What should you revise after you have made changes to the individual paragraphs in your writing?
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Revise individual paragraphs
Revise punctuation errors
Revise individual words
Revise individual sentences

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Answer 1

Answer:

revise punctuation errors and then revise any words or sentences if need be

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Which of the following uses a conjunction, but is not a compound sentence? Alexis is wearing a jacket, so she will stay warm all afternoon. Eduardo plays the violin, but he'd rather play the flute. Erin ran, skipped, and jumped to cross the finish line.

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Answer: The first sentence

Alexis is wearing a jacket, so she will stay warm all afternoon.

Explanation:

a sentence with more than one subject or predicate is a compound sentence. Hope it helps

The first sentence

Alexis is wearing a jacket, so she will stay warm all afternoon.

a sentence with more than one subject or predicate is a compound sentence. Hope it helps

Please answer this correctly

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Answer:

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The band Katie most looks up to plays with Latin styles, R&B, and hip-hop, blended together-its members are from different countries tall over the world.

Answer:

The band Katie most looks up to plays with Latin styles, R&B, and hip-hop, -it's members are from different countries all over the world blended together.

Explanation:

I'm 99.99% sure this is from ixl, but I'll give my best shot.

Did you recover the fragment after purification? If not, what do you think could have happened? o are the fragments the expected sizes?

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Answer:

yes, fragments are the expected sizes

Explanation:

We made a number of adaptations to the traditional freeze-squeeze method, which allowed for purification, recovery and concentration of D N A  fragments.                        

since fragment has not recovered if the band still to be purified and separated        

and                

yes, fragments are the expected sizes  

English colonists often exchanged goods and knowledge with Native Americans. Which words in the sentence are nouns? A) colonists, goods, knowledge, Native Americans B) colonists, often, knowledge, Native Americans C) English, often, exchanged, knowledge D) English, colonists, exchanged, good

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Answer:

A) colonists, goods, knowlage, Native Americans

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what topic is rarely discussed in the journals and letters home written by those who traveled the oregon trail

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Answer:

Indian attacks

Explanation:

Remember, this were home written by those who actually travelled the Oregon trail and so they portrayed the actual conditions.

Admittedly, there were attacks in the Oregon trail by Indians, however, this attacks were rare since in most cases travelers were having a travel guide. Also, this travellers were faced with other bigger problems like the threat of cholera and other diseases which killed thousands.

why might the author have decided to name one of the girls Triolet (a French verse form)? What does that choice of name suggest about the character of Triolet?

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Explanation:

I think the author decided to name one of the girl Triolet due to the meaning she had in the story. As soon as Triolet was introduced she told us her love for the poem. It made her as a character seem more beautiful and mysterious, as Enn told us she was. She said, "We knew that it would soon be over, and so we put it all into a poem, to tell the universe who we were, and why we were here, and what we said and did and thought and dreamed and yearned for.

What controls when and how fast cells grow and divide?

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Answer:

Growth hormone controls when and how fast cells grow and divide.

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Which line in this excerpt from act I, scene I of Richard III is a stage direction?

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Answer:

The stage direction is the "(Enter CLARENCE, guarded, and BRAKENBURY)"

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The weather turned nicer than it had been and with almost no warning, as if the sun had taken pity on us; we figured we should enjoy it.

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hich revision corrects the punctuation errors in this complex sentence with two dependent clauses? We picked these apples, when we went upstate which was on Tuesday. Remove the comma after “apples” and put a comma after “upstate.” Leave the comma after “apples” and add a comma after “upstate.” Remove the comma after “apples” and do not add any other commas. Remove the comma after “apples” and add a comma after “was.”

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Answer:

First of all, I should point out that it is impossible to form a complex sentence with two dependent clauses -- as your instructions say. A complex sentence is composed of an independent clause along with a dependent clause.

The answer is:

Remove the comma after “apples” and put a comma after “upstate.”

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Which detail is present in the illustration but not in the passage itself?

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Read the passage and view the image.

Which detail is included in the passage but not in the image?

The people killed in the attack included both soldiers and townspeople.

The British had bayonets attached to their guns.

Armed soldiers took aim and fired at unarmed civilians on the street.

The colonists stood their ground, and the troops were led away.

Answer:

The colonists stood their ground, and the troops were led away.

Explanation:

The detail that is present in the illustration but not in the passage is option D which is The colonists stood their ground, and the troops were led away.

From the image attached, we can see that the other details are included in the illustration but only the detail about the colonists standing their ground and the troops being led away.

From the passage, the story is told of the Boston Massacre of March 5, 1770 when the British soldiers fired live bullets into the crowd of colonists that were protesting the occupation of the city by the British troops.

Answer: If you are referring to the passage  from "Little Women" by Louisa May Alcott then the answer is, "Jo carries flowers in her hand like a bride on her wedding day".

Explanation: Just took the test and got it right! Hope this helps!

everyone in my english class passed the test, Jaylen is in my english class, therefore Jaylen passed the test. The major premise is:

-in my class
-jaylen
-my english
-passed the test

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Answer:

passed the test. please correct me if im wrong

Explanation:

The major premise in the given statement is "Everyone in my English class passed the test."

A premise is a statement or assertion that is used as the foundation or proof for reasoning or argumentation in English. It is an introductory statement that either supports or leads to a conclusion. An argument in logical or persuasive reasoning typically consists of one or more premises followed by a conclusion.

The premises contain the information, facts, or claims that support the conclusion. The major premise is the statement or assumption that acts as the foundation for the conclusion. It makes a broad claim regarding the entire group or category under consideration. The main premise in this case is that everyone in the speaker's English class passed the test.

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11. Making sure that every sentence in a paragraph connects with the others refers to
O technique
O structure
direction
O coherence

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I believe technique because it means to carry out a certain task a certain way

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Tied up nearby lay a massive gray pit bull, in the soft afternoon light, it’s scarred, ferocious face oddly serene

Answer:

Tied up nearby lay a massive gray pit bull, its scarred, ferocious face oddly serene in the soft afternoon light.

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Five reasons why you should choose to avoid conflict​

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Answer:

it won't help anyone and it'll cause more fights

it could be solved in other better ways

no one gains anything

you could come to an agreement instead

it could ruin relationships with the other person

Please answer this correctly

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As the bear arrived at the river bank, without even noticing our tent or caring, it yearned for just one delicious fish near the water's edge where it stood.

Hope this helps.

Answer:

As the bear arrived at the river bank,

it yearned for just one delicious fish

without noticing our tent

near the waters edge

or carring,

where it stood

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Consider the complex character Tajima Shume in “Tajima.” How do Tajima’s actions and interactions advance the plot and develop a theme in the story? In your response, describe a theme of the story and explain how the author uses characterization to develop the theme and advance the plot. Use evidence from the text to support your response. Your response should be at least three complete paragraphs.

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Answer:

Tajima was a ronin who was well-read and also loved traveling. On one of his travels, he met with a wandering priest and found out they were going the same place and they struck up a conversation to make their journey smoother and before long they were talking about more intimate affairs.

The priest tells the ronin Tajima about his desire to erect a monument for Buddha and how much he has gotten so far which was two hundred ounces of silver. Tajima immediately has it in his heart that he must have possession of that money.

During a boat ride, Tajima tripped the priest and he fell over and drowned.

Taking the priest's money, he took on a new name Tokubei and began trading with the money and soon amassed great wealth

Three years after, he began to be haunted by the ghost of the priest until he was thought to be mad.

A nearby priest was called to attend to Tokubei and it was discovered that the priest didn't drown all along but survived and forgave Tokubei and asked him to repent. Tokubei gave him the money he stole plus interest and lived happily after.

The theme of the story is "Poverty drives a man to crimes which he repents of in his wealth."

The author used indirect characterization

*a ronin is a samurai without a master, without honor.

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The band Laura most looks up to plays with latin styles, R&B, and hip-hop blended together-its members are from different countries all over the world.

Explanation:

The start of a sentence should be capitalized. There are two phrases that begin with capitalized letters. "The band" and "Laura most looks up to"

Laura is a proper noun, so it can be capitalized in any part of the sentence. However, 'The' can't be. Therefore, "The band" is the beginning phrase.

The band Laura most looks up to plays with latin styles, R&B, and hip-hop blended together-its members are from different countries all over the world.

Answer:

The band Laura most looks up to plays with Latin styles, R&B, and hip hop blended together -- its members are from different countries all over the world.

Explanation:

Which is correct? Every one of us cannot have _____ way. 1. his 2. our

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When you are saying "Every one of us", we aren't just referring to one gender. We are referring to all genders which would be considered as our.

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Answer:

The answer is our 2.our because it is referring to a larger group and not specifically a particular gender.

How are the Declaration of Independence and the Declaration of Sentiments like break-up letters?

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Answer:

Foreign countries including Europe came to the Us and made colonies and were controlling people with documents and tax. The Declaration of Independence was a document of declaring freedom and breaking ties with England and the king and being a free country.

Explanation:

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Megan's mother looked after Andy during those months with something close to genuine fondness- not pity, not obligation-as though Andy had become the son she always wanted.

Explanation.

The start of a sentence should be capitalized- the only capitalized word at the start of a phrase is 'Megan's'.

Megan's mother looked after Andy PREP

during those months.

The base sentence uses with as the preposition so-

Megan's mother looked after Andy with something close to genuine fondness-

the (-) indicates an appositive so you need another - to close it.

Megan's mother looked after Andy with something close to genuine fondness- not pity, not obligation-

Original sentence uses as.

Megan's mother looked after Andy with something close to genuine fondness- not pity, not obligation-as though Andy had become the son

Fit in the last phrase and close the sentence with a period.

Megan's mother looked after Andy during those months with something close to genuine fondness- not pity, not obligation-as though Andy had become the son she always wanted.

Answer:

During those months, Megan's mother looked after Andy with something close to genuine fondness - not pity, not obligation - as though Andy had become the son she always wanted.

Explanation:

Choose the items below that are common components of prose. Select all that apply.

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I am ready to answer this question, but choose the common components of prose from where? There are no items unfortunately.

How does Machiavelli support his claim that rulers can be cruel if it benefits their subjects and is necessary for security?

Machiavelli uses anecdotal evidence through historical examples to support his claim.
Machiavelli uses empirical evidence about politics and society to support his claim.
Machiavelli uses logical evidence through historical examples to support his claim.
Machiavelli uses empirical and logical evidence to support his claim.

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Answer:

C. Machiavelli uses logical evidence through historical examples to support his claim.

Explanation:

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Answer: the answer is c

Explanation:

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Citing specific textual evidence from The Depravity of Human Nature from Saint Augustine's Confessions, what leads him to the conclusion that mankind is depraved and sinful, and do you think that Augustine's outlook on human nature was affected the historical context in which he was living? If so, how so, and if not, why not?

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Answer:

Saint Augustine concludes that society is depraved and sinful because individuals cling to wrong and evil beliefs, in addition to surrendering lust, ambition and turning away from the scriptures and what is right before God.

I do not believe that Saint Augustine's perspective has affected the historical context in which he lived, because the perspective that he presents is more focused on self-analysis, where he bases his worldview with himself as the main representative.

Explanation:

"Confessions" by Saint Augustine is an autobiographical book, in which the author observes himself and reports his sins as a confession to God, in order to achieve his benevolence and forgiveness. In this book, Augustine uses himself to report a depraved and sinful nature, he reveals that he trusted false beliefs, put God in the background, moved away from the scriptures, joined the evil one and even gave himself up to lust. He also recounts his conversion and all the philosophies he adopted before that.

A government's policies do not affect the everyday lives of its citizens.
True False

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Answer:

false or dors affect everyday lives

How does Leaphorn feel about change?

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Answer: He is resistant to some Navajo taboos, but feels open to change If that is necessary to get into Navajo's behavior and solving the case.

Explanation: Joe Leaphorn is a veteran detective whose mission is to solve a criminal case. To do that, he realizes that he must leave his world view, and analyze the rules, conversations, and behavior of the Navajo community. Throughout the story, he gets more involved in getting to understand their behavior rather than solving the case itself.      

   

Answer and Explanation:

Joe Leaphorn was a fictional character which has created by Tony Hillerman, who was a mystery writer. He was as traditional as his grandfather. He valued him a lot. He was a police officer and to handle the crimes he used his Navajo believes. He uncovered the culprits using his old traditional belief-system. In Navajo, they believed that nature and man depend upon each other. Moreover, we can’t separate them.

Despite his traditional views, he was restricted to some taboo of Navajo beliefs. He was of the view that many people believe in those systems, which resulted in violence.

Furthermore, he was the person who can change himself according to the character the people around him want to be. He was trying to change himself the way white men live. Because he was unable to understand, Ted Issac left his love of life when she needed him.

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Choose the verb form Complete the
sentence.


If you ask your teacher, he...............help.
A)will
(B) would
(C) would have
(D) had

1. If Peter.................a driving Iicense,
he would buy a car.
(A) have
(B) has
(C) had
(D) had had

2. If All had finished his homework in time, he.............. and visited his aunt.
(A) will go
(B) would go
(C) would have gone
(D) had had gone

3. You would be healthier if you............... a balanced diet.
(A) would have
(B) had
(C) have
(D) had had

4. If I were you, I................ tell him.
(A) won't
(B) wouldn't
(C) wouldn t have
(D) didn't

5. Yahya wouldnt have learnt French if he...................... in Paris for two years.
(A) didn t live
(B) had lived
(C) hadn't lived
(D) wouldn't have lived

6. Rashid...................... on a trip if he
hadn't been busy.
(A) will go
(B) would go
(C) would have gone
(D) went

7. More tourists will come to Oman if we.......................... more
(A) advertise
(B) will advertise
(C) would advertise
(D) would have advertised

8. If........................ more free time,
wOuld have started to learn another
language.
A) have
(B) had
(C) had had
D) would have

9. If I buy a new phone, I....................the old one to my little sister.
(A) give
(B) will give
(C) would give
(D) would have given

10. If it.......................so hot, we would
have gone to the beach.
(A) wasnt
(B) was
(C) had been
(D) hadn t been

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Would

Had

Would go

Wouldn't

Had lived

Would have gone

Will advertise

The eighth one does not make sense

Will give

Was

Hope this helps...

Even though the eighth answer is not there...

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This book was written in XVI century. Do you think that Machiavelli’s advice from this chapter about rulers keeping faith, can be, or is, applied today? Where exactly? Give clear examples and arguments.

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Answer:

"Keeping faith," means to be true, consistent and honest with one's words or promises.

Machiavelli's advice is to his followers is that princes should break their promises if it's no longer in their favour to keep it or if events change. He also advised that they lied about the reason why the faith was broken.

He stated that a ruler should always tell people what they want to hear regardless of how true or false it is.

Liverotto is an example of a prince who sized political power via unscrupulous means. After serving in the Army, he returns home and sized power by slaughtering the powerful men under his uncle in the guise that he had come to impress them with the army.            

Cheers!    

Read the sentence
What type of thetorical device does this sentence use?
As student body president, my goal is to be friendly, fun,
and for
parallel structure
O alliteration
O antithesis
repetition

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Answer:

alteration

Explanation:

as friendly and fun both begin with the letter F

Answer:

alterations

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7. The text recommends that you save for long-term goals
such as retirement before you have an emergency fund
in place.
a. True
b. False

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Answer:

B

Explanation:

Key word "Recommend"

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