I’d scavenged that day. When my science teacher taught us a unit on geology, I realized that my fascination could become an exciting career that could also help me make good money. Obtaining an internship to work on the geological exhibit at the museum is an important step on my road to being a geologist. The topic of the personal statement can best be described as the reason rocks are interesting. pursuit of a career in geology. importance of learning geology. impact of a good science education.

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Answer:

pursuit of a career in geology.  

Explanation:

The topic of the personal statement shown in the question above is the reason why the author wanted a career in geology. We can see this because the author shows how he was always fascinated by stones and when he discovered that it was possible to study them in depth and work with that, he realized that this was the right career for him, which he would do very well and win money doing what you like.

Allusion:

A. A situation that appears to be contradictory but after a closer look tums out to be true, or at least make sense.

B. The use of words to create sensory descriptions.

C. The repetition of vowel sounds in a series of words.

D. The attitude of the speaker.

E.Modern poetry.

F. A type of irony in which a person appears to be praising something but is actually insulting it or visa versa.

G. The repetition of beginning consonant sounds.

H. Poetry with high literary merit that is considered important for students to know.

I.When a situation turns out differently than one would normally expect.

J. The ordering of words in a particular pattern.

K. A form of personification in which an absent or dead person is spoken to as if present.

L. The repetition of sounds to produce a harmonious effect.

M. A direct comparison of two things without using like or as.

N. A kind of metaphor that gives human characteristics. to inanimate objects.

O. The character a writer assumes.

P. A literary reference to something else

Q. Poetry that tells a story.

R. The running on of one line of poetry into another.

S. Expresses the thoughts and feelings of the poet

T. Word choice.

U. A deliberate, outrageous exaggeration.

V. A form of paradox that combines a pair of contrary terms into a single expression.

W. The use of words in which the sounds seem to resemble the sounds they describe.

X. The opposite of hyperbole.

Y. The "sound" or style of the narrator.

Z. the use of one object to suggest another hidden object or idea.

AA. A play on words.

BB. A comparison of two different things using like or as​

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Hey there!

The answer is P.) A literary reference to something else

Hope it helps and have a terrificly amazing day!

Answer:

its p that's ur answer

Explanation:

2. Identify Patterns What is the metaphor that Thoreau uses to describe civilized life in lines 49-54? Where else is a similar metaphor used in the text?​

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Answer:

The metaphor he uses is "this chopping of civilized life", in which he means that you are forced along whatever current is controlling you and you have no control. A similar metaphor is located in lines 199-209, which are "the surface of the Earth" and "the path which the mind follows". Just like the first one talks about how you are controlled by an established current, these show that the human mind is easily influenced similar to how the Earth's ground is easily shaped and marked by the steps taken by otehrs. These state issues of non-individuality and how we don't develop our own ideas.

31. They attended the LATE show last night.
is late an adjective or an adverb.

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Answer:

whats the question???

Explanation:

In "President Cleveland, Where Are You?," how does Jerry react when he learns Lemire's is no longer selling cowboy cards?
A. He feels guilty because he did not give all his money to Armand for his father's present.
B. He feels relieved because he no longer has to compete for more Ken Maynard cards.
C. He doubts he will continue buying cards since he wants to save money for a new glove.
D.He looks forward to leaming new things when he starts collecting president cards.

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Answer: it should be c

Explanation:

Answer:

A. He feels guilty because he did not give all his money to Armand for his father's present.

Explanation:

I took the test and got it right so...

If you are the first one to git it right you will be brainly

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Answer:

a

Explanation:

:) have a nice night/day

Answer:

A

Explanation:

He's emphasizes he works with shoes but he also has good spiritual advice

(HELP ASAPPPPPPPP)
Can somebody check my grammar for my final draft PLEASEEEEE!!!!!!!
I need somebody that can really help and I need to turn my final draft in NOW!

I can relate to Martin Luther King Jr. Because I was judged of my character and how I stand out to people. In middle school I couldn’t really find myself, throughout my middle school years I’ve always gone through lots of depression, anxiety, and being unfairly judged. I was always being called quiet, mean, or stuck up because of the way I either talk to people I don’t know for the first time or just...there around a bunch of people and it would always make me overthink and I would get even more nervous hearing that people really think that of me. I was judged of the way I looked such as my face expressions sometimes I would have a look on my face as if I was upset or sad. People would come up to me and say “ Hey, are you okay” or “You good”.

Or if I meet someone and talk to them they would say “When I first saw you I wanted to speak to you, but you looked like you were mad so I just didn’t say anything” or “I actually wanted to talk to you but you looked stuck up”. In these type of situations it would always irritate me because I really don’t mean to look “stuck up”. But at the end people would say I’m really nice and fun to hangout with. In the middle of 7th grade I was bullied by a old friend. I was always nice to her even when people made fun of her.

She started spreading roomers about me and my close friends would come up and tell me what she’s been saying and ever since then, I was really embarrassed and I would think that people at school thought I was really like that. That whole situation caused other people to judge me even more because of the rumors my old friend has said about me and it made me feel like I had no one to talk to and I felt lonely. When I went to school the next day, I walked down the hall in the cafetiria and some people started looking at me weird as if I looked mad. I still had three close friends at the time but it was like they weren't there for me and sometimes they would joke around and say "Why do you look so mad, "Are you okay', and "Why do you look so stuck up?'.

It kind of offended me just because of what the other people would say to me and it made me upset. The rest of the school year I always went home crying because of what happened in the past, my anxiety, depression, and how people judged me because of my mean face. I would try to talk to one my school counselors because they told me that they weren't going to send home a email. But it didn't work because every time I express the way I feel and how I haven't been doing good mentally, the counselor would send home a email saying what Iv'e been talking to them about and them my mom would get mad at me because I didn't talk to her about what's been going on about my mental health and how I felt at school. Towards the end of 8th grade It felt like I was losing myself even more because of my anxiety, depression, lack of sleep causing me to zone out a lot, and my mom would judge me because of how I talked to her or looked and say that I always getting a attitude when I talk to her sometimes and it became an issue to where she thought I wasn't, being responsible and trustworthy in some situations.

It got to the point where I wanted to keep stuff to my self because it was like if I keep staying after then she would think I was doing something else. I met a new transfer student and she seemed really nice at first. But once I got to know her it was like i met a whole other person. She very loud, blunt, and had no filter, and she also judged people such as (saying she didn't want that person to be her friend because they're "ugly"). She put me in the wrong crowd and got me to do stuff that i wasn't comfortable doing.

I wanted to tell her that I didn't want to be friends with her but I thought that if I told her that, she would've probably did the same thing my old friend did to me in the 7th grade. So whenever I hung out with her and a couple of my close friends as distractions because that was the only time I could really go out and have fun. Later that year we stopped being friends because I didn't like how she was treating me as a "friend". She kept getting me to do stuff I didn't want to so and if I didn't do something in a specific situation sometimes she would say I was being "weird", "annoying", and "fake". During the summer that year my mental health got even worse and iv'e been going through a lot of mixed emotions.

But some things that helped over the summer was that whenever I distance myself, I feel more comfortable and I'll get to have time to myself instead of doing what my "friends" tell me to do. This helped me realized that whatever I was going through throughout my middle school years, that I needed to focus on myself and if I ever wanted to hangout with my friends, I should should hangout with the people I can trust and be myself with.

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First paragraph:

I would change the sentence “ through out middle school years ive always gone through lots of depression, anxiety, and being unfairly judged “
I would change that to this “ Throughout my middle school years experienced depression and anxiety. Also in my years of middle school I was unfairly judged . I had always been called “mean”or “stuck” up by my class mates and fellow students because of the way I talk to people. This would always cause me to overthink and lead to me becoming more nervous hearing about the way people really think of me . I was also judged because of the way I looked such as the facial expressions that I use .

( I hoped this helped )

Write an essay on patrotism​

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Answer:

A patriot is always concerned for the progress of his country.

All his acts and moves are guided by the thought that his country should be the fore-runner in the comity of nations in every sphere. But there are people who pretend to be patriot but do anything for their own interest even at the cost of their native country. Such people are very dangerous to the country than the real enemies. Because it is very difficult to identify them. They are the traitors and spurious patriots.

The virtue of patriotism is significantly displayed during the time of war. One who is a true patriot is ready to sacrifice his all for his native country. He even puts to risk his own life for the sake of his country. He is always eager to serve his motherland in the way the situation demands. All great nations which made their name in history are proud to illustrate the services of their patriots. Their role had been detrimental in the progress of the nation. The English present the brilliant example of patriotism. It was the patriotism of the countrymen which helped to extend its empire in big portion of the globe. The real strength and power of the country lies in these patriots.

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India is proud to have produced many patriots. These patriots have made great sacrifices for their motherland. Their names are written in golden letters in the history of India. Shivaji, Rana Pratap, Vir Kunwar Singh, Rani Lakshmi Bai, Maharaja Ranjit Singh, Sardar Patel, Subhash Chandra Bose, Lala Lajpat Rai, Bhagat Singh, Maulana Azad, Mahatma Gandhi, to name a few, who sacrificed their lives for their motherland. They lived and died for the country. They are examples for the generation to come.

The patriots play prominent role in the progress of a country. But the real test of patriotism is at the time of crisis. One who is a real patriot stands unfared in the face of all trial and tribulations. The intensity of concern and love for the motherland remain unchanged. Spurious patriot shirks when their services are required. We should be on guard against such traitors. They can never be trusted. They are the people who pass on the confidential information to their enemies to serve their petty ends. Jai Chand, Mir Jafar, etc. come in this category whose infidelity brought great distress to our country. Such elements should be identified and strictly dealt with.

No doubt patriotism is a virtue. But it should never be allowed to go beyond certain limit. Then it becomes chauvinism. It is not a good sign. A person having such attitude begins to look down upon other countries. It narrows down the outlook which ultimately proves disastrous for his personality development. Aggressive patriotism sometimes put the peace and prosperity of the country at danger. It often leads to mass killing. Mass killing of Jews in Germany during the regime of Hitler is an example of frantic patriotism. This should be avoided. It should never constrict our outlook and vision.

As you read this paragraph about earthquakes, look for context clues that are provided to help readers understand the article’s scientific terms.

Aftershocks, unlike earthquakes which are more powerful, generally follow the mainshock and occur in the same location. Aftershocks can continue for weeks, months, or years after the initial earthquake. Usually, the larger the earthquake, the larger and more numerous the aftershocks, and the longer they will continue.

Which phrase provides the BEST context clues for the meaning of aftershocks?

“continue for weeks, months, or years”

“the larger and more numerous the aftershocks”

“the longer they will continue”

“unlike earthquakes which are more powerful”

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Answer:

continue for weeks, months, or years

Read the excerpt from Frederick Douglass’s speech “What to the Slave is the Fourth of July?”

Go where you may, search where you will, roam through all the monarchies and despotisms of the Old World, travel through South America, search out every abuse, and when you have found the last, lay your facts by the side of the everyday practices of this nation, and you will say with me, that, for revolting barbarity and shameless hypocrisy, America reigns without a rival.

Which phrase best describes the connotation of the word “reigns”?
a sense of opportunity and growth
a sense of fear and anxiety
a sense of compassion and humanity
a sense of oppression and domination

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A sense of oppression and domination

Survey Time: Need at least 3 statements

If you could change one thing about the world, what would it be and why?

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Answer:

Explanation:

If I could change one thing about the world, it would be our hearts and minds. But I can’t do that, and neither can anyone else—except God. This is why we need Christ, for only He can change us from within by His Holy Spirit. And this can happen, as we turn to Him and invite Him to come into our lives as our Savior and Lord.

Answer:

If I could change one thing about the world it would be our school system in the US. Teachers do not get paid enough, we are learning things in which take months but could be learning in a shorter span. The funding for our schools is horrible. A lot of schools do not have enough funding to get what their children need, and what the teachers need to teach their students. Then there are many schools that don't focus on every student and don't teach all students fair.

Explanation:

Which of the following is an example of humans modifying the environment?
A )
A family clears the land of trees so that they can build a home.

B )Settlers on the Great Plains built homes from sod.

C)The Ancient Greeks and Romans built temples with columns and domes.

D )Native American tribes in the Pacific Northwest depended on the ocean for food.​

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An example of humans modifying the environment is:

A. A family clears the land of trees so that they can build a home.

What is Environment modification?

Environment modification occurs when a person changes something in the environment.

When the family removes the tree from its natural habitat to build a house, they have changed or modified the natural environment of the tree.

Learn more about environment modification here:

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Guys, I'm scared
My dog is barking towards the downstairs, She barks at it/something then runs away.
But the thing is ME AND MY DOG ARE THE ONLY TWO HOME!!!!!!!!!

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Answer:

*inserts dramatic mystery music

Explanation:

Does anybody know the bypass password for blocked websites?

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Answer:

no,but....u can click that three dot in the top right, click settings,then on the left u should see a privacy search and services,press that,then u should see basic balenced and strict if its already on balenced then press basic,now go to the tab that was blocked and restart that tab,then..searh it again and that should work

Explanation:

Answer:use inspect element to change password

Explanation:

How involved should a parent be in your life as a teenager?

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Answer:

Very involved but they should also give them space cause teenagers are where they go through hormones and thats the tuffest part for a kid and when they go through all these mental stages and when kids get bullied the most and the age when children commit su!c!de

Explanation:

Question 3 of 10
Which of these is most useful for deciding which dictionary definition is the
best one for an unfamiliar word you have found in a reading passage?
A. A word map for several different synonyms
B. The context of the sentence where the word appears
O C. The word's listing in a thesaurus
O D. The etymology of the word

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Answer:

Option B

The context of the sentence where the word appears.

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Who was Mother Jones?

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Answer:

Mary G. Harris Jones..

Explanation:

She was called Mother Jones because of her effort in trying to protect women..

Which statement best describes the effect of the rhyme in this stanza? The use of the rhyming words night and light stresses the idea that people should not be afraid of death.

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Answer: C

Explanation: got it right on edg

Answer:

C. The use of the rhyming words night and light emphasizes the contrast between death and life.

Explanation:

Question 25 (5 points)
Which version of the sentence is most concise? (5 points)
a
Ob
Ос
Od
This paper will be about the fact that water conservation starts at home.
Water conservation at home is as important as major policy changes.
The reasons water conservation is important are actually quite significant.
Water conservation is important due to the fact that it affects us all.

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Answer: it is B press thank you if correct

Explanation:



What theme is emphasized in Mr. Ramos's argument about the

reading list change? Support your answer using details from the

text

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Answer:

The theme is literary prejudice and disadvantageous conservatism.

Explanation:

This question is about the short story "Winter Break", where Manuel explains to his father. Mr. Ramos, that the book that had been selected for reading during the winter break was changed, as some people argued that the text was offensive, with stereotyped characters and indecent language. Mr. Ramos agrees that these factors exist in the book, but that they are portrayed as something bad and that should not be encouraged, however, people have become attached to a disadvantageous conservatism that hinders education, in addition to promoting a strong literary prejudice.

please help with both questions

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Answer:

Q1) Connotative Q2) Actually kicking a bucket

Explanation:

The connotative meaning of words refers to personal or cultural meanings given. The denotative meaning of words refers to the dictionary definition.

Q1) Rugrat is typically known around the world, culturally, as a child.

Q2) Kicking the bucket, denotatively, is literally kicking a bucket.

Question 5
Use the synonyms and antonyms provided in the passage to determine the meaning of plucky as it is used in "Home." Write your definition of plucky
here and explain how you arrived at its meaning.
pls need help

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Answer:

Explanation:.

Answer:

Plucky means courageous, determined

Explanation:

In paragraph  40 of the story it uses plucky in a sentance to detarmian the meaning. "The cowardly and faint-hearted did actually give up smoking, any who were somewhat more plucky and intelligent, after the thrashing took to carrying tobacco in the legs of their boots, and smoking in the barn."

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