The paragraph below tells about a special date in November history. Can you find and mark ten errors in the paragraph? You might look for errors of capitalization, punctuation, spelling, or grammar. You will need to rewrite the paragraph with the fixed mistakes.

In 1919, president Woodrow Wilson proclaimed November 11 Armistice Day to celebrate the end of, the fighting in the World War I. Congress change the name of Armistice Day in 1954 in order to include American veterans of all wars. Veterans Day honors our countrys military men an women for there willingness to help protect the United States Every year on this day, a national ceremony is held exact at 11 a.m.

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Answer 1

Before:

In 1919, president Woodrow Wilson proclaimed November 11 Armistice Day to celebrate the end of, the fighting in the World War I. Congress change the name of Armistice Day in 1954 in order to include American veterans of all wars. Veterans Day honors our countrys military men an women for there willingness to help protect the United States Every year on this day, a national ceremony is held exact at 11 a.m.

Re-written:

In 1919, president Woodrow Wilson proclaimed November 11 Armistice Day to celebrate the end of the fighting in the World War I. Congress change the name of Armistice Day in 1954 in order to include American veterans of all wars. Veterans Day honors our country's military men and women for their willingness to help protect the United States. Every year on this day, a national ceremony is held exact at 11 a.m.


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In Act III, scene i of Romeo and Juliet, Tybalt returns to the scene after he has killed Mercutio and fled. What motivates his return?

the anger he feels about the marriage
his desire to make peace with Romeo
the guilt he feels about killing Mercutio
his hatred for the entire Montague family

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Answer:

the answer is D

Explanation:

In act III of this story, the motivation that caused Tybalt to return was from the fact that he hated the whole Montague family. Option D is right.

Why did Tybalt hate the Montague family?

The hatred for the Montague family is from an age-long feud that has existed between both of the families. The new generation of both families are merely keeping the enmity that was passed down to them

He had hated Romeo because of this and he saw them as his sworn enemies.

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What’s the mood of monkeys paw ?

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Answer:

The mood of "The Monkey's Paw" is dark and foreboding.

Which of the following best paraphrases this line: And trouble deaf heaven with my bootless cries

a. Heaven doesn’t hear the cries that I make constantly.
b. The way that I feel is disturbing.
c. I am crying out in a poor state.
d. I feel alone and like I can’t get to heaven.

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Answer:

A.)Heaven doesn’t hear the cries that I make constantly.

Explanation:

Its the only one that makes sense to me.

Sorry if its wrong by the way.

But if you feel alone you can get to heaven.

If your crying "constantly" God/Jesus can hear you but not the whole Heaven.(if that makes any sense)

The answer would be A

Sarah is having trouble studying from her notes. She is using a notes organizer, but she is still having difficulties
identifying main ideas and vocabulary words. Sarah would benefit from
a. writing her notes out in complete c. highlighting the important elements using her
sentences
own note taking key
b. adding a questions section to her notes d. writing down everything the teacher says to
page
ensure she doesn't miss anything
Please select the best answer from the choices provided
Α
В
C
D

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Answer:

C. Highlighting the important elements using her own note-taking key

Explanation:

Sarah would benefit from highlighting the important elements using her own note-taking key. When you're studying from notes, it's important that you create them in a way you understand them. That's why people often have trouble learning from someone else's notes. Everyone learns in their own way. That's why Sarah should use her own note-taking key.

Answer:

c

Explanation:

2. What type of fallacy is represented by the passage below?
The poem "Cautionary Tale of Girls and Birds of Prey" is not worth reading. The author clearly is a sick and morbid person who likes to write about death.
non sequitur
association fallacy
appeal to authority
ad hominem attack

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Answer:

Ad hominem attack

Explanation:

A logical fallacy is a flaw in reasoning.

Ad hominem (literally translated as to the person) is a type of logical fallacy in which a person criticizes or attacks another person, rather than what they are saying. Here, the speaker doesn't critize the mentioned poem. They don't give explanations about why the poem is not good. They simply attack the writer, stating that they are a sick and morbid person. That is not a valid reason as to why someone shouldn't read a poem.

Answer:

Ad hominem attack.

Explanation:

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Read the excerpt from "The Gift of the Magi" by O. Henry. Only $1.87 to buy a present for Jim. Her Jim. Many a happy hour she had spent planning for something nice for him. Something fine and rare and sterling—something just a little bit near to being worthy of the honor of being owned by Jim. What inferences about Della can be made based on this excerpt? Check all that apply. Della does not have much money to spend on Jim’s gift. Della wants to buy Jim a watch chain for his watch. Della loves her husband, Jim, very much. Della wants to buy Jim a really nice gift. Della will need to sell her hair to buy Jim a nice gift.

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Answer:

We read this story.

Della does not have much money to spend on Jim’s gift.

Della loves her husband, Jim, very much.

Della wants to buy Jim a really nice gift.          

Explanation:

Della will have to sell her hair, but I don't think you can tell by just reading this excerpt.

And she will buy him watch chain, but you can't tell by reading this except also.

Hope this helps!!

The graphic organizer shows the structure of an informative essay.




The thesis statement should be established in the


introduction.

first body paragraph.

second body paragraph.

conclusion.

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is this supposed to be a true or false question??
It should be in the Introduction Paragraph


6 Plan the following descriptive titles. What difference do the definite article and use of
the plural make? List at least six ideas which could be developed into paragraphs, and
make notes of some descriptive words, phrases and images you will include. Decide on
the order in which you would use your material.
a The lake
b A place I never want to go back to
c Where I come from
d City street at night
e Mountains.

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Answer:

e

Explanation:

20 pointtss Why is online privacy so important

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Answer:

creeps

Explanation:

there are many bad ppl around the world who can steal credit card info or personal pics

Answer:

People can use things such as your address to trach down your location.

Explanation:

Although you may feel safe, revealing things like your name, phone number, and address is not safe for you and your family. This may catch the attention of stalkers, burglars, etc.

explain why Mr. Webb feels like it is okay for him to poison the alcohol that he will be leaving behind his summer home

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Probably because he believes nobody will be there to drink the alcohol therefore poisoning it won’t have any consequences.

I don’t know if this is right though I’m just guessing. ‍♀️

In the Prologue excerpt, why to you think the Wife of Bath asks the pilgrims NOT to be offended at her views as she will portray them in her tale?
What is the King’s punishment for the Knight?
Who begs the King to show the Knight mercy? How is this ironic?
What does the Wife of Bath say hooks women to men?
What does the old woman value most?
This is for the wifes bath tale

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Answer and Explanation:

1. Because she is a woman far ahead of her time, presenting women in positions that were not stimulated in society and that could shock listeners. Her story is about female freedom, wisdom and even sexual freedom and that was not something advocated in women at the time.

2. The king's punishment is for the knight to be executed for having abused a maiden against her will.

3. The queen begs the king for mercy. The irony in this is that no one imagined that the queen would impose a task so that the knight would not be executed, as readers might think that she would intercede for the knight only because she was kind and not a strategist as she proved to be.

4. Bath's wife claims that having the power to dominate is what binds women to men, because by dominating their husbands, women are able to satisfy their desires and enjoy everything that gives them pleasure. What the old woman values most is the loyalty between the couple

GIVING BRAINLIST IF YOU GET THE ANSWER RIGHT. The Sahara stretches across northern Africa from the coast of the Red Sea in the east all the way to the Atlantic Ocean in the west.


Why does the author MOST LIKELY use the word stretches in this sentence?

Question 4 options:

to emphasize the vast size of the desert


to reveal that the desert is increasing in size


to show that the desert is in the northern part of Africa

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Answer:

to emphasize the vast size of the desert

Words circled in red can anyone read it and just tell What they are

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It kinda looks like shel or swel.

Explanation:

in the long walk to water why are the villagers celebrating the dirty water spraying from the borehole?​

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Answer:

below

Explanation:

because they thought that the people that came to drill were going to do somehting bad, but they actually helped them

Can you make a sentece for attire

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Answer: I wasn't sure what would be appropriate attire for the restaurant.

Explanation:

Answer:

The noun attire is just a formal way to say "outfit." If you're going outside in the middle of a blizzard, your attire should include more than a bathing suit and flip-flops. Attire can also refer to the antlers of a deer, but that's a pretty obscure definition.

To what family does Tybalt belong? He is related to the Prince's family. He is neither Capulet nor Montague. He is related to the Capulet family. He is related to the Montague family.​

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Answer:

Tybalt belongs to the Capulet family.

Explanation: It mentions it in the first act of the book.

Answer:

Tybalt belongs to the Capulet family.

Explanation:

Name the types of
types of "Present Tense and give an example
for each​

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Answer:

Explanation:

Present: I go

present progressive : I am going

present perfect: I have gone

present perfect progressive: I have been going

Can somebody plz just give me 1 more point on my question thx!!

WILL MARK BRAINLIEST :D

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Answer: He created us because he wanted us.

Explanation:

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You’ve seen several images that organizations have used to persuade young audiences to eat more healthily or avoid tobacco products. Suggest an approach that you think would work better for this purpose than those you’ve seen so far. Your idea can take the form of any type of multimedia, but it should include a description of the media itself as well as its message.

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Answer:

Your approach could be to compare the health of someone who has avoided tobacco products and has eaten more healthily to a person who has not avoided tobacco products and has not eaten healthily.

You could compare medical records, and conduct experiments to see who would live a longer, healthier life and so forth.

Explanation:

this is you brain o this is your brain when u smoke (     )

this is your but?t freely o this your bu?tt when you shop lift (               )

How is Grandma Ruth’s identity shaped as a result of her experience at her friend’s home?

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Answer:

Lamento no poder ayudarte

Explanation:

Answer:

She was deeply secretive about her long life.

Explanation:

Reasons:

- Daphne Hampstead was 39 when she fled her home in Sydney's west in 1958

- She left behind her sometimes violent older husband Sidney and eight children  

- Letters from Daphne to Sidney and one their daughters arrived two days later  

- Daphne changed her name and her birth date to make herself six years     younger

- She had two long, loving relationships and died in Queensland in 2007 aged 89  

- Private investigator discovered missing Daphne Hampstead was Daphne Jones

- One of Daphne's new granddaughters, 40, was shot dead in Brisbane last year

Which of the following basic sentence structures appear in the passage?

I. simple
II. complex
III. compound-complex

A. I only

B. I and II

C. I and III

D. II and III

E. I, II, and III

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Answer:

E

Explanation:

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Which sentence best supports the author's claim that the best place to build solar power plants is the Mojave Desert?

sentence 1
sentence 2
sentence 3
sentence 4

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Answer:

sentence 3

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Which statement from the Article best supports the idea that Amina Mseffer feels that there is additional work to be done to help people with intellectual disabilities?

A. But while Mseffer celebrates her group's progress toward integrating people with disabilities, she also wants government officials in Morocco to get more involved.

B. Over the years, Hadaf has received gifts of money from businesses, individuals, and even the Moroccan king.

C. When launching the restaurant, Hadaf partnered with a Moroccan government project that helps citizens who are poor.

D. Still, Hadaf was helping people with disabilities long before the restaurant opened

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Answer:

you need to write the article name or a picture of the article to get a correct awnser

Explanation:

Could someone help me with these 2 questions please

Identify and explain the rhetorical appeal (ethos, pathos, or logos) of the photograph found on page 289 of "What to the Slave is the Fourth of July?"

Tokenism is the practice of making a symbolic gesture toward a goal, such as eliminating slavery, but not actually fulfilling that goal. Why does Douglass view his invitation to speak on the Fourth of July as an act of Tokenism?

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Answer:

Why does Douglass consistently use the pronoun "your" in this speech? He is creating the separation between the slave and the free whites if slavery were to continue it would be the death of America  would lead to war  this is  Identify these elements. What feelings is he appealing to in his audience in this section?

Explanation:

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How do race and gender come into conflict in The House on Mango Street? Does one triumph as the more important concern, or do both issues receive equal consideration?

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Answer and Explanation:

1. In "The House on Mango Street" there is a conflict between gender and race that can be seen when the author approaches the lives of women within the Latin culture, which is a strongly patriarchal culture, where women, in the poorest communities, they are considered in more submissive positions, without much opportunity to achieve a better life, which often generates abuse, bad treatment and lack of freedom.

2. The gender issue may seem to triumph over the race issue, but the author presents these two elements in a very balanced way and establishes a very strong relationship between them.

Read the text trailer about “Amigo Brothers.”

What happens when careers collide with friendships? When entering the boxing ring no longer means facing an opponent, but a trusted and loyal friend? Felix Vargas and Antonio Cruz, two of the most well-respected boxers in the Bronx, come face to face with this reality. When the bell sounds and the match ends, will they still be friends or will the friendship they once shared be “knocked out” forever?
Which adjective best describes the tone of this text trailer?
A. angry
B. formal
C. hesitant
D. suspenseful

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It may be can b number 2 b

Answer:

D) Suspenseful

Explanation:

The great rat hunt by Laurence Yep summary using when,where,who, and what

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Answer:

summary:

Explanation:

HAS ANY ONE READ THE BOOK MINE BY KATY EVANS? IF YES ANSWER TELL ME UR FAVE CHAPTER!

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Answer:

chapter one???????????

What type of figurative language is this: "Three short guys
took huge fish - big like they were baby sharks or something..."

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Explanation:

its not a metaphor, its a simile (not sure if i spelled that right lol)

Answer:

It’s a simile

Explanation:

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Hamboyant
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5. In consequatial
6. Presumptuous
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