Could someone revise my intro paragraph for an argumentative essay? (it's in the attached image.) Any tips will help!
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Answer:
To me it's a good write up
Answer:
It is amazing
Explanation:
All you really have to do is follow the main outlines for the intro:
Write an anecdote, surprising fact, or rhetorical question to catch the readers attention.
Explain what the issue is and what is at stake if you can.
What should be done if needed?
What is your point of view on it.
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the use of headings bullet lists and different font styles identifies this passage as
A) business writing
B) narrative writing
C) technical writing
D) expository writing
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Answer:
A
Explanation:
Because he/she manage all that material in her/she business
What’s the mood of monkeys paw ?
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Answer:
The mood of "The Monkey's Paw" is dark and foreboding.
Which of the following basic sentence structures appear in the passage?
I. simple
II. complex
III. compound-complex
A. I only
B. I and II
C. I and III
D. II and III
E. I, II, and III
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Answer:
E
Explanation:
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in the long walk to water why are the villagers celebrating the dirty water spraying from the borehole?
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Answer:
below
Explanation:
because they thought that the people that came to drill were going to do somehting bad, but they actually helped them
write a descriptive essay on your favourite person.words 300 to 350
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the world.
Just sitting with her brings me comfort. She smells of sweet coconut and her skin is warm and soft like soft cashmere. I love her laugh, and how her eyes shine optimistically and full of life. She has a way of making those crazy and stressful days melt away and leaves your soul content. Even when others speak ill of her, I never hear her returning such words. Right now she is miles away, yet I call her and her voice is as warm as her embrace. There is people in this world who deserve an award, and she is one of them. The way she has grown in the past few years astounds me. I can see it in her actions that she is stronger than i have ever seen her, and each time i see her she looks more beautiful than she did before.
She is no ordinary woman. She dances around the house with the grace of a fish out of water, and she gets away with it. She remembers only parts of songs and movies, I found it irritating; but now all I want is to hear her sing her fragmented songs and dance all the time. My favorite memory of her is playing card games, we would play using weird accents that must be a cross between Russian, and Icelandic. I’m not sure anyone else could understand us, and frankly I am pretty sure someone would send us to Essandale if they were to see us. Particularly when we cooked a meal together and turned on the music, then the magic would really happen. Those are the memories I hold dear.I applaud my mother for her strength. My family tells me that I am like her, and if I am anything like her than I would not complain. Having a child at 18 can't be easy, growing up I know she always tried her hardest to be thebest mother she could be. Having a child with 3 diseases must have taken a pretty big toll on her, yet she learned all she could about them and provided the supportive lifestyle I needed to not let these diseases take control of me. She always tries to make the best out of a bad situation, and she has known her fare share of that. Even with battles of her own she would wipe her tears away and take away my sorrows.
She has taught me so much, one thing I appreciate the most is her interest in natural products. Her interest has also brought a great many memories that I will never forget. She was starting to get into natural shampoo products,I believe she tried washing her hair with eggs and rinsing it with baking soda. She came out with her hair looking like Frankenstein, it really did feel like wire. She even tried to put oil in it to fix it, it made no difference. My mom has tried so many things, although many of her attempts did not work as planned she never stopped. Among one of her attempts was a body wash, it ended up as a lumpy concoction that looked that like glue and tapioca beads. She went on to create my favorite rejuvenating body wash with fresh mint and sweet thyme, and every time I smell it think of her. She has so many books on natural home remedies, that I am very thankful for. But the way she studies for hours and keeps going
is truly epic, she is always eager to learn more and is very determined.
Through life we learn lessons, most of them are through people we meet and situations we endeavour. I think its the small things learned that make the difference in life. I learned so many things from her, and together they have made me who I am today. She may not be the most patient at times, but she has been very patient with me. My mother is my favorite person. They say a parents love just happens, I believe different. She has carved herself into my heart with a silken blade. Love and Respect cannot just be forced upon a person, but is a process like any relationship that is done with patience, acceptance, and frustration. I know I will be successful in my life, because of her. I have learned never to give up, even when the world is against you. Because of her compassion and forgiveness , I have come to know a lust for life and to feel content even when the worlds a blur.
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My favourite person is my sister. I find her character so interesting. Her nature to her frnds as well as to other makes in me a feeling of goosebumps. She is so attractive talkative and talanted. She knows to dance sing moreover studies well. Even though she's in tenth she finds time for me. She helps me in my studies talks and plays with me. She is so innocent that she can be easily fooled. Her heart as soft like ice that it can be easily melted. She is my role model now then and ever. No one can be like her. She cannot be equalled to anyone. She is just like a parent to me. Check whose ur role model..
Explanation:
My Favourite Person My mother is the person I admire the most. She is the ideal example of a good human being. She is sensitive yet bold; she is a loving mother and a strict teacher too. She has always been my pillar of support and stood by me in every situation. She sacrificed her dreams and desires for the well- being of our family but never discouraged us from dreaming. She believed in me, in my dreams, my capabilities more than anything. She inspires me a lot as have never seen a woman so humble, so confident and devotee. She taught me to be patient, to not give up in any situation, to fight and to respect. I not only admire her as a mother, but I also love her for the person she is. I wish I could be though not completely but a little bit of my mother.
Name the types of
types of "Present Tense and give an example
for each
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Answer:
Explanation:
Present: I go
present progressive : I am going
present perfect: I have gone
present perfect progressive: I have been going
Can somebody plz just give me 1 more point on my question thx!!
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Answer: He created us because he wanted us.
Explanation:
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Which statement from the Article best supports the idea that Amina Mseffer feels that there is additional work to be done to help people with intellectual disabilities?
A. But while Mseffer celebrates her group's progress toward integrating people with disabilities, she also wants government officials in Morocco to get more involved.
B. Over the years, Hadaf has received gifts of money from businesses, individuals, and even the Moroccan king.
C. When launching the restaurant, Hadaf partnered with a Moroccan government project that helps citizens who are poor.
D. Still, Hadaf was helping people with disabilities long before the restaurant opened
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Answer:
you need to write the article name or a picture of the article to get a correct awnser
Explanation:
The great rat hunt by Laurence Yep summary using when,where,who, and what
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Answer:
summary:
Explanation:
2. What type of fallacy is represented by the passage below?
The poem "Cautionary Tale of Girls and Birds of Prey" is not worth reading. The author clearly is a sick and morbid person who likes to write about death.
non sequitur
association fallacy
appeal to authority
ad hominem attack
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Answer:
Ad hominem attack
Explanation:
A logical fallacy is a flaw in reasoning.
Ad hominem (literally translated as to the person) is a type of logical fallacy in which a person criticizes or attacks another person, rather than what they are saying. Here, the speaker doesn't critize the mentioned poem. They don't give explanations about why the poem is not good. They simply attack the writer, stating that they are a sick and morbid person. That is not a valid reason as to why someone shouldn't read a poem.
Answer:
Ad hominem attack.
Explanation:
I took the quiz and got this correct.
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Prompt: Everyone has a talent or skill. Identify a talent or skill you have, and explain how you develop and use it. Use specific details and examples in your response.
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Answer:
(Hope this is helpful)
For example:
Good communication skills.
Communication talent is the method one uses to effectively give and receive information. Such as ideas, emotions or describing a situation. Communication skills cover listening, speaking and observing. People that have a talent in communication are often confident, friendly and understand their audience well. Also, they are good at giving and receiving feedback.
Critical thinking.
Critical thinking is the ability to think clearly and solve problems. A critical thinker is self-confident and open-minded. They like to be well informed and welcome challenges. They can handle difficult situations in the workplace and complex challenges.
Emotional intelligence
Emotional intelligence is the ability to recognize and manage emotions both at a personal level and of others. People with high emotional intelligence find it easier to become part of a group. They can manage stress better and are less likely to suffer from depression as they are self-aware of their feelings and they can accurately emotionally assess themselves.
HAS ANY ONE READ THE BOOK MINE BY KATY EVANS? IF YES ANSWER TELL ME UR FAVE CHAPTER!
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Answer:
chapter one???????????
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A group of 32 players forms 4 volleyball teams. If there are 96 players, how many teams can be formed?
A. 3 teams
B. 8 teams
C. 12 teams
D. 24 teams
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Answer:
C) 12 teams
Explanation:
96 / 32 = 3
3 * 4 = 12
Answer:
12 teams
Explanation:
96 divided by 32 equals 3
And if you multiply 3 by 4 its 12
Hope this helped you!!
Can you make a sentece for attire
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Answer: I wasn't sure what would be appropriate attire for the restaurant.
Explanation:
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The noun attire is just a formal way to say "outfit." If you're going outside in the middle of a blizzard, your attire should include more than a bathing suit and flip-flops. Attire can also refer to the antlers of a deer, but that's a pretty obscure definition.
Sarah is having trouble studying from her notes. She is using a notes organizer, but she is still having difficulties
identifying main ideas and vocabulary words. Sarah would benefit from
a. writing her notes out in complete c. highlighting the important elements using her
sentences
own note taking key
b. adding a questions section to her notes d. writing down everything the teacher says to
page
ensure she doesn't miss anything
Please select the best answer from the choices provided
Α
В
C
D
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Answer:
C. Highlighting the important elements using her own note-taking key
Explanation:
Sarah would benefit from highlighting the important elements using her own note-taking key. When you're studying from notes, it's important that you create them in a way you understand them. That's why people often have trouble learning from someone else's notes. Everyone learns in their own way. That's why Sarah should use her own note-taking key.
Answer:
c
Explanation:
How do race and gender come into conflict in The House on Mango Street? Does one triumph as the more important concern, or do both issues receive equal consideration?
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Answer and Explanation:
1. In "The House on Mango Street" there is a conflict between gender and race that can be seen when the author approaches the lives of women within the Latin culture, which is a strongly patriarchal culture, where women, in the poorest communities, they are considered in more submissive positions, without much opportunity to achieve a better life, which often generates abuse, bad treatment and lack of freedom.
2. The gender issue may seem to triumph over the race issue, but the author presents these two elements in a very balanced way and establishes a very strong relationship between them.
Could someone help me with these 2 questions please
Identify and explain the rhetorical appeal (ethos, pathos, or logos) of the photograph found on page 289 of "What to the Slave is the Fourth of July?"
Tokenism is the practice of making a symbolic gesture toward a goal, such as eliminating slavery, but not actually fulfilling that goal. Why does Douglass view his invitation to speak on the Fourth of July as an act of Tokenism?
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Why does Douglass consistently use the pronoun "your" in this speech? He is creating the separation between the slave and the free whites if slavery were to continue it would be the death of America would lead to war this is Identify these elements. What feelings is he appealing to in his audience in this section?
Explanation:
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Which of the following best paraphrases this line: And trouble deaf heaven with my bootless cries
a. Heaven doesn’t hear the cries that I make constantly.
b. The way that I feel is disturbing.
c. I am crying out in a poor state.
d. I feel alone and like I can’t get to heaven.
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Answer:
A.)Heaven doesn’t hear the cries that I make constantly.
Explanation:
Its the only one that makes sense to me.
Sorry if its wrong by the way.
But if you feel alone you can get to heaven.
If your crying "constantly" God/Jesus can hear you but not the whole Heaven.(if that makes any sense)
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How does Stanton structure her memoir? — 7Dii
A. Stanton organizes her memoir in a cause-and-effect structure to show how women got
the vote.
B. Stanton uses precise descriptions of key historical events to describe women's
suffrage.
C. Stanton uses anecdotes and reconstructed quotations to reveal her personal
experience.
D. Stanton writes her memoir in order to expose the people who opposed her.
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Answer: B. Stanton uses precise descriptions of key historical events to describe women's suffrage.
Explanation:
The answer is indeed B. Elizabeth C. Stanton is said to be one of the first American feminists and she was very active in the 19th century. She spoke on and laid the foundation for liberal, cultural and dominance feminism which form the basis for feminist activity today.
In her memoir titled, ''The Memoirs of Elizabeth Cady Stanton: Eighty Years and More", she spoke of the journey of the women's suffrage movement up till that point and was able to drive her points home by using precise descriptions of key historical events such as the first Women's rights convention and the first time she spoke in the New York Assembly.
Read the excerpt from "The Gift of the Magi" by O. Henry. Only $1.87 to buy a present for Jim. Her Jim. Many a happy hour she had spent planning for something nice for him. Something fine and rare and sterling—something just a little bit near to being worthy of the honor of being owned by Jim. What inferences about Della can be made based on this excerpt? Check all that apply. Della does not have much money to spend on Jim’s gift. Della wants to buy Jim a watch chain for his watch. Della loves her husband, Jim, very much. Della wants to buy Jim a really nice gift. Della will need to sell her hair to buy Jim a nice gift.
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Answer:
We read this story.
Della does not have much money to spend on Jim’s gift.
Della loves her husband, Jim, very much.
Della wants to buy Jim a really nice gift.
Explanation:
Della will have to sell her hair, but I don't think you can tell by just reading this excerpt.
And she will buy him watch chain, but you can't tell by reading this except also.
Hope this helps!!
To what family does Tybalt belong? He is related to the Prince's family. He is neither Capulet nor Montague. He is related to the Capulet family. He is related to the Montague family.
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Answer:
Tybalt belongs to the Capulet family.
Explanation: It mentions it in the first act of the book.
Answer:
Tybalt belongs to the Capulet family.
Explanation:
What type of figurative language is this: "Three short guys
took huge fish - big like they were baby sharks or something..."
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Explanation:
its not a metaphor, its a simile (not sure if i spelled that right lol)
Answer:
It’s a simile
Explanation:
GIVING BRAINLIST IF YOU GET THE ANSWER RIGHT. The Sahara stretches across northern Africa from the coast of the Red Sea in the east all the way to the Atlantic Ocean in the west.
Why does the author MOST LIKELY use the word stretches in this sentence?
Question 4 options:
to emphasize the vast size of the desert
to reveal that the desert is increasing in size
to show that the desert is in the northern part of Africa
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Answer:
to emphasize the vast size of the desert
20 pointtss Why is online privacy so important
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Answer:
creeps
Explanation:
there are many bad ppl around the world who can steal credit card info or personal pics
Answer:
People can use things such as your address to trach down your location.
Explanation:
Although you may feel safe, revealing things like your name, phone number, and address is not safe for you and your family. This may catch the attention of stalkers, burglars, etc.
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You’ve seen several images that organizations have used to persuade young audiences to eat more healthily or avoid tobacco products. Suggest an approach that you think would work better for this purpose than those you’ve seen so far. Your idea can take the form of any type of multimedia, but it should include a description of the media itself as well as its message.
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Answer:
Your approach could be to compare the health of someone who has avoided tobacco products and has eaten more healthily to a person who has not avoided tobacco products and has not eaten healthily.
You could compare medical records, and conduct experiments to see who would live a longer, healthier life and so forth.
Explanation:
this is you brain o this is your brain when u smoke ( )
this is your but?t freely o this your bu?tt when you shop lift ( )
In the word timely, the suffix is
.
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Answer:
ly
Explanation:
and the root word it time
In the Prologue excerpt, why to you think the Wife of Bath asks the pilgrims NOT to be offended at her views as she will portray them in her tale?
What is the King’s punishment for the Knight?
Who begs the King to show the Knight mercy? How is this ironic?
What does the Wife of Bath say hooks women to men?
What does the old woman value most?
This is for the wifes bath tale
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Answer and Explanation:
1. Because she is a woman far ahead of her time, presenting women in positions that were not stimulated in society and that could shock listeners. Her story is about female freedom, wisdom and even sexual freedom and that was not something advocated in women at the time.
2. The king's punishment is for the knight to be executed for having abused a maiden against her will.
3. The queen begs the king for mercy. The irony in this is that no one imagined that the queen would impose a task so that the knight would not be executed, as readers might think that she would intercede for the knight only because she was kind and not a strategist as she proved to be.
4. Bath's wife claims that having the power to dominate is what binds women to men, because by dominating their husbands, women are able to satisfy their desires and enjoy everything that gives them pleasure. What the old woman values most is the loyalty between the couple
Words circled in red can anyone read it and just tell What they are
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It kinda looks like shel or swel.
Explanation:
In Act III, scene i of Romeo and Juliet, Tybalt returns to the scene after he has killed Mercutio and fled. What motivates his return?
the anger he feels about the marriage
his desire to make peace with Romeo
the guilt he feels about killing Mercutio
his hatred for the entire Montague family
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Answer:
the answer is D
Explanation:
In act III of this story, the motivation that caused Tybalt to return was from the fact that he hated the whole Montague family. Option D is right.
Why did Tybalt hate the Montague family?The hatred for the Montague family is from an age-long feud that has existed between both of the families. The new generation of both families are merely keeping the enmity that was passed down to them
He had hated Romeo because of this and he saw them as his sworn enemies.
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Which sentence best supports the author's claim that the best place to build solar power plants is the Mojave Desert?
sentence 1
sentence 2
sentence 3
sentence 4
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Answer:
sentence 3
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