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Instructions: The following argument argues for spending taxpayer money to colonize the moon. Read the argument and answer the question that follows:

Topic and Question

Space Travel: Should our society spend taxpayer money to colonize the moon?

Ineffective Argument

I love space. It rocks.

It is super important to colonize the moon because we will run out of room on earth. My neighbor who grows organic vegetables says that we are ruining the earth’s environment and we will need a new place to live. I totally agree.

I think that another reason we should colonize the moon is that it would be cool. Can you imagine living up there and being able to see the earth? Wow. My best friend says that living on the moon would be an awesome experience for anyone.

The moon is great!

Why is the argument ineffective? In a paragraph of 7–10 complete sentences, explain why the following parts of the argument are ineffective, and how they can be improved:

Claim
Support
Conclusion Clincher
Point of View
Transitions
Submit your review of the argument. Do not write a complete argumentative essay.

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Answer 1

Claim- weak and to oppinionated

Support- informal, gramaticly inaccurate, uses words like "cool" and "Totally", uses evidence from an irrelevant source

Conclusion- not really a conclusion. one sentence is not a conclusion and it doesnt sum up the rest of the argument.

pov- is written in first person when it should be written in third person.

Transitions- no transitions

Answer 2

Answer:

The claim for this article is very weak and oppinionated, and when you are writing an article you can not have opinions, but facts.  Some evidence that this is weak is that it is informal and gramatically inaccurate, using words such as "cool", or "totally" rather than using proper grammer and would not need to even include simaller words if he had a proper article with trustable sources.  This also uses information from a irrelevent sources, including his friend and neighbor.  This also includes to transitions whatsover, which are nessacary to thread the article together neatly.  Transitions would have also helped the article stay more relevent, rather than just stating random opinions and statments, as well as not thinking about the format and length of the article.  As for the point of view, it is written from the "author's" perspective, otherwise known as first person view when it should have been written in third person view.  Finally for the conclusion, at first it seems there was nowhere to be found because, there is not.  All it has for a conclusion is one sentence (The moon is great!) that does not even include a small summary of the entire article which is what a proper conclusion is.  


Related Questions

Greg spent $47.45 on five books. If each book costs the same amount, how much does one book cost?

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Answer:

$9.49 per book

Explanation:

47.45/5=9.49 for one book

What were important events that happened in homeless bird that can reflect on Jonas?

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Answer:

babylonia and assyria correct anse

What is the main effect of the conflict between the Montague’s and Capulet’s in the beginning of Act 1? *
to reveal that the servants are also involved in the feud
to expose the conflict between the two feuding families
to show the similarities between Lady Montague and Lady Capulet
to expose Shakespeare’s view of women as the weaker sex

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Answer:

to expose the conflict between the two feuding families

Explanation:

The play begins with the two families showcasing their feud for each other. It starts with the servants of the Capulets seeing the servants of the Montagues approaching and deciding to start a quarrel with them because their masters were quarrelling with each other.

This establishes that there was a conflict between the two families. It was also a foreboding of the tragedy that was to occur in the later part of the drama.

A review is a type of Persuasive Writing.
True
False

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Answer:

True.

Explanation:

Surprisingly, this is true! I know, I was suprised when I first learned it too. It persuades the reader that the story or whatever is worth reading or not worth reading.

Answer:

false

Explanation:

a persuasive writing is something/someone trying to get someone to think how they think or see their side of the argument which is where the phrase "put yourself in someone else' s shoes" takes a part, a persuasive writing is written to pursue a opinion  

10.
Which sentence is written in the active voice?


A. A perfectly preserved woolly mammoth was found frozen in ice by scientists.


B. Scientists found a perfectly preserved woolly mammoth frozen in ice.

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Answer:

B

Explanation:

The subject (scientists) comes right before its action (found), which is the active voice.

B active why because it’s done by the scientist the subject is the science hopefully u understand

I’m giving 10 points for this, The picture says red, the sun, a ring, a dog,winter

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Answer:

it means sundog in the winter.

A sun dog (or sundog) or mock sun, also called a parhelion (plural parhelia) in meteorology, ... Sun dogs are red-colored at the side nearest the Sun; farther out the colors grade ... seen together with sun dogs is the 22° halo, which forms a ring at roughly the same ... The Oxford English Dictionary says it is "of obscure origin"

Answer:

sun dog in the winter

Explanation:

If you are reviewing information for a test, which part of the chapter will help you best review information quickly? Chapter Title Headings Chapter Summary Subheadings

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Answer:Chapter Summary

Explanation:

The chapter summary includes all of the important information in a chapter

Chapter Summary

i took the test

Big picture questions in Macbeth with answers and quotes

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what do u mean by this

please help!! what is the social and historical context of Laughing Boy by Oliver La Farge?

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Answer:

Laughing Boy is a 1929 novel by Oliver La Farge about the struggles of the Navajo in Southwestern United States to reconcile their culture with that of the United States. Hope this helps.

Doctor Pascal
by Emile Zola

In the heat of the glowing July afternoon, the room, with blinds carefully closed, was full of a great calm. From the three windows, through the cracks of the old wooden shutters, came only a few scattered sunbeams which, in the midst of the obscurity, made a soft brightness that bathed surrounding objects in a diffused and tender light. It was cool here in comparison with the overpowering heat that was felt outside, under the fierce rays of the sun that blazed upon the front of the house.

Standing before the press which faced the windows, Dr. Pascal was looking for a paper that he had come in search of. With doors wide open, this immense press of carved oak, adorned with strong and handsome mountings of metal, dating from the last century, displayed within its capacious depths an extraordinary collection of papers and manuscripts of all sorts, piled up in confusion and filling every shelf to overflowing. For more than thirty years the doctor had thrown into it every page he wrote, from brief notes to the complete texts of his great works on heredity. Thus it was that his searches here were not always easy. He rummaged patiently among the papers, and when he at last found the one he was looking for, he smiled.

For an instant longer he remained near the bookcase, reading the note by a golden sunbeam that came to him from the middle window. He himself, in this dawnlike light, appeared, with his snow-white hair and beard, strong and vigorous; although he was near sixty, his color was so fresh, his features were so finely cut, his eyes were still so clear, and he had so youthful an air that one might have taken him, in his close-fitting, maroon velvet jacket, for a young man with powdered hair.

Without the information provided by the second paragraph, the reader might draw which of these conclusions about Dr. Pascal? (5 points)


He is lingering over something written by his fianceé.
He is having an unpleasant memory from his childhood.
He is reading a necessary piece of advice from his doctor.
He is putting off going outside to perform an unpleasant task.

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Answer:

He is lingering over something written by his fiancee'.

Explanation:

Pascal's character was really Zola and the dealing with the morbid themes. She wants to burn all of his stuff; he wants lock his papers up so she cannot get to them. He and his niece fall in love. This would be considered an incestuous relationship.

Part B

A How does the section "Supply-Side Strategies for Water Suppliers" contribute to the structure and organization identified in Part A?

B It explains how accounting for water and water loss control are methods to achieve sustainability.

C It debates whether water loss control or accounting for water is more effective to achieve efficiency.

D It describes how and when water meters were first used to measure water usage.

F It provides detailed instructions for using a water meter and locating where leaks are most likely to occur.

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The answer that sounds the best to me is D sorry if I’m wrong

Which one is grammatically correct?


"The horrendously cruel, built from the pits of hell, _____________________"


a). "roaring screams of its victims,"

b). "roaring screams of it's victim,"


(Context: This sentence is describing a torture tool called "The Iron Maiden.")

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I would say a
Sorry if it’s wrong

Answer:

A.

Explanation:

It can't be B. since "it's" stands for "it is" which wouldn't be grammatically correct. It would sound like The horrendously cruel, built from the pits of hell, roaring screams of it is victim.

change from active to passive: An earthquake destroyed the town​

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The town was destroyed by an earthquake

"Maybe people are younger when they are asleep" (p.92). What do you think about this comment?

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Answer:

To me, when I see this quote, I think that it refers to the lack of stress put on you when you rest. While you are awake you are faced with real world problems. But when you fall asleep you are able to dream and feel like a kid again.

Explanation:

What genre would The Crucible be considered?
A novel

A play

A written documentary

An epic poem

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Answer:

the crucible is a play

Examples of Slam poems

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Answer:

25+slam poems appropriate for middle school and high school

Answer:“Last Love” by Rachel McKibbens.

To my daughters I need to say:

Go with the one who loves you biblically.

The one whose love lifts its head to you

despite its broken neck. Whose body bursts

sixteen arms electric to carry you, gentle

the way old grief is gentle.

Love the love that is messy in all its too much,

The body that rides best your body, whose mouth

saddles the naked salt of your far gone hips,

whose tongue translates the rock language of

all your elegant scars.

Go with the one who cries out for her tragic sisters

as she chops the winter’s wood, the one whose skin

triggers your heart into a heaven of blood waltzes.

Go with the one who resembles most your father.

Not the father you can point out on a map,

but the father who is here, is your home,

is the key to your front door.

Know that your first love will only be the first.

And the second and third and even fourth

will unprepare you for the most important:

The Blessed. The Beast. The Last Love,

which is, of course, the most terrifying kind.

Because which of us wants to go with what can murder us?

Can reveal to us our true heart’s end and its thirty years

spent in poverty? Can mimic the sound of our bird-throated mothers,

replicate the warmth of our brothers’ tempers?

Can pull us out of ourselves until we are no longer sisters

or daughters or sword swallowers but, instead,

women who give and lead and take and want

and want and want and want,

because there is no shame in wanting.

And you will hear yourself say:

Last Love, I wish to die so I may come back to you

new and never tasted by any other mouth but yours.

And I want to be the hands that pull your children

out of you and tuck them deep inside myself until they are

ready to be the children of such a royal and staggering love.

Or you will say:

Last Love, I am old, and have spent myself on the courageless,

have wasted too many clocks on less-deserving men,

so I hurl myself at the throne of you and lie humbly at your feet.

Last Love, let me never roll out of this heavy dream of you,

let the day I was born mean my life will end

where you end. Let the man behind the church

do what he did if it brings me to you. Let the girls

in the locker room corner me again if it brings me to you.

Let this wild depression throw me beneath its hooves

if it brings me to you. Let me pronounce my hoarded joy

if it brings me to you. Let my father break me again

and again if it brings me to you.

Last love, I have let other men borrow your children. Forgive me.

Last love, I once vowed my heart to another. Forgive me.

Last Love, I have let my blind and anxious hands wander into a room

and come out empty. Forgive me.

Last Love, I have cursed the women you loved before me. Forgive me.

Last Love, I envy your mother’s body where you resided first. Forgive me.

Last Love, I am all that is left. Forgive me.

Last Love, I did not see you coming. Forgive me.

Last Love, every day without you was a life I crawled out of. Amen.

Last Love, you are my Last Love. Amen.

Last Love, I am all that is left. Amen.

I am all that is left.

Amen.

Explanation:

The beginning of the story is: Things were so extravagant. So over the top. I’m amazed that we were able to pull it all off because things didn’t look too well before. But now look at us, happy, proud and....

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Answer:

Things were so extravagant. So over the top. I’m amazed that we were able to pull it all off because things didn’t look too well before. But now look at us, happy, proud and...

Explanation:

Things were so extravagant. So over the top. I’m amazed that we were able to pull it all off because things didn’t look too well before. But now look at us, happy, proud and...

What is the form of the word media?

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singular form

hope this helps :)

A summary does not include

A.Setting
B.conflict
C.theme
D.characters

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Answer:

A summary does not include the setting

Explanation:

Answer:

A summary doesn't include a setting, because there would probably be multiple settings in the story.

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Which quotation from the passage most clearly shows that the author thinks Mount Shasta is very impressive?
1. "is the single cone of an immense, extinct volcano"
2. "occupies the country east of Scott's Mountain"
3. "they are utterly inconspicuous under the shadow of the great peak"
4. "a grandeur equaled by hardly any American mountain"

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Mount Shasta is very impressive as per the author's view is option (A): Mount Shasta "is the single cone of an immense, extinct volcano."

Why is Mt. Shasta impressive?

Mount Shasta is an extinct volcano's cone that rises to nearly 14,162 feet above sea level, making it one of the biggest volcanic summits in the continental United States.

The main volcanic cone features a crater indent (a round hole at the top) formed during the previous glacial period. That is, it is a top in the shape of a cone.

The cones were formed by glaciers during the Ice Age, as well as volcanic eruptions.

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Answer: number 1

Explanation:

Read the Greek myth "Midas" retold by Thomas Bulfinch and answer the question.

[1] Bacchus, on a certain occasion, found his old schoolmaster and foster-father, Silenus, missing. The old man had been drinking, and in that state wandered away, and was found by some peasants, who carried him to their king, Midas. Midas recognized him, and treated him hospitably, entertaining him for ten days and nights with an unceasing round of jollity.

[2] On the eleventh day he brought Silenus back, and restored him in safety to his pupil. Whereupon Bacchus offered Midas his choice of a reward, whatever he might wish. He asked that whatever he might touch should be changed into gold. Bacchus consented, though sorry that he had not made a better choice.

[3] Midas went his way, rejoicing in his new-acquired power, which he hastened to put to the test. He could scarce believe his eyes when he found a twig of an oak, which he plucked from the branch, become gold in his hand. He took up a stone; it changed to gold. He touched a sod; it did the same. He took up an apple from the tree; you would have thought he had robbed the garden of the Hesperides. His joy knew no bounds, and as soon as he got home, he ordered the servants to set a splendid repast on the table. Then he found to his dismay that whether he touched bread, it hardened in his hand; or put a morsel to his lip, it defied his teeth. He took a glass of wine, but it flowed down his throat like melted gold.

[4] In consternation at the unprecedented affliction, he strove to divest himself of his power; he hated the gift he had lately coveted. But all in vain; starvation seemed to await him. He raised his arms, all shining with gold, in prayer to Bacchus, begging to be delivered from his glittering destruction. Bacchus, merciful deity, heard and consented. "Go," said he, "to River Pactolus, trace its fountain-head, there plunge yourself and body in, and wash away your fault and its punishment." He did so, and scarce had he touched the waters before the gold-creating power passed into them, and the river sands became changed into gold, as they remain to this day.

Select a possible theme of the myth.

Gold is a symbol of wealth and authority in many cultures.
People who expect a reward for good deeds are selfish.
Money does not bring as much happiness as friendship.
Wishes are sometimes better when they don't come true.

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Answer:

This is a story of greed. He always wanted more and more gold. He did not appreciate the people in his life nor did he care if someone else did not have enough

Explanation:

Money does not bring happiness.....

In the sentence below, the underlined portion is a clause. Identify the type of clause.
I can't go to the movies since I don't have any
money.
Independent clause
Dependent clause
Non essential clause
None of the choices

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Answer:

The answer is a dependent clause

How does Shakespeare use figurative language to develop the character of Cassius?

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Answer:

I think Cassius uses figurative language, such as the simile that compares Caesar to Colossus, to illustrate the dangers of Caesar's rise to power. He uses the metaphor of a beast eating when he asks, “Upon what meat doth this our Caesar feed / That he is grown so great?” (lines 158–159).

I hope this help you!:)

imagine you were taking a trip to outer space. Describe what it's like and tell what kinds of things you do when you get there.
make up your own story .. and it's for reading but there is no reading..!​

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Outer space is incredibly cool and when I visited it was super different. It had no gravity at all and it was fun to be out there. Obviously earth is round haha. If you ever wonder when you want to go to space, just go it will be fun.

Which attributes of anecdotes make them a good source of support in a reflective essay? (Select all correct answers.)

ANSWERS:

1: meaningful

2: insightful

3: general

4: persuasive

You can select more than one answer! Thanks so much!

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Answer:

1, and 2.

Explanation:

It is a short amusing or interesting story about a real incident or person. So it should be meaningful and insightful.

Answer:

All of the above

Explanation:

PLEASE HURRY I WILL GIVE BRAINLIEST IF CORRECT What characteristic is required for a statement to work as a claim?
A. A claim presents a series of facts in a logical and sequential order.
B. A claim compares or contrasts two opposing items or viewpoints.
C. A claim includes personal anecdotes the author uses to persuade the reader.
D. A claim must contain an argument that can be discussed and debated.

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Am pretty sure the answer is D.

Read the line from the text.

Most people would agree that with its typically high fat and sugar content and delicious taste, chocolate is terribly good.

What effect does the author create by using the phrase terribly good? Select TWO options.
A.
The author makes chocolate seem appealing despite its high fat and sugar content.
B.
The author creates a sarcastic mood to coordinate with the mood of the rest of the text.
C.
The author creates a controversial mood on purpose to spur his reader to action against chocolate production and consumption.
D.
The author challenges the reader to think twice about chocolate and see it as an alternative to energy bars because of its energy–inducing sugar and fat.
E.
The author wants to create a positive mood about chocolate, as the point of the text is to persuade the reader to always choose chocolate as his or her snack of choice.
F.
The author wants the reader to delight in the fact that we eat chocolate and enjoy it even though it is not very healthy.

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Answer:

the answer is the last option that why he said terribly good terrible and good has two meanigs when combine the both words the last answer is correct

to be honest i cant delte this

 

From the common lit YOUNG ATLANTA ARTIST ON THE RISE THROUGH SOCIAL MEDIA

What is the central idea of the article?
A. Social Media will better help you develop a career in arts than attending college.
B. People have to be brave and need to take a chance on themselves if they want to be successful in music.
C. People cannot rely on social media to connect them with other artists because sometimes collaborations don’t work out.
D. Social Media can be a useful tool to help people promote their artistic careers and connect with other artists around the world.

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Answer:

D. Social Media can be a useful tool to help people promote their artistic careers and connect with other artists around the world.

Explanation:

b e c a u s e

1.
a. Dramatic Irony
b. Imagery
c. Metaphor
d. Indirect Characterization
2.
e. Simile
3.
4.
"So when the blue smoke of brittle
leaves was in the air and the wind blew
the wet laundry stiff on the line
decided to go home."
"Gatsby was overwhelmingly aware of
the youth and mystery that wealth
imprisons and preserves, of the
freshness of many clothes, and of Daisy,
gleaming like silver, safe and proud
above the hot struggles of the poor."
"Her voice is full of money."
"They were carless people, Tom and
Daisy-- they smashed up things and
creatures and then retreated back into
their money of their vast carelessness
or whatever it was that kept them
together, and let other people clean up
the mess they made made..."
"Her expression was curiously familiar--
it was an expression I had often seen on
women's faces, but on Myrtle Wilson's
face it seemed purposeless and
inexplicable until I realized that her
eyes, wide with jealous terror, were
fixed not on Tom, but on Jordan Baker,
whom she took to be his wife."
5.

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Answer:

Mom ran out of the room and came back with one of the army surplus blankets I hated because the wool was so scratchy. She threw the blanket around me to smother the flames. Dad had gone off in the car, so Mom grabbed me and my younger brother, Brian, and hurried over to the trailer next to ours. The woman who lived there was hanging her laundry on the clothesline. She had clothespins in her mouth. Mom, in an unnaturally calm voice, explained what had happened and asked if we could please have a ride to the hospital. The woman dropped her clothespins and laundry right there in the dirt and, without saying anything, ran for her car.

Explanation:

Read the excerpt below and answer the question.

Proctor: I'd have you see some honesty in it. Let them, that never lied die now to keep their souls. It is
pretense for me, a vanity that will not blind God nor keep my children out of the wind.

What does John Proctor mean with this statement in his last conversation with Elizabeth?

A. He does not want to leave Elizabeth with the impression that he did anything wrong.

B. There are many that would die before they'd lie; however, because he has lied before, he can do it again if it means staying alive.

C. The lie isn't as terrible since he has lied to her before; it isn't as sinful to lie again.

D. He would like to see something honest come of it all, and it isn't as hard to tell a lie as others might think.

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Answer:

D.

Explanation:

His last conversation with Elizabeth was spent telling her he would NOT lie. This shows that he is a changed man who has learned from the mistakes his lies have caused.

From this excerpt, John Proctor meant that;

B. There are many that would die before they'd lie; however, because he has lied before, he can do it again if it means staying alive.

In this quote, Proctor and his wife Elizabeth were reasoning on the best course to take to remain alive. If he lied against himself by confessing that he was a witch, he would live. If not, he will die. Then in 1692 during the Salem Witch trials, many were accused of witchcraft. Some convicted people were hanged while some escaped death if they confessed to being witches.

All this while, Proctor had been maintaining the truth that he was not a witch. But now, under pressure, he reasoned on confessing even though he knew that he was not a witch, to escape death.

He reasoned that since he had lied in the case of his adultery with Abigail, he could lie again now to save himself. He then reached the conclusion to confess.

In conclusion, Proctor believed that since he had lied before, he could lie again now to save himself.

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