Can someone PLEEAASE read over my essay and correct me if anything is wrong??? (This is worth 30 of my points so please answer if you will ACTUALLY help me)

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I think that it looks gud u can always run it over Grammarly to make sure.

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Explanation:

Page 1:

Try not to use got. So instead of "got selected" use "was selected."

I've read "The Giver" so I know the story, and who Gabriel is, but your reader may not, you don't explain on page 1, and you should.

Page 2:

Lower case "eleven"

Also, "stirrings" aren't the same as being released, or a reason to be released. There is a disconnect there.

Also, it would be nurturer of the baby. You're missing an r.

Page 4:

The baby could not choose between being released or not.

Page 5:

Don't start a sentence with "And"  you've done it twice.

You're missing the end, it's cut off. I don't know your grade, but good work.

what is the value of learning about injustice from the point of view of someone who has experienced it?

Which part of the sentence best points to the correct definition of injustices in the sentence?

They'd also been talking about the injustices they experienced daily, like not being able to eat at a lunch counter.

(1 point)

"eat at a lunch counter"

"like not being able to eat at a lunch counter"

"they experienced daily"

"they'd also been talking"

My parents should buy a Toyota, because it is the safest car out on the market. According to research data in 2005, Toyota drivers had the least amount of fatalities nationally.

identify the Evidence of this argument

Once you have conducted research, what is the best way to create an outline for a persuasive paper?

A. Use the reasons and the evidence as an outline for the paper.

B. Write the first part of the introduction and then include the reasons and evidence as the rest of the outline.

C. Copy information from the research documents into the outline and then add a thesis statement.

D. Use the thesis statement and reasons that support the thesis statement as an outline.

Read the sentence and the question on the picture.

we can understand that a cloud gets its name as a result of its


I. shape

II. position

III. color


A. I only

B. I and II only

C. II and III only

D. I, II, and III

Determine whether the following symbols are universal or contextual. In "The Nightingale and the Rose,"
Oscar Wilde uses a red rose as a symbol for love. In To Kill a Mockingbird, Harper Lee uses a mockingbird as a symbol for innocence.
In A Little Princess, Frances Hodgson Burnett uses hot buns as a symbol for the connection between the main character and a poor street child.
In "The Water of Life," the Brothers Grimm use water as a symbol for life.

Theme is the ___________________________ of a story.

A)subject and topic
B)main idea
C)universal idea, lesson, or message
D)conflict

The person or force in opposition of the main character is called:

A)the narrator
B)the protagonist
C)the antagonist
D)the hero

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What are all the internal and external conflicts from page 61 to 70 in Percy Jacksn the lightning thief. Please give correct answer. I will make brainliest and give multiple points.

Please help! Thank you!

Is 'Most states require training and tests in bug identification and use of chemicals.' a simple, compound, or complex sentence?

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which of the following is an example of resiliency in nature?

A.)The dolphin's use of sonar helps it to find its way.
B.)The durability of a spider's web enables it to capture its food.
C.)The long, narrow beak of a hummingbird allows it to drink from flowers.
D.)The ability of a starfish to regrow lost limbs enables it to survive serious injury.

What is the role in a scary story about a vampire? (20 POINTS)

The connotative definition of the word snake A) one who is untrustworthy or presents an unseen danger

The denotative definition of the word snake B) The kite string was wrapped around the branch like a snake.

A sentence featuring the literal meaning of the word snake C) Todd was a snake in the grass, waiting for a chance to strike.

A sentence featuring a simile with the word snake D) a scaly, limbless, elongated, sometimes venomous reptile
A sentence featuring a metaphor with the word snake E) Anita told everyone she would like a snake for her birthday.

In a song, the author's purpose is usually to:

A)Persuade
B)Inform
C)Entertain

What is A theme of “Stray”?


People should put their children before their pets.

A family's financial situation can affect the decisions it makes.

A family should make financial sacrifices for their pets.

People who work hard are less likely to want to keep a pet.
Question 2
Part B

Which evidence from “Stray” best supports the answer to Part A?


“The snow was keeping him home from his job at the warehouse.”

“She knew her parents wouldn’t let her keep it….”

“…her father made so little money any pets were out of the question….”

“Mrs. Lacey grudgingly let Doris feed it table scraps.”

“Craig Kiel burger Reflects on Working Toward Peace” by Craig Kiel burger
Read the personal essay “Craig Kiel burger Reflects on Working Toward Peace” by Craig Kiel burger. Then, reread the lines indicated with each question below. Answer each question, citing text evidence.

1. Lines 1–6: How do you know the essay is written using first-person point of view? What language does the author use that sounds informal and conversational? The essay written using first person point of view and the language that the author use the sound informal and conversational is
2. Lines 15–31: Summarize the issues that galvanized Kiel burger to start Free the Children.
3.
4. Lines 36–48: Which statements have a strong emotional impact? Explain what they tell about Kiel burger’s values.
5. Lines 59–77: How can you identify how the author feels about the experience he had with José and a group of street children in Brazil?
6. Photograph: From the image what can you tell about Craig Kiel burger’s appearance and personality? Describe what the image tells you about what Kiel burger is doing.
7. Lines 94–107: Explain how Kiel burger learned an important lesson from his experiences with José in Brazil. Kiel burger learned in a important lesson from experience with Jose In Brazil is
8. Lines 116–130: What elements of storytelling, facts, and wisdom are in these lines?
9. Lines 131–137: In lines 131–133, note the author’s opinion that God “gave each and every person special talents or gifts, but he made no one gifted in all areas.” What do lines 134–137 reveal about the author’s perspective?
10. Lines 138–145: What details reveal the author’s tone? Explain the tone.

Look at the chart with the different types of analogies. Pick one and explain what you think the relationship in that type of analogy would be in more detail.

(The chart)
Type of Analogy Example
parts to whole cord:lamp
synonyms fresh:new
antonyms cooked:raw
cause and effect injury:pain
classification poodle:dog
function knife:cut
symbol flag:country

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Dolphins have suffered from the carelessness of humans. Many dolphins are killed each year in fishing nets. Oil has been spilled into ocean water, polluting the dolphins' environment. The author's viewpoint is:

A)The author's favorite animals are dolphins.
B)The author thinks that humans harm dolphins.
C)The author thinks that humans are helping dolphins.
D)The author thinks that dolphins are dangerous.

What are the two types of conflict?

A)man versus self
B)man versus nature
C)internal and external
D)man versus society

Describe how jonas friends treat him differently after the assignments are announced. why do you think this? ( the giver)

A team of biologists has been investigating fireflies to determine the cause of their declining population Habitat loss is the
most likely factor in the decline of the bioluminescent bug. Light pollution also plays a role Excessive light disrupts the insect's
mating ritual
Write one to two sentences giving an example of technical language in this paragraph and explaining how it affects the overall
meaning of the paragraph

what is difference between american and oxford dictionary ?

Once upon a time there was an old Sow with three little Pigs, and as she had not enough to keep them, she sent them out to seek their fortune.

The first that went off met a Man with a bundle of straw, and said to him, "Please, Man, give me that straw to build me a house"; which the Man did, and the little Pig built a house with it. Presently came along a Wolf, and knocked at the door, and said, "Little Pig, little Pig, let me come in."

To which the Pig answered, "No, no, by the hair of my chinny chin chin."

"Then I'll huff and I'll puff, and I'll blow your house in!" said the Wolf. So he huffed and he puffed, and he blew his house in, and ate up the little Pig.


A. the old Sow
B. the little Pig
C. the Man
D. the Wolf

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PLEASE DEFINE EACH WORD THEN USE EACH WORD IN A SENTENCE. BE SURE TO WRITE IN COMPLETE SENTENCES.



1. Transverse waves

2. Longitudinal waves

3. Mechanical wave

4. Frequency

5. Amplitude

6. Wave

7. Mechanical wave

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Plot is the sequence of events in a story.

A)True
B)False