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Please Help Me Out With Corrections! My Teacher's Feedback Is Too Right Please Help With Adding It To

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Answer 1
From my understanding, you just want me to correct that last sentence?

Video games is a universal entertainment for all ages. It also happens to be something a lot of people love playing in their free time. Many people don't notice, but video games can be very beneficial to those who play. For example, people use video games as a coping technique to escape their own reality. Video games provide a rush of serotonin to the brain, causing people to be attracted to playing them and play frequently. Video games help people connect with one another, as you can meet so many people who share similar interests on every platform. This also can help improve family connections if you include them too!

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Read the following excerpt, paying attention to both the author’s position and any other opinions to which she might allude. Because television viewing hours increase so gradually from year to year, most parents do not consider their teenagers’ viewing habits a problem. However, in our survey we found that the average viewing time for most American teens had climbed to almost six hours per day—more than one-third of their waking hours. How would you characterize the author’s strategy for distinguishing her position?
A The author uses a shocking statistic to strengthen her position.
B The author references and answers opposing positions one by one.
C The author explains why she disagrees with the results of the survey.
D The author provides research data in order to disprove the other positions.

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Answer:

A

Explanation:

i got it right on the quiz thing

Answer:

above is right

Explanation:

"One reason scientists study and have visited the moon is that the moon may hold secrets about the composition of Earth when the moon was created."

Which of the following sentences uses "composition" in the same way it is used in this sentence?

A.
Jordan’s skill with the piano was such that playing the composition required very little of his attention.


B.
Lauren enrolled in an AP composition course even though she knew that she would have to write many essays.


C.
The two parties in the lawsuit signed the composition agreed upon during trial.


D.
In his chemistry lab, Steve determined that the composition of the unknown sample was 40 percent lead, 10 percent tin, and 50 percent nickel.

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Answer:

D

Explanation:

Composition is used to describe how something is made/ what something Is made of.

What happened after Sammy young. Was killed

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Answer:

Younge was shot in the face (under the left eye) by Marvin Segrest, a 68-year-old white gas station attendant at a Standard Oil station in Tuskegee, Alabama, on January 3, 1966.The shooting came after a verbal altercation between Younge and the attendant about Younge using the "whites-only" bathroom.

Younge became the first black college student to be murdered for his actions in support of the Civil Rights Movement.Samuel Younge Sr. said of his son's death, "This is an era of social revolution. In such revolutions, individuals sacrifice their lives."

Explanation:

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Hi random person reading this

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Answer:

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Explanation:

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How does Lincoln address his audience in this excerpt?

A. Lincoln address is American citizens in a boastful tone to show his power as a political leader.

B. Lincoln addresses American citizens by imploring them to remember what binds them to the union.

C. Lincoln addresses American citizens egotistically to remove any doubt about his role as president.

D. Lincoln addresses American citizens urging them not to take action that could threaten their material comfort.​

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B. He addresses the citizens by imploring them to remember what binds them to the union.

Answer:

incoln addresses American citizens by imploring them to remember what binc

Explanation:

Why do some authors write allegories?
A
to hurt others' feelings
B
to make people laugh
to raise awareness
D
to blame society

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Thanks for the points

Answer:

i think its to raise awareness

Explanation:

2. In lines 128-141, make an inference about how Abuelita got locked a second time in the shed and whistled for her grand-daughter.

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Answer and Explanation:

According to the reading of the lines presented, we can infer that the Abuelita was locked for the second time in the warehouse by its own will. That's because she wanted to test the power of the whistle, watching not only if her granddaughter could hear how she was able to whistle back. This strategy of being trapped by Abuelita left her with a feeling of being a very intelligent and shrewd lady.

We can confirm this when the granddaughter says "I could see that she was smiling, and I think I even heard her chuckling."

(GIVING BRAINLIEST AND THE REST OF MY POINTS !!!!)

The plane landed, and the passengers stepped outside. Steven could already tell that this trip was going to be amazing. The weather was less humid than the rain forest and the sun was shining. He grinned at his parents and took a deep breath before he started talking a mile a minute.

"I can't wait to meet some sharks!" he exclaimed. "I just know I'll find the albino whale shark. It's—"

"One of the rarest sharks in the world, we all know!" interrupted Nick. "You've talked about nothing else since we planned this trip weeks ago!"

"Now Nick, be nice to your brother," their dad scolded. "He's excited, and he should be. Seeing a rare creature like the albino whale shark is definitely worth getting excited about."

What does the phrase "You've talked about nothing else" tell us about Steven?

A) He and his brother don't get along, especially while they are on vacation.
B) He has been excited about seeing the albino whale shark for a long time.
C) Nick and Steven have very different ideas about how to be excited.
D) Nick and Steven never argue, unless it is about endangered animals.

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Answer:

b i think not sure

sorry if im wrong

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Explanation:

Answer:

B

Explanation:

"It's Herbert!" she screamed. "It's Herbert!"
She ran to the door, but her husband was before her, and
catching her by the arm, held her tightly.
"What are you going to do?" he whispered hoarsely.
"It's my boy; it's Herbert!" she cried, struggling
mechanically. "I forgot it was two miles away. What are
you holding me for? Let go. I must opening the door."
"For God's sake don't let it in," cried the old man,
trembling
"You're afraid of your own son," she cried, struggling.
"Let me go, I'm coming, Herbert; I'm coming."
- "The Monkey's Paw,"
W. W. Jacobs

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Answer:

She is thrilled. He is terrified of what his son will be like.

Explanation:

Answer:

B or He is horrified, but she is excited.

Explanation:

What is the best type of organization for her speech?
a.
topical
b.
spatial
c.
chronological
d.
problem-solution

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Answer:

spatial or problem-solution I think so

I hope this helps a bit.

what is sensory language?​

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In writing, sensory language is a way for a writer to help the reader see or connect with an image, description, action, or scene. Sensory language is language that connects to the five senses (sight, sound, smell, taste, touch) to create an image or description.

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Sensory language is a language that uses all five senses, which is why it is called sensory because of the senses. It is effective because it helps readers visualize the scene which the author is trying to convey.

Write a one-half page comparison between Salin’s oppression of Russian farmers and Napoleon's rule of Animal Farm. I need this done today please help.

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Answer:

Hopefully This Helped! Read it from an article a while ago and this shows the explanation and the rules.

Explanation:

                 Animal Farm

irresponsible to his animals (lets them starve)                  

sometimes cruel - beats them with whip                         <--- Mr. Jones

sometimes kind - mixes milk in animal mash

taught Animalism

workers do the work, rich keep the $, animals              <--- Old Major       revolt

dies before revolution

                Russian Farm

a poor leader at best, compared to western kings

cruel - sometimes brutal with opponents                     <---- Czar Nicholas

Sometimes kind - hired students as spies to make money.

same

all people equal                                                              <---- Communism

gov't owns everything, people own gov't

Change these sentences into indirect speech: 1- She said to me, "You haven't replied to my e-mail."

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Answer:

Explanation:

hello i am sending you an email to you once again due to the fact i have not recieved an email from you yet ,please respond as fast as you can .

Answer:

She said to me that I haven't replied to her e-mail.  

A personal attack on a person is an example of

A. begging the question.

B. a red herring.

C. ad hominem.

D. either/or.

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Answer:

C

Explanation:

Discuss these questions with a partner. 1) Do you like shipping?Why?/Why not? 2)Which are you favourite shops?Why? 3)Do you prefer to go alone or with someone else(say who)? Why?

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Answer and Explanation:

1. I don't like shipping because I am very anxious and nervous about the shipping process and delivery dates. I keep checking at all times where the merchandise is, what time it will arrive and I am concerned with the physical integrity of the merchandise.

2. My favorite stores are those that sell products and all kinds in one place. I have no preference for a specific store, but I like those where, in the same place, I can find clothes, food, shoes, electronics, among others.

3. I like shopping with my mom, because she always has very good and accurate opinions.

Can anyone help me...I really need help.Thank you​

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Answer:

17) Staying

18) at

19) is

20)remove going?

21) last?

22) isn't

23) Remove therefore

24) are

I'm positive in the answers without the question marks.

Please help me please

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Try using quizlet I wish I could help more than this but quizlet works pretty well if brainly doesn’t work out!
Use quizlet to study!!! it helps a bunchhhh

please help me to write an paragraph about a famous person who likes to help poor people and sick people like St.Nicholas .(Nickolas was from the city of myra he loved to give gifts and he secretly put coins in people's shoes. pleaaase help​

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Answer:

St Nicholas was a generous man and helped with all his heart and for this he was known as wondermajer.Saint Nicholas is the patron saint of sailors, merchants, archers, repentant thieves, prostitutes, children, brewers, pawnbrokers, unmarried people, and students in various cities and countries around Europe. He was the one who started the culture of. Santa Clause inorder to make the young believe in Christmas and he did this to keep on giving .

Explanation:

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Answer:

Oprah Winfrey is someone I know that is famous and has donated to the poor. She is a talk show host and has earned a huge fortune from this career. Her most famous talk show is the Oprah Winfrey Show. She lived in a rural area when she was young and she had some very bad family problems. There was one a shooting and she donated 500,000 dollars. Although her charity effort arent as well known as her talk show her efforts were graetly appreciated.

The best way to be prepared for an exam is to:
O A. read the textbook the night before.
OB. study as you go.
O C. study during class time.
O D. cram at least once a week.

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Answer:

A. read the textbook the night before

Answer:

Explanation:

Study as you go is the answer

7. Reread lines 258-262. How does the author portray the wind as a separate character? Give
specific examples from the text to support your response.

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Answer:

By personification

Explanation:

I did the test and got 100%

Using textual evidence discuss how the setting of Welch has impacted Jeannette and her family. USE TEXTUAL EVIDENCE
5 sentences minimum*

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Answer:

After a month of driving, the family finally makes it to Welch, West Virginia. After meeting Erma, her father’s mother who refuses to be called ‘Grandma,' Grandpa Walls, and Uncle Stanley, Jeannette is shocked to find no resemblance between them and her father. Welch is a picture of destitution and unemployment, though in earlier days it thrived as a coal mining town. Rex takes his family on a tour of the town and explains that the very first food stamps were handed out in Welch after hard times came to its people in the 1950’s. Rose Mary sees the destitution of the town as an opportunity to establish herself as an artist since there would be no competition nearby.

Explanation:


Is it better for people to learn from others, or is it better for people to
learn on their own?

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Answer:

I think it is better for people to learn on their own because then they already have experience but it's also good to learn from other people's mistakes

Punctuate this sentence by using a comma to separate place names.

Have you ever been to Cleveland Ohio?

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Answer:

Have you ever been to Cleveland, Ohio

Answer:

"Have you ever been to Cleveland, Ohio?"

Explanation:

When punctuating sentences that include places, (in this case Cleveland, Ohio) you add a comma between the city name and the state name.

For example: Las Vegas, Nevada.


How does the Declaration describe "universal human rights"?

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Answer: is a document that acts like a global road map for freedom and equality – protecting the rights of every individual, everywhere. ... The Declaration outlines 30 rights and freedoms that belong to all of us and that nobody can take away from us.

Explanation:

Please help and I'll give points and brainliest to the best answer. Read the passage below from “Pinball: Where Science Meets Fun.”

Roger Sharpe believes it will. “Until someone comes up with some form of entertainment that has the same tactile and sensory experience of pinball, it will endure,” he says.

In the context of the passage above, the bold word, endure, most nearly means:

1. persevere
2. suffer
3. tolerate

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the answer is 1.) persevere

Answer: This is a confusing one... But it's suffer.....

Explanation:

because endure means suffering. It says that in it's defnition. Tolerate is one of it's synoyms, but suffering is the definition which means it MOST NEARLY MEANS endure.

Hope it helps :)

people curse but do people even know what the curse means?

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Answer:

Most people just curse when they have certain feelings but sometimes they just throw curse words without even knowing the rights words and how to use them and sometimes they don't even know what they mean

Explanation:

THE STORY IS “TINY PLASTIC,BIG PROBLEM” PLS HELP

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Answer:

there's this

Explanation:

website called resoomer it summarizes stuff for you.

Discuss the differences you already see between Jonas' community and your own. Consider practices, rules, and traditions. Also discuss the possible negative effects of living in this type of community.

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Answer and Explanation:

This question is about "The Giver."

There are many differences between the society in which Jonas lives and ours, the biggest of these differences being the suppression of differences and the stimulation and complete equality. That's because the Jonas community encourages everyone to be the same, wear the same clothes and haircuts, do the same activities and don't stand out in any way, don't show diversity and don't behave differently. This equality leads to censorship, which is another difference and which promotes the lack of freedom of expression and the lack of access to information, two elements that we have in our community. The negative effects of this society are the lack of freedom and life under constant limitation and control, as it leaves people unhappy and devalued.

5.
Which type of organizational strategy presents similarities and differences between two or more items?


A. order of importance


B. chronological order


C. compare and contrast

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Answer:    https://answers-learning.com/english/question1417341#

The answer would be: order of importance.

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It is compare and contrast because it is showing similarities and differences.

Explanation:    I think the answer is either letter A or letter C

compare and contrast  

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i don't know

Read the excerpt from "Object Lesson, Part 1."

This time he stared directly from David to Howard to Joey. His stare said, I hate to do this, boys, but of course I'll have to if you think you can get away with it.

Why does the author most likely foreshadow Ellery's future actions for readers?

Knowing what will happen verifies Ellery's cleverness.
Knowing what will happen intensifies Ellery's challenge.
Anticipating upcoming events creates a tense mood.
Anticipating upcoming events verifies the boys' guilt.

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Answer:

C

Explanation:

Answer: C

Explanation:

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