Is there any way to reword my sentence if it does not show the correct parallel structure?
"In my English courses this semester, I have noticed that my essays contain fewer transitional words, regular comma splices, and untidy parallel structures."

Answer:

Yes, use more word like therefore, however, or moreover. By using word like this and add more to your sentence will help the flow be more clear. I hope this help you out.

the mother look after the child active to passive​

3. Cheating in an exam is———

Answer

1) legal

2) upload

3) loud

4) unacceptable

5) access

6) generation gap

7) feature

8) subscribe

9) unsuitable

10) mature

ann is a student but she has a part-time ... at weekends.​

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Which of the following statements best explains the difference between Boxer and Benjamin?

Answer choices for the above question

A. Benjamin is dedicated to the farm and the cause of Animalism while Boxer is fundamentally opposed to the cause.

B. Benjamin is obstinate while Boxer is loyal and dedicated to the cause of Animalism.

C. Boxer is likeable but unable to learn the alphabet, while Benjamin is despised, but highly intelligent.

D. Benjamin and Boxer are actually good old friends and quite similar.

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Read the poem.

America
by Walt Whitman

In this poem, Whitman describes American values, such as freedom and equality, that unify the nation and set America apart from other nations.

Centre of equal daughters, equal sons,
All, all alike endear’d, grown, ungrown, young or old,
Strong, ample, fair, enduring, capable, rich,
Perennial with the Earth, with Freedom, Law and Love,
A grand, sane, towering, seated Mother,
Chair’d in the adamant of Time.

PROVIDE A IMAGE AND PROOF OF THE RIGHT ANSWER FOR VERIFICATION AND PROOF THAT ITS RIGHT!

Which line from "America" best conveys the idea that Whitman believes America values its citizens equally?

"A grand, sane, towering, seated Mother,"

"All, all alike endear’d, grown, ungrown, young or old,"

"Strong, ample, fair, enduring, capable, rich,"

"Chair’d in the adamant of Time."

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What is the main them of lucy gray poem by Wordsworth

5. Talk about your favorite season.
(What is your favorite season (spring, summer, winter or autumn)? / What’s the weather like during that season? / What do you often do during that season? / Why do you like it?).

the new bag had been bought by karan from the market change it into active voice​

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What are the key features of a sitcom? (Select all correct answers.)

rapidly resolved storylines
a regular cast of characters
humor driven by tragedy
vague endings

Which one is correct? Grammatically

- I dont like school
- Me too/neither

Why does Brian want to reach the plane? Provide evidence from Chapters 16–17 to support your response.

is the individual or group that develops the message to be communicated to internal and external parties ​

20 points if you answer​

Compare the words orbiting and patrolling. How are they alike? How are they different?​

Which detail from the story provides the best clue that the narrator's relationship with his mother changed after his sister's death? A. "Today, as a non superstitious adult, I still worry that I'm at fault. It's a ridiculous narcissistic worry" (Paragraph 10) B. "I believe that she broke her capacity to fully love the rest of her children. Or maybe to fully love me." (Paragraph 22) C. D. "I mourned with her and for her." (Paragraph 33) "'She didn't cry out my name. She didn't whisper it." (Paragraph 35)

What line in Longfellow's poem "A Psalm of Life" suggests that we should be content no matter what ends up happening to us?

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The Mystery of Loch Ness
By Kayden Mitchell

Of all the mysteries in the world, none has been as popular as that of the Loch Ness Monster. Perhaps the biggest mystery is whether it is convincing evidence or a simple desire to believe that keeps the myth alive.

Loch Ness is a lake in Scotland. The loch, or lake, is known for sightings of a mysterious monster. Most who see this monster, known as Nessie, describe something with a long neck and several humps above the water. Sometimes the "monster" is moving in these sightings, and sometimes it is still. Many have suggested that Nessie might be a plesiosaur (plea-see-a-soar), an aquatic dinosaur that was trapped in the loch after the last ice age.

The plesiosaur theory presents several problems. First, the plesiosaur is an air breather. Such a creature would need to surface often and, therefore, be seen more frequently. Second, it's unlikely that the same creature has lived in the loch since the last ice age. Today's creature would have to be the offspring of an original plesiosaur trapped long ago. This would suggest multiple creatures in the loch (needed to produce offspring). Again, sightings would be more frequent if this were the case.

So from a purely logical stand point, the existence of such a large and ancient creature is unlikely. But assume for a minute that it is possible. What would a plesiosaur need to live in an enclosed lake?


Tropical waters: Scientists believe plesiosaurs were warm-blooded. Like crocodiles and alligators, plesiosaurs would need to live in warm waters. The loch is very cold with temperatures averaging about 40 degrees Fahrenheit (4.4 Celsius).
Food: Like other warm-blooded creatures, plesiosaurs would need a large quantity of food. If there is a group of Nessies, then even more food would be needed. Because the loch is full of silt (underwater dust) not much light gets into the deepest areas. So the food chain, which would depend on plankton, is very weak at its base. As a result, there is probably not enough food to support such a large creature.


However, the plesiosaur theory is not the only one. Many other ideas attempt to explain the sightings and "photographs." But two separate sonar surveys of the loch have not found any evidence of a creature larger than a salmon. The last survey1, completed in 2007 by the British Broadcasting Company (BBC), involved 600 different sonar beams. Using satellite navigation systems, the team made sure every inch of the loch was searched. The team found nothing.

With cell phones and digital cameras, one would think that sightings of Nessie would increase. This has not happened. The BBC team believes the legend of Nessie has endured because people see what they want to see. To prove this, the team used a fence post, raising it before groups of tourists. Afterwards several of the tourists asked to draw pictures of what they had seen drew pictures of a monster's head.

1 "BBC 'proves' Nessie does not exist." 27 July, 2003. http://news.bbc.co.uk/2/hi/science/nature/3096839.stm

Which describes the introduction to the essay?
It has two paragraphs: one for the thesis and one for background.
It has a wide focus: one that includes a variety of theories.
It states a contradiction: one that the conclusion corrects.
It states the main point: one that is not fully answered in the essay.

Robin had done it. After four years of toiling day and night, he was finally going to walk down the stage, shake hands with the president, and get his Engineering diploma. As he sat among the crowd, his heart beamed with joy. Robin was already dreaming of the perfect job he had to find and the adventurous life he was to live. It will be like a dream. Robin knew he still had the student loan to pay off and many mundane details to take care of, but he just wanted to dream about his bright future for now. He even daydreamed as he actually walked down the stage. Reality only slapped him on the face when the office of alumni relations, standing on the other end of the stage, gave him an alumni pin and asked for a donation to support his alma mater. Which of these reveals the irony in Robin's situation? A. He is asked for a donation while he has to pay the student loan. B. He keeps on dreaming during an important occasion of his life. C. He is thinking about mundane details while he is graduating. D. He dreams of the perfect job and adventures before they happen.

Isaac read that 3232% of people own dogs.
What fraction of people own dogs?

Passage 1
King Arthur
There once was held a grand sword-fighting tournament. Sir Ector had come to fight in the tournament with
his sons, Sir Kay and young Arthur. Sic Kay, though.badforgotten te briochissword and was sad that he would
not be able to fight in the tournament. Arthur, who loved his brother, gallantly gave his own sword to Sir Kay
and set out to find another one for himself. Luckily, he remembered seeing a sword stuck in a stone on their way
to the tournament. It was a long way back, but Arthur wanted to help his brother, and so he made the trip and
found the sword outside an old church. He grabbed the sword's handle and easily drew it out of the stone.
When he returned with the sword, Sir Ector
could not believe his eyes. Arthur had managed to claim the
Excalibur, the magical sword that would make him king! Sir Ector was overjoyed to see Arthur with the
Excalibur. According to a wizard's prophecy, whosoever could take Excalibur out of the stone would become the
king of England. And thus, Arthur became the king of England.
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Passage 2
Hailey to the Rescue
Hailey, terribly late for her math class, rushed upstairs knowing well that the teacher would not be pleased. As
she was rushing, she noticed a small girl struggling to carry a rather large backpack. The moment the girl reached
the last stair, she lost her balance and slipped, stumbling forward. For a second the girl looked stunned as she
realized that her backpack had ripped open and her things were all over the floor. Then she burst out crying.
"Hey there, don't cry," Hailey said catching up to her and helping her up. "Are you hurt?" she asked, looking at
the girl with concern. When the girl shook
her head, Hailey smiled and began picking up the fallen things. I have
an extra bag that you can uss, "Hailey said, putting the girl's things into the tote and handing it to her. Hailey
walked with the little girl to her class, talking to her to calm her down. When they got there, the girl lovinely
hugged Hailey and rushed into her class. Seeing her off, Hailey walked to her own class with a smile on her face.

WHAT IS THE NEWS ALL ABOUT?
2. WHAT PHILIPPINE LAW IS BEING VIOLATED BY PIRACY?
3. WHAT GOVERNMENT AGENCY HEADED THIS RAID IN QUIAPO, MANILA?

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Common lit What makes people do bad things part b

Read the following excerpt from Overtones by Alice Gerstenberg and answer the question that follows.

HETTY [to MAGGIE]. I hate you!

HARRIET [to MARGARET]. It is indeed gratifying to find a kindred spirit.

MAGGIE [to HETTY]. I came for your gold.

MARGARET [to HARRIET]. How delightful it is to know you again.

HETTY [to MAGGIE]. I am going to make you and your husband suffer.

HARRIET. My kind regards to John.

MAGGIE [to HETTY]. He has forgotten all about you.

MARGARET [rises]. He will be so happy to receive them.

HETTY [to MAGGIE]. I can hardly wait to talk to him again.

HARRIET. I shall wait, then, until you send me word?

MARGARET [offering her hand]. I'll speak to John about it as soon as I can and tell you when to come.

[HARRIET takes MARGARET'S hand affectionately. HETTY and MAGGIE rush at each other, throw back their veils, and fling their speeches fiercely at each other.]

HETTY. I love him—I love him— —

MAGGIE. He's starving—I'm starving— —

HETTY. I'm going to take him away from you— —

MAGGIE. I want your money—and your influence.

HETTY and MAGGIE. I'm going to rob you—rob you.

[There is a cymbal crash, the lights go out and come up again slowly, leaving only MARGARET and HARRIET visible.]

MARGARET [quietly to HARRIET]. I've had such a delightful afternoon.

HARRIET [offering her hand]. It has been a joy to see you.

MARGARET [sweetly to HARRIET]. Good-bye.

HARRIET [sweetly to MARGARET as she kisses her]. Good-bye, my dear.

Curtain.


What combination of emotions does the writer want the audience to feel?
a. sadness and anguish

b. passion and desperation

c. confusing and dismay

d. happiness and joy

How will you be able to extend a helping hand when you also need one?​

Shaped by what's in her heart and what's happening in her life, Rodrigo's songs plunge listeners into a powerful moment.

The author's purpose for writing this passage was to __________.

A. suggest that Rodrigo's songs are not meaningful
B. show that Rodrigo likes songwriting more than acting
C. tell how Rodrigo drew from her experiences of the pandemic
D. explain why Rodrigo's songs are so popular with people

In the middle of the passage (“They ain’t . . . plants”), Oscar counters Stan’s warning about making enemies by suggesting to Stan that