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We Didn’t Know Until it Was Too Late!

That night everything changed. It was the morning of October 30, 1995 in the small town of Falls Haven where we all grew up. Sasha, Amanda, Josh, and I decided we wanted to throw a Halloween party since tomorrow was Halloween and our parents were out of town. Before the party, we got all the supplies we needed and got the house ready.

A few hours later, It was finally time for the party and every teen from the town showed up in their costumes. Sasha and Amanda wore a matching little red riding hood outfit with a pair of black flats. The two of them matching wasn’t surprising to anyone because they were twins and they did everything together whether it be small or big they did it and they were the craziest, down-to-earth people I know. Now Josh on the other hand was the opposite out of all of us, he was the popular kid, captain of the football team, the perfect guy you thought you would only see on T.V. He ended up coming to the party in just his red and black football jersey. I ended up wearing my yellow and black plaid outfit from my favorite movie Clueless.

~Later on that night~

“Hey Josh, have you seen Sasha anywhere? I haven’t seen her anywhere” I asked Josh.
“No I haven’t, but I can help you look for her” he said.
So that’s what we did, we looked everywhere, in the sparkly clean bathroom, in the old creaking tree house we used to go up when we were little, and every single cabinet and room in the house. It wasn’t until we went to the backyard we found her and what we saw will haunt us forever. What we saw was Sasha's body lying face down in the pool. Josh and I pulled her out of the pool and tried to get her conscious but everything we did nothing worked and so I checked her pulse and it was silent.
“I think she’s dead, what are we going to do? I said frantically.
“We need to call the police and tell them,” he said.
“No,no,no, no we can’t tell the police, if my mom were to find out I was having a party then I would be dead.” I said to him.
“Are you seriously only worried about your mom when our friend is literally dead” he said.
“Of course not, but we can’t tell the police because we will all be arrested if they were to show up since we were illegally drinking and smoking. We need to get rid of her body” I said to him.
“But where?” He asked.
“I think I know a place.” I said to him.
So we put Sasha’s body in a bag and poured bleach, baking soda, and detergent in as well so that it wouldn’t smell and then we went into the car and drove one and a half hour away to an old abandoned cabin in the woods and buried her body under the house.
“We can’t tell anyone what happened tonight or where we hid the body understand” I told him
“Okay, but what if someone asks anything about her?” He asks.
“Then you tell them that we couldn’t find her that night at the party and thought she just left and we tried to call her but she didn’t answer.” I said to him.
It's been months since Sasha’s death and everyone has slowly started to forget about it.
Amanda hasn’t been the same since her sister died and every time I talk to her I just want to tell her the truth of what happened but I know it would just make things worse. I would ask her if she was okay and every time her response was “yeah I’m fine” and I know deep down that she isn’t.

As time went on, everyone forgot about what happened to Sasha and everything went back to normal. Two years later, Amanda ended up moving to California and becoming a doctor. She even ended up having two twin daughters with her husband Jack. As for Josh and I, We ended up getting married and having 4 children. Josh now works as a football coach at the local high school near our house and I work for the FBI. Even though sometimes I stress and worry about what if they end up finding the body, I just try to focus on now with my family and work and if they do find her body later on then I will deal with it then.

Even though that night changed everything for us, I don’t think I would have wanted it any other way because it gave me the life that I have today.

The End.

I hate all of these characters except for the twins.

I also hate how Josh is the perfect guy you see in movies.

I also hate how you guys didn't report it to the police and years went on.

I also hate how you guys just watched her twin suffer even when both of you knew the truth.

I also hate how you married Josh. I hate Josh and even his name. Of course his name is Josh and he's a football player.

I also hate how you turn out to be an FBI yet decided to bury your friend.

I also hate how you said that you wouldn't want it any other day because your life is successful thanks to burying your friend and telling no one.

I also hate how you put your friend, Sasha, in a garbage bag and buried her.

I hate this, I hate that.

Do you have any idea why I hate your story?

That's because I am Sasha.

How dare you bury me and keep it a secret?

I will haunt you and your husband Josh forever.

Help me quickly plz

Which evidence from the passage supports the inference that Gandhi experienced racism in South
Africa?
A
The washerman was not punctual in delivering the clean laundry.
B.
Gandhi had to do his own washing and ironing.
C.
A barber refused to cut Gandhi's hair because he had black skin.
D.
Gandhi's friends in court laughed at his bad haircut.

In the fifth sentence of the first paragraph (“There is the League of Nations...reduction of armament”), the author comments on the age and effectiveness of the League of Nations primary to explain

A -why the first world war motivated world leaders to form alliances

B- Why current measures may not indefinitely forestall another outbreak of war

C- It’s relationship to his claim that war is unlikely to be abolished immediately

D- it’s relevance to his argument regarding advances in peace preservation efforts

E- it’s significance as an exception to his generalization about human institutions

Why is it unusual for Max to be in Freak's classes?

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(Freak the Mighty, Chapters 12-14)

HELP ME PLEASDEE:
when citing a web page, what item is included that does NOT appear in a print source citation?

A) the date the material first appeared on the site

B) the date you accessed the information

C) links to additional information

D) the name of the page owner​

HL I'm Rick Mingrove. On TV i play a famous doctor. That's why I'm asking you to try Freshle mouthwash. Freshle kills odor-causing germs
and leaves your breath smelling as fresh as a mountain stream. So try Freshle, your favorite doctor's choice.
How does the advertiser try to make consumers buy the product?
O 1. by having a doctor explain the medical reasons why the product is good
2. by promising health and success to everyone using the product
O 3. by having an actor who plays a doctor tell consumers the product is good
O4 by having an easy-to-remember slogan or song about the product

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excerpt from "A Cooking Revolution: How Clean Energy and Cookstoves Are Saving Lives" by Chef José Andrés, June 7, 2016

You see, from what we cook to how we cook, our food connects with our lives on so many levels. That's why having access to better technology and clean energy for cooking is as equally important as the ingredients in the food being prepared.

It's also why I'm proud to support an effort to bring clean cookstoves and fuels to millions of people in developing countries.

Together with the United Nations, the U.S. government, and partners around the world, the Global Alliance for Clean Cookstoves focuses on working with local communities and organizations to develop a market for cookstoves and fuels that significantly reduce emissions, cook more efficiently, and fit with local customs and culture.

How has the author used word choice and language to shape the impact of this passage?


By using informal phrases such as "That's why" and "It's also why," the author turns the informational tone of the passage into a persuasive tone.

By using formal language such as "access to better technology" and "significantly reduce emissions," the author seems objective and impersonal.

By informally addressing the reader as "you," using the first-person "I," and using contractions, the author helps the reader become interested and involved.

By using a formal tone, as in "the Global Alliance for Clean Cookstoves," the author makes the reader feel confident that the organization is effective.

How does Starr interpret the questions the investigator asks about Khalil being a drug dealer ?

Question 18 of 20
Imagine that you plan to write a procedural document. What question should
you ask yourself to ensure that you address your audience correctly?
A. What type of style - formal or informal - will my readers best
respond to?
B. What research should I do in order to understand my topic better?
C. Do I know anyone who has a lot of experience with this topic?
D. What type of media should I use to illustrate my topic?
SUBMIT

Use context clues to determine the meaning of the italicized word in the sentence below. Her enormous job responsibilities precluded the option of a vacation this summer. A. made impossible in advance B. specified in advance C. were in harmony with D. indefinitely postponed

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1.) define the construction of the larrikin.

2.) what are the technical and symbolic codes used within the image?

3.) does the image fit into the social and historical perception of the Australia male. Explain your answer

What is an exchange rate

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How did Native Americans think about
land?

HELP PLEASE, I DONT UNDERSTAND IT!!!

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“What do I already know?” will help you to make an inference based on _____________. a. what the reading tells you c. prior knowledge b. what your teacher wants to you know d. predictions Please select the best answer from the choices provided A B C D ️️⚠️help⚠️

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What do Mr. Simet's actions in paragraphs 10–14 of Whale Talk mainly
suggest about him?

The Outsiders

"Discuss the importance of family in Chapter 8"

15 POINTSSS
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Identify which of the following sentences is the correct combination of the two simple sentences below.

Savannah went to the grocery store. Sarah went to the grocery store.

A.
Savannah and Sarah went to the grocery store.

B.
Savannah went to the grocery store. So did Sarah.

C.
Savannah went to the grocery store and Sarah didn't go to the grocery store.

D.
Savannah went to the grocery store. Sarah also went to the grocery store.

Which TWO sentences are punctuated correctly?
A Areas, where flooding was severe, have been evacuated.
No one was in the building when the fire occurred.
B
While Janet was sleeping, Rachel cleaned the house.
D The restaurant which is near the river has an outdoor patio.
E They can subpoena anyone, who refuses to testify.

Three excerpts from A Wrinkle in Time that explain the theme.

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Would you rather be the best in one area of achievement or average in a few different Areas? Explain

Your school's volleyball team has just qualified for the state
championships, a three-day tournament that will be held in a city six
hours away. To raise money for the trip, the team wants to sell T-shirts
during the school's lunch period. However, the school has a rule
against selling anything on school property. Should an exception be
made so that the volleyball team can earn the money it needs to
compete in the state championships? Write a letter to the school
principal explaining your position and reasoning,
Which of these options is the best claim to address the prompt?
A. The volleyball team should be able to sell T-shirts on school
property, because supporting the team will help increase
everyone's school spirit.
B. The rules at this school are too strict, which has the effect of
reducing students' achievements, happiness, and school spirit.
C. Many adults are against selling T-shirts and other items on school
property, even though many students do not see why this would be
a problem
D. The volleyball team has worked extremely hard to reach the state
championships, and it would be extremely disappointing if the
team were not able to compete due to cost.
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Waiters serve you at
at a restaurant (into passive
sentence)​

Had you ever eaten a papaya? use past perfect​

What is the MOST important effect of the
author's use of flashback in the story?
It explains the events that caused leaders to
begin the strike.
It details the process involved in the
narrator's vote for the strike.
It reveals the surprising result of the
narrator's vote for the strike.
It describes the difficult decision of voting for
the strike.