DOES THIS LOOK GODD??

The people of Zinc


Written by: Ava.N

Characters by: Ava. N



One of the most desolate days of Zinc’s was in 2000 on Friday, Jan 1. It was a new year’s day, everybody was having fun, running around playing, and singing. The Zinc always invited people that came into their village. The people of Zink were the nicest and smartest of the village. They didn't even know what was going to happen next when they invited Zandar. Zandar the ruler of kings. He wore a black robe, and went straight to the church on Friday, Jan 1. I was there. I knew what he looked liked and I didnt like him at first.


Napkin followed him to the church, trying to stay behind him but not too close but not too far. He took off his robe, then some weird muscler cats came out of nowhere.


“Man those are some big cat’s, I wonder if they're just here to worship their gods or something.” Napkin whispered.


“Is the ship here yet?” Zandar mumbled


“Yes my king.” The minion bowed his head in approval, to the king.


A starved cat wobbled up the stairs with bloat pink eyes.


“My king may you spare us some food.” The starving swollen cat whimpered.


“My people are bringing some food right now and it's filled with crates of bread and fish. Tell all your friends to come over and get some bread and fish. The more friends you bring the more bread and fish you get.” Zandar said in a happy tone.


“Yes my lord! I shall hurry off and get all my family and friends.” The starving cat, not looking starving anymore, ran off behind an open alley.


“I can see the crates from here, you may go get more cat’s.” Zandar hesitated. “For our feast.”


A few minutes later, a large number of boxes, and crates were everywhere around the church. It never smelled like fish or bread anywhere, it was mostly smelled like powder. Napkin snuck behind the church getting to one of the boxes. The smells stinged his nose, making him almost sneeze. He tried all his strength to open one of the boxes.


“AHH!” Napkin screamed.


“What was that!” Zandar whispered, biting his lip hard. Almost making it bleed.


“Probably just some kids chasing each other.” One of the minions said.


Napkin ran in front of the church, almost rolling over on his back.


“HE HAS GUNS!” Napkin screamed.


It felt like the whole village turned quiet for one second. Zandar let his claws out, gripping them to the church, almost breaking the stone cobbla. His eyes were furious.


Africa ran to bite his brother on the neck grabbing his scruff.

“Sorry for my little brother, he just had too much milk today!” Africa apologized

“I'm telling the truth! Please listen to me! You'll all die!” Napkin was trying to struggle to get out of his brother’s grip.

Zandar smiled evilly at Napkin, being pulled away by his brother. Napkin could not hear what Zandar was saying to his Minions but...


“Happy New year!” Zandar laughed.


The pulling of Napkin’s brother stopped. Napkin ran as fast as he could, seeing bodys drop left and right of him. Hearing bullet guns drop. He stopped running pushing the dirt and gravel in the air, running back to his brother.

“No!” Napkin yelled. Pushing his head against the dead body of his brother. He felt pain in his head and in his stomach. Zandar punched on Napkin. He rolled over hitting the gravel upside down making his nose bleed. Zander's hand unleashed his long claws in the air. Swinging down, if flet slow in Napkin’s brain. He rolled over and ran as fast as he could. Getting from under Zandar.


“Everyone I know is dead, everyone I talked to is dead, EVERYONE..” Napkin thought in his head tears rolling down from his eyes running away from the church. “Anywhere away from him, ANYWHERE!”


Chapter 1: The Invitation

Napkin sprinted from the bushes chasing the rabbit. Sweat came down from his fur trying not to lose the rabbit.

“Mouse brain!” Napkin yelled.

A hawk had grabbed the rabbit with their sharp talons, flying off into the distance. “Dang it.” Napkin kicked dirt across the grass. “That's the third one today! I'm going to start to get dizzy at some point in the day.” Napkin walked to the right bank of a river, drinking some water. “Got to stay hydrated I guess?” Napkin felt a pain in his left shoulder, he fell back on his stomach, looking near the left of his eye seeing blood flow down his left shoulder. He stood shaking in pain as he looked up, seeing a black figure approaching him out of the blushes, walking towards him in the river. He couldn't keep his eyes open any longer, his eyelids got heavier and heavier.

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Yes!!! I think you did a great job on that!!!! Though maybe you should add a little more detail and have it be a little longer.

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Read the sequence of events in the selection and choose the statement that occurred first. If both occurred at the same time, choose that option. The picture was fastened to the wall, so she had to cut the picture out of the frame. Then Dolley Madison took the painting out and rolled it up. Dolley cut the picture out of the frame. Both took place at the same time. Dolley rolled the painting up.

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I'm unsure about the phrasing of this question, but if I'm reading it correctly, the correct sequence of events here would be:

The picture was fastened to the wall, so Dolley had to cut the picture out of the frame. Then, after she had cut it, she took the painting out and rolled it up.

Due to the nature of what Dolley is doing, it's not possible for her to do both at the same time.

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