Why can it be useful to include extra details in a first draft, even if they will be
taken out later?
A. These details may help the writer remember other aspects of what
happened.
B. These details will distract the reader and cause them to lose
interest in the story.
C. These details make the draft longer and help the writer achieve a
certain word count.
D. These details are usually imaginary and did not occur in the real
story

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Answer 1
the answer is A because B does not make any sense as to why would u need to distract the reader and C doesn’t make sense because it’s not relevant and D just doesn’t make and sense
Answer 2

Answer: A

Explanation: I used the process of elimination. B and D obviously doesn't make sense. And for C just because the draft is longer doesn't make it better. So the only one left is A.


Related Questions

What form of punctuation is missing in this quote?
Lothar told Keith, "After the game, I'm going to try and see if Tomas the owner of the red car will give me a ride because I don't want to walk home. "​

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Answer:

Lothar told Keith, "After the game, I'm going to try and see if Tomas, the owner of the red car will give me a ride because I don't want to walk home. "​

Explanation:

I think it would be that you need a comma between "Tomas" and "The"

Hope this is right and hope i helped! ^^

Answer:

If Your on the multiple choice of this question  

Lothar told Keith, "After the game, I'm going to try and see if Tomas the owner of the red car will give me a ride because I don't want to walk home."

What form of punctuation is missing in this quote?

A.  

a period

B.  

dashes

C.  

a semicolon

D.  

apostrophes I think the answer is between dashes and a semicolon

Explanation:

No apostrophes are missing and no periods are missing so it is between dashes and semicolon but I think it is dashes Hope this helps

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Which of the following quotations from the story shows man vs. man conflict?

a. "You?" she said. "You did that? How could you?"

b. When Aunt Jessie started to fret over the frost and the dying buds, I'd say, each morning, "There's still a few left, and, finally, "There's still one left."

c. By December, after we'd had two snowfalls, she could no longer ignore the single rose still blooming in the garden.

d. "What?" she said, tugging at it. "What-?"

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Answer:

a. "You?" she said. "You did that? How could you?"

Explanation:

Ray went to his class Sasha went to lunch instead. Identify the choice that corrects this run on sentence

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Answer:

Ray went to class, but Sasha went to lunch instead.

Explanation:

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Which of the following is written correctly?

a. My sister groomed the cat using her brush with a fuzzy tail.

b. My sister, using her brush, groomed the cat with a fuzzy tail.

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Answer:

B

Explanation:

Answer: a

Explanation:

she use the commas wrong. you can use commas for lists of stuff

why are there no quotation marks around a paraphrase?

A-because a paraphrase is integrated into you text,it does not require quotation marks or a citation.
B-the reader would find them distracting.
C- A paraphrase does not use the source’s exact words.
D-Quotation marks are only used for your most important sources.

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When you use your own words to convey information from an original source, you are paraphrasing. While paraphrases do not require quotation marks, they do require citations. Be sure to change both the words and word order of the original source in order to avoid plagiarism.

C.

That is the best answer to go with because you use quotations for if and when you use someone elses words and if you don't use quotation marks that is plagerizing.

Which detail would be the least important to include in a summary of this selection? A Milk is Oklahoma's official state beverage. B Oklahoma dairy products are sold to other states. C Dairy farming is more efficient and productive than it used to be. D An average dairy cow spends 8 hours every day chewing its cud.

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Answer:

The correct answer would be the second option.

Cloning refers to the process by which genetically identical cells, organisms, or DNA fragments are produced either naturally or artificially.

Cloning of dairy cows help people in various ways:

It increases the production of dairy products such as milk, cheese, butter et cetera.

It also increases the production of meat.

It helps in increasing the overall health of cows by curing or decreasing the occurrence of diseases.

It helps in the production of drugs or medicines in the form of milk.

It helps in reducing the overall cost of dairy products by producing large amounts of products efficiently.

Read the sentence from “Fish Cheeks.”

For Christmas I prayed for this blond-haired boy, Robert, and a slim new American nose.

Which sense does the description appeal to?

sight
hearing
touch
smell

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Answer: The sense sight applies to the description.

Explanation: "Blond-haired boy" and "a slim new American nose" as it says is describing a look and you cannot hear, touch, or smell a look, you would be using your sight (your eyes) for this.

The sentence appeals to the sense of sight through its description. (option A)

Appealing to senses

Authors often use descriptions to appeal to the five senses. That means they purposefully choose words that evoke an image or a smell, for example. That helps immerse readers in the story and evoke certain sensations and feelings.

In the excerpt from "Fish Cheeks," Tan appeals to the sense of sight when she mentions Robert's blond hair and a slim American nose. Clearly, the way the boy looks and her own appearance are very important to teenage Tan.

With the information above in mind, we can select option A as the correct answer.

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A monument in a park is shaped like a square pyramid. The dimensions are shown in the net.

What is the surface area of the monument, including the base?

4 m²

12 m²

14 m²

24 m²

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Answer:

Area of pyramid = 14 square meter

Explanation:

Area of one right angled triangle [tex]=\frac{1}{2}[/tex] (base) (height)

Put base [tex]=2[/tex] m, height [tex]=2.5[/tex] m

Area of one right angled triangle [tex]=\frac{1}{2}[/tex] (2)(2.5) = 2.5 square meter

Area of 4 right angled triangles [tex]=4(2.5)=10[/tex] square meter

Area of square = side × side = 2 × 2 = 4 square meter

So,

Area of pyramid = 10 + 4 = 14 square meter

Answer:14

Explanation:

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What do the surnames caldwell and calloway have in common (bud not buddy)

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Answer:

The names Caldwell and Calloway are a lot alike, both of them have eight letters and there aren't too many names that have a C, an A, a L and W, all together like that.

Explanation:

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Answer: Animal Farm is a dystopia in all possible ways. A dystopia, by definition, is a state where there are great suffering and injustice. In Animal Farm, Boxer works harder than anyone else, but when he got injured and couldn't work anymore, they directly sent him to slaughter. The pigs and dogs are the only ones who live a happy life, the other animals are forced to work in miserable situations, with a mere amount of food to keep them alive. Dystopian fiction can help us understand why we're right to be afraid of certain things and it can help us think about all these scenarios without actually having to live through them.

What is the correct meaning of the word verification?
The bank needed verification of Jared's identity before he withdrew money.

proof
accuracy
picture
security

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The answer is accuracy if I’m wrong sorry

In chapter 7 Gatsby says that Daisy never loved Tom. Do you think this is ture? What are Daisy’s feelings for Tom? Give evidence from the text.

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Answer:

Daisy tells Tom he's "revolting" and asks how she could possibly love him now. She has a really hard time saying she never loved him, but she does eventually, after much internal deliberation. ... Daisy begs to go, and they head home with Daisy and Gatsby together in Gatsby's car. Nick realizes it is his birthday.

Explanation:

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How does Schlosser show transparency in this passage from Fast Food Nation?

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Answer: He shows transparency by stating where his information came from

Schlosser shows transparency by stating where his information came from.

How does Schlosser show transparency?

Schlosser correctly quoted, paraphrased and summarized the information he obtained through his research, which usually characterizes transparent researches.

Moreover, his paper was well researched, his ideas had an easy flow from one to another, and they were all very well connected to support his main point.

Schlosser employs analogical style to portray the evidence purposely for easy understanding. This book clearly defined the value of fast food in people's life.

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active sentence change into passive voice sentence.
The Americans helped the Filipinos in this war.​

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Explanation:

The Americans have helped the Filipinos in the war

Was the British takeover of India actually a “blessing in disguise” considering it improved the overall life of the Indian citizen?(chapter 24 sect 4)

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Answer:

Right from the beginning of their relationship with India, the British, who had come as traders and had become rulers and administrators, had influenced the economic and political systems of the country.

Their impact on the cultural and social life of India was, however, gradual.

Explanation:

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Create an intriguing sentence using "opinion"​

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i aint be haves da question no cap

Answer:

In my humble opinion, he will win the election. 2. Public opinion can force the government into action. 3. Public opinion has polarized on this issue. 4. Your opinion stands to reason. 5. Everyone within earshot soon knew

Explanation:


Obama supports police departments that...

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Promote social justice

2. In what setting do congressmen do most of their work? Explain

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Most congressional legislative work happens in a committees.

What are your thoughts about the vaccines? Explain.

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Which vaccines? Vaccines in general should be required because the advantages outweigh the negative results. If no one was vaccinated we’d have a plague. A vaccine is introducing what we’re trying to eliminate to your immune system in order to gain the antibodies to fight it off

Answer:

DONT DO IT

Explanation:

THE VACCINE WAS MADE TOO FaST... IT should take a longer time if its actually developed and ready for people to use

Where does this statement belong?

The text shows the negative consequences of keeping secrets

A.The best way to keep a secret
B.What friends are for
C.Both

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Answer:

The correct answer is C. BOTH.

Explanation:

Two texts show negative consequences. (I got it right.)

Find out about another unusual food source that people may not want to
eat, such as snake meat, or snails. Learn about where this food is eaten,
who eats it, and how it is prepared. Write a paragraph to summarize what
you have learned.

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no one wants to eat $h!t

That’s true go with the other guys answer

Select the correct answer.
Read “Ah! Sunflower” by William Blake. What is the poem’s rhyme scheme?

Ah, sunflower, weary of time,
Who countest the steps of the sun;
Seeking after that sweet golden clime
Where the traveler’s journey is done;

Where the Youth pined away with desire,
And the pale virgin shrouded in snow,
Arise from their graves, and aspire
Where my Sunflower wishes to go!

A.
aabb dede
B.
acab babc
C.
abab cdcd
D.
abcd abcd

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Answer:

D

Explanation:

Answer: abab cdcd

Explanation:

What do the surnames caldwell and Calloway have in common (bud not buddy)

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What is this ?? What subject is this I’m only in 6th grade

Ko Ko will be on holiday ..... three weeks.
a) on
b) at
c) of
D) for​

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D
It’s for because it’s the only one that makes sense

Answer:

D

Explanation:

Which sentence states the central idea of the passage?
ANSWER THE QUESTION CORRECT GETS BRAINLIEST
and just because i picked c doesn't mean its C its either C OR A HELP ME!!!!!

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Answer:

its A

Explanation:

the paragraph did but also didn't talk about its velueness or any of that it talked mainly on how it was made how it is a slow process and takes time

Can someone if this story is good? I made it. It is called The Tree Tragedy!


One day, when Ellie and, Mason were hanging out in the forest, they noticed a Tree House. "Hey! Ellie do you see that?" Said Mason. "Yes! I do, it's a Tree House, should we climb it?" Ellie replied. "Oh yes, of course we should, what's life without a little risk." Mason said as he climbed up the tree.

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"Wow, this place sure is demolished, we should go back down.." Ellie said with fear.


"Awe, c'mon Ellie! Don't be such a wuss!" Said Mason as he jumped around moving the Tree House with him. There were vines covering the walls around them, cracks and holes in the ground. Ellie was scared, but she didn't want Mason to think she was a sissy. "I'm not a wuss, i was just saying uhm.. we should go back down because we could find something even cooler!" She said with a sarcastic like tone.



About 5 minutes later.. Ellie heard a noise. "Mason.. did you hear that..?" Ellie said shaking. "Calm down Ellie, it was probably just an animal!" The Tree House then tipped, almost throwing them off, They both screamed, Ellie was hanging from one of the branches, Mason was holding on to the rim of the Tree House.



Someone heard them screaming, they ran towards them and saw Ellie hanging from one of the branches, just then, Ellie fell. The person ran and caught her in their arms. "Please save my friend!" Ellie cried. "Don't worry, i'll get him, just stay here" Said the stranger. They climbed up and signaled to Mason to grab their hand, Mason held tight on the ledge moving towards the stranger, he grabbed their hand and they both ascended down. Ellie and Mason both looked at the stranger and said, "Thanks! You saved my life!"

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This is a really good story! If you continue it I would definitely read it! I would add a couple things to it to make the stranger seem more mysterious. Just to make it interesting.

Answer:

I feel like the ending is a bit boring, and I didn't develop any feelings or care for the characters getting harmed, also I think that you should slow down the story, it seems like everything just happened and it sorta goes TOO fast. I'm only saying these things because i'd like to see you succeed, also one more thing! When I first read this story, I didn't feel like the introduction grabbed my attention, and the tree house kind of seemed like they were at some abandoned building in the middle of a forest. LAST THING!! I'd like to know what could possibly be knocking down the tree, perhaps you could add something that makes it seem like the tree house is closing in on them, and an entity can be seen from inside of the branches. Something that just elaborates on what is hurting them, so we can get more of a bone chilling feel from whatever entity is throwing them around. I hope this helps!

Who do you suppose is responsible for leaving the gifts? Why? Explain your answer TKAM

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Answer:

Boo Radley

Explanation: (I read this book) Because he lives where the tree is and maybe, just maybe he secretly sneaks out at night. :)

Purdue University Online Writing Lab
MULTIPLE-CHOICE QUESTION
Which of the following BEST summarizes the difference between a reference for a
print source and one for an electronic source?
Only the first word of journal titles should be capitalized for an electronic source.
Article titles should be listed in title case for an electronic source.
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A DOI or URL should be listed for an electronic source.
Only one author is listed for an electronic source.
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Answer:

A DOI or URL should be listed for an electronic source.

Explanation:

Making references for electronic sources and print sources are different because while one has to do with information gotten from physical books, the other has to do with information gotten digitally.

In the case of a reference for a print source, it is important to cite the name(s) of the author, title of the book, etc while in the case of an electronic source, the URL or DOI is used to show ownership of the material cited.

What contributions led to the heliocentric model of the solar system ?

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Answer:

It was not until the 16th century that a mathematical model of a heliocentric system was presented, by the Renaissance mathematician, astronomer, and Catholic cleric Nicolaus Copernicus, leading to the Copernican Revolution.

Explanation:

Why does the author include these sentences in the article?
"When Japan invaded China in 1987, it used 50,000 bike riding troops." "In World War II, British soldiers
were equipped with folding bikes." "In Sweden, soldiers used bikes for transportation until the 1980s."
to compare the different ways that bloycles were used by these bike-riding soldiers
to show the improvements in bicycles from the 1930s to the 1940s to the 1980s
ng to explain how bikes are used in peacetime, as well as during wars
to show that militaries from all over the world have used bicycles

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The answer is : To show that militaries from all of the world have used bicycles

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