John stepped out of the darkness with blood on his hands and ash on his face. The blast nearly killed him, but he must try again. The Construction company needed this Master Robot to help. John slowly worked out the kinks and tried to bring his masterpiece online. (mumbles) “A cut here, put a transformer here.” He got up and pulled the lever one more time. Bright flashes of electricity shined above the table; the robot lay there waiting. Suddenly a bolt of electricity shot into the robot's access port on its neck. John knew it wouldn’t work; the town had given him a scarce amount of money for this project so that meant bad resources. A spark from the lever made John jump in pain, but it was too late. His entire body was engulfed in flames within a fraction of a second. He slowly died and fell onto the floor. After that, the electricity stopped running and the robot sat up and it’s eyes squinted as it stared at the dead body of its creator.: is this a good story

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Answer 1
Yes this is a very well written story but if it is for a high level grade I would add a little more detail
Answer 2
Yes a well written story and a good format!

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what could be a good theme for ¨abuela invents the zero¨"and the poem ¨Im nobody who are you? Like a theme for both of them together.

if you cant get the text jus look it up.


please help if you could that would mean alot

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Answer:The larger lesson to be learnt here is the fact that for all the reasons in the world, no human being is a zero, though it is a common perception if one is abandoned. Being left alone in a  moment of pain, loss  or  confusion might make someone seem  unimportant to the others who are around.In the situation Connie has  to face, performing an unwanted action , she simply takes into account how awkward it feels  for her when her grandma gets lost.She leaves her alone and not knowing where her granddaughter is causes anger and disappointment in the lady.People, all of us,  tend to take it too much to heart when we are deserted , especially if we are counting on someone.the old usually experience this awful sensation of having been left on their own because no one takes them into account any longer.Yet, they are full of experiences and so eager to help with all they have been through that it is impossible not to care about them.Finally, we will all reach that age and feeling like a zero is the worst sensation in the universe.Connie has to understand that and value the presence of her grandma.

Explanation:

What does it mean to synthesize information?
taking information from several different sources, putting it together, and looking at the results in a new way
separating out individual facts and information so that you can analyze each one and determine what it means
rewriting a document in your own words so that it includes the author's thesis as well as the document's main points
using prior knowledge and summaries to come to make an educated guess about an unfamiliar topic or issue

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Answer:

I’m pretty sure it’s taking information from several different sources, putting it together, and looking at the results in a new way.

Explanation:

because synthesize means to combine things.

What can firsthand accounts add to a news story?
accurate information
all of the above
sensory details
emotional impact

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Answer:

All of the above

Explanation:

Which sentence from the passage supports the idea that the problem of being faced with lots of unhealthy food choices pertains to many people?

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The 2nd one is the answer i think

What are two techniques to connect ideas in a speech?

reasons and evidence
transitions and repetition of key words
logos and pathos
unity and order

i already tried unity and order and it was wrong

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Answer:

unity and order. transitions and repetition of key words. logos and pathos.Jun 3, 2019

Answer:

transition and repetition of key words

Explanation:

That's my best guess because transition words literally connect one idea to another

Why is it important to consider an author's perspective when comparing and contrasting two texts?

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Answer:

It is important to consider an author's perspective when comparing and contrasting texts because the author could have a different idea as to what different details and such mean and how they are important.

Explanation:

Because the author is the one writing it and telling you the information so it’s important to know the writers perspective

giving brain liest for who ever answers first one or maybe both :D chapter seven of warriors dont cry!! :D

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Answer:

I don't think this is a quiz

Explanation:

Not a is but all I can tell you is:

:) stay safe in

:) stay at home

;) where a mask \

goodbye

Please help with this question, I am kinda confused
"The Giver" chapters 17-21
How does Jonas feel about the ritual of sharing feelings at the dinner table?

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He does not want the share his feelings

answer these 2 questions for 50 points please

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Answer:

you kinda have to put the questions....

Explanation:

so... whats the question? someone else put it as a comment and you didnt answer. if you put it in the comments of my answer then ill answer.

What is the difference between a primary source and a secondary source?

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A primary source is where the information comes directly from the original copy or someone who experienced it first hand, and where as a secondary source is someone or something that was not there when the event took place- hope this helps!!

A primary sources can be described as those sources that are closest to the event that happened. For example, there was a robbery and there was a bystander the bystander would be considered a primary source. Secondary source examples include textbooks, articles, and reference books.

Hope I helped! :)

Explanation:

Read this excerpt from “Drummer Man.” It turned out to be a good thing that I signed on again. It wasn’t long into my second year when our regiment fought at the Siege of Corinth. In the heat of the fight we made a desperate charge across a ravine and Captain Williamson was wounded. So the call came in for a quick retreat, but unfortunately the captain was left there between the lines. Somebody had to rescue him, and it was one of two times during the war that I was happy for being small. I took off in a stooping run, unseen by the enemy, and somehow found the strength to drag Williamson back to the stretcher bearers and out of harm’s way. The second time I was glad for my slight height occurred when I was caught behind the enemy lines. All I can guess is that those rebels who surrounded me mistook me for a child. They took their guns down from their shoulders, looked me in the eye, and told me to run on out of there as fast as I could. Indeed I did without so much as one glance back. Which line best illustrates the narrator’s bravery? Indeed I did without so much as one glance back. It turned out to be a good thing that I signed on again. [A]nd somehow found the strength to drag Williamson back . . . It wasn’t long into my second year when our regiment fought . . .

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Answer:

I think #3

Explanation:

Because the narrator talks about finding the strength to drag his Captain back.

Let me know if this helps!

Answer:

the answer is the 3rd option

Explanation:

Which event occurs last in the story? *

Help me pls!

Grandpa passes away a happy man, and Lee has no regrets that he took Grandpa on the trip.


Lee and his grandpa discuss whooping-cranes, and Lee declares he saw one on Becker’s slough.

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Answer:

The first option.

Explanation:

Answer:

The first answer

Explanation:

can you write the meaning of these pls?!
prefix

locked root

root word
suffix

free root

adjective

synonym

adverb

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Answer:

Prefix = a word, letter, or number placed before another.

locked root =

root word = A basic word to which affixes are added is called a root word

suffix = a morpheme added at the end of a word to form a derivative,

free root = Free roots are free morphemes. They can stand alone to function as words. Examples: recollect, bilingual, uneasy, mislead, hardly, attractive.

adjective = a word or phrase naming an attribute, added to or grammatically related to a noun to modify or describe it.

Synonym = a word or phrase that means exactly or nearly the same as another word or phrase in the same language, for example shut is a synonym of close.

Adverb = a word or phrase that modifies or qualifies an adjective, verb, or other adverb or a word group, expressing a relation of place, time, circumstance, manner, cause, degree,

Explanation:

Answer:

Hope it helps

Explanation:

1. Prefix is a part of a word or a word, within a word. It is put at the start of another word to make a different meaning.

2. locked root not sure on that one

3. A root word is a basic word with no prefix or suffix added to it.

4. Free roots are free morphemes. They can stand alone to function as words.

5. An adjective is a word that describes a noun or a pronoun.

6. A synonym is a word that has the same or nearly the same meaning as another word.

7. An adverb is a word that modifies a verb, an adjective, another adverb, or even a whole sentence

Appearance, private thoughts, others' reactions and actions are 4 of the ways that an author uses to describe a character. What is the 5th one? there are no answer choices First one to answer RIGHT gets brainiest

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Answer:

The 5th way an author uses to describe a character is through speech.

Explanation:

Author's use speech as another way to describe a character because in a story you need dialogue and dialogue is speech, thus meaning the 5th way to describe a character is speech.

The True Confessions of Charlotte Doyle begins with what is called a(n)
prologue
narrator introduction
epilogue
statement of theme

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Answer:

epilogue or prologue

Explanation:

Answer:

Your answer is A Prologue I looked up what prologue is and it says it is in the beginning of the story where----blah blah blah

Explanation:

mark me as brainliest! :3

Which step is NOT part of the peer workshopping process?

Write a response summarizing what is working and offering your suggestions.
Act out the play to see what it looks like on stage.
Read the entire play to get an idea of what it is about.
Reread the play and answer the guiding questions.

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Answer: act out the play to see what it looks like on stage

Explanation: peer editing doesn’t involve acting things out, you’re only required to read and write the others paper

Answer:

act out the play to see what it looks like on stage

Explanation:

I took a quiz and got it correc.

Which question is appropriate to ask when revising the body paragraphs of an informative essay?
a) Is there a final thought?
b) Are the main ideas summarized?
c) Is there support for my topics?
d) Are the main ideas explained clearly?

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I might be wrong but I would say A because when you are revising it’s a good time to fix things and add things in

Answer:

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Explanation:

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The snowmobile was a rocket in the newly fallen snow.

Question 5 options:

none of these


oxymoron


personification


alliteration

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Answer:

none of those

Explanation:

it is a metaphor

Yasmin is measuring wood to make picture frames. She needs 9/10 of a meter of wood for one frame. She needs 35 centimetres less wood for a second frame.
How many centimetres of wood will Yasmin need for the second frame?

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Answer:

55cm

Explanation:

need help on a question for reading can someone help me

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Answer:

I believe the answer is D

Explanation:

i believe its b ,





explanation : they are aware of the birds and the breeze, then they become aware of them not being there anymore

According to The Riddle of the Rosetta Stone, there are several events that lead to Napoleon’s ability to take over an elegant Egyptian palace in the city of Cairo. Read the events below and determine the order in which they occur. Event 1: Napoleon and his men gain control of the Egyptian capital. Event 2: Napoleon and his army overrun the Nile Delta. Event 3: Napoleon and his men capture the city of Alexandria. Event 4: Napoleon and his men march past the pyramids. 3, 2, 4, 1 1, 3, 2, 4 2, 4, 1, 3 4, 1, 2, 3

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Answer:

4123

Explanation:

Answer: the answer is 3 2 4 1

Explanation:

i just took the test and it showed me that 4 1 2 3 is wrong !

Look at this section of the poem "White-Eyes."

In winter
all the singing is in
the tops of the trees
where the wind-bird

with its white eyes
shoves and pushes
among the branches.
Like any of us

he wants to go to sleep,
but he's restless—
he has an idea,
and slowly it unfolds

This section of the poem is a good example of how

one idea can be carried over more than one stanza.
each stanza can represent a separate idea.
each line of a poem can be a complete sentence.
all parts of a poem can be about different topics.

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Answer:

its a

Explanation:

im doing it on edge and i got it right:D good luck!

Which of these statements includes analysis?
Mark Twain was internationally famous as writer and a humorist.
Mark Twain passed away quietly after reading from a favorite book.
Mark Twain may have died as much from grief as from heart trouble.
Mark Twain lost several of his children as well as his wife.

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Answer:

it might be 3 or 2

Explanation:

it might

I think it’s the first one because an analysis means detailed examination of the elements or structure of something.

Read the following sentence and summarize the descriptive words in sequence.
On the third finger of my left hand is the pre-engagement ring given to me last year by my sister Doris. The 14-carat gold band, a bit tarnished by time and neglect, circles my finger and twists together at the top to encase a small white diamond. The diamond itself is tiny and dull, like a sliver of glass found on the kitchen floor after a dishwashing accident. The ring is neither very attractive nor valuable, but I treasure it as a gift from my older sister, a gift that I will pass along to my younger sister when I receive my own engagement ring this Christmas.

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third, left, pre-engagement, 14-carat, gold, tarnished, small, white, tiny, dull, attractive, valuable, im pretty sure these are the answers

Answer:

that the answer is Sensory details appeal to the five senses: sight, sound, smell , touch, taste. Touch

The heavy quilt felt like an x-ray vest draped across our legs.

The puppy's nose was dry like sandpaper.

The sand was hot and grainy like my morning grits.

Explanation:

What type of oral history interview questions get the most elaborate answers?
true or false
open-ended
yes or no
rhetorical

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Answer:

Open ended questions, would most likely get the most elaborate answers in an oral history interview.

Explanation:

Which word correctly completes both the sentences below?

The _______ flavors of the soup were enhanced by the fresh ingredients.

Anthony's health was in question because he was not as _______ as he once was.
A.
athletic
B.
appetizing
C.
robust
D.
brawny

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Answer:

Robust I think

For the first sentence it is B-appetizing
For the second sentance it’s A-athletic

What are the similarities and differences between this irish holiday tradition, and the one(s) your family or United States residents celebrate?

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Some similarities and differences between Irish and American holiday traditions are that Christmas while in Ireland was a lot like Christmas in America. Family, friends, a Christmas tree, lots of food, and gifts. But there were a few Irish things that are different. Firstly, the Christmas dinner. It reminded me a lot of Thanksgiving dinner back home. Turkey, cranberry sauce, mashed potatoes and vegetables. It was of course very tasty. Another thing was the lighting of the lights in the town. It was at the beginning of December. There is live music, free food, fireworks and interesting puppet-like things of Mr. and Mrs. Claus. It isn’t a long event, and it is very cold. Something else that was quite different than the usual were the school celebrations. Catholic schools, have a big Christmas party of all sorts on the last day of school.

Us is us. And Irish is Irish

What is it that lives if it is fed, and dies if you give it a drink?

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Answer:

a gremlin

Explanation:

but nah its fire

Answer:

Fire?

Explanation:

sounds familiar to a riddle that I've heard, but if it's not then I dont know

Why does Salva describe volleyball as a “language?” Use evidence from the text to support your response.

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Answer: She describes it as a language because in her culture, she calls it that because volleyball is kind of like a language because of it's terms and you have to work as a team to win, just like Salva

Explanation:

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ETYMOLOGY

A. DIRECTIONS: Match the word on the left with the correct meaning on the right. Write the letter on the line. Use your dictionary to confirm the meaning of the word’s origin.

1. profuse a. lacking effectiveness because of overuse

2. lethargic b. friendly

3. amiable c. made or done freely or abundantly

4. trite d. drowsy

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Answer:

amiable-friendly

lethargic-drowsy

trite-lacking effectiveness because of overuse

profuse-made or done freely or abundantly

Explanation:

Answer:

1 c

2 d

3 b

4 a

Explanation:

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