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I can relate to Martin Luther King Jr. Because I was judged of my character and how I stand out to people. In middle school I couldn’t really find myself, throughout my middle school years I’ve always gone through lots of depression, anxiety, and being unfairly judged. I was always being called quiet, mean, or stuck up because of the way I either talk to people I don’t know for the first time or just...there around a bunch of people and it would always make me overthink and I would get even more nervous hearing that people really think that of me. I was judged of the way I looked such as my face expressions sometimes I would have a look on my face as if I was upset or sad. People would come up to me and say “ Hey, are you okay” or “You good”.

Or if I meet someone and talk to them they would say “When I first saw you I wanted to speak to you, but you looked like you were mad so I just didn’t say anything” or “I actually wanted to talk to you but you looked stuck up”. In these type of situations it would always irritate me because I really don’t mean to look “stuck up”. But at the end people would say I’m really nice and fun to hangout with. In the middle of 7th grade I was bullied by a old friend. I was always nice to her even when people made fun of her.

She started spreading roomers about me and my close friends would come up and tell me what she’s been saying and ever since then, I was really embarrassed and I would think that people at school thought I was really like that. That whole situation caused other people to judge me even more because of the rumors my old friend has said about me and it made me feel like I had no one to talk to and I felt lonely. When I went to school the next day, I walked down the hall in the cafetiria and some people started looking at me weird as if I looked mad. I still had three close friends at the time but it was like they weren't there for me and sometimes they would joke around and say "Why do you look so mad, "Are you okay', and "Why do you look so stuck up?'.

It kind of offended me just because of what the other people would say to me and it made me upset. The rest of the school year I always went home crying because of what happened in the past, my anxiety, depression, and how people judged me because of my mean face. I would try to talk to one my school counselors because they told me that they weren't going to send home a email. But it didn't work because every time I express the way I feel and how I haven't been doing good mentally, the counselor would send home a email saying what Iv'e been talking to them about and them my mom would get mad at me because I didn't talk to her about what's been going on about my mental health and how I felt at school. Towards the end of 8th grade It felt like I was losing myself even more because of my anxiety, depression, lack of sleep causing me to zone out a lot, and my mom would judge me because of how I talked to her or looked and say that I always getting a attitude when I talk to her sometimes and it became an issue to where she thought I wasn't, being responsible and trustworthy in some situations.

It got to the point where I wanted to keep stuff to my self because it was like if I keep staying after then she would think I was doing something else. I met a new transfer student and she seemed really nice at first. But once I got to know her it was like i met a whole other person. She very loud, blunt, and had no filter, and she also judged people such as (saying she didn't want that person to be her friend because they're "ugly"). She put me in the wrong crowd and got me to do stuff that i wasn't comfortable doing.

I wanted to tell her that I didn't want to be friends with her but I thought that if I told her that, she would've probably did the same thing my old friend did to me in the 7th grade. So whenever I hung out with her and a couple of my close friends as distractions because that was the only time I could really go out and have fun. Later that year we stopped being friends because I didn't like how she was treating me as a "friend". She kept getting me to do stuff I didn't want to so and if I didn't do something in a specific situation sometimes she would say I was being "weird", "annoying", and "fake". During the summer that year my mental health got even worse and iv'e been going through a lot of mixed emotions.

But some things that helped over the summer was that whenever I distance myself, I feel more comfortable and I'll get to have time to myself instead of doing what my "friends" tell me to do. This helped me realized that whatever I was going through throughout my middle school years, that I needed to focus on myself and if I ever wanted to hangout with my friends, I should should hangout with the people I can trust and be myself with.

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Answer 1
First paragraph:

I would change the sentence “ through out middle school years ive always gone through lots of depression, anxiety, and being unfairly judged “
I would change that to this “ Throughout my middle school years experienced depression and anxiety. Also in my years of middle school I was unfairly judged . I had always been called “mean”or “stuck” up by my class mates and fellow students because of the way I talk to people. This would always cause me to overthink and lead to me becoming more nervous hearing about the way people really think of me . I was also judged because of the way I looked such as the facial expressions that I use .

( I hoped this helped )

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It was in an empty lot
Ringed by elms and fir and honeysuckle.
Bill Corson was pitching in his buckskin jacket,
Chuck Keller, fat even as a boy, was on first,
His t-shirt riding up over his gut,
Ron O'Neill, Jim, Dennis, were talking it up
In the field, a blue sky above them
Tipped with cirrus.

And there I was,
Just off the plane and plopped in the middle
Of Williamsport, Pa. and a neighborhood game,
Unnatural and without any moves,
My notions of baseball and America
Growing fuzzier each time I whiffed.

So it was not impossible that I,
Banished to the outfield and daydreaming
Of water, or a hotel in the mountains,
Would suddenly find myself in the path
Of a ball stung by Joe Barone.
I watched it closing in
Clean and untouched, transfixed
By its easy arc before it hit
My forehead with a thud.

I fell back,
Dazed, clutching my brow,
Groaning, "Oh my shin, oh my shin,"
And everybody peeled away from me
And dropped from laughter, and there we were,
All of us writhing on the ground for one reason
Or another.

Someone said "shin" again,
There was a wild stamping of hands on the ground,
A kicking of feet, and the fit
Of laughter overtook me too,
And that was important, as important
As Joe Barone asking me how I was
Through his tears, picking me up
And dusting me off with hands like swatters, And though my head felt heavy,
I played on till dusk
Missing flies and pop-ups and grounders
And calling out in desperation things like
"Yours" and "take it," but doing all right,
Tugging at my cap in just the right way,
Crouching low, my feet set,
"Hum baby" sweetly on my lips.

—"How I Learned English,"
Gregory Djanikian




Write a short paragraph in which you evaluate what makes the poem effective and give your opinion of the poem overall.

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Answer:

It should be D, I'm am  100% sure but no other question seem to go that good. I think It's D.

Explanation:

It was in an empty lot

Ringed by elms and fir and honeysuckle.

Bill Corson was pitching in his buckskin jacket,

Chuck Keller, fat even as a boy, was on first,

His t-shirt riding up over his gut,

Ron O'Neill, Jim, Dennis, were talking it up

In the field, a blue sky above them

Tipped with cirrus.

And there I was,

Just off the plane and plopped in the middle

Of Williamsport, Pa. and a neighborhood game,

Unnatural and without any moves,

My notions of baseball and America

Growing fuzzier each time I whiffed.

So it was not impossible that I,

Banished to the outfield and daydreaming

Of water, or a hotel in the mountains,

Would suddenly find myself in the path

Of a ball stung by Joe Barone.

I watched it closing in

Clean and untouched, transfixed

By its easy arc before it hit

My forehead with a thud.

I fell back,

Dazed, clutching my brow,

Groaning, "Oh my shin, oh my shin,"

And everybody peeled away from me

And dropped from laughter, and there we were,

All of us writhing on the ground for one reason

Or another.

Someone said "shin" again,

There was a wild stamping of hands on the ground,

A kicking of feet, and the fit

Of laughter overtook me too,

And that was important, as important

As Joe Barone asking me how I was

Through his tears, picking me up

And dusting me off with hands like swatters, And though my head felt heavy,

I played on till dusk

Missing flies and pop-ups and grounders

And calling out in desperation things like

"Yours" and "take it," but doing all right,

Tugging at my cap in just the right way,

Crouching low, my feet set,

"Hum baby" sweetly on my lips.

—"How I Learned English,"

Gregory Djanikian

Write a short paragraph in which you evaluate what makes the poem effective and give your opinion of the poem overall.

Answer:

Getting late for a meeting, need to run’, he said, as he slung his coat over the shoulder, and bounded out of the house. As he drove away, she came running down the stairs two at a time. ‘Wait, wait’, she said, but he had already left. Her mouth crumpled like used wrapping paper. ‘He forgot to give me a goodbye kiss’, she whispered in a voice that trembled under the weight of her hurt. She called him, ‘you left without giving me a kiss’, she said accusingly. ‘I am sorry sweetheart’, he said, his voice contrite. ‘It is okay’, she said, trying to be all grown up as she cut the call. She gulped down her breakfast morosely, wore her shoes, picked up her school bag and started to walk out of the door, her shoulders slumped. As she climbed down the steps, the car glided to a stop outside the house. He got out of the car. She ran to him, her whole face lit up like a Christmas tree. ‘I am sorry I forgot’, he said, as he picked her up and hugged her. She said nothing. Her jaw ached from smiling. Fifteen years later, no one would remember he was late for a meeting, but a little girl would never ever forget that her father drove all the way back home just to kiss her goodbye!

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Answer:

for the first one - foggy, cloudy, wet and something else

Answer:

(a) foggy, snowy, icy, freezing(b) warm, sunny, dry(c) cloudy, rainy, windy, wet

Explanation:

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Help Please Giving Brainliest to the correct answer please explain your answer:D Please HELP please

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Answer:

A: Metal fork

Explanation:

B and D were once living because they were animals and plants. Wood also came from a living thing, a tree.

Therefore, the only answer left is the metal fork.

I hope this helped and if it did I would appreciate it if you marked me Brainliest. Thank you and have a nice day!

34) Match each example with its form of figurative language.
The girl was the most beautiful in the entire world!

pun
synecdoche
paradox
hyperbole/overstatement
understatement

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Answer:

Hyperbole/overstatement

Explanation:

2. One of my biggest failures was...

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Answer:

When I didnt come back home after I promised I would. I just- never went back there.

Explanation:

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Which word means below the freezing point? *
subconscious
subdue
superior
discontinue
superb
disappoint
subfreezing
supervisor

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Answer:

subfreezing

Explanation:

Answer:

subfreezing

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_________'_'__________

Martin Luther King Jr. was a farmer

TRUE OR FALSE-

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Answer:

false

he was not a farmer

False. Martin Luther King was an African American Baptist minister and activist recognised largely for his work in the Civil Rights movement that lasted from 1955 until his unfortunate assassination in 1968.

Dr. King, inspired by Christian beliefs, and the nonviolent activist Mahatma Ghandi, promoted a nonviolent manner of gaining civil rights.

I have to do a paper for school. Please help me. I just need these questions answered: Write a paper on what bullying looks like to you, if you are in that scenario what do you do? as a bystander what do you do?

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Answer:

Bullying looks like a thing which you shouldn't take seriously. If I was in that scenario, I would ignore what the bully says to me. As a bystander, I will tell the victim (being bullied) to ignore the bully because sometimes bullies are jealous of you and what you to go downhill.

Hope this helps!

"Friendship is a single soul dwelling in two bodies"
How you all are with opinion essay?

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To the query, 'what is a friend?' Aristotle's response was 'a single soul dwelling in two bodies.'" These friends are the ones who most likely know us better than we know ourselves, and whose names are forever branded on our heart (Parrott & Parrott, 1998). Consider for a moment, which of these people are in your life; your friendship with them didn't happen in the blink of an eye. Over time we gradually begin to let these people see who we really are, and our friendship begins to grow into something memorable. "Friends are what have enriched my life. Oh, I have loved my family, but it's not the same. Friends have brought me more of the world; they've added spice and variety" (Apter & Josselson, 1998). We are born into our family, but one amazing thing about our life is that we have the ability to choose our friends. There are some common characteristics that span across all types of friendships: rules shape the friendship, can last a lifetime and typically consist of people in the same age range (Floyd, 2009). How are cross-se% friendships similar to same-s% friendships? How are they different? Using major motion pictures that depict this remarkable bond between friends, we realize the qualities these friendships possess that make them similar and yet how different they really are.

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construct angle 75° with detailed explanation on how to do it.
YOU WILL BE MARKED BRAINLIEST

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Answer:

Construction of an Angle of 75° by using Compass

Step of Construction: (i) Take a ray OA. (ii) With O as centre and any convenient radius, draw an arc cutting OA at C. (iii) With C as centre and the same radius, draw an cutting the first arc at M.

How can a choice have short and long term effects on our lives?

Please answer!!!!!! I WILL MARK YOU AS A BRAINLIST PROMISE :)

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Answer:

Explanation:

Every choice that we had decided on doing can impact our lives either in a good or in a bad way, it helps shapes us to identify who we are to ourselves and to other people. Think long term, don’t just think about what’s good right now, and instead make a choice that can also be important to you in the future. Thinking short term is the opposite of the long term thinking. Instead of considering the possible impacts of a course of action over the long term, we think about what might happen today, tomorrow or next week.

When I was bullied in middle school, I could go home and slam my door and forget about it for a while," Sameer Hinduja, codirector of the Cyberbullying Research Center, told The Associated Press (AP). "These kids can be accessed around the clock through technology. There's really no escape.

Which of the two central ideas appear within excerpt 1?

A. Bullying & Cyberbullying.

B. Cyberbullying & school's role in preventing bullying.

C. The additional challenges of cyberbullying & what can be done to prevent it.​​

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Answer: Its A im 10000000% sure good luck mate :)

Explanation:

Answer:

a

Explanation:

it makes more sense

Select the correct form of the sentence given the context below.

The origami class, which Tammy and I signed up for, was cancelled due to a paper shortage

or The origami class, that Tammy and I signed up for, was cancelled due to a paper shortage​

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Answer:

the answer is A

Explanation:

Answer

The origami class, that Tammy and I signed up for, was cancelled due to a paper shortage

Explanation:

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Which of the following major events helped shape and find some of the early American literary periods?

The war of 1812

American Civil War

World War II

Vietnam war

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I think it’s the American civil war?

Answer: American civil war

Explanation:

what job, trade, or college degree are you interested in pursuing?

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Answer:

A college degree

Explanation:

Answer:

Air force pilot

Explanation:

I Always Wanted To fly airplanes and what better way than to fly at over 600 mph

How does his father finally get Jolly to fly?
A He tells him that if he flies, he’ll get him a big angleworm.
B He tells Jolly that there is a cat
C He pushes him off the tree branch.

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my dudes its b
nah im playing idek

Hey there!

I believe your answer would be "He tells Jolly that there is a cat."

Hope this helps!

Have a great day!

in the book the diary of anne frank, anne says margot has become quite sweet these days and not as catty. why do you think this is so?

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Answer:

I think Margot is being nicer because they don't know how much time they have left with each other and she doesn't wanna spend their possibly last days fighting with each other.

Explanation:

when i was in 8th grade my teacher asked the class a question she asked

" would you wanna fight with your family when all of your lives and freedom is on the line" just think of it as that ok and can i have brainlest please

pick a character from your favorite television show, movie, or book. write a sentence that describes three things that the character does. be sure that your three things have correct parallel structure.

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Answer:

peter from the family guy is funny, farts on meg(lol) and does the funny chicken dance

Explanation:

i love familit guy :)

Based on the thesaurus entry, which word would best replace the underlined word without changing the overall meaning of this sentence?

A. run
B. confron
C. endure
D. dodge

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I would say A hope that helped

Answer:

D. Dodge

Explanation:

hope this helps

any one wanna run sum zombies?

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Answer:

i am a zombie

Explanation:

What is Whitman saying about himself in relation to others who is more important

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Answer:

Ralph Waldo Emerson and Walt Whitman emphasize the importance of living true to yourself and developing complete self-acceptance. To live a genuine life and completely accept who you are, you must understand your identity and your sense of self. In Self-Reliance, Emerson explains that your identity and your sense of self are spiritual. Whitman argues, in Song of Myself, that your identity and sense of self are based on both your soul and your body. While both Emerson and Whitman allow for intimate connections and friendships, Emerson encourages people to have relationships with a select few, whereas Whitman encourages people to connect with everyone and anyone, due to their different views of self.   In general, both Emerson and Whitman

Explanation:

please be it tho

What is the CORRECT answer to this?

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Second but thanks for the free meets code

Why does the party run into problems in Mirkwood?
Question 3 options:

Gandalf deceives them.


Bilbo and the dwarves do not follow Beorn's advice.


The dwarves do not think before they act.


The elves and the spiders attack Bilbo and the dwarves while they sleep

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Answer:

I think it's B, Bilbo and the dwarves do not follow Beorn's advice.

Explanation:

Because they do not listen to Beorn, the dwarves think Mirkwood is not that dangerous. Boy, do they realize they are wrong.....

can someone give me 3 examples for a metaphor that a author has used a metaphor (book: taken by erin bowman)

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When you read the book explore things like
-emotions for example I am feeling happy

Hope this helps .

Select all things that dialect can reveal: A.appearance B.intellect C. time period D.location

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Answer:

C, and D

Explanation:

When you here/read the way people speak it can tell you the time and location of when and where they are living

What is the MOST likely reason the author included information about the pandemic?

A. to suggest that video games provide a safe and healthy entertainment option for people who are stuck at home.

B. to show that people who play video games are less likely to get or spread coronavirus.

C. to suggest that understanding the link between video games and mental health is more important now than before.

D. to show that the pandemic has led to booming business for video game companies​

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Answer:

Im not really sure bc I dont know the text to go with it but I think that the best answer would be B or D.

Explanation:

Which sentence from the text best supports the correct answer to Question 5? romeo and juliet

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That which we call a rose by another name would smell as sweet.

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Which emotion best describes how the speaker seems to feel about Fred
Johnson?
A) animosity
B) apathy
C) desperation
D) fondness

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Answer:

Not 100% sure but I have a feeling its B

Answer:

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Explanation:

Put the story in the box

how can you manage your family resources wisely​

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Answer:

Here are some strategies to help your family manage time:

1.Look for ways to make chores easier.

2.Break down large projects into small tasks.

3.Set practical goals for all activities.

4.Follow your heart when making decisions.

5.Talk to family members, friends, neighbors, and co-workers.

6.Fit family needs into daily plans.

Explain why Douglass actively advocated for African Americans fighting in the Civil War.​

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Since the beginning of the Civil War in 1861, Douglass began advocating for the inclusion of black soldiers in the Union Army. He believed that fighting for the Union was fighting for the freedom of the black man and the safety and security of the country therefore paving their path to citizenship.

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What impact did Frederick Douglass have on the fight for African American rights?

He became a leader in the abolitionist movement, which sought to end the practice of slavery, before and during the Civil War. After that conflict and the Emancipation Proclamation of 1862, he continued to push for equality and human rights until his death in 1895.

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