what is the first step for revising a paragraph with run-on sentences?

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Answer 1

Answer:

The first step in revising a paragraph with run-on sentences is to read the paragraph completely and then add appropriate punctuation and conjunctions.

Explanation:

Run-on sentences is a term that refers to a set of phrases that were joined in a paragraph without any kind of transition and separation between them. This type of sentence compromises reading, as it makes reasoning difficult and does not allow the reader to recognize what the meaning and understanding of the text is. For this reason, it is important that this type of sentence is reviewed. The revision must be done with the reading of the sentences and the placement of punctuation (such as commas, periods, exclamation point, among others) and conjunctions such as (and, but, or, ...) that make the text more fluid and cohesive.


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jatiyam of kaliki buddhi cheppadam

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Answer:

Nationalism of the leg is mind boggling

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Can someone write half a page of this? If you do this I’ll make another post to give you more points

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Breaking down stigmas

hands signing  

Rich communication doesn't have to be

verbal.

One of the ways the Deaf distinguish themselves as a culture is by capitalizing the word Deaf and working to change mainstream America’s attitude. The Deaf culture doesn’t believe in using the word "disabled" because that word makes implies “less than”—as though they are lacking something. By removing the label, they are also removing any stigma that might be attached.

“It’s about perspective,” Deaf advocate Eileen O’Banion said. “When you are Deaf, you see the world in a different way. You communicate differently. You seek out others who are Deaf because they understand you. You don’t believe you have a disability—and you don’t want to be fixed.”

In fact, some advocates even speak about "Deaf gain," a communication advantage afforded to those who must use means other than verbal language. The idea is that deaf people have more meaningful and intentional connection because they cannot hear.  

Tough choices around cochlear implants

 

Meghan Watt lost her hearing after contracting HIB meningitis at the age of two. A conversation with a middle high school teacher piqued her interest in cochlear implant (CI) surgery, even though she admits she wasn’t always keen on the idea. Today, she has bilateral cochlear implants.

Meghan is aware there is controversy among certain factions of the Deaf community regarding cochlear implants and is comfortable with the choices she’s made. “Some don’t approve of CIs and that’s that,” she explained matter-of-factly. “If they’re happy being Deaf, that’s great. That’s their decision. I like being able to hear what’s going on around me.”

Some members of the Deaf community are opposed to cochlear implant surgery—especially for infants who are born without hearing. They believe every person deserves the right to choose for themselves whether they want to remain Deaf and encourage parents to begin teaching ASL as the baby’s first language. Some activists believe learning language and cognitive development through ASL is a basic human right that should be protected and that choosing cochlear implants steers families away from learning ASL and embracing Deaf culture.

Audism and oralism

Nine out of 10 Deaf infants are born to hearing parents. Many of those parents choose cochlear implant surgery as soon as they are medically able because it helps their child with speech development.

But the Deaf culture believes mainstream hearing America puts too much emphasis on the spoken word. They maintain ASL is a complete language, even though they don’t produce words with their mouths and voices.

Some activists talk about audism—an attitude of superiority based on an ability to hear—and oralism—advocacy or use of the oral method of teaching Deaf students to speak. Audism and oralism, activists maintain, degrade ASL and interfere with the Deaf person’s ability to develop speech and listening skills.

“Deaf culture is important because it allows individuals to be who they are,” O’Banion explained, “and live in a way that is unique to them. There’s more to a person than whether or not they can hear, so don’t just focus on their ears.”

American Sign Language (ASL)

According to the National Institute on Deafness and Other Communication Disorders (NIDCD), ASL is a complete, complex language consisting of signs made by the hands, facial expressions and body language. The National Association of the Deaf (NAD) calls ASL the “backbone of the American Deaf culture.”

“Many who are not familiar with ASL think it’s English and hand gestures,” O’Banion said. “It’s not. Signing is different between countries and regions, much like the spoken word is different between countries and regions.”

While the origins of sign language are not clear, most agree that it began almost 200 years ago and has been evolving ever since. Like modern language, sign language has different accents, rhythms, rules for pronunciation, word order and grammar. The language is so complex, some members of Deaf culture say they can identify when a person learned ASL simply by observing the way they sign.

How to communicate with a Deaf person

Fortunately, you don’t need to know ASL in order to know how to communicate with a Deaf person. According to a tip sheet developed by the Rochester Institute of Technology, one of the country’s premiere learning institutions for the Deaf, there are five guidelines to remember when communicating with the Deaf.

Acknowledge the fact that your first attempts to communicate will feel awkward and uncomfortable. This will pass as your interaction progresses.

It’s OK to use paper and pen. In fact, the Deaf person will appreciate your efforts even more if you use a combination of communication methods, such as hand gestures, facial expressions and the written word.

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IS THS GOOD

How many people think that weddings are basically funerals with cake?

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Answer:

irk I'm like why that's so deep

Answer:

lol

Explanation:

not me lol

Cuáles son los términos que faltan para completar la igualdad en el siguiente producto? (n - 2)(n + 7) = n² + ___ - ___

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Answer:

n² + 5n - 14

Explanation:

(n-2)(n+7) = n*n + n*7 -2*n -2*7 = n² + 7n - 2n - 14

= n² + 5n - 14

sekta ng relihiyon itinatag ni Gregorio Aglipay?

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Sorry what language is this

faceti in 10 randuri o compunere in care sa prezentati participarea la un concert rock

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Era o zi frumoasa de 5 septembrie. Soarele patea puternic.

         Ma pregateam sa merg in parc cu bunicu. Ne indreptam spre statia de troleibuz 70. In dreum am vazut anunturi pe care scriau : SIMFONII DE TOAMNA VOR AVEA UN CONCERT PE DATA DE 5 SEPTEMBRIE LA ORA 18:00. LOCUL DESFASURII ESTE LA ROSETI IN AER LIBER . INTRAREA ESTE LIBERA. Atunci i.am spus bunicului sa mergem la acest concert.

              Concertul incepuse cu 2 min inainte. Aici am asculta muzica de GEORGE ENESCU. Mi.a placut toate melodiile pe care le.au cantat.

               La sfarsit am facut cunostinta cu dirijor pe care il chema(alegi tu) si cu canteretii sai .

                Ciar a fost un concert de minune.

Have you heard of keshi’s 2 soon and NIKI’s lowkey?

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No why...??? Did something happen

What is the difference between a social issue and a social problem? ​

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Answer:

Actually they’re both the same depending upon the mindset of who’s asking the question.

Explanation:

A social issue is one that concerns a large number of people, many of whom have different views on what’s at stake and how to alleviate the problem. A social problem is generally one that’s received a lot more publicity and exposure and therefore generates a larger and often nastier response from those who care to respond. So basically the difference between the two is the amount of publicity they generate.

What does Nanjing mean?
northern capital
southern capital
three ovens
southern ovens

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Answer:

[tex] \sf{Nanjing \: means \: \: \underline{ \bold{Southern \: Capital}}}.[/tex]

Hope I helped!

Have a wonderful time !ツ

~[tex] \text{TheAnimeGirl} [/tex]

Answer:

Southern capital

Explanation:

తక్రింది పద్యాన్ని చదివి తులు తయరు చేయండి....
పూజకన్న నెంచ బుద్ధి విధానంబు
మాటకన్న నెంచ మనసు దృఢము
కులముకన్న మిగుల గుణము ప్రధానంబు
విశ్వదాభిరామ వినురవేమ!​

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Answer:

Poojakanna nencha buddhi vidhanambu

Chest is stronger than words

Surplus quality over caste is paramount

Vishwadabhirama Vinuravema!

Explanation:

What language is this, I speak English and used google translate.

The main events of a play, novel, movie, or similar work is called

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Answer:

plot

Explanation:

lmk is its right!

Hope that helped! :)

Plot is the answer can I get brainliest

Can someone tell me the pinyin for any of these examples?

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我见过那个人。: wǒ jiào guò nà gè rén

你看过这个电影吗?:nǐ kàn guò zhè gè diàn yǐng ma

我没学过中文。:wǒ méi yǒu xué guò zhōng wén

Answer:

wo jian guo na ge ren.

ni kan guo zhe ge dian ying ma ?

wo mei you xue guo zhong wen.

Explanation:

Сочинение на тему "Нам не забыть те грозные года" (история населеного пункта связанная с событиями Великой Отечественно войны; рассказ об учениках и педагогах образовательного учреждения - участниках Великой Отечественной войны 1941-1945 гг., имя которого носит образовательное учреждение.

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Answer:

тебе нужна помощь в чтении или что-то в этом роде?

Explanation:

3. What is the difference between the importance of English and the importance of Filipino language to the Filipino nation?

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Answer:

English and Tagalog are completely unrelated languages. English is a Germanic language in the Indo-European family. Tagalog is a Philippine language in the Austronesian family. Grammatically and phonologically they are quite different.

Answer:

The importance of the english language to the Filipinos is mirrored through the global competitiveness of the country. We interact with other countries because we negiotiate with them everyday. Our businesses and trade with foreigners would be useless without the use of a common mode of communication which all parties could understand--and that is english, the universal language.

Explanation:

The importance of the Filipino language--our language--is a completely different matter. We use the national laguage Filipino because it is the common ground of ALL sons and daughters of the Philippine nation. Before we learn to interact and adapt to the rest of the world, we first must have harmony among ourselves and understand each other. That is through the use of Filipino.

Which is an example of personification?

A.
adding the "person" ending to a sign to indicate that it is a profession
B.
fingerspelling a proper noun like a last name
C.
relying on speechreading when first conversing with a new ASL-speaking friend
D.
introducing yourself as a linguistic minority

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Answer:

D

Explanation:

i think that's the answer

Answer:

A, adding the "person" ending to a sign to indicate that it is a profession

Explanation:

I just took the test

If you help me nd your right and you hurry i will give an extra 20 points and brainliest. This is for ASL.

What is one way that ASL differs from spoken or written English?
Group of answer choices

It has different word order and grammar than spoken or written English.

Body language is used less in ASL than in spoken English.

In ASL, words cannot be emphasized.

ASL has its own written language.

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Answer:

D

Explanation:

Because ASL is its own language and not spoken with words but with hands

What is etiquette? describe it

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Customary code of polite behavior among members in a group.

Answer:

Explanation:

Definition- The customary code of polite behavior in society or among members of a particular profession or group.

Example-

Be yourself – and allow others to treat you with respect. Let this one sink in, ladies. ...

Say “Thank You” ...

Give Genuine Compliments. ...

Don't be Boastful, Arrogant or Loud. ...

Listen Before Speaking. ...

Speak with Kindness and Caution. ...

Do Not Criticize or Complain. ...

Be Punctual.

A headshake is often used to indicate negation but only when signing simple words.
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True

False

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i think the answers is true

Answer:

the answer is false

Explanation:

medica es una palabra aguda?

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I don’t really understand Spanish

verbos en ingles que terminen en SS,X,Z,O,CH,SH

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Answer:

>>>  Necesitas saber que hay cientos de otros ejemplos.

guess

mix

waltz

go

approach

splash

Explanation:

I need this translated from latin to english ( Croatian if possible)

Senatus tamen a duplicato terrore cavebat: unus consul imperium exercitus, unus imperium civile habebat.

Plz dont just type it into google trnaslate i tried it and it gives a messed up answer.

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The senate, however, from being doubled by the terror of his regard: one of the consuls to the commandment of the army, the one of the civil power to he had.
I tried the dictionary .

plz help

to anyone who actually knows の本陣 can you explain to me the participles, im learning and am very stupid. 私バカやろう










まで

???

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Answers:

と = When

の = of

に = To

お = O

まで = Until

Explanation:

Is this good?

申し訳ありません!私はしようとしています!

Honest opinions on South korea?




:)​

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Answer:

Never had a personal encounter

Translate this in English from Latin to English They are praising

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English: they are praising
Latin: ipsi lauding,

Answer:

laudant Hope this helps it means

they are praising in Latin

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What are some challenges and triumphs of growing up?

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Answer:

When growing up, you face challenges of figuring out what you want to do after school. (Challenges)

- Getting grey hair (Challenges)

- The stress of high school  (Challenges)

Triumphs - The blessing of waking up and getting older each year

Driving  (Triumphs)

getting married  (Triumphs)

Explanation:

The sentences below describe events in the story. Put the three events in the correct order. A. Timmy collects the tools that he will need from the garage. B. Timmy and his father go to the junkyard to look for parts. C. Timmy goes to the library to find books on how to build a robot.

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Answer:

C.

B.

A.

Explanation:

Timmy goes to the library to find books on how to build a robot.

Timmy and his father go to the junkyard to look for parts.

Timmy collects the tools that he will need from the garage.

A recognized group of people who share a language, culture, or religion is
called
A. a privileged group
B. an ethnic group
C. multicultural
D. multiple perspectives

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Answer: An ethnic group

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Alvin worked for 20 years as a security guard with NASA and was present for many of the most famous rocket launches in history. However, because of his close proximity to these loud launches, he lost most of his hearing later in life. Which term most accurately describes Alvin? A. Hard of Hearing B. Post-Deaf C. Lost-hearing D. Late-deafened

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Answer:

D. Late-deafened

Explanation:

A person who is late-deafened grows up hearing, then loses most of their hearing as an adult.

Hope that helps.

If your friend asks you which color sign can also frequently be finger-spelled, what would you say?
Group of answer choices

"black"

"white"

"brown"

"gray"

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Answer:

white ._.

Explanation:

Answer:

white

Explanation:

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