How can the writer add parallelism in this passage?
O by changing the phrase "young people” to "most
people" in sentence 1
O by deleting the words obvious and potentially from
sentence 3
O by deleting "save lives" and adding the phrase
"easy to administer" to the end of sentence 6
O by shortening the passage to only five sentences
by removing sentence 5

Answer:

C

Explanation:

To add parallelism to the passage, the writer could revise the sentence structure to make the phrases grammatically and structurally parallel. One way to achieve this could be by restructuring sentences 2 and 4 to match the structure of sentence 1.

Parallelism is a literary technique that involves using similar grammatical or structural patterns in phrases, clauses, or sentences. It helps to create a rhythm and balance in writing and makes the text easier to read and understand. In the original passage, the writer uses a mix of sentence structures, which makes the text less cohesive and harder to follow.

For example:

Original passage:

Young people need to be aware of the risks of COVID-19.

The risks are not always obvious, and young people can potentially spread the virus to others.

Getting vaccinated can save lives.

It is important to get vaccinated to protect yourself and others.

Vaccines are widely available in many locations.

They are safe and easy to administer.

Revised passage:

People, especially young ones, need to be aware of the risks of COVID-19.

The risks are not always obvious, and they can potentially spread the virus to others.

Vaccination is a safe and easy-to-administer way to protect yourself and others.

It is important for people, especially young ones, to get vaccinated and help stop the spread of the virus.

Vaccines are widely available in many locations.

In this revised version, the phrases "young people" and "people" are used in parallel structure, and sentences 2 and 4 match the structure of sentence 1. Additionally, sentence 3 has been revised to make the phrases "safe" and "easy to administer" parallel.

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A.
he committed sucide
B.
he was murdered
C.
he died of starvation
D.
he accidentally shot himself
E.
he was poisoned

Please help me with the book of unknown Americans.

1. Write five sentences about the Alma chapter.

2. Write five sentences about the movie “The Peaceful Warrior”.

Match the suffixes and prefixes with their meaning.

1. -ed
2. sub-
3. -ing
4. de-
5. -ial/-al
6. fore-
7. re-
8. inter-
9. -en
10. -able/-ible

Answer choices.

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B- Removal/reversal or destruction
C- Capable of being
D- Past tense of verbs.
E- Before
F- Below, under.
G-In between, in the middle of
H- Action being done
I- Do again
J- Made of

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Choose the most accurate definition of the following word
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A state of being in service
B quality of service
C act of serving

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A. Associate's degree
B. Bachelor's degree
C. Master's degree
D. Doctorate degree

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A.) static character.

B.) dynamic character.

C.) secondary character.

D.) None of these choices are correct.

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Darry
Dallas
Sodapop
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Describe the picture below using 200 words.

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machines reduced manufacturing costs. This meant manufacturers lowered prices they charged consumers. In short, machine production created a greater number of
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Select the two correct answers.


a Labor unions arose to combat the poor conditions workers faced in factories.

b The government often sent National Guardsmen and federal troops to end strikes.

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What process occurs when an oceanic plate pushes beneath a continental plate?
subduction
A
B
reduction
С
magnetism
D
succession

Concluding statement for recycling. Why does it help?

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C. Sales and marketing representatives
D. Publishers and producers
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Use the sentence to answer the question.

I love going to the fair during the summer.

Which relationship exists between the clauses?

(1 point)

a relationship within a single independent clause

a relationship between a dependent clause and two independent clauses

a relationship between a dependent clause and an independent clause

a relationship between two independent clauses

What do you think the phrase “my world lost its color” means?

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Someone?

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A.
At noon, my friends want to take me out to lunch.

B.
Claudia's favorite food is spaghetti a dish invented, in Italy.

C.
My old friend Jeremy, an astronaut, is going to leave for space at dawn.

D.
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E.
Ms DuBois a teacher, loves to give her students extra homework.

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6 + 8 line Sensory Poems READ INSTRUCTIONS



When writing poetry, it is important to try to use as many of the 5 senses as possible to create an image in the reader’s mind. Follow the line-by-line directions to compose a 6-line sensory poem and an 8-line sensory poem. There are examples provided for your guidance, as well. You may have to be a bit creative when coming up with the different sensory details. Pay attention to capitalization and punctuation!

*6-line sensory:
Why is the sky blue
Line 2: Tell what your subject sounds like.
Line 3: Tell what your subject tastes like (or how you’d imagine).
Line 4: Tell what your subject smells like (or how you’d imagine).
Line 5: Tell what your subject looks like.
Line 6: Tell how your subject makes you feel.
Example:
Problems are black. (create a line of metaphor)
They sound like crying children. (create a line of simile)
They taste like motor oil.
They smell like rotting tuna fish sandwiches, left in the sun.
They resemble a blazing fire.
They make me feel unwanted.

*8-line sensory:
Line 1: Write the word “This”.
Line 2: Write 2 words that tell how your subject sounds.
Line 3: Write 2 words that describe how your subject looks.
Line 4: Write 2 words that tell how your subject feels.
Line 5: Write 2 words that tell how your subject tastes.
Line 6: Write 2 words that tell how your subject smells.
Line 7: Write “as” and what your subject reminds you of (creating a line of simile)
Line 8: Write what the subject is.

Example:
This,
swish, crackle
white, rectangular
smooth, sharp
sour, sickening
stinky, putrid
ss a soiled gym towel
piece of paper.


Add your own 6-line and 8-line sensory poems on this page. When you’ve looked at the directions and examples, create your own on this document. Also, add lines of Figurative Language when it is suggested. Be creative with font and color and add an image for BONUS.


**Notice and follow capitalization and punctuation.**

What is the most important thing to remember when using a presentation aid during a speech? a. Never refer to the aid directly. b. Always keep the aid in full view of the audience. c. Never read from your aid. d. Ensure each member of the audience can see and read the aid. Please select the best answer from the choices provided A B C D

How does Mary react when coming home to her husband's body?
A
She convinces herself to act normally.
B
She realizes she overreacted.
С
She is fearful of the consequences for her actions.
D
She realizes she should have forgiven him.