3. How can writers eliminate wordiness and redundancy? They should eliminate unnececcany filler worden and repetitive worde​

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Answer 1

Explanation:

Words that don't build on the content of sentences or paragraphs are rarely necessary. Wordy: I would appreciate it if you would bring to the attention ...

Answer 2

Answer:Always consider readers while drafting and revising writing. If passages explain or describe details that would already be obvious to readers, delete or reword them. Readers are also very adept at filling in the non-essential aspects of a narrative, as in the fourth example.

Explanation:

Wordy: I received your inquiry that you wrote about tennis rackets yesterday, and read it thoroughly. Yes, we do have. . .

(19 words)

Concise: I received your inquiry about tennis rackets yesterday. Yes, we do have. . .

(12 words)

Wordy: It goes without saying that we are acquainted with your policy on filing tax returns, and we have every intention of complying with the regulations that you have mentioned.

(29 words)

Concise: We intend to comply with the tax-return regulations that you have mentioned.

(12 words)

Wordy: Imagine a mental picture of someone engaged in the intellectual activity of trying to learn what the rules are for how to play the game of chess.

(27 words)

Concise: Imagine someone trying to learn the rules of chess.

(9 words)

Wordy: After booking a ticket to Dallas from a travel agent, I packed my bags and arranged for a taxi to the airport. Once there, I checked in, went through security, and was ready to board. But problems beyond my control led to a three-hour delay before takeoff.

(47 words)

Concise: My flight to Dallas was delayed for three hours.

(9 words)

Wordy: Baseball, one of our oldest and most popular outdoor summer sports in terms of total attendance at ball parks and viewing on television, has the kind of rhythm of play on the field that alternates between times when players passively wait with no action taking place between the pitches to the batter and then times when they explode into action as the batter hits a pitched ball to one of the players and the player fields it.

(77 words)

Concise: Baseball has a rhythm that alternates between waiting and explosive action.


Related Questions

Select the correct answer.
How does the use of dramatic irony in works with unreliable narrators help to make the purpose of the story clearer to the reader?
OA. It helps the reader understand the implications of events better than the narrator could.
OB
It makes the story more interesting for the reader by adding a layer of mystery.
Ос.
It allows the reader to understand and better relate to the motivations of the narrator.
OD
It allows the reader to cast judgment toward the narrator in the story.
ОЕ.
It indicates the thoughts of the narrator and other characters more clearly to the reader.
Ko

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Answer:

d

Explanation:

what is one example of a type of medium? a. live theatre b. figurative language c. informal language d.point pf view

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Imma say A.

Live theatre

Answer:

A. Live Theatre

Which correctly lists the three types of rock particles that make up soil?


O. air, clay, and sand
O. clay, water, and silt
O. sand, clay, and silt
O. silt, water, and air

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I think last one correct so go for it all the best

The correct answer is: sand, clay, and silt.  

Soil is made up of different particles of varying sizes. These particles can be classified into three main categories based on their size: sand, clay, and silt.  
1. Sand: This is the largest particle size in soil. Sand particles are visible to the eye and feel gritty when rubbed between your fingers. They are the largest and have a diameter ranging from 0.05 mm to 2 mm. Sandy soil feels coarse and drains water quickly.  

2. Clay: Clay particles are the smallest in size, with a diameter of less than 0.002 mm. They are not visible to the eye and feel sticky and smooth when wet. Clay soil holds water well but can become compacted and hard when dry.  
3. Silt: Silt particles have a medium size, larger than clay but smaller than sand. They have a diameter ranging from 0.002 mm to 0.05 mm. Silt feels soft and smooth, similar to flour. Silty soil has good water-holding capacity and is fertile.  

To summarize, the three parts of soil that are classified by their particle size are sand, clay, and silt. Sand is the largest particle, clay is the smallest, and silt is medium-sized. Each type of soil particle has different characteristics that affect water drainage, nutrient retention, and overall soil fertility.

what characters act most like a chorus in Macbeth?
The soldiers
The guards
The witches
The Thane of Cowder​

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Answer:

The witches

Explanation:

The witches have an active role in the play "Macbeth". The chorus of the play performs the action of passively analyzing and leading the play. The witches set the corruption and misleading environment from the beginning of the play. The threatening and dark mood of the play is set by the entry of the witches. Their remarks about the nature of the people helps in analyzing the details of the play. The prophecies made by the three witches played a significant role in diverting and misleading the thoughts of Macbeth.

There was a deafening silence when the teacher walked in

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Answer:

That's...... great?

Explanation:

Is this a Zoom call???? I have so many questions

what did the subject of the windmill give rise to? Explain what happens. (Animal Farm)
PLEASE HELP MEEEEEE

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Answer:

For Snowball, the windmill symbolizes progress; the animals took over the farm to better their own conditions, and the purpose of their work—including building the windmill—is to provide a better lifestyle for all inhabitants of the farm.

Explanation:

I looked it up

Read the paragraph.

Franklin Delano Roosevelt (FDR) was born in Hyde Park, New York. He was the thirty-second president of the United States. He was the only president ever to be elected four times. FDR was the president during the Great Depression and World War II. He was the architect of the New Deal. The New Deal was a domestic program that provided economic relief and significant reforms in industry, finance, and housing.

Which is the best way to improve this paragraph’s sentence fluency?

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Answer:

The correct answer would be Vary the Sentence Patterns. Option A

Explanation:

Just took the test on edu

A.) Vary the sentence patterns.

Read this sentence from the essay:

First, the plesiosaur is an air breather. Such a creature would need to surface often and, therefore, be seen more frequently.

Based on the text, what does the word frequently mean?

Giving more and stronger confidence

Going from one place to another

Happening often or repeatedly

Visiting or dropping by briefly

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Answer:

Happening often or repeatedly

Explanation: We know frequent means over and over so repeatedly is another word for frequent (:

Answer:

happening often or repeatively.

Explanation:

took the test

Whats The aNswer Giving Brainliest

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Answer:

is B

Explanation:

because the text shows how much contest and what contest they had.

Which literary device is being
used ?

That guy is as strong as a bull.
A) Simile
C) Metaphor
B) Alliteration
D) Personification

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It’s. Mehtaphor I hope this help

Answer:

simile

Explanation:

It is comparing his strength to a bull using like or as.

How should references on a Works Cited page be arranged?

In the order the writer found them during research
According to how much the writer used each one
By alphabetical order by author or organization
From the shortest to the longest entry
PLS ASWER ASAP IM IN A HURRY

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By alphabetical order by author or organization

What would you do if you were flying on a plane, and then the plane suddenly crash-landed on an island? What would be the first things you would do on the island, and how would you survive

PLZ HELP I'LL GIVE BRAINLIEST!

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Answer:

I would probably scream and then lose my voice. :)

Explanation:

Ok but actually, I would set up a camp to not die. I would get food.

"But one evening her husband came home with a triumphant air and holding a large envelope in his hand. “There,” said he, “there is something for you.”

Instead of being delighted, as her husband had hoped,
she threw the invitation on the table crossly, muttering,
“What do you want me to do with that?”

Mathilde's husband bringing home an invitation to the ball is which part of the plot?

Question 13 options:

exposition


resolution


complicating incident


climax

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Answer:

climax

Explanation:

Correct Answer: climax

What is an illustration

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Answer:

hi

Explanation:

An illustration is a decoration, interpretation or visual explanation of a text, concept or process, designed for integration in published media, such as posters, flyers, magazines, books, teaching materials, animations, video games and films. An illustration is typically created by an illustrator.

what is the meaning of honesty​

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telling the truth and not making up something that’s not true and telling what actually happened
BRITISH
referring to or using a way of charging for goods or services that relies on the customers to leave money in an unattended receptacle even though there is no one to collect their payments.

We talk about cousins like these for a while, but we go on finally to people we knew more intimately, people whose characters have left us, even after all these years, something to wonder about. We speculate on how and when Robert Allard began taking morphine, and what induced Maggie McLean to turn Jim Crenfew down for a nincompoop1 like Edward Brewer. Somebody has seen the notice of Maggie’s death in a New Orleans paper. We think of it, but we cannot take it in. We see her as she was when she first came to Merry Point to visit, a frail, high-spirited girl, who made us all indignant with her outrageous treatment of Jim Crenfew. We talk on like that until we have called to mind almost all the people who ever came here in the old days. We hold them in our minds until they seem to live again. I look up through the branches of the sugar tree to where a light burns dimly in one of the upstairs rooms. Girls might be dressing there for a party. At any moment, I may hear the rumbling, explosive laugh of Jim Crenfew.

At such a time, none of us three will stop talking. We keep up the illusion, with a name here, a name there. Seeking to make the scene more complete, we cast about on the fringes of our enormous family connection. What ever became of this cousin, or how was that person connected? It is then that Tom Rivers’s name will be mentioned. Infrequently, I say. One or two summers will go by, and I may not hear his name. And then it will be spoken, and I have always that start, half pleasure, half pride, and I realize that no matter whether I hear his name or not he is never out of my memory.

There is a curious thing I have observed. If you sit day after day, summer after summer, in a chair under the same tree, you will notice how the light falls under and through the boughs to strike always in the same pattern. You notice how it falls that way year after year, changing only with the seasons, and you think how you might go away and suffer death or torture by fire or flood, and the light always at the same hour in that season will be creeping around the bole2 of that beech tree.

It is like that with me when I think about Tom Rivers. I cannot understand how it was that he disappeared, leaving nowhere any trace of his going. I sit here in the late afternoon, and the long lances of shadow start from the garden fence and move slowly on, past the big sugar tree and past the beech tree, to halt for a moment at the little sugar tree that stands not fifty yards from my chair.

When they have moved past, I see that the hunched, dark shadow that seemed to me a rooster standing with his back to the western light is really only a clump of dog fennel. I see it happen like that almost every afternoon, and with it comes always a fresh wonder at the restless, hurried movements of human beings. The light can fall like that evening after evening on some tree or flower, and yet a man that one has known intimately can vanish, as we always say of Tom Rivers, off the face of the earth.

Used by permission.
In the first three sentences of the second paragraph (“At such . . . connection”), the narrator suggests which of the following about himself and his cousins?


They don’t want to disrupt a particular mood.

They don’t want to disrupt a particular mood.
A

They have a tendency to talk about themselves.

They have a tendency to talk about themselves.
B

They do not always listen when others speak.

They do not always listen when others speak.
C

They each believe their own version of the past is the only correct one.

They each believe their own version of the past is the only correct one.
D

They cannot believe that friends from the past are still with them.

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Answer:

B. They have a tendency to talk about themselves.

Explanation:

According to the stated paragraph and sentence, the narrator mentions how he and his cousins won't stop talking about themselves as they try to keep up the illusion by mentioning names and casting fringes on their family connection.

Therefore, the narrator suggests that he and his cousins have a tendency to talk about themselves.

Answer:

b. They have a tendency to talk about themselves.

Explanation:

Which character is NOT considered MAJOR in The Tragedy of Julius Caesar?
Brutus
Mark Anthony
Lucius *
Cassius

Lucius *

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Answer:

Lucius

Explanation:

is not considered MAJOR in the Tragedy of Julius Caesar.

Answer:

Lucius

Explanation:

English 2b quiz :)

The primary function of causes, effects, quotations, facts, and statistics in a paragraph is to restate or refine the topic sentence.
support or illustrate the topic sentence.
connect sentences for transition.
create the topic sentence.

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Answer:

B.  support or illustrate the topic sentence.

Explanation:

Answer:

support or illustrate the topic sentence.

Explanation:

I need help with this question fast!!

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1. having my favorite show canceled is minor
2. getting a haircut is major
3. gaining a new best friend is minor
4. repainting my room is major
5. going to a new school is major
6. moving far away is major

Answer:

MAJOR CHANGE

getting a new best friend going to a new schoolmoving far away

          MINOR CHANGE            

having my favorite show canceledgetting a haircutrepainting my room

I HOPE THIS HELPS

Which pronoun is unclear in the sentences below?

Claude and Valerie are coming over on Sunday, and they are bringing their dog Scooter to stay with my family for a week. I am greatly looking forward to it.
A.
it
B.
I
C.
they
D.
their

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B . Because if you look closely you’ll see it .

6. In section 1, what does Mather mean by bewitching when he refers to the charges brought against Martha Carrier?​

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Answer:

He means that Carrier has cast a spell on people.

Explanation:

The word "bewitching" was used in the sense of "wearing a charm", so the author shows that Martha Carrier was accused of witchcraft because, according to her accusers, she had the ability to attract them, dominate them and exercise them a power that was evil, like a charm. These accusations were so powerful that they even had the ability to enchant Martha's inquisitors, making them look for more witnesses and until it was impossible to absorb her from the crime for which she was being tried.

What quote from the passage best illustrates an example of how teens are impacted by the power of likes?

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Answer:

Hello. You did not enter the answer options, but this question is about the article "The power of like". After reading the article, we can conclude that the quote from the passage that best illustrates an example of how teenagers are impacted by the power of like is:

" Teens were much more likely to like images that seemed popular — those that had more than 23 likes, Sherman's team found.  The kids tended to skip pictures with few likes.  And the brain's reward pathways became especially active when the teens viewed their own photos with many likes. "

Explanation:

The article shows how teenagers are affected by the amount of likes on social media posts. That's because, it happens because our brain is affected with the idea of being popular and being "inside" some trend, something cool. This causes our brain to develop a feeling of reward that is pleasant and makes us want that feeling more and more.

To confirm this, the article shows the result of an experiment that shows the power of like in our lives. This result is the excerpt shown above.

Answer:

"positive responses to a teen own photos...tell teens that their friend appreciate the material they're posting"

Explanation:

5. Which of these suffixes is a noun ending?
-ment
-ish
-ly
-ize
-wise

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The last one cause if you pair it with a word that’s a noun........ yeaaaaaaaa now you know

Can someone write an essay about honesty for me? sorry I don't have enough time today I will give 20 points.

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Answer:

wsdawsdawsda

Explanation:

Answer:

Omg beautiful wawassaswawawwd

Help me I will give 20 points plus brainlyist

Match each element of a persuasive speech with the correct example.
A solid argument supported by details
"The law clearly says that there should
be one bus for every 25 kids.
A clear purpose or goal
"I want you to call the principal and tell
her we need more buses!"
A strong introduction
"I am here today to speak about the need
for more school buses."
A connection to the audience
"Everyone here today knows what it feels
like to wait hours for a bus.

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Answer: I listed the sentences in parenthesis () and the reason right next to it. I hope the way I listed this problems is well understood and sorry for the long wait. Pls give brainiest and have a good day.

1.A solid argument supported by details (the law clearly says that there should be one bus for every 25 kids) this answer contains support from the law.

2. A strong introduction ( I want you to call the principal and tell her we need more school buses) this statement is a strong introduction since the speaker automatically wants to speak of what is the person in charge and demand what they want.

3. A clear purpose or goal (I am here today to speak about the need of more school buses) This statement is a goal since the speaker wants there to be more school buses.

4. A connection with the audience ( Everyone here today knows what it feels like to wait hours for a bus) this claim is for everyone to relate with the speaker since many have experienced this situation.

Answer:

Here’s ur answer mark lol yw the person above me put it in

harder terms so here it is easier

Explanation

Which of the following statements is true about a story's narrator? (5 points)
A. The narrator is usually the author so that he or she can tell you what all of the characters are thinking or feeling at any time.
B. The narrator controls what information your reader receives about events in the story and what the characters are thinking.
C. The narrator is usually one of the characters in the story who knows everything about what the others are thinking and feeling.
D. The narrator controls only the information that the main character is aware of and so is limited by that character's experiences.

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Answer:b

Explanation:

What does this excerpt reveal about the setting of the story?

It is a work site with dangerous equipment.
It is a tourist destination with unfamiliar sights.
It is a more heavily populated town than Buck has ever seen.
It is a colder climate than Buck has ever experienced.

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Answer:

It is a colder climate than Buck has ever experienced.

Explanation:

Jack London's "The Call of The Wild," tells the story of a domesticated dog Buck who ended up being sold and then driven/ made to work in the Yukon areas. The story contains the adventures that Buck was driven to in his new atmosphere where he finally realizes his true nature.

The narrator describes Buck's first experience in the wild in the given excerpt. He mentions how "Buck's feet sank into a white mushy something very like mud. He sprang back with a snort..." and how this "puzzled him". At the same time, "the onlookers laughed uproariously", which adds to the fact that this must have been Buck's very first encounter with snow.

Thus, the correct answer is the fourth option.

Answer:

D. It is a colder climate than Buck has ever experienced.

Explanation:

The person above me is correct also I got it right on the edge test

how can your outline help you if you get stuck while drafting

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Answer:

Your outline provides new ideas if you can't think of any also it can help you find your way out

Explanation:

Hope It Helps

I need help pleaseee aaa

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Answer:

For question 1 is:

a. body language

b. ethnographer

c. alike

d. behavior

And for 2:

a. learned, wanted

b. called, went

c. arrived, already started

d. spent, won

e. turned off, went

f. did, invited

g. was, never saw

h. arrived, ate, bought

By changing 3 LETTERS in the word "shadow" form a word that completes the sentence.

Can you see a shadow reflected in a ______

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Answer:

Window?

Explanation:

i don't know this is the closest it's gonna get:)

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