Hello Everyone! I need you opinion on a poem of mine! Please be honest and don't be worried to tell me if it absolutely sucks, I want to hear the good and (if there is any) the bad. The context is being Bisexual and searching for love in a world that seems like its meant only for "normal" people.

“Remember Him”
By; Jacob Odom

Remember when you longed for love
That someone just for you
Remember what you sat alone
At your table meant for two
Remember when you fell for him
But none could ever know
Remember when your heart cried out
But you could never show
Remember when you told yourself
That “they can never see”
Remember when he touched your hand
And whispered that his, you’ll be
Remember how you skipped a beat
And felt his warm embrace
Remember how he looked at you
With a smile across his face
Remember how he cared for you
When others turned away
Remember how those who really cared
Would have your back and stay
Remember when you told your father
Who told you “Go away”
Remember when you told you love
Then by his side you lay
Now still you feel his warm embrace
And the comfort of his smile
Now loyal to your love you stay
~

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Answer 1

Answer:

Awesome! I love the little bits of rhyme and quotation marks. Maybe you could add some commas, but other than that, your poem is great! I think the additive of 'he' and 'his' really adds to the quality. Great Job!

Explanation:

Answer 2

Wow, that's very nice, that's a very good poem! There is one part I had a bit of trouble comprehending the definition of the one part saying "And whispered that his, you’ll be" But I understood it after looking at it a bit closer. very nice "clap clap"


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Which of the following people revolutionized American manufacturing by establishing the first textile mill where spinning and weaving occurred in one place?
A.
Eli Whitney
B.
Francis Cabot Lowell
C.
Samuel Slater
D.
John Deere

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Answer:

B. Francis Cabot Lowell

Explanation:

Lowell is considered the principal founder of what is said to have been the world's first textile mill in which were performed all operations converting raw cotton into finished cloth.

10. Which answer choice has a positive connotation?
a Jordan gave a curt answer.
B. Jordan gave a concise answer.
C. Jordan gave an abrupt answer.
D. Jordan gave a blunt answer.

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B would be considered the most positive of the options given.

Use the most appropriate word(s) to complete the following sentence.

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Answer: guess from context

Explanation:


Rewrite the sentence so that it has a parallel structure.
The cross old neighbor, attracted by Shiro's barking, had been an unseen and
enviously witness of the finding of the treasure.

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Answer:

The cross old neighbor, attracted by Shiro's barking, had been an unseen and (an) envious witness of the finding of the treasure.

A. DIRECTIONS: Read each sentence and note the phrase in ( ). Write whether the phrase is a verb phrase or a noun phrase.


1. The parakeet is (the most common pet bird).

2. Parakeets (are known) as "budgies" and (are related to parrots).

3. (These beautiful birds) are considered social and intelligent animals.

4. Only a few supplies (are needed) for parakeets.

5. Parakeets enjoy interacting with (mirrors and bells).

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Answer:

1. noun phrase

2. verb phrase

3. noun phrase

4. verb phrase

5. noun phrase

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The climate throughout the world is changing. It has already disturbed weather patterns by increasing rainfall in some areas and decreasing it in others. The temperature is increasing day by day. It results in frequent hurricanes, tornadoes, floods, tsunamis, etc.

Write a short paragraph in about 40 - 50 words for your school magazine on the topic 'Global Warming - A Threat to Life.'​

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Answer:

THEY ARE: EYES,LEGS,HANDS,EARS,NOSE,MOUTH,ETC IN A HUMAN BODY WITH THESE SO MANY ARE THERE I HOPE THIS HELPSSS!

How does the author introduce and describe the story's characters?

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The author directly states a characters traits . An author provides clues about a character by describing what a character looks like , does , says , as well as how other characters react to him or her . The story is told from the perspective of a character in the story , and the character uses the first person pronoun

Answer:

The main characters in this story are animals. Carl Sandburg introduces these characters in a comical manner:

For chairman they picked an old flongboo who was an umpire and used to umpire many mix-ups. Among the flongboos he was called "the umpire of umpires," "the king of umpires," "the prince of umpires," "the peer of umpires."

Sandburg said he "attempts to catch fantasy, accents, pulses, eye flashes, inconceivably rabid and perfect gestures, sudden pantomimic movements, drawls and drolleries, gazings and musings” to make the descriptions interesting to readers both young and old, which is evident in these lines:

It was easy for the fat stub hogs with their fat stub tails. But it was not so easy for the blue fox who uses his tail to help him when he runs, when he eats, when he walks or talks, when he makes pictures or writes letters in the snow or when he puts a snack of bacon meat with stripes of fat and lean to hide till he wants it under a big rock by a river.

Sandburg also uses literary devices including onomatopoeia, alliteration, and repetition to describe the animals’ movements and personalities:

As they pattered pitty-pat, pitty-pat, each with feet and toenails, ears and hair, everything but tails, into the Philadelphia union depot, they had nothing to say.

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21. Lines 394-395: What does Fitzgerald foreshadow in these lines?

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Answer: That the relationship is based on looks not personality

Explanation:

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Write an argument in which you state and defend a claim in response to the following question: are the needs of people ever more important than the needs of animals and the planet? State your claim with accuracy and support it with logical reasoning and specific, relevant evidence from the selections in this unit. Organize your ideas effectively, and use transitions to create cohesion and show the relationships between your claim, reasons, and evidence. Provide a conclusion that supports your argument and offers new insight into the topic. Remember to maintain a formal style and tone in your writing.

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Answer:

That alot sorry but i cant help you with that

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Read the following sentence from the section "The Iliad" And "The Odyssey."

Homer enriched his storytelling with many similes and metaphors, which inspired many writers that came after him.

The author uses the word "enriched" to mean:

A made clearer
B made simpler
C made more complex
D made more profitable

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Answer:

D

Explanation:

What do you mean by enriched;

: to make (someone) rich or richer. : to improve the quality of (something) : to make (something) better. : to improve the usefulness or quality of (something) by adding something to it.

Why do some people follow social media?

A. Because they like to mess around and avoid commitment.
B. Because they need to play video games regularly to relax.
C. Because they do not have time to spend on the Internet.
D. Because they have found sites that interest them regularly.

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Answer:

ALL OF THE ABOVE

Explanation:

d. because they have found sites that interest them regularly. hope this helps !

In paragraphs 7 and 8, the narrator says, "I was reading some poetry to get myself inspired." The book she has chosen to read, some of Walt Whitman's poetry, belongs to her father and has a strong impact on the narrator.

Which of these statements BEST describes how Whitman's poetry affects the narrator?

a
Whitman’s poetry makes the narrator question what she has read in school so far.
b
Whitman’s poetry inspires the narrator to write her speech quickly and with brutal honestly.
c
Reading Whitman makes the narrator angry because the poet dares to say dangerous things.
d
Reading Whitman makes the narrator feel even more frustrated about writing her speech.

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What grade is this for?

exercises english solve it pls​

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Answer:

here:

Explanation:

3. better than

4. more expensive

5. older than

6. more beautiful than

7. younger than

8. bigger than

Answer:

3. better

4. more expensive

5. older

6. more beautiful

7. younger

8. bigger

Analyze the development of a central idea over the course of the text,
including how it is shaped and refined by specific details.
Chavez mentions the Ramirez family (paragraphs 36–37) and Jimmy Caudillo
(paragraph 39). How do the stories of these people add to or refine the central idea
of the speech?

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Answer:

The development of a central idea over the course of the text,  including how it is shaped and refined by specific details is explained briefly in the below explanation.

Explanation:

Cesar Chavez applied the phrase radical at the commencement of his address on the page of the beginning. The term radical depicts extreme, significant, or severe. This delivers so much of the speech more dangerous, severe, and serious and addresses it to appear more significant. Main concepts are also found in the ending paragraph of a paragraph

"I am already far north of London, and as I walk in the streets of Pittsburgh, I feel a cold northern breeze play upon my cheeks, which braces my nerves and fills me with delight.

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Why have the buildings of Siena been preserved and not modernized?
A.
The buildings have historic value.
B.
Florence became a bustling city and Siena was left behind.
c.
The townspeople decided many centuries ago that tourism would one day bring in a great profit,
e

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A the buidings have historic value

Read the paragraph, and then answer the question.

(1) Ancient Egypt is known for the many deities it worshipped. (2) However, one pharaoh tried to change that. (3) Amenhotep IV, later called Akhenaton, made dramatic changes in Egyptian religion, changing it from a polytheistic faith to a monotheistic one with a single god. (4) Akenhaton dictated that only the sun god Aten would be worshipped in Egypt. (5) He ended the traditional Egyptian priesthood and named himself as Aten’s sole priest. (6) Despite these new laws, many commoners continued to worship the old gods. (7) When Akenhaton died, his religious changes died with him. (8) His son, Tutankhamen, restored the old ways.

What role does sentence 3 play in the development of the key event in this paragraph?

A.
It analyzes the event.
B.
It illustrates the event.
C.
It introduces the event.
D.
It elaborates the event.

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C it talks about who and what they wanted to do

Answer:

C

Explanation:

"there remarks are very important" she said.​

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question?

Explanation:

Answer:

where is your question??

Explanation:

what does the incident involving the Conger eel in paragraph 31 ,42 reveal about Jim Tom's and Jimmy Tom's different point of view regarding the reef
(From a story called the reef form commlit)

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Answer:

The conger eel incident revealed that Jim Tom's and Jimmy Tom's perspective of the reef are very different. Although Jimmy was scared, he was more worried about saving the shell he found than saving himself. Jimmy Tom thinks that he deserved all of the treasures he found and that  he "asks no favors from the reef." In reality, Jimmy Tom is taking too much from the reef. Jim Tom proves this by saying that he thinks that if you are too greedy the reef protects itself. He told Jimmy Tom that he should be grateful for the treasures he has and not be greedy and put himself in danger by trying to get more. He believes that Jimmy Tom should be satisfied because he had a good reward. In conclusion, Jim Tom believes that the reef gifts you its beauty while Jimmy Tom thinks that if you find something in nature its yours.

Explanation:

Lorenzo and Isabel were able to repair the broken faucet. it says identify the participle.

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I think it is “broken” as it is made from a verb and being used as an adjective
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Nina is conducting research about former president Bill Clinton. Which sources on her list are primary sources? Check all that apply.

an excerpt from Clinton’s autobiography
text from Clinton’s first inaugural speech
an interview with one of Clinton’s friends
a magazine interview with Clinton
a book that analyzed Clinton’s policies

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Answer:

a - an excerpt from Clinton’s autobiography

b- text from Clinton’s first inaugural speech

d- a magazine interview with Clinton\

Explanation:

The resources which will be considered as primary sources for the research are autobiography, inaugural speech, and interviews with the magazine.

What are primary sources?

Primary sources are referred to as original material taken from direct sources whereas secondary sources refer to the sources which are not original or taken from primary sources of information.

The primary sources include an Autobiography, a letter, and a diary written by a person. In this question, the autobiography, speech in the inaugural, and interview magazine are directly linked to Clinton's life.

Therefore, options A, B, and D are the primary sources of information which used by other researchers.

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Which statement best supports the author's point of view A)husband is bored with his life's B) the wife should prepared better meals C) the husband help to prepare dinner D) the wife is not satisfied with her present life

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Answer:D

Explanation:

Answer: d) the wife is not satisfied with her present life

Explanation:

Select all of the words that should be capitalized in the sentence below.
my family is from farmington, west virginia.
my
family
is
from
farmington
west
virginia

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Answer:

My

Farmington

West Virginia

Answer:

My, Farmington, West , Virginia

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Why does Susan B. Anthony call a government that denies women the right to vote “the most hateful aristocracy ever established” in the world?

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Answer:

Because it was sexism and the people knew that so she had to get it in their head

Explanation:


In 'On Aging' how does the poet present the speaker's attitudes to growing old?
[24 marks]
A04 [4 marks]

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Answer:

In her poem, Maya Angelou reflects on growing old and describes it as a stage in life in which, despite some limitations caused by old age, people should be treated as they were treated during younger years, and they should also show gratitude for being able to reach such an age.

Explanation:

She explains that being quiet doesn’t mean one needs company and that struggling to get upstairs is no reason to feel pity. Those physical changes don´t mean one has become different than before.

(B) Prepare a short story beginning with the given line:
I was waiting at the platform still doubtful if I should leave everything and go. Suddenly someone
tapped me on the shoulder...​

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Answer:

i turned back and shocked to see that he was the person who always used to cheer me up and stand by my side whenever i needed it was none other then my best friend his name was Rahul.

Answer:

give me points

Explanation:

give me points

Choose the correct form of the verb that agrees with the subject. (3

marks)

(a) Ronaldo and Messi ------------ the greatest players of 21st

century.

(i) Will be (ii) are (iii) is (iv) was

(b) Everything --------- fine when it is done correctly.

(i) works (ii) worked (iii)will work (iv)working

(c) A pair of trousers ----- all that I brought along.

(i) Were (ii) are (iii) would be (iv) is​

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a) are

b)works

c)are

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1. are
2. works
3. were

Below are five statements based on information in text. 4 are important enough to include in a Summary. Drag the four statements to the boxes, in the correct order for a summary.

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the summary indicates the story so she could pass the exam that's why we had to answer

And he pictured his life, how he lived in two worlds.
3
Is this a metaphor?

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i don’t think so, it’s not really comparing anything

Why is bayanihan important in this time of
pandemic?

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becase we need each other to survive in this pandemic

Explanation:

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