Select all the correct answers.
Which comments are examples of constructive feedback?
A. Don't use dialogue when you write. It's childish.
B. If you summarized the go-kart story instead, you could get to the real conflict sooner.
C. When using dialogue, you don't always need to write "he said" and "she said." The context can
often indicate who is talking.
D. This essay is OK, but it doesn't have any action. Chess tournaments are boring, so I don't think
anyone will want to read this.

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Answer 1

Answer:I think the answers are B and C.

Explanation: A and D are incorrect because they use words that are meant to offend someone, and aren’t very helpful. B and C have helpful information for the writer. Therefore the answer is B and C


Related Questions

What does the word facetious mean ?
What indicates that this is a definition clue ?

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Answer:

treating serious issues with deliberately inappropriate humor; flippant

Explanation:

What are context clues? Context clues are hints that an author gives to help define a difficult or unusual word within a book. The clue may appear within the same sentence as the word to which it refers or it may follow in the next sentence. Explanation: Context clues are hints that an auth

Answer:

arcastic and cleverly amusing , commas

In this passage, which of the following best states the author's central argument? Read the following passage from "An Indian Father's Plea," by Medicine Grizzlybear Lake. Dear teacher, I would like to introduce you to my son, Wind-Wolf. [1] He is probably what you would consider a typical Indian kid. He was born and raised on a reservation. He has black hair, dark brown eyes, olive complexion. And like so many Indian children his age, he is shy and quiet in the classroom. He is 5 years old, in kindergarten, and I can't understand why you have already labeled him a "slow learner." At the age of 5, he has already been through quite an education compared with his peers in Western society. At his first introduction into this world, he was bonded to his mother and to the Mother Earth in a traditional native childbirth ceremony. And he has been continuously cared for by his mother, father, sisters, cousins, uncles, grandparents, and extended tribal family since this ceremony. — Lake, Medicine Grizzlybear. "An Indian Father's Plea" by Medicine Grizzlybear Lake (a/k/a Robert G. Lake-Thom) as appeared in Orion magazine, Autumn 1995. Reprinted by permission of the author.

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Answer:

B. Western society misjudges Native American practices.

Explanation:

In the given passage from a plea letter written by an Indian father, he seems to suggest to a much larger issue of how Native Americans are perceived and treated in the western American society. The father, Robert Lake, emphasizes on how his son is finding it hard to culturally identify himself amidst the American way of teaching that he is subjected to in school.

Taken from the first part of the letter, the given passage reveals how the young son, Wind-Wolf was labeled "a slow learner" by his teacher despite the fact that he has been through with "quite an education" in his Indian reserve. He then went on to narrate how he had been educated so much more about life, more than the Western society's child would have gotten. So, the main argument of the given passage is that Western society misjudges the practices of the Native Americans.

Though your grades at BECE were very good none of the school you choose offered you admission. Write a letter to your district education officer about this unfair treatment and request that something is done

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Answer:

See the letter below

Explanation:

Oxfords International School,

23 Umuatako Road,

Aba.

July 14, 2020.

The District Education Officer,

Secondary Education Management Board,

Aba.

Sir,

COMPLAINT OF UNFAIR DENIAL OF ADMISSION

I humbly write in order to appeal to you sir in my quest for redress with respect to unfair denial of admission into class X irrespective of my impressive performance at the 2020 BECE examination conducted on March 4, 2020.

I sat for the BECE examination on the said date at Oxfords International School Aba where I passed all my subjects at credit level as required by the Abia State Ministry of Education. I was among the four students in my school who received the principal's merit award for excellent performance at the 2020 BECE examination.

However, when the placement list of candidates who were qualified for admission into class X in schools across Aba district was published, my name was missing from the list. I quickly contacted the principal of my school, Dr. Moses Ineh. He in turn, relayed my complaint to the head of school exams, Aba district Education Commission. The response of the head of school exams was disheartening. He said that I will have to repeat class IX since he has concluded the posting of students to high schools in Aba district and has sent a comprehensive list of successful candidates to Abia state ministry of education.

Please sir, I humbly request that you use your good office to intervene in this matter by directing the head of school exams to post me to one of the high schools in Aba district so that I can continue my education together with my classmates. It will not be a fair treatment if I am forced to repeat this examination next year irrespective of my impressive performance this year. I have attached a copy of my result notification to this letter.

Thanks in anticipation of your positive response.

Yours Faithfully,

ЩЮЖ

Jude Chinonso Njoku

Which five words in this excerpt from "The Raven" by Edgar Allan Poe create an ominous and spooky atmosphere?

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Answer:

Words such as 'bleak', 'dying', 'wrought', 'ghost', and 'sorrow' create an ominous and spooky atmosphere in "The Raven".

If the prefix pro- means "forward," what is the exact meaning of the word propulsion?
A.) force that drives something forward.
B.) force that writes back.
C.) force that places items together.
D.) force that sends something away.

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Answer:

A.force that drives something forward.

Explanation:

Answer:

D.) force that sends something away.

Explanation:

Which element from the first text is missing? the citation the supporting evidence the viewpoint the conclusion

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Hello. This question is incomplete. The full question is:

Read the outline.

I. Introduction

A. Quotation and interpretation

B. Thesis statement

II. First text

A. Reason and connection

B. Commentary

Which element from the first text is missing?

a) the citation  b) the supporting evidence  c) the viewpoint  d) the conclusion

Answer:

b) the supporting evidence  

Explanation:

The supporting evidence is an element that is missing from the first text. This is because the supporting evidence must be the paragraph immediately after the "Thesis statement", which will provide arguments and evidence that will state that the thesis statement is true and rational. In other words, we can say that it is the supporting evidence that supports the statements given in the text, providing arguments and facts that confirm the need for disclosure of this information.

A first text is a hook or the opening of the sentence. The supporting evidence is missing from the first text. Thus, option b is correct.

What is supporting evidence?

Supporting evidence is an element of the first text that is used to prove the truth of the claim and comes immediately after the thesis statement of the introduction part. They are an important part of the body paragraph as it discerns the proofs.

The introduction part of the essay or the article includes the quotation and interpretation, and the thesis statement. The first text part includes the reason and connection, commentary, and supporting evidence.

Therefore, option b. the supporting element is missing from the first text.

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Which story premise most clearly contains a supernatural element

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Answer:

C.

Explanation:

Since the man is able to predict the events that come to pass, the man either has the ability to see into the future, an absurd amount of luck, or can cause these events by predicting them. With the exception of luck, the man clearly has some supernatural ability.

Michelle highlighted this sentence in her favorite Western paperback novel: “The bandit weaseled his way through the throng of women in hoop skirts and petticoats, making it nearly impossible for the sheriff and his posse to catch him before he hopped on the train.” How does the word “weaseled” contribute to the tone of the sentence? A It shows the author’s sympathy for the bandit. B It shows the author’s disdain for the bandit and his actions. C It provides a concrete description of the bandit’s appearance. D It provides a point of comparison so the reader can better understand the bandit.

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Answer: C. It provides a concrete description of the bandit’s appearance.

Explanation: In literature, writers can use a wide variety of words to portray a character's actions or personality. The reader then imagines a scene that is closer to what the writer has in mind. Michelle used the verb "weasel" to contribute to the tone of the sentence, and imply that not only was the bandit passing through women, but he was sneaking and achieving his purpose by rudely making his way and scaping. This choice creates a better description of how he appeared in the scene.

 

Answer:

the answer is B

Explanation:

Which fact best supports the city planner's opinion? Designated bike lanes have reduced traffic-related accidents by 43 percent in other cities. A nearby city's business district has bike lanes and a much higher population of commuters. The cost of roadwork in the region has reduced the cost of similar projects by more than 12 percent. Research has proven that bike commuters are healthier and happier than car commuters.

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Hello. This question is incomplete. The full question is:

Read the scenario, then answer the question.

A city planner thinks that reconfiguring the business district’s busy downtown streets to allow for bike lanes is important and is worth the large cost. The lanes will help drivers and cyclists avoid accidents, and they will make the downtown area more attractive to bike commuters.

Which fact best supports the city planner’s opinion?

Designated bike lanes have reduced traffic-related accidents by 43 percent in other cities.  A nearby city’s business district has bike lanes and a much higher population of commuters.  The cost of roadwork in the region has reduced the cost of similar projects by more than 12 percent.  Research has proven that bike commuters are healthier and happier than car commuters.

Answer:

Designated bike lanes have reduced traffic-related accidents by 43 percent in other cities.

Explanation:

The text shown above reveals that a planner wants to make city traffic safer and more comfortable for both drivers and cyclists who are in great danger when driving in the middle of cars. For that he wants to build a bike path, which will be very beneficial for the city.

To convince people that this idea is excellent, he can use the argument that "designated bicycle lanes have reduced traffic-related accidents by 43% in other cities."

Answer:

A

Explanation:

The correct answer is A

I need a good magazine title so list out a few ideas. Should be original btw

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Explanation:

Good magazine titles are very unique and they show what the magazine is about. For example, the PC Gamer magazines are all about video games for computers. To make a name for your magazine, you have to decide what it will be about. Burning hot gossip? Science news? Sports? Laundry detergent?    Then, you put together words about these things. For sports, there could be Ball Maniacs. For science news, there could be People in Lab Coats.

Look at the Pope Manufacturing Co. advertisement. An ad for Columbia Bicycles. Which detail from Chapter 1 of Wheels of Change does this image enhance?

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Answer:

- Pope knew that he also had to build a market by raising the excitement level of the American people for his product.

Explanation:

The given image of advertisement by Pope Manufacturing Co. aims to 'build a market' and which is done by using the image reflecting 'wheels of change.' This idea of showing 'wheels of change' helps grab the American viewers' attention and 'elevate their exhilaration level towards their product.' This allows the Pope Manufacturing Co. to engage the audience's interest and faith in their product which will eventually establish a market for them.

Answer:

the person above is correct its B

Explanation:

Verb Tenses Mr. MacInnes usually (go) ________to church on Sundays. He never (work) _________ at his job on Sundays.

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Answer:

Mr. MacInnes usually (go) goes to church on Sundays. He never works at his job on Sundays.

Explanation:

Use a paragraph when _________.

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Answer:

you Begin or start a new point when writing essays

Read the following paragraph and then answer the question that follows:

Video games can kill! That is what many who support legislation banning violent titles from underage players have stated. These supporters of video game reform cite studies that show increased statistics of violence among children who play games regularly at home. Opponents of this reform, however, have expressed doubts about the validity of the studies, requesting that further research be done before a dramatic statement is made about all gamers. It seems that the rising popularity of video games among youth has spiked a political debate that may last for several more years to come.

Which sentence from this paragraph is an example of the support?

A) These supporters of video game reform cite studies that show increased statistics of violence among children who play games regularly at home.

B) That is what many who support legislation banning violent titles from underage players have stated.

C) Video games can kill!

D) It seems that the rising popularity of video games among youth has spiked a political debate that may last for several more years to come.

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(A.) These supporters of video game reform cite studies that show increased statistics of violence among children who play games regularly at home

Consider the words below.
Lazy
Determined
Mad
Hyper
Friend
Respond with at least 2 synonyms and at least 2 antonyms for each of the given words. When writing your response, please distinguish between
your synonyms and your antonyms,
HELP

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Answer:

LAZY

synonyms: inactive, slothful

antonyms: active, energetic

DETERMINDED

synonyms: driven, ambitious

antonyms: unexplained, unsettled

MAD

synonyms: angry, enraged

antonyms: happy, unruffled

HYPER

synonyms: excited, jumpy

antonyms: drained, calm

FRIEND

synonyms: companion, buddy

antonyms: enemy, opponent

Explanation:

It can be hard to choose the right word to truly express yourself sometimes. A lot of words are seemingly similar on the surface level, but may
have subtle or nuanced differences. Consider the following three words:
Kill
Murder
Assassinate
In your response, answer the following questions:
(1) What are the similarities of these words? (2) Explain their differences and how, when, or why we choose to use one over the others.


HELP PLZ

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Answer:

the similarities are that all of these words mean someone has died.

the differences are that kill could mean assassinate or murder , kill just means someone died, murder means someone was killed by someone else, and assassinate means someone famous or an icon was murdered.

Explanation:

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Read this passage from Sonnet 116 by Shakespeare.
What is the speaker saying about time?
A. Time will change our youthful appearance, but it will not change
true love.
B. Time can cause even the strongest love to wither and die.
C. Time has no effect on the beauty of the one you truly love.
D. Time is the final judge and will decide which loves last and which
will fail.

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The correct answer is A. Time will change our youthful appearance, but it will not change  true love.

Explanation:

In Sonnet 116, Shakespeare explains love always prevails and it is not affected by time. To begin the author mentions "Love's not time's fool", which shows love will not be negatively affected by time, this is also supported by the line "Love alters not with his brief hours and weeks." Besides this, the author clarifies, the time might affect physical appearance this is expressed in "though rosy lips and cheeks  Within his bending sickle's compass come". According to this, the idea about time in the poem is that it can change appearance but not love or "time will change our youthful appearance, but it will not change  true love."

Read the passage from Sugar Changed the World. We don't know exactly what Nina's grandfather's invention did, but as the story goes, he found a way to give raw beet sugar sparkling hues. People from Russia to the cafés of Vienna could now buy cheap and attractive sugar produced on European soil. Serfs were much like slaves, since they had no choice about where they lived or worked. Yet Nina's grandfather made so much money from his invention that he was able to buy his freedom from his owner. What is the purpose of this text? to inform readers about the grandfather’s role in creating beet sugar to entertain readers with stories about one of the grandfather’s inventions to convince readers that beet sugar is better than cane sugar to show readers what life was like for a typical Russian serf

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Answer:

A

Explanation:

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The purpose of this text is to

To inform readers about the grandfather’s role in creating beet sugar

In this excerpt, the author provides information about the role of Nina's grandfather in producing beet sugar. Information texts simply provide details about something.

They are not intended to persuade the reader of anything in particular.

In this text, the narrator talks about how Nina's father was instrumental to the innovation of beet sugar and how he was successful at it that he gained freedom from his master.

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During the Zoroastrian purification ceremony which items does a child receive

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Answer:

Children receive the sudreh (white cotton garment) and kusti (wool cord for the waist).

Explanation:

Zoroastrianism is an ancient religion originating in the 6th century BC. It strongly influenced Christianity, Judaism and Islam, since it is a religious doctrine based on the concepts of good, evil and the dualism between them, besides, it defends philosophies that refer to paradise, the messiah, the resurrection, salvation and final judgment, where sinners will be yoked and condemned to hell, or saved for all eternity.

One of the religious rituals of Zoroastrianism is the purification ceremony that takes place with children between 7 and 15 years old. In this ritual the children receive the sudreh (white cotton garment) and the kusti (cord made of wool for the waist), to wear.

The following question references the novel Mrs. Dalloway by Virginia Woolf
How much does Peter assume he must earn per year if he is with Daisy?
500 pounds
10000 pounds
b. 1000 pounds
d 250 pounds
a.
C.

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is there a picture???
Answer:

Explanation: first one 500 lbs

If the word carburet means “to combine or mix to increase available fuel energy” the word carburetors in line 10 most likely refers to A. Key that operate a machine B. Gas used to create power C. Devices used in an engine D. Jumbles of automobile parts

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Answer:

The answer is B!

Explanation:

Answer:

C. Devices used in an engine.

Explanation:

Carburetor definition is - a mechanical apparatus for premixing vaporized fuel and air in proper proportions and supplying the mixture to an internal combustion engine.

differences between identical and fraternal twins

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Answer:

I'm a twin so a fraternal twin are twins that don't look similar and identical twins are twins that look the same!:0 ahahhah

Explanation:

Answer:

Identical twins develop from one fertilized egg and can share the same placenta and have two separate or, rarely, one amniotic sac; fraternal twins develop from two separate eggs and grow in their own amniotic sac, according to the ACOG.

Explanation:

Which sentence has a subject-verb agreement error? sentence 1 sentence 2 sentence 3 sentence 4

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Answer:

c. sentence 3

Explanation:

The sentences below are examples of those where there is a subject/verb agreement mistake. One of my buddies enjoys making Italian cuisine. (Error: one is singular and like is plural.)

What is the subject-verb agreement error?

The verb must also be singular if the subject is agreement error. She writes every day, for instance. Use numerous verb tenses while employing the singular pronoun “they.” The participant gave an example of how they were happy with their work.

In order for a subject and its verb to agree, they must both be singular or plural: Singular verbs are used with singular subjects. There is a plural verb for a plural topic with agreement error.

Therefore,  It should read: One of my pals enjoys cooking Italian food. The next-door neighbors asked me to pick up their mail.

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Please answer this question now in two minutes

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Answer:

s = 83

Explanation:

By a theorem, GK = 2HJ.

s - 67 = 2(s - 75)

s - 67 = 2s - 150

-s = -83

s = 83


What two examples of patterns and repetition?

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Alliteration can be seen as repetition

Answer:

can you give examples ?

Explanation:

Verb Tenses A: Where (pandas, live) _______do panda live___________________? B: They (live) ___________ in China. They (live, not) ____________ in Africa.

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Answer:

Where do pandas live? Present tense B: They live in China. Present. They do not live in Africa. Present

Explanation:

They are all in present tense



2. Punctuate the following passages using capital letter where necessary

(a) Chalk is a kind of mineral we give the name of mineral to every kind of solid substance such as sand gravel stone coal gold silver copper etc. that can be dug out of the earth such things are called minerals from the word mine which signifies a hole pit or other kind of excavation cut into the earth for the sake of obtaining some useful or valuable substance not found on the surface.​

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Answer:

Chalk is a kind of mineral. We give the name of mineral to every kind of solid substance such as sand, gravel, stone, coal, gold, silver, copper etc that can be dug out of the earth. Such things are called minerals, from the word mine, which signifies a hole pit or other kind of excavation cut into the earth for the sake of obtaining some useful or valuable substance not found on the surface.​

Progress is being made. It’s so slow sometimes, so terribly so sometimes, but progress is being made. We have removed the rot, we are strengthening the foundations. There is much work to do, and we all know what needs to be done. We can only do the work, he tells Kathy, and his children, and his crew, his friends, anyone he sees. So let us get up early and stay late, and, brick by brick and block by block, let us get that work done. Which word best describes the tone of this excerpt? sentimental optimistic supportive demanding

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Answer:

Optimistic.

Explanation:

Being optimistic is staying positive and hopeful even in the face of imminent failure. It is the ability to look for the good in things, to look at the bright side of things rather than just be negative and give up.

In the given excerpt from Dave Eggers's "Zeitoun", the main protagonist Abdulrahman Zeitoun is asking or rather pleading with everyone to keep on doing the good work. He emphasized that they had overcome the worse of all, the hurricane and now, they can build a better place. The hurricane may have destroyed their lives and homes, but they are capable of rebuilding everything, if not better. He insisted that "progress is being made [even if] it's so slow...". His insistence that they keep on working despite the huge amount of work needed and the slow rate of progress all show his optimistic nature.

Answer:

B

Explanation:

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