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The people Zinc

Written by: Ava.N
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One of the most desolate days of Zinc’s was in 2000 on Friday, Jan 1. It was a new year’s day, everybody was having fun, running around playing, and singing. The Zinc always invited people they came into their village. The people of Zink were the nicest and smartest of the village. They didn't even know what was going to happen next when they invited Zandar. Zandar the ruler of kings. He wore a black robe, and went straight to the church on Friday, Jan 1. I was there. I knew what he looked liked and I didnt like him at first.

Napkin followed to the church, trying to stay behind him but not too close but not too far. He took off his robe, then some weird muscler cats came out of nowhere.

“Man those are some big cat’s, I wonder if they're just here to worship their gods or something.” Napkin whispered.

“Is the ship here yet?” Zandar mumbled

“Yes my king.” The minion bowed his head in approval, to the king.

A starved cat wobbled up the stairs with bloat pink eyes.

“My king may you spray us some food.” The starving swollen cat whimpered.

“My people are bringing some food right now and it's filled with crates of bread and fish. Tell all your friends to come over and get some bread and fish. The more friends you bring the more bread and fish you get.” Znadar said in a happy tone.

“Yes my lord! I shall hurry off and get all my family and friends.” The starving cat, not looking starving anymore, ran off behind an open alley.

“I can see the crates from here, you may go get more cat’s.” Zandar hesitated. “For our feast.”

A few minutes later, a large number of boxes, and crates were everywhere around the church. I never smelled like fish or bread anywhere, it was mostly smelled like powder. Napkin snuck behind the church getting to one of the boxes. The smells stinged his nose, making him almost sneeze. He tried all his strength to open one of the boxes.

“AHH!” Napkin screamed.

“What was that!” Zandar whispered, biting his lip hard.

“Probably just some kids chasing each other.” One of the minions said.

Napkin ran across the church, almost rolling over on his back.

“HE HAS GUNS!” Napkin screamed.

It felt like the whole village turned quiet for one second. Zandar let his claws, gripping them to the church, almost breaking the stone. His eyes were furious.

“Sorry for my little brother, he just had to buy milk today!” Africa apologized
“I'm telling the truth! Please listen to me! You'll all die!” Napkin was trying to struggle to get out of his brother’s grip.
Zandar smiled evilly at Npakin, being pulled away by his brother. Napkin could not hear what Zandar was saying to his Minions but...

“Happy New year!” Zandar laughed.

The pulling of Napkin’s brother stopped. Napkin ran as fast as he could, seeing bodys drop left and right of him. Hearing bullet guns drop He stopped pushing the dirt and gravel in the air, running back to his brother.
“No!” Napkin yelled. Preshing his head against the dead body of his brother. He felt pain in his head and in his stomach. He rolled over hitting the gravel outside making his nose bleed. Zander's hand unleashed his claws in the air. Swinging down, if flet slow in Napkin’s brain. He rolled over and ran as fast as he could. Getting from under Zandar.

“Everyone I know is dead, everyone I talked to is dead, EVERYONE..” Napkin thought in his head tears rolling out of his eyes running away from the church. “Anywhere with him, ANYWHERE!”

Chapter 1: The Invitation

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Answer 1

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Wow. That was very detailed and thorough. It does look very good and professional. The only thing I would have changed, though would be the fact that January 1st is incorrect.

"He wore a black robe, and went straight to the church on Friday, Jan 1."

Instead, you should put it as:

"He wore a black robe, and went straight to the church on Friday, the first of January."


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Example sentence using the word republicanism

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In this national crisis, we call upon the foundations of republicanism to help reunite and fortify this nation.

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He preached republicanism to her by the hour, and even locked her up in her bedroom to reflect on his sermons.

Explanation:

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Which provisions were included in the Treaty of Versailles? Select three options.

1. the formation of the League of Nations
2. the return of disputed territory to Germany
3. limitations on the size of Germany’s military
4 the requirement that Germany pay reparations
5. the end of secret negotiations between countries

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Answer:

Answers are 3,4, and 5

Explanation:

Answer:

1. the formation of the League of Nations

3. limitations on the size of Germany’s military

4. the requirement that Germany pay reparations

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The Roman Empire did both sea and land trade but much more land trade through roads they developed. Compared to the Gupta Empire who did not trade as much on land. ... They made merchants and trading super important and this made their economy flourish. In the Han Dynasty Daoism was the main religion.

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In the quotation, wha is the Qur'an saying about the rights of women?
Women are dependent upon their husbands for all their needs.
Women are required to remove themselves form society.
Women cannot inherit property.
Women are entitled to own property and earn a living.

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Explanation:

the rights for the women would be the last option.

Women are entitled to own property and earn a living.

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Actually I read a book titled for the love of a son and this book is based on the muslim culture and all. after reading that book, I thought that everywhere in the country where islam is followed I thought that women will be treated wrongfully until I asked one of my muslim friend from Egypt. that's when I knew that the women are not treated that way in other countries. what I wanna say here is that, if y'all have the same confusion as me, I wanna yell you that you're wrong too. I dunno how to end lol.

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Women are dependent upon their husbands for all their needs.

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Why are both rivers important to the economic growth of the countries they run through?

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Answer:

Rivers provide cheap and efficient inland transport for trade and commerce. ... They help cities and towns to carry their wastes. Their water is extensively used in irrigation and in developing hydroelectricity.

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Because you can get places and it’s a great source of water.

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What are some of the achievements of the Gupta Empire that still affect society today? Discuss contributions made in mathematics, science, and medicine.

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The Gupta Empire, founded by Maharaja Sri Gupta, was an ancient Indian realm that covered much of the Indian Subcontinent from approximately 320-550 CE. Gupta rule, while solidified by territorial expansion through war, began a period of peace and prosperity marked by advancements in science, technology, engineering, art, dialectics, literature, logic, mathematics, astronomy, religion, and philosophy. Gupta made novel advances in the sciences, astronomy (Gupta philosophers proposed that the earth was not flat, but was instead round and rotated on an axis by viewing lunar eclipses and discoveries about gravity and the planets of the solar system, which they used to tell the horoscopes). Indian mathematicians in the Gupta period made important contributions. They were the first to use algebra, develop the idea of zero, and explain the concept of infinity; something without an end. They were also were the first to use the numbers 1-9 for counting. Early Indians also invented mathematical algorithms. In medicine, Gupta physicians developed herbal remedies to treat various illnesses. They also developed a form of plastic surgery for the treatment of facial injuries. Physicians vaccinated against smallpox, a practice later used in China around the10th century and in Europe in the 17th century.

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In medicine, Gupta physicians developed herbal remedies to treat various illnesses. They also developed a form of plastic surgery for the treatment of facial injuries. Physicians vaccinated against smallpox, a practice later used in China around the10th century and in Europe in the 17th century. The answer in here is the system of numerals.

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Was former president Trump right to leave on inauguration day? Give intel about on the capital attack.
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Answer:Former president trump was not right to leave on inauguration. Their inaction was a key breakdown in a series of security decisions that left the Capitol inadequately protected as thousands of Trump rioters breached the building, leading to the melee that killed a Capitol Police officer and at least one of the rioters.

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No, he wasn’t he was meant to be there so he should have stayed to it

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___ meant that the people of a territory would decide for themselves the question of slavery.
Territorial Imperative
Manifest Destiny
Popular sovereignty
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Free-soil

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Answer:

C) Popular sovereignty meant that the people of a territory would decide for themselves the question of slavery.

Explanation:

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1. Which disadvantages can happen in a sole proprietorship?



Choose exactly two answers that are correct.


An owner is personally liable for business debts.


All profits go to shareholders.


Raising financial capital is difficult.


Making operational changes is challenging.


2. Which people within a corporation hire and manage the heads of departments?


the presidents


workers


the vice presidents


shareholders

3.Which people represent shareholders within the corporate structure?


department heads


the board of directors


presidents


workers


4.Which type of business can most easily raise financial capital?


a corporation


a sole proprietorship


a limited partnership


a general partnership

5.Which kind of union represents an autoworker?


industrial union


mechanical union


trade union


government union

6.Which tool can management use against labor during negotiations?


lockout


strike


picketing


boycott

7.What is the purpose of a strike?


to protest a lockout


to invite a neutral third party to propose a labor agreement


to cost a company so much money that it must give in


to obtain an injunction that forces a company to settle

8.When is mediation typically used?


when two sides are unable to reach an agreement


when a lockout is announced


when shareholders elect a new board of directors


when the government opposes a strike

9.Which responsibility do businesses have to their consumers?


to provide goods instead of services


to sell safe products


to sell products for the lowest possible price


to publicize all financial transactions

10.Why are publicly traded corporations required to release financial reports on a regular basis?


so the government can determine the corporate taxes owed


because shareholders are entitled to transparency


because it would be impossible to raise financial capital otherwise


so owners know when it is time to hire a new board of directors

11.Which service is provided by the government as a public good?


telephone service


military equipment and weapons


police protection


work boots for public employees

12.Which law did the government pass in order to encourage competition in the economy?


the Contraction Act


the Federal Anti-monopoly Act


the Sherman Antitrust Act


the Civil Rights Act

13.Which government agency regulates businesses in order to protect competition in the marketplace?


Environmental Protection Agency (EPA)


Federal Trade Commission (FTC)


Occupational Safety and Health Administration (OSHA)


Consumer Product Safety Administration (CPSC)

14.Why is it important to measure the performance of the economy?


to help government planners make good decisions


to encourage low-risk investments


to keep prices low


to protect the savings of bank depositors

15.Why are bear markets linked to recessions?


Shareholders have little confidence in the economy.


Investors are confident that the economy will soon grow.


Investors attempt to ensure corporate growth.


Shareholders want stock in new corporations.

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Answer:

an owner is personally liable for personal debts

All profits go to shareholders

In complete sentences, answer this question:
How did the status of peasants affect the daily lives of people in this social class?

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Answer:

Peasants were the lowest and largest social class in ancient Egypt. Although society depended on their work, they were seen as unskilled laborers.Their diet was simple, and they spent most of their lives working.

Explanation:

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The status of peasants affected how much they were rewarded for the harvest. Higher statuses earned more wages than lower statuses.

Compare and Contrast evaporation and Condensation
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Evaporation is when liquid turns into a gas and condensation is when the gas turns into a solid or liquid

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Evaporation is when water is heated and becomes a gas from a liquid.

condensation is when gas turns into a liquid & condenses/cools down.

What former president of Mexico declared himself president again and unsuccessfully tried to fight off the U.S.?

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Answer:

Santa Anna

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1 Anne Frank’s diary had became famous throughout the world the diary provided a vivid and poignant in glimpse into the world of a young Jewish girl living in Nazi occupied Holland and roll diary well hiding from the Nazis in the Amsterdam warehouse
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The Maya empire
A was ruled entirely by a council of priests
B was controlled by a wealthy merchant class
C was a collection of independent city states
D had a very strong centralized government

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Answer:

I think it is D

Explanation:

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Why do presidents need congressional support? Please provide one example




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Answer:

They need congessional support because of checks and balances. It is made that way so that the presients don't have too much power.

bc of check and balances so that the president doesn’t get too much power

Which public issue is being debated?

Group of answer choices

Equal pay for equal work

Suffrage

Drafting women into the military

Construction of more homeless shelters

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Answer:

your answer would be drafting women in the military if I'm wrong I'm am sorry

Suffrage- a lot of people are going through a lot throughout the pandemic such as lack of food, jobs, houses, etc

President Harry S. Truman believed that the United States should use any weapon it
had to defeat its enemies during World War II. What actions did Truman take that
supported his belief?

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Answer:

He ordered The Dropping of 2 Nuclear Bombs, Big Boy and Little boy on 2

Japanese Cities: Hiroshima and Nagasaki which caused The Empire of Japan to Surrendor To the Allies

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Was Hitler's world conquest doomed from the start? Use detail and examples in your answer.

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Two years into the war, in September 1941, German arms seemed to be carrying all before them. Western Europe had been decisively conquered, and there were few signs of any serious resistance to German rule. The failure of the Italians to establish Mussolini's much-vaunted new Roman empire in the Mediterranean had been made good by German intervention. German forces had overrun Greece, and subjugated Yugoslavia. In north Africa, Rommel's brilliant generalship was pushing the British and allied forces eastwards towards Egypt and threatening the Suez canal. Above all, the invasion of the Soviet Union in June 1941 had reaped stunning rewards, with Leningrad (the present-day St Petersburg) besieged by German and Finnish troops, Smolensk and Kiev taken

Which of the following were true of the Northwestern tribes? (Select all that apply.)
They were wood carvers, Society was divided into three classes: chiefs, freemen, and slaves, They valued wealth and status, They did not believe in slavery, They included the Chinook, Haida, and Nootka, They wore elaborate sandals and moccasins, They harpooned whales, Each nuclear family had its own house, Potlaches were great parties where the chief was given gifts by all his guests, They included the Tillamook, Tlingit, and Yurok.

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Answer:

Explanation:

They were wood carvers, Society was divided into three classes: chiefs, freemen, and slaves, They included the Tillamook, Tlingit, and Yurok. They harpooned whales. They included the Chinook, Haida, and  Nootka. They valued wealth and status.

What did you enjoy most about listening to the Hamilton musical and making historical connections? Please be as specific as possible and don't respond with "I don't know". *

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Answer: I really enjoyed the cabinet battles as they allowed to me fully understand what happened during Washington’s presidency and who influenced his decisions, it was surprising how often he sided with Hamilton and the Federalist party’s opinion. The song were Cabinet battle 1 and 2 if u wanna listen to them

Explanation:

The raw feeling that the actors use in their performances was moving and gutteral. You could truly feel the emotions that they were singing about.

3. what is meant by the term "the universe?" 3. i think the term "the universe" means __________. please write 2-3 sentences.

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the whole cosmic system of matter and energy of which Earth, and therefore the human race, is a part. Humanity has traveled a long road since societies imagined Earth, the Sun, and the Moon as the main objects of creation, with the rest of the universe being formed almost as an afterthought.

Answer:

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Explanation:

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The universe is all of space and time and their contents, including planets, stars, galaxies, and all other forms of matter and energy. The Big Bang theory is the prevailing cosmological description of the development of the universe.

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What was the Long March?

A. The journey taken by the Nationalists to Taiwan
B. The protests for reform at Tiananmen Square
C. The retreat of the Communists to the north
D. The route the Dalai Lama took to escape Tibet

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Answer:

C!!!!!!

Explanation:

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Answer: B because it said it had a problem, showing it needed help

Explanation:

The answer would be B because it is the only one stating that there was a problem

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Answer:

the first is T because jews were the primary victim during the Holocausts.

The secound is false because there was around 6 million jews that were killed in the camps.

the last one is false too because the germans were worthless they killed all races and ages.

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Answer:

Well the answer is C and that's the truth.

How did Huey Long’s policies distinguish Louisiana from other southern states?

He attracted northern industrialists to the state by emphasizing industrial production over agriculture.

He allowed the rich to control more of the state’s wealth by eliminating state income taxes.

He reduced tensions in the state by including African Americans in his benefits programs.

He enforced white supremacy by making the Klu Klux Klan an official state organization.

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Answer:

Senator Huey P. Long, Statement of the Share Our Wealth ... according to the estimates of the statisticians of the United States Government and Wall Street, ... to be equal in opportunity in all schools, colleges, universities, and other ... ☐D. a leader who enacts policies to improve the lives of the common people.

Who was one of the few well known female writers of the Renaissance who wrote about equal rights and education for women?

Wollstonecraft

Alighieri

Cervantes

de Pisan

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Christine de Pisan was a French Renaissance writer who wrote some of the first feminist pieces of literature.

Citizens may propose new laws using a process called a(n)
recall.
referendum.
initiative.
opinion poll.

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answer: (not sure)

initiative

explanation:

the initiative process is the direct power of the voters to enact new or change existing laws it allows the voters to place proposed legislation on the ballot the only limitation in scope is that an initiative cannot be used to amend the State Constitution

Answer:

It is c, Initiative

Explanation:

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Who votes on new bills to create laws in the United States?

A.the legislative branch

B.the judicial branch

C.the president

D.the state governors

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Answer:

A.the legislative branch

Explanation:

A the legislative branch the president passes the bills and the governors don’t have anything to do with it
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