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This journal entry will be completed in two parts. In this lesson, you will examine how different sentence types can add variety and interest to writing. Part of your learning will involve revising your own writing to improve sentence variety. Now, before continuing with the lesson, you will complete the first half of your entry. Write a short, four- to five-sentence paragraph about a topic of your choosing. Then, after you have completed this lesson, come back to the paragraph you wrote. Analyze your writing to identify areas where you could revise using different sentence types to add interest to your work. Revise the paragraph using the techniques you have learned. Your completed journal entry should have both your original and your revised paragraph.

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Answer 1

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you liar it isn't 50 its 25

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Answer 2

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Revising your writing can be both the most difficult part of writing and the most rewarding. By revising your sentences, you will make your writing more interesting. ... In this lesson, you will focus on four different sentence types: simple, compound, complex ... For further review, check out Strengthen Sentence Variety

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Which of these is an example of an unsuccessful emotional appeal?
In support of taking swimming lessons: Whether it's a swimming pool, a lake, a pond, or the local water park, you know you can keep yourself afloat if you happen to find yourself in deep water. But not only that, you might need to save someone else's life as well. On two separate occasions, I have helped kids in trouble in a wave pool. If I had not known how to swim, I would have been clinging helplessly to a tube. In fact, I would have been so focused on my own safety that I wouldn't even have noticed the kids who needed help.
Against keeping wild animals as pets: Wild animals can be . . . well, wild! I was playing with our pet raccoon when it suddenly turned on me and bit my arm and hand. Today, 18 stitches and a series of rabies shots later, I'm here to tell you that because wild animals are unpredictable they do not make good pets!
In support of repopulating deserts with trees: Replanting trees in devastated areas means that someone someday will have a completely different place to live in or visit--one that is healthy and thriving, and beautiful, too. Will you plant trees today to make a better tomorrow for your children and grandchildren?
In support of retraining homeless people: When you provide the homeless everything--food, shelter, clothing, etc., you squelch their desire to take care of themselves, as well as the need to change their situation. Instead, they are treated like babies. Because of this treatment, they are forced into need and dependence--and ultimately, hopelessness. Consider Aaron, a homeless man, who took his own life because he was in so much pain from living in below-freezing temperatures for many years.

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the first one

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In support of retraining homeless people: When you provide the homeless everything--food, shelter, clothing, etc., you squelch their desire to take care of themselves, as well as the need to change their situation. Instead, they are treated like babies. Because of this treatment, they are forced into need and dependence--and ultimately, hopelessness. Consider Aaron, a homeless man, who took his own life because he was in so much pain from living in below-freezing temperatures for many years.

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That was the correct answer to my quiz so im pretty sure it will be correct for you.

Water flows through a hose and fills a 100 gallon tank in eight minutes.

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Answer:

is this  supposed to be a poem

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What is Liesl's viewpoint in "A Letter from the Atlantic"?

She feels irritated because she doesn't want to be around her family or the other emigrants on the ship.

She feels terrified because she doesn't know what to expect on Ellis Island and knows it won't be like Hamburg.

She feels thrilled because she wants to leave Hamburg and wishes she could shorten the duration of the voyage.

She feels conflicted because she's excited about what awaits her but homesick for the life in Germany she left behind.

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She feels conflicted because she's excited about what awaits her but homesick for the life in Germany she left behind.

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i took the test

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She feels conflicted because she's excited about what awaits her but homesick for the life in Germany she left behind

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There is no conversation more boring than the one where everyone agrees"-Michel de Montaigne
What connection does this quote have with the act of choosing a topic. Explain

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biden won

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Differences and similarities between ancient greek theater and an English theater

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There are many differences. Greek theater had a chorus, which sang and likely danced. The arrangement of the stage was completely different, featuring a single building with a large entrance on to the stage, a crane to bring divine characters in on a higher level, a dancing area for the chorus, and so on. Actors were all male and performed in masks; there were few actors available for the playwright's use (two or later three could be on stage at a time). Plays were put on at civic/religious festivals, not as standalone productions, and cycles of four plays (three tragedies and a comic satyr play) by the same author were performed. The list could go on for a while

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Which best describes the voice of an academic paper?
It's the one sentence that identifies what the paper is about.
It's the transitions that connect one body paragraph to another.
• It's the sentence that establishes the topic of a body paragraph.
O It's the unique perspective a writer brings to the subject matter.

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Answer:

i think its d but i also wanna say b. but d makes more sense

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Answer:

d

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trust me, I got an 100%

are socialism and capitalism both ruled under the same government​

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Answer: No

Explanation: If you mean can they coexist it's no.

Chief Joseph’s tone in "An Indian's View of Indian Affairs" can best be described as forward and blunt. angry and sarcastic. heartfelt and sincere. neutral and nonchalant.

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Answer:

Heartfelt and sincere.

Explanation:

Just took the quiz

Answer:heartfelt and sincere

Explanation:

took quiz

Read the narrative and determine the point of view:

"The teen walked along the beach with his mom, though neither one spoke to the other. The son kept glancing at his mother, sometimes with a furrowed brow, other times with wide eyes. He would start to open his mouth, but then would hastily close it again. His mother continued her steady walking, considering him out of the corner of her eye. Sometimes she smiled a thin smile, but generally she kept her mouth closed." (5 points)

a
First person
b
Second person
c
Third-person limited
d
Third-person objective
e
Third-person omniscient

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I think it is C.Third-person limited, because there is limited info from the story and from the 3rd person pov there is only some info for some quick and simple sentences for a summery.(from what i seen on the text)

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limited

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HELP!! Dead poet society movie
Dead Poets Writing Assignment
Directions: Describe in detail what Mr. Keating was trying to teach his
students and the obstacles Mr. Keating encountered while trying to do so.
Make sure to write your response in complete sentences.

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Really!? What is your question it just says “ ? “

write a letter to your school newspaper explaining why you participate or why you do not in a specific sport or club use relevant examples from your life or from the experiences of your friends

i am writing about why i do not play sports or do clubs please help me

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I choose not to play sports or enroll in clubs. I find it that I want to focus mainly on school, as school being my top-priority. And during this pandemic it gives more exposure in the environment. Some of my friends are not in sports of clubs either which gives me more socialization. I choose not to enroll in clubs or sign up for sports for many reasons.

Put the verbs in the active or passive voice.
5.Cranial and facial bones (to compose) the skull.
6.The upper extremity (to connect) with the trunk by the shoulder.
7.Each gland (to produce) secretions.
8.The spinal column (to form) by the vertebrae.
.

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Answer:

5. Cranial and facial bones compose the skull.

6. The upper extremity is connected with the trunk by the shoulder.

7. Each gland produces secretions.

8. The spinal column is formed by the vertebrae.

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Explain how mistaken identity becomes even more complicated in actIII, scene IV. Include specific details from the Text

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Answer:Include specific details from the text. In act III, scene IV, mistaken identity becomes more complicated when Sir Andrew Aguecheek challenges Cesario (who is really Viola) to a duel. ... She has no idea what he is talking about, of course, but Antonio, still mistaking Viola as Sebastian, thinks Sebastian is betraying him.

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In act III, scene IV, mistaken identity becomes more complicated when Sir Andrew Aguecheek challenges Cesario (who is really Viola) to a duel. Viola is ready to admit that she is too weak to fight but eventually has to face Sir Andrew. This plot twist highlights how Viola’s decision to dress as a man has some potentially dangerous consequences. However, Antonio suddenly appears on the scene and, thinking that Viola is Sebastian, comes to the aid of the person he thinks is his friend.

No one is able to understand how Cesario happens to be Antonio’s friend. When police officers intervene and recognize Antonio as a wanted man in Illyria, Antonio gives his reasons for fighting. He explains that that he is trying to save the young man he once saved from drowning:

ANTONIO: Let me speak a little. This youth that you see here

I snatched one half out of the jaws of death,

Relieved him with such sanctity of love,—

And to his image, which methought did promise

Most venerable worth, did I devotion.

Antonio then asks Cesario/Viola to give him back his purse, which he lent earlier to Sebastian. She has no idea what he is talking about, of course, but Antonio, still mistaking Viola as Sebastian, thinks Sebastian is betraying him.

The characters in the scene are befuddled and unable to comprehend these happenings. But Viola understands that this case of mistaken identity hints at the fact that her brother Sebastian is alive and has been in the company of Antonio in Illyria:

VIOLA: Methinks his words do from such passion fly

That he believes himself; so do not I.

Prove true, imagination; O prove true,

That I, dear brother, be now ta'en for you!

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Which of these details supports the central idea?
Idea: New ideas or inventions are not always planned.
George Crum called his new invention "Saratoga
Chips."
The mechanical peeler was invented in the 1920s.
Potato chips, a very popular snack food, were
created by accident.
George Crum worked at a resort in Saratoga, New
York.

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Answer: Potato chips

Explanation:

The claim was that some inventions are not planned and potato chips were invented on accident meaning they weren’t planned

Answer:

The answer is Potato chips, a very popular snack food, were created by accident.

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Good luck on the last question, I believe in you!

i need it asap please

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i believe this question is personal for the writer, but some examples of technolegy could be how quickly we can comunicate with one another and use that for good. write about how dificult it was for people to send messages to one another in the past and how easy it is now. face-book, the internet, and gooogle are examples of how online reacourses can make it easy for the student to find as much information as needed about any given topic. hundreds of answers are at their fingertips. write how this can be a help and a hindrance for the eductation of the student.

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the ______ shows up when you start talking about source, to signal to your leader that you're using someone else's ideas or words
A.signal phrase
B.in text citation

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I’m pretty sure it’s b

Read this passage from Through The Looking-Glass.

“I see nobody on the road,” said Alice.

“I only wish I had such eyes,” the King remarked in a fretful tone. “To be able to see Nobody! And at that distance too! Why, it’s as much as I can do to see real people, by this light!”
What is the relationship between Alice and the White King in this passage?
A. They are not friendly with each other; the King is upset by Alice.
B. They are friendly with one another, but the King can be silly.
C. Alice is afraid of the King, and he treats her rudely.
D. Alice makes the King nervous, and he makes her laugh.

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Answer:

B. They are friendly with one another but the King can be silly.

Explanation:

Because the king is still being kind to Alice but is also being very silly.

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Answer:

b.

Explanation:

sry if im wrong

here are some easy questions to earn points ​

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Excellence is always a good thing. It’s what makes you, you. It shows what your good at and what your not.

Answer:

thx

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What are stereotypes of femininity?

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Answer:

Explanation:

Females can be stereotyped as suppose to do everything a man says and not have an opinion

that woman should shave, that they should cook and clean, that they should always be looking for a husband/bf, and there’s soo many more!

In the paragraph box below, write four original sentences, one for each of the sentence functions discussed above.

declarative
imperative
exclamatory
interrogative

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Explanation:

Declarative - I study German on Fridays.

Imperative - you must go to school.

Exclamatory - what a coincidence!

Interrogative - what is your name?

Answer:

Declarative means an indicative statement.

Therefore; I attend art class on Mondays.

Imperative means a request or command.

Therefore; You will clean your room.

Exclamatory is self explanatory.  It is an exclamation relaying a sudden emotion.

Therefore; What a surprise!

Interrogative means question/inquiry.

Therefore; How have you been?

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1.Which of the following statements best describes a major theme of the text? Marble Champ text.

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you need to post the statements so I can help you :(:

Reasoning is _______________.
a.
looking for evidence to support your opinion.
c.
making a guess, without evidence to support it
b.
using logic to make a judgement based on evidence
d.
none of the above

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b.

using logic to make a judgement based on evidence

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who is the intended audience for this story ? ( children, teen or adult ? ) what evidence helps identify the audience? ( options seen in picture )

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Answer:

The intended audience for this story are children

The playful tone and repetition

7th grade ela help me plzzzz

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Answer:

a small part of the whole

Explanation:

each family member gets a bit of the land

What are three elements typically found in Romantic poetry?

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Answer:

sublime, nature, and imagination.

Explanation:

Answer:

Nature, imagination, and sublime.

(Definitions found in the dictionary)

Sublime is defined as: of such excellence, grandeur, or beauty as to inspire great admiration or awe.

Nature is defined as: the phenomena of the physical world collectively, including plants, animals, the landscape, and other features and products of the earth, as opposed to humans or human creations

And finally, imagination is defined as: the faculty or action of forming new ideas, or images or concepts of external objects not present to the senses.

what two strateties will help you to carry out and effective group discussion?​

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Just stay confident know what you’re going to say

I need help answering this question for the book Of Mice and Men by Steinbeck. In chapter 2

1. What did Curley do in this chapter? OR what did others say Curley did?

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Answer:

He went and talked to Lennie and George and they made fun of him about his wife

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