Can someone fix this poem to make it better?
(This is for my sister lol)

The year is coming to an end, I can’t believe it’s true.
Before we know it, We’ll be moving onto somewhere new.

It seems like only yesterday we entered 5th grade
Think of all the fun we’ve had, and all the progress we’ve made

We studied things like math, reading, and writing
We also learned to do our best and to solve disagreements without arguing.

We played at recess on the monkey bars and slides
We hoped we wouldn’t misbehave and have to sit out on the side.

We’ve grown as learners and as friends but now it’s time to go.
Thanks!

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Answer 1

Answer:maybey isntead of a yesterday maybey a few mins, maybe say instead of thanks say thanks for being my friend? and yea thats all great job

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Answer 2

Answer:

Its good tho

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How can a research question help to guide your research?

A. It helps you focus on a topic in a way that makes it more fun and interesting.

B. It helps you think of key words to use as you search for information online and in a library.

C. Both of the above

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Answer:

A good research question is essential to guide your research paper, project or thesis. It pinpoints exactly what you want to find out and gives your work.

Explanation:

all of the above don’t listen to the person above he didn’t even tell you what the answer was

In your opinion, why is the “Declaration of Independence” an important document in our country’s history”​

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because it’s a very happy thing to celebrate
It contains the ideals or goals of our nation and the arguments the colonists used to explain why they wanted to be free of British rule.

Today is National Hero Recognition Day. What qualities make for a good hero? Do hero’s “set out” to become hero’s or are they hero’s naturally? Do heroes have any flaws? Do you know of any real life heroes? Please write a 7 sentence paragraph explaining your answer. Use evidence to support your claim.

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Answer:

1. Hero‘s quality is to do good deeds

2. Heroes “set out” to become heroes.

3. Heroes have flaws.

4. I know a bunch of heroes.

Explanation:

    The qualities to be a good hero is to do the most good deeds. It also means to help people in needs because that is the definition. Hero’s have to help and “save the day”. Heroes don’t become heroes naturally. They have to “set out” and help people or animals in need and do good deeds. The heroes on the TV, are not the heroes that are in real life. We are humans and we make mistakes in the past, but we change for the better or worse throughout the years. Heroes HAVE flaws. They are human beings too, and humans are not always perfect. The flaws show that the hero is a human and not some kind of perfect robot or something. Lastly, I have seen a LOT of heroes in this world. It could be anyone such as: your kind helpful friend, you mom or dad, soci workers, someone at your house, etc...

Hero’s can be anything, and anyone. Hero’s are people or animals that had saved or helped another in any way. Not all hero’s wear capes! You can be a hero by simply doing a small task for someone. Small things always matter!

What choices do I need to make now to make sure my plan is successful? (One paragraph detailing changes you need to make or things you need to do.)

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Answer:

Maybe you think you don't need a step-by-step guide to writing a great business plan. Maybe you think you don't need a template for writing a business plan. After all, some entrepreneurs succeed without writing a business plan. With great timing, solid business skills, entrepreneurial drive, and a little luck, some founders build thriving businesses without creating even an informal business plan.

But the odds are greater that those entrepreneurs will fail.

Does a business plan make startup success inevitable? Absolutely not. But great planning often means the difference between success and failure. Where your entrepreneurial dreams are concerned, you should do everything possible to set the stage for success.

And that's why a great business plan is one that helps you succeed.

Explanation:

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Answer:

The middle one i think

Explanation:

Answer: C)

Explanation:

July
by Susan Hartley Swett

When the scarlet cardinal tells
Her dream to the dragonfly,
And the lazy breeze makes a nest in the trees,
And murmurs a lullaby,
It's July.

When the tangled cobweb pulls
The cornflower's cap awry,
And the lilies tall lean over the wall
To bow to the butterfly,
It's July.

When the heat like a mist veil floats,
And poppies flame in the rye,
And the silver note in the streamlet's throat
Has softened almost to a sigh,
It's July.

When the hours are so still that time
Forgets them, and lets them lie
Underneath petals pink till the night stars wink
At the sunset in the sky,
It's July.

Which statement best expresses the theme of "July"?

Summer is a calm and peaceful time of year.

Nature is cruel and cares not for human concerns.

The slow pace of life in summer can be frustrating.

People cannot comprehend the complexity of nature.

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Answer:

Summer is a calm and peaceful time of year.

Explanation:

Summer is a calm and peaceful time of year, is statement best expresses the theme of July.

Why summer is better than winter?

Summer is better than winter as people in summer can spend more time outdoor and having the long day rather than the long nights. The chance of getting flu in the summer days are less than compared to the winter days.

Thus, option A is correct.

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Read these lines from Shel Silverstein’s poem Sick.

“I cannot go to school today,”
Said little Peggy Ann McKay.

What makes these two lines a couplet instead of just two lines from a poem?

They are someone’s speech.
Their final syllables rhyme.
They have a regular rhythm.
They are very short.

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Answer:

they are someone's speech

Answer:
Their final syllables rhyme.

Explanation:
Two lines of verse, usually in the same meter joined by a rhyme, but hat fort a unit.

BRAIN!!!!!!!!!
Which of these sentences includes an example of hyperbole?
A small sign was taped to the door: Turn around!
The sky had grown dark and angry since we left the house.
I walked a thousand miles yesterday!
When the zombies arrive, I’ll be ready.

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Answer:

I walked a thousand miles yesterday

Explanation:

A hyperbole is an exaggeration.

Answer:

I walked a thousand miles yesterday

Explanation:

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Answer:

I think its the second one

a word that uses the root word -vac- and Write one complete sentence using the word that you came up with for -vac-.

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Vacation: me and my friend went on a long vacation to Spain.
Vaccine: Yesterday, I got the vaccine for coronavirus.
Vacuum: I need to clean the carpet with a vacuum cleaner because it is dirty.
Vacuum: I got a new vacuum.
Vaccination: Vaccination is very important.
Vacillate: He facilitated about whether to leave or not.

What does the word mean in this line?
To play

To hug
To talk

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Hjridficucucuffdkrjendiejrfjriddxksken

Answer:

The underlined and bolded are the answers

Explanation:

If You Don’t Like Summer

Which of the following lines best reveal an overall theme of the story?

“School is out and summer camps start”

“Swim in the pool, eat some ice cream”

“Lie on the green grass, make a chain with a daisy”

“If you don’t like summer, you must be crazy”

Why does the author repeat the phrase “If you don’t like summer, you must be crazy” in the poem?

To show that summer is fun

To emphasize that people should like summer

To reveal that the author thinks you’re crazy

To describe why summer is cool

Rewrite this sentence using correct punctuation and capitalization: Flossy returns is the first chapter in my new book.

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Answer: Flossy returns are the first chapter in my new book.

Explanation:

‘Flossy Returns’ is the first chapter in my new book.

How are the inhabitants of the otherworld in "Sayadio in Spirit-land" similar to those in "Valhalla: Hall of the Chosen Slain"?

They both cannot communicate with anyone outside the spirit world.

They both are continually honored for their bravery in battle.

They both seem content and perfectly happy where they are.

They both long to return to their physical lives on earth.

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Answer:

C.

Explanation:

"Sayadio in Spirit-land" is an Iroquois legend. In this legend, a warrior named Sayadio goes to the spirit world to find the spirit of his sister and bring it back to the earth. When Sayadio arrived in the spirit world, everyone was dancing and feasting.

In the mythological story of "Valhalla: Hall of the Chosen Slain", the spirits of the great warrior were brought. Odin, the king of gods, would chose the mightiest of the might warriors' spirits to be brought in his kingdom. The spirit of the warriors rejoice being there.

Therefore, the similarity is that the spirits or the inhabitants of the otherworld in both the stories were content and happy.

Thus, option C is correct.

Answer:

They both seem content and perfectly happy where they are.

Create a sentence with two modifiers. One should be at the beginning as a dependent clause, and the second modifier should be in the second part of the sentence, the independent clause. Ensure that neither modifiers are misplaced nor dangling. Punctuate accurately.

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Answer: The secret to life is honestly being a person like John who after knowing the truth was still happy.

Explanation: Hope your happy with my pain

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What kinds of information can be referenced as effective support for your claim?

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Credible website, quotes
1)established facts.
2)case studies.
3)statistics.
4)experiments.
5)analogies and logical reasoning.
6)citation of recognized experts on the issue.

In two sentences or less, please descirbe anything that you know about teaching.

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Explanation:

Teaching is a sensitive subject, but to really be a great teacher you have to have compassion. To guide a student, help them when theyre struggling, to master core subjects, being a teacher is like being a parent; hard but worth it!

Answer:

Teaching is not just about math or reading, you are giving the kids you teach something they will never forget. A teacher builds a future one kid at a time.

Explanation:

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a word that uses the root word -dem-

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Answer: Demonstrate :)

Explanation:

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Read the article "Machine Simulates the Sun's Core" by Ilima Loomis.
What is the article about?
What type of language does it use: formal, informal, or a combination?

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Answer:

seems more formal than informal or a combination

Explanation:

Choose the simple sentence.

A- Athena is the goddess of wisdom, so she is an important figure in Greek mythology.
B- In Greek mythology, Athena is the goddess of wisdom.

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The simple sentence is B
Answer is B.......................

think about at least 2 lessons that you learned in Walk Two Moons. what were the lessons and how could you apply them to your life?



its an actual book, i have a few pages from the book so message me and ask if u can read
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1. “Don't judge a man until you've walked two moons in his moccasins.” This is the primary lesson of the novel.

2. Sal is struggling with the death of her mother. She encounters many people with their own struggles.

It teachs me team work
It teaches me love

On page 9, Matilda comments that “Eliza was the luckiest person I knew.” Explain why Matilda feels this way and what we learn about how Matilda views her own life inside the coffeehouse. Use evidence from the text to support your answer.

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Answer:

This question needs text.

Explanation:

The question states to use evidence from the text to support your answer. For the correct answer to the question the text needs to be present.

PERSONAL QUESTION
If you knew you had one week to live, what would you do? Why?

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I will enjoy my like because when we die we can’t take the money right!

Answer:

i would say goodbye to all my family members and make a bucket list and try to do every thing on it before i die

What is the purpose of the figurative language "By the time the fire engine got there, the gambling boat was a floating torch."

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Answer:

Th purpose is to tell you that the boat is completely on fire.

Explanation:

This is more of a metaphor and imagery combined. Reason being a metaphor since the gambling boat isn’t actually a floating torch. Imagery because it is telling you that it looked like a floating torch. Putting two and two together it means the gambling boat was already on fire.

Why do you think meteorologists use more than one model to determine the weather?
............................................................................................................................................

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Answer:

i think its because if one of the models are broken or wrong they have a back up or just try to get better info then the others or just to get extra data.

Explanation:

They use more than one model to ensure that they are able to make a accurate prediction of future weather conditions.

help me finish the alliteration: analyze and complete I nee help with the blank ones​

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13•Vanessa’s Violin was Vibrant
11• the ripe red strawberries were rich in taste
7• polly painted pretty pictures different shades of pink
Polly painted pretty pictures passionately

Part A

Which statement is a central idea of "Barbie Is in Her 60s and Still Going Strong!"?


More than a billion Barbie dolls have been sold worldwide since 1959.

Barbie teaches young girls the advantages and drawbacks of celebrity.

Social media is a vital tool for marketing products to people of all ages.

Barbie provides inspiration to girls by reflecting different identities.
Question 2
Part B

Which quotation best reflects the development of the central idea in Part A?


"The math works out to 58 million Barbies a year and about a billion over the past six decades."

"The first African American Barbie doll hit store shelves in 1968."

"The first Barbies and Kens wore simple swimsuits, giving little hint of the amazing variety to come."

"She was in a position to address this oversight, and she did so."

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Answer:

Part A: Barbie provides inspiration to girls by reflecting different identities.

Part B: "The first African American Barbie doll hit store shelves in 1968."

Explanation:

Fezzik, the giant is berated by Vizzini, who says he is nothing more than a “landmass.” What evidence shows you that Vizzini is wrong, that Fezzik has value that extends beyond his large physique?
(The Princess Bride Movie)

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Answer:

What evidence shows you that Vizzini is wrong, that Fezzik has ... Fezzik, the giant is berated by Vizzini, who says he is nothing more than a “landmass. ... wrong, that Fezzik has value that extends beyond his large physique?

What is the figurative language in this quote?: "Mr. Shine looked like he'd swallowed a bad clam. 'What?' he croaked. 'Where in the world did you get that idea?'"

A metaphor
B simile
C alliteration
D personification

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Answer:

Its A

Explanation:

The answer is B (simile)
because it used the word like and similes use like or as while comparing two things. While metaphors create implicit comparisons.

Easy explanation: Basically the only difference is similes use like or as metaphors don’t to sum it up.

Which of the following represents a true cause-and-effect relationship in Antigone? Creon refuses burial to Polyneices—Antigone defies Creon—Creon refuses to yield—Creon loses everything Creon challenges Tiresias—Tiresias predicts Creon’s doom—Creon yields his power Antigone challenges Creon—Antigone takes her life—Haemon takes his life Tiresias predicts Creon’s doom—Creon tries to save Antigone—Antigone takes her life

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Answer:

Creon refuses burial to Polyneices—Antigone defies Creon—Creon refuses to yield—Creon loses everything

Explanation:

I'm doing the quiz right now and picked this one, I hope this helps! If not i'm so sorry.

Answer:

Creon refuses burial to Polyneices—Antigone defies Creon—Creon refuses to yield—Creon loses everything

Explanation:

What is the greatest conflict (biggest problem) in the novel at this point? Who is involved? Why is this a problem? In to kill a mocking bird

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The greatest conflict is stereotypes and misconceptions each character in the story has a stereotype or misconception that they believe or have to overcome
the greatest conflict is the stereotypes and misconceptions
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