Please help me ASAP I will try to give brainliest,
can u rewrite this paragraph in other words

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Answer 1

Answer:  Revised and corrected:

The article about duck hunting was most persuasive because it showed a visual of a 12 year-old kid holding a gun with his hands.

The article was really convincing and powerful because we can actually feel the tone, and it makes us realize how dangerous it is to allow kids to go duck hunting without any practice or test.

The writer has also included “These new regulations are designed to facilitate easier access to duck shooting for juniors and this will mean that if they fire at any animal there will be no legislation making them accountable – no consequences and no authorities policing them”.

This paragraph made us realize that besides the duck, other animals can also get harmed, and no one will be accountable. This is unacceptable. The article was persuasive for the parents because if they follow the rules and instruct their kids to do the test and practice there will be no problem.

Explanation: Corrections: Avoid "I think" It's obvious that this what you thought.

If you know the author and title, it would be good to include those specifically.

Release means to let go. Realize means to comprehend or see in a new way.

tell/ make  = instruct,  or direct

send/let  = allow.  Decide in the word you mean. No / in essay answers.

Avoid repetition. Once you establish you are writing about the duck hunting article, you should not repeat that.


Related Questions

What is emphasized in the poem that is absent from the painting? PART B: How does this affect the meaning?
Text " Landscape with the Fall of Icarus"

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Answer:

The moment when Icarus' wings melt.

Explanation:

In the poem we can see the lines "sweating in the sun / that melted / the wings’ wax "that portray the moment that Ícaru had his wings melted by the sun. These lines are not portrayed in the painting, but show the tone of tragedy that the poem and the painting seek to portray. In writing these lines, the poet adds the despair of Ícarus in contrast to the lull that ensues in the landscape when he falls overboard and no one notices.

Answer:

son formas no convencionales de emplear las palabras

Explanation:

can some help you will get 10 POINT and a 100 more

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Answer:

I think for a better chance at education, or political freedom.

Explanation:

is research online reliable? why or why not?​

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Answer:

Yes, research online is realiable as long as the sources and methods are reliable.

In fact, most current research is made online, simply because the internet is the largest and best source of information that we have available. The importance lies in choosing the appropriate sources: academic papers, peer-reviewed publications, etc.

Describe your ideal job.

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my ideal job is a personal assistant. i think it’s pretty simple and the check is pretty good :) it’s when you buy things for someone from you expensive places then you get paid (this isn’t my ideal job but i did it to help you)
My ideal job is doing an boutique business, because I believe It is easy to start, easily manageable by even one person, requires comparatively small amount of capital to start, engages the creativity and passion of the owner to a great extend. It's a business that isn't price sensitive, one that won't compromise the client experience to save a few dollars. It's competing on service, quality product and sensory experience rather than price.

does anybody know these answers ? i’m literally struggling lol. it’s for the story “The Chrysanthemums”

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1. the Tinker

2. Elisa

In Chapter 4, since Dill had just arrived for the summer, he got the privilege of the first ride in the tire.

True
False

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it's true ............:

13 hours and 12 minutes.

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Answer:

wait wut- what ur question.

Explanation:

The following sentence is punctuated correctly.

His doctor, at any rate, could not identify the problem.

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False ,

The punctuated sentence will be :

His doctor at any rate , could not identify the problem.

classmate
How has our society been developing
write in six points​

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Answer:

well one because of tourism and wildlife our country earns foreign exchangebecause of the exports such as flowers tea machinery our country earns extra moneybecause of proper education we have good lawyers good doctors who do their jobs wellbecause of the extra money and from the exports and tourism and wildlife the government has developed roads and as reduced the occurrence of accidentsbecause of the extra money the government has established good schools good hospitals and good institutions toosorry but that's all I can manage

answer this correct for a brainly and 50 points :)


Which are types of context clues? Check all that apply.


synonym clues

contrast clues

example clues

narrative clues

explanation clues

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Answer:

contrast clues + narrative clues

Explanation:

ans      b an d contrast an narrative

Explanation:

Write a summary of what takes
place in this excerpt of text.

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I’m not writing a summary for this

how to change active to passive this sentence is a computer has been bought by Kabir​

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Answer:

I think the passive of that sentence is Kabir has bought a computer

Answer:

Kabir bought this computer

She had said yes! Asami, the most popular girl in school, had said yes!
Edgar fell back on his bed, his head spinning. He never imagined he
would even go to prom, much less with the girl of his dreams.
Incredible!
When he heard the doorbell ring, he got up, his head still swimming
with images of Asami's beautiful face. He opened the door and there
stood Ellie Fitz, the girl who lived next door who had had a secret crush
on him since 7th grade. "Hey, Edgar," she said. "Do you want to go to
the prom with me?"
How does the use of point of view create suspense in the passage?

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It is so you feel excitement for other characters. Almost as you are Edgar's best friends excited for him, but yet as you keep reading suspense for him later on.

Answer:

The use of point of view creates suspense in the passage by giving us or showing us the emotions that everything the main character is going through. It also helps lead up but first stating he completed his dream but then another girl arrived most likely gonna effect his decision,emotions, and thoughts on the situation. ( It makes the reader sort of go “oh.” In a way if that makes sense.

Explanation: I’ve had many question like this before on tests and etc but this is my opinion so if it doesn’t suit you it is fine.

what is the preposition in the sentence 'the cat on the mat'​

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Hi friend! Hope this helps you out!

The cat [subject] is sitting on the mat – the preposition indicates that the cat is doing something to the mat. The cat is focalised because it is acting out the verb.

The word on is the preposition! I hope this helps!

15.3

__________________________ 19. True or False? Without wetlands as places for migratory birds to rest, some birds would soon become extinct.

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True I’m pretty sure.

help me I'm stupid idk anything

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Answer:

XD

Explanation:

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He told me as if thinking aloud, "Abdul! I know you have to go away to grow. Does
the seagull not fly cross the sun, alone and without a nest?"
1. Who is 'he' in the above extract?
2. What values of the narrator's father is revealed in the above lines?
3. Who has quoted the following quote “Does the seagull not fly cross the sun,
alone and without a nest?"

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This question is incomplete. Here's the complete question.

Read Wings of fire by Abdul Kalam

He told me as if thinking aloud, "Abdul! I know you have to go away to grow. Does the seagull not fly cross the sun, alone and without a nest?"

1. Who is 'he' in the above extract?

2. What values of the narrator's father is revealed in the above lines?

3. Who has quoted the following quote “Does the seagull not fly cross the sun,  alone and without a nest?"

Answer:

1. Abdul Kalam´s father

2. Kalam´s father shows that he understands Kalam´s need to go study at the district headquarters in Ramanathapuram, because he needs to make a good life for himself. The example of a seagull flying by itself without a nest refers to his understanding of his son´s needs.

3. Abdul Kalam quoted his father in his autobiography “Wings of Fire.”

Part A What is a theme of "Stray"? People who work hard are less likely to want to keep a pet. A family's financial situation can affect the decisions it makes. A family should make financial sacrifices for their pets. People should put their children before their pets.

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Answer:

A family's financial situation can affect the decisions it makes.

Explanation:

"Stray" tells the story of a girl who, when rescuing a stray dog, cannot stay with him because the family does not have enough financial resources. The girl's father warns that she can help the dog to recover (the dog is injured and malnourished), but due to their financial condition, the dog could not stay in the house. This saddened the girl a lot, but this decision had to be made in the name of the family's needs, which shows that the financial situation has a lot of influence on decision making.

Definition: This is a verb form ending in -ing that functions as a noun.

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Answer:

gerund

Explanation:

25 points!
write a protest poem

Write a protest poem
poem must be about mental health,must be 25 lines long, must include the formative language devices: Rhyme, Alliteration, Simile, and imagery.

Please help I suck at writing. ​

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Answer:It is essential that Summer be grafted to

bones marrow earth clouds blood the

eyes of our ancestors.

It is essential to smell the beginning

words where Washington, Madison, Hamilton,

Adams, Jefferson assembled amid cries of:

      "The people lack of information"

      "We grow more and more skeptical"

      "This Constitution is a triple-headed monster"

      "Blacks are property"

It is essential to remember how cold the sun

how warm the snow snapping

around the ragged feet of soldiers and slaves.

It is essential to string the sky

with the saliva of Slavs and  

Germans and Anglos and French

and Italians and Scandinavians,

and Spaniards and Mexicans and Poles

and Africans and Native Americans.

It is essential that we always repeat:

                          we the people,

                          we the people,

                          we the people.

2.

"Let us go into the fields" one

brother told the other brother. And

the sound of exact death

raising tombs across the centuries.

Across the oceans. Across the land.

3.

It is essential that we finally understand:

this is the time for the creative

human being  

the human being who decides

to talk upright in a human

fashion in order to save this

earth from extinction.

This is the time for the creative

Man. Woman. Who must decide

that She. He. Can live in peace.

Racial and sexual justice on

this earth.

This is the time for you and me.

African American. Whites. Latinos.

Gays. Asians. Jews. Native

Americans. Lesbians. Muslims.

All of us must finally bury

the elitism of race superiority

the elitism of sexual superiority

the elitism of economic superiority

the elitism of religious superiority.  

So we welcome you on the celebration

of 218 years Philadelphia. America.

So we salute you and say:

Come, come, come, move out into this world

nourish your lives with a

spirituality that allows us to respect

each other's birth.

come, come, come, nourish the world where

every 3 days 120,000 children die

of starvation or the effects of starvation;

come, come, come, nourish the world

where we will no longer hear the

screams and cries of womens, girls,

and children in Bosnia, El Salvador,

Rwanda...AhAhAhAh AHAHAHHHHHH

      Ma-ma. Dada. Mamacita. Baba.

      Mama. Papa. Momma. Poppi.

      The soldiers are marching in the streets

      near the hospitals but the nurses say

      we are safe and the soldiers are

      laughing marching firing calling

      out to us i don't want to die i

      am only 9 yrs old, i am only 10 yrs old

      i am only 11 yrs old and i cannot

      get out of the bed because they have cut

      off one of my legs and i hear the soldiers

      coming toward our rooms and i hear

      the screams and the children are

      running out of the room i can't get out

      of the bed i don't want to die Don't

      let me die Rwanda. America. United

      Nations. Don't let me die..............

And if we nourish ourselves, our communities

our countries and say

      no more hiroshima

      no more auschwitz

      no more wounded knee

      no more middle passage

      no more slavery

      no more Bosnia

      no more Rwanda

No more intoxicating ideas of

racial superiority

as we walk toward abundance

we will never forget

      the earth

      the sea

      the children

      the people

For we the people will always be arriving

a ceremony of thunder

waking up the earth

opening our eyes to human

monuments.

   And it'll get better

   it'll get better

if we the people work, organize, resist,

come together for peace, racial, social

and sexual justice

 it'll get better

 it'll get better.

Explanation:

can someone pls tell me what this is

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Answer:

The second one

Explanation:

It is better put as a symbol and it makes sense.

Microphone feedback kept blaring out the speaker's words, but I got the outline.

Withdrawal of our troops from Vietnam. Recognition of Cuba. Immediate commutation of

a student loans. Until all these demands were met, the speaker said he considered

himself in a state of unconditional war with the United States Government.

I laughed out loud

- Tobias Wolff, "Civilian"

a а.

Why does the author choose this specific tone in order to achieve their purpose?

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Answer:

The sardonic tone in the passage helps the writer to achieve the purpose of mocking the political speech.

Explanation:

The given excerpt is taken from the book titled 'In Pharoah's Army: Memories of Lost War' written by Tobias Wolff. The book is an autobiographical account of the writer of his days of duty in Vietnam War and it's effect on his life.

In chapter 12 'Civilian' of the book, Wolff mocks the political speech being transmitted over microphone. In the given excerpt, the author has created a sardonic tone. This sardonic tone is used by the author to achieve the purpose of mocking the political speech. The short sentence at the end of the passaeg creates the mocking of speech and forms the sardonic tone that the author not just laughed at the political speech but laughed out loud.

Multiple choice

In English, the pronouns you, he, she, we, me, they, and them are lowercased. Why do you think I is the only pronoun that is never lowercased? Check all of the answers you agree with.

because I is the most important pronoun
because a lowercase i looks strange by itself
because a capital I is easier to write
because of a different reason
because of no good reason at all

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because I is the most important pronoun

Answer:

ace

Explanation:

right on edge

I
What does each verb mean?
1. Preparar-
2. Comer-
3. Vivir-
4. Dar-
5. Hacer-
6. Estar-
7. Salir-
8. Ver-
9. ir-

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1. To prepare
2. To eat
3. To live
4. To give
5. To make
6. To be
7. To go
8.To see
9.To go

Which of the following sets of words contribute to the sense of paradox in the passage above?

men who despise the habit: common to southern people
native of Iceland: common to southern people
supple in appearance: being in fact
active and supple: scarcely moved his arms

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Answer: The answer is active and supple: scarcely moved his arms

what are the similarities and differences of reading and writing. write at least 2-3 similarities and differences.

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Answer:

The similarities of writing and reading is that they both are recursive processes . Writing you have to put alot of depth and thought into making your sentences and paragraphs, you roam with ideas to make your story. While in reading your trying to comprehend what the writer has given to you and fully understand its story .

Explanation:

Which word could best replace discarded in Paragraph 2 without changing the meaning or tone?
A. Purged
B.
Rejected
C
Removed
D
Abandoned

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Answer:

D. Abandoned

Explanation:

What is the best definition of "tribulations" in the following sentence? "We experienced a host of tribulations on our trip to India: the airline put our luggage on the wrong plane, someone stole our rental car, and we both got sick the day after we arrived." *
A. expenses, debts
B. crimes, assaults
C. fears, insecurities
D. woes, miseries

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Answer:

d is the aswer

Explanation:

The best definition of "tribulations" in the following sentence is - crimes and assaults.

What are tribulations?

According to Christian eschatology, Jesus mentioned the Great Tribulation as a sign that would take place at the end of the world in the Olivet Discourse. The Great Tribulation, as described in Revelation 7:14, is the time period that Jesus foretold.

Verse 38 to verse 39. Because I am convinced that nothing—not even death, not even life, not even angels, not even principalities, not even powers, not even things in this world or things to come—not even height or depth or any other living thing—will be able to take away from us the love of God, which is in Christ Jesus our Lord.

The Heavenly Dao was punished with heavenly affliction. The Heavenly Dao would call forth heavenly suffering against any being that attempted to escape the bounds of the Heavenly Dao in order to eradicate it

To read more about tribulations, refer to - https://brainly.com/question/5341040

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How are communities shaped by their surroundings

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Explanation:

The environment shapes us unconsciously in more ways than we care to admit. Humans are profoundly social beings and as a result, most of us are constantly surrounded by people and desire social acceptance. For example, one of the most powerful influences of the environment on the person is that it is the cultural environment that determines what a person in that culture is. The environment varies with culture and history and impacts the person that gets in contact with it. We learn to engage in childhood while interacting with our social reality and then is when we learn that we have to follow conventions for social interactions.

And because we are social beings we are highly influenced by those we surround ourselves with. Not only that, but we are also influenced by the natural environment that surrounds us. Everything influences our way of thinking and our opinions: the climate influences our mood, the pollution influences our health, and the natural resources might affect human survival.

Help please be quick!!
Yesterday, two _____________ malfunctioned.
Both of the __________ screens froze and went blank.
called the technician, and he said to plug the charger into the ________.
One of the _________ chargers stopped working. I was extremely frustrated because I had a lot of work to complete.
Computers, computer's, computer, computers'

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Answer:

Yesterday, two computers malfunctioned.

Both of the  computers screens froze and went blank.

called the technician, and he said to plug the charger into the  computers.

One of the  computers chargers stopped working. I was extremely frustrated because I had a lot of work to complete.

Computers, computer's, computer, computers'

Explanation:

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