Why does the writer need to revise the personal statement? Sentence 1 should include the writer’s first name. Sentence 2 should state what the essay prompt was. Sentence 3 should avoid mentioning money. Sentence 4 should avoid the extreme opinion.

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Answer 1

Answer:

C. Sentence 3 should avoid mentioning money.

Explanation:

I took the test and got it right


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How does summarizing help you learn?

Group of answer choices

It makes you review all of the details.

It strengthens the brain connections to the new information.

It is easier to remember something shorter than longer.

It makes you explain what you misunderstood.

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it makes you review all of the details

Answer:

a

Explanation:

Which sentence is an example of faulty coordination?

A William Penn founded Philadelphia in 1682, but Swedish immigrants had settled Southwark years earlier.

B The Germantown settlement was founded close to Philadelphia, but the two places remained separate for nearly 200 years.

C Many old homes in Society Hill have been restored, so they now look as they did in the past.

D Pennsylvania's oldest church is in Southwark, and it was opened in 1640. 90%​

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Answer:

D Pennsylvania's oldest church is in Southwark, and it was opened in 1640.

Explanation:

The word "and" introduces two ideas and appears to indicate that they are separate. While all the other choices use words such as "but" and "so", indicating that the two clauses are logically related, this one does not. However, the date the church was opened does closely relate to it being the oldest church. One would expect the word "for" rather than "and"...

I am not certain of this answer, but that is what I would imagine. I would eliminate B and C straightaway. Choice A seems to say that even though Philadelphia was founded later, its settlement Southwark was actually inhabited before.

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What are school assessments for? Is it ok if I don’t pass it?

I’m absolutely humilliated of what I answered in my benchmark.

What do teachers do with the assesment of students after they grade it?

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Answer:

dont worry its just to see what you can do nothing will happen they will try to teach you for what you do know then they will make you do harder stuff the more you exceed you cant fail in something you most will not know that is why its a assessment they dont grade it cause its a assessment they just check what you CAN do

Explanation:

During the "retrieving” stage, search engines

display stored web addresses related to search terms.
use “spiders” to find web pages related to search terms.
rank web pages based on the most relevant information.
record keywords and text in large data centers.

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Answer:

display stored web addresses related to search terms.

Explanation:

A Search engine is an internet resource or service that searches for keywords or categories specified by the end user and then displays (shows) a list of website which matches or have informations similar to the query. Some examples of popular search engines are Goo-gle, Bing, Yahoo, etc.

At the retrieving stage of a web search, the search engine queries its database using a retrieval algorithm to extract the necessary and related terms to the search. After obtaining the search terms, the stored web addresses that are related to the search is then displayed.

Hence, during the "retrieving” stage, search engines display stored web addresses related to search terms.

In order to improve the speed of retrieval for a search engine, high frequency words such as if, or, and, at, to, etc., which are generally referred to as stop words are filtered out.

Answer:

A. display stored web addresses related to search terms.

Explanation:

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Need help I would really appreciate it

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Answer:

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answer:

1. 24

2. 1/18

3. 18

4. 72

5. toast

explanation:

what we know: total = 108

1 2/9 X 108 = 24

2 1/9 ÷ 2 = 1/18

3 1/6 X 108 = 18

4 3/3 - 1/3 = 2/3 ; 108 X 2/3 = 72

5 18/108 = 1/6 - - > toast

Need the definition and a sentence with the word in it

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Answer:

Terrain - A piece or stretch of land: "The terrain was very dry because of the heat wave"

Territory -  An area which belongs to a person, organization, institution, animal, nation, or state: "I have my own territory, my room"

Tiny - Very small: "My dog is so tiny, people step on him sometimes"

Toxic - Harmful or unpleasant in a pervasive or insidious way: "The room was filled with toxic gases"

(Couldn't find good sentences lol)

Answer:

temporary = not permanent

I have a temporary tattoo, which should disappear in about a week.

terrain = a stretch of land, especially with regard to its physical features

The terrain changed quickly from arable land to desert.

territory = land controlled by a specific person, animal or country, or where a person has knowledge, rights or responsibilities

Resources in plenty can be found in this territory.

tiny = really small

That ladybug was tiny so her chances of surviving were very low.

toxic = containing a poisonous material

Toxic chemicals continue to be dumped in the North Sea.

1) How were you feeling this morning when you arrived at class? And what were you
thinking about?

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i felt tired , because i had barely woke up. i felt dizzy bc i got up fast

Read the sentence from “Stress for Success.”

That is what causes [children with anxiety disorders] to make mountains out of molehills.

What is the meaning of the figurative phrase “to make mountains out of molehills”?

A. to seek help for a serious health issue instead of waiting
B. to collect many objects to add to a huge selection
C. to make a less significant problem into one of greater importance
D. to make a plan far in advance instead of waiting until the last minute

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The answer to this is C

What are the ict gadget and its function

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Answer:

ICT Gadgets. A gadget is a small technological device or an appliance that has a particular function. Examples of ICT gadgets include Computer, Automated teller machine (ATM), Dispensing machine, Radio sets, Television set, Fax machine, Telephone, GSM, etc.

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When she sat down to dinner at her round table with its three-day-old cloth, and watched her husband opposite her lift the lid of the soup tureen and exclaim, delighted: "Ah, a good homemade beef stew! There's nothing better..." she would visualize elegant dinners with gleaming silver amid tapestried walls peopled by knights and ladies and exotic birds in a fairy forest; she would think of exquisite dishes served on gorgeous china, and of gallantries whispered and received with sphinx-like smiles while eating the pink flesh of trout or wings of grouse.2 She had no proper wardrobe, no jewels, nothing. And those were the only things that she loved--she felt she was made for them. She would have so loved to charm, to be envied, to be admired and sought after.She had a rich friend, an old school friend whom she refused to visit, because she suffered so keenly when she returned home. She would weep whole days, with grief, regret, despair, and misery.***One evening her husband came home with an exultant air, holding a large envelope in his hand."Here's something for you," he said.Swiftly she tore the paper and drew out a printed card on which were these words:"The Minister of Education and Madame Ramponneau request the pleasure of the company of Monsieur and Madame Loisel at the Ministry on the evening of Monday, January the 18th."Instead of being delighted, as her-husband hoped, she flung the invitation petulantly across the table, murmuring:"What do you want me to do with this?""Why, darling, I thought you'd be pleased. You never go out, and this is a great occasion. I had tremendous trouble to get it. Every one wants one; it's very select, and very few go to the clerks. You'll see all the really big people there."She looked at him out of furious eyes, and said impatiently: "And what do you suppose I am to wear at such an affair?"He had not thought about it; he stammered:"Why, the dress you go to the theatre in. It looks very nice, to me...."He stopped, stupefied and utterly at a loss when he saw that his wife was beginning to cry. Two large tears ran slowly down from the corners of her eyes towards the corners of her mouth."What's the matter with you? What's the matter with you?" he faltered.But with a violent effort she overcame her grief and replied in a calm voice, wiping her wet cheeks:"Nothing. Only I haven't a dress and so I can't go to this party. Give your invitation to some friend of yours whose wife will be turned out better than I shall."He was heart-broken."Look here, Mathilde," he persisted, "What would be the cost of a suitable dress, which you could use on other occasions as well, something very simple?"She thought for several seconds, reckoning up prices and also wondering for how large a sum she could ask without bringing upon herself an immediate refusal and an exclamation of horror from the careful-minded clerk.At last she replied with some hesitation:"I don't know exactly, but I think I could do it on four hundred francs."He grew slightly pale, for this was exactly the amount he had been saving for a gun, intending to get a little shooting next summer on the plain of Nanterre with some friends who went lark-shooting there on Sundays.Nevertheless he said: "Very well. I'll give you four hundred francs. But try and get a really nice dress with the money."
The author seems to view the husband as
A)afraid.
B)angry.
C)gentle.
D)loving.

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D- loving. The husband showed that he cared for his wife and even though he was saving up the money for a gun, he gave his wife the money instead because he loved her.

It is not necessary for a driver to strive to develop a positive attitude when driving true or false

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Answer:

I would guess false because if you allow yourself to get upset at another driver who is already angry, then a serious incident could happen such as an accident or a fight.

When might you use the future tense as your primary tense?
A. When you are writing a cause and effect essay
B. When you are writing an essay comparing and contrasting
different ideas for future energy resources
C. When you are writing an essay about a science-fiction novel set
200 years in the future
D. When you are writing a business proposal describing your
intentions for an upcoming project

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Answer:

d

Explanation:

Which physical change is usually more pronounced in adolescent males than in females?
development of sweat glands
widening of the hips
accelerated gonad growth
growth of body hair

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The physical changes that are usually more pronounced in adolescent males than in females are accelerated gonad growth and growth of body hair.

What is adolescence?

Adolescence is the phase where the transition of children is started into adults. Their physical and mental growth begins.

The age of adolescence is from 10 to 19. Females body starts to change and get ready for menstrual cycles and males bodies also change such as body hair, voice, gonads, etc.

Thus, the correct options are C, accelerated gonad growth. D, growth of body hair.

Learn more about adolescence

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Answer:

development of sweat glands

Explanation:

i took the test

B is female specific and C and D apply to both sexes so A is the correct option

Number 4
Could it be I’m used to getting up early?

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I think “I’m used to getting up early” is right.

how does the tone shift in the poem "black girl magic"

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Answer:

This is to inspire and motivate young black women. This shift occurs when the BGM tries to counteract the negative vibes from people around young black women. Sometimes, the holding back from being what you want to be, is clouded by what is going on around us in our world.

Explanation:

The black community has criticized due to the fact that the author tried to make it seem like black young girls are superhuman and have special powers. The black community wants young girls to know they can be anything they want to be, but remember that you have to make choices of the decisions that are going to out there to make. Yes, BGM is good to encourage young women to be all that they can be. It just has a shift in the ideas about something being handed to you - or working for and aiming for all the goals of what you want your own future to look like.

Please someone help me with this
Their sure the only sounds they will hear at night will be the wash of ocean waves or the croaks of bullfrogs. What correction should be made to this sentence?
(1) change Their to They're
(2) insert a comma after sure
(3) change the spelling of hear to here
(4) change will be to are
(5) change will be to is

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The answer is 1.) Because the definition of the form of their they used in the story means they own it so if you change it to they’re, it means they are. therefore the answer is 1.

The one in blue is wrong Ik that Fs Fs but This my last chance and honestly I don’t know??? Need help

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I think that it’s personification because mental doesn’t literally “screech”.

Select the correct answer
What is the text structure of this passage?
My brother and I often argue over who has the more effective studying technique for tests. My brother studies by rereading the entire
section of the textbook that he's going to be tested on; he says that this method helps refresh his memory and gain Information that he
may have missed the first time. I think it's important to refresh your memory as well, but I find flashcards to be more effective. I use my
notes from class to make flashcards on all the terms and processes discussed in class. Then I read the flash cards out loud because hearing
the words helps me to remember them better. There are pros and cons to both methods, but I guess it comes down to which one is more
effective for you
А
problem and solution
в.
cause and effort
c. compare and contrast
d. chronological order
e. description

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Answer:

compare and contrast

Explanation:

just took the test

Answer:

compere and contrast

Explanation:

should be good to go

Please help! 20 points for whoever gets this right...

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Answer:

the adverb would be early I think

early would be the adverb

essay on natural disaster​

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Answer:

more info

Explanation:

walking slowly..
A.trembled
B.plodding
C.scold
D.tangled

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Answer:

B

Explanation:

Answer:

walking slowly

is

B. plodding

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passage:
The tiger loved to lie in the shade, but he didn't have too many places to go. There were not many trees where this tiger lived. He ate well twice a day - once in the morning and once in the evening. He was spoiled, as his food was always delivered and cut for him. Although he was safe and fed, the bored tiger was still missing something in his life.

Based on the passage, what inference should readers make about where the tiger lives?

The tiger lives in a zoo.
The tiger lives in someone’s home.
The tiger lives in the mountains.
The tiger lives in the jungle.

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1. the tiger lives in a zoo :)

Answer:

A.

Explanation:

Why do you think we should wash our ha
Whoud we wash our hands after we
od you wash your hand
Why d you decide to wash your hands a1 + 1 ​

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Answer:

Explanation:

bc its good for you

NO LINKS OR ELSE YOU'LL BE REPORTED!Only answer if you're very good at English.

Review the paragraph at the top of page 4.

Click on the sentence in the paragraph that BEST shows the son cares about his father, despite wanting to trick him.​

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Answer:

"His son, who had been gathering the precious objects as each was handed to him, determined that he had worried his father enough."

Explanation:

The first one...because he "determined that he had worried his father enough."

What is Geoffrey Chaucer's best known work?
The Canterbury Tales
Book of the Duchesse
Divine Comedy

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Answer:

Canterbury tales

Explanation:

Looked it up

4. PART B: Which detail from the paragraph 3 best supports the answer
to Part A?
O A “These correlational findings do not prove that lack of sleep is
causing these problems."
OB “Sleep deficits reduce brain function, further disturbing areas in
which even well-rested adolescents struggle"
OC "Parents, educators and therapists need to pay attention to the
role of sleep in preventing mental illness among youth
OD "Its effect is likely larger than most therapies and medications."

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The question is incomplete and the full version can be found online.  

Answer:  A “These correlational findings do not prove that lack of sleep is causing these problems."

Explanation:

To answer this question, one must first read "Teenagers Who Don’t Get Enough Sleep at Higher Risk for Mental Health Problems" (2015) by Tori Rodriguez. Then, answer the first part of the question, which asks: " Which statement best describes how the author addresses the conflicting evidence in paragraph 3?."

The answer to the first part is:

She acknowledges that some questions remain, even though the link between sleep and mental health is strong.

The answer to Part B of the question is that the detail from paragraph 3 that best supports the answer to Part A  is when the author explains that the correlational relationship between the lack of sleep and problems like anxiety has not yet resolved whether the lack of sleep causes anxiety or is anxiety what causes insomnia. And still, most of the research has provided evidence that supports the causal direction being lack of sleep causing problems.

Write A passage for a story about another determined person use 4 of these vocab words

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Answer:

Dr. Johnny is a dentist who has been practicing dentistry for the past 10 years. He has given so much value to his patients that he was well known in the whole empire for his professionalism and effectiveness. He has a principle of providing the best service to all his patient.

One Monday morning, Dr. Johnny received a summon from the king's palace to appear before the king. When he got there, he was informed that the king appreciated his work in the empire and wants him to be his personal dentist.

Dr. Johnny saw it as mere flatter and knew that it was a bait to make him stop providing services to the poor masses in the empire. Therefore, he turned down the offer. He decided to remain determined in providing the best and quality service to the people in the whole empire.

Explanation:

I have been able to use 4 of the vocabulary words to write a short story about a determined person.

The words I used are dentist, empire, summon, flatter.

My short story is fictitious. It talks about how Dr. Johnny, the main character turned down the king's offer and decided to remain committed in providing his services to the poor masses.

write a paragraph about something you have done to show your appreciation for your parents

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Answer: Please mark brainiest. I did all the dishes, mom and dad. I even dried them one by one. Know can I have the internet?

Who are you? Explain.

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Your mom.

Explanation: No explanation
Answer:

Who am I? .... well I’m a depressed and sad person

Explanation:
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