18. Describe two strategies that can help you make better use of the revision stage of the writing process

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Answer 1

Revise by yourself then ask someone else to revise the writing. It would be good to have someone with a different thought process than you. That person will normally spot out other things in the writing you might have not noticed.

Don't be afraid to make big changes in the writing! If you do not like a paragraph and wish to delete then it's ok, you can also rewrite the paragraph as you see fit or you can move it around to a different place in the writing. You can also do that before making small changes like grammar, spelling, and formatting.

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Read the line from the text.

Most people would agree that with its typically high fat and sugar content and delicious taste, chocolate is terribly good.

What effect does the author create by using the phrase terribly good? Select TWO options.
A.
The author makes chocolate seem appealing despite its high fat and sugar content.
B.
The author creates a sarcastic mood to coordinate with the mood of the rest of the text.
C.
The author creates a controversial mood on purpose to spur his reader to action against chocolate production and consumption.
D.
The author challenges the reader to think twice about chocolate and see it as an alternative to energy bars because of its energy–inducing sugar and fat.
E.
The author wants to create a positive mood about chocolate, as the point of the text is to persuade the reader to always choose chocolate as his or her snack of choice.
F.
The author wants the reader to delight in the fact that we eat chocolate and enjoy it even though it is not very healthy.

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Answer:

the answer is the last option that why he said terribly good terrible and good has two meanigs when combine the both words the last answer is correct

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I would not do it for a child, were I a mother, Not for a husband either. Let them lie, putrefied, dead; I would not defy the city at such cost for their sake. What law can I claim on my side for this choice

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Hi. Even though you submitted a text, you did not submit any questions about it. This makes it impossible for me to give you an answer. However, I will try to help you by telling you what this text means.

This text is an excerpt from the play "Antigone" and is spoken by Antigone herself, as she explains to Creon why she decided to disobey his orders and bury her brother.

Antigone's brother died a traitor and Creon, the king, forbade anyone to bury him. Anyone who disobeyed him would be sentenced to death. Antigone disobeyed and when she was taken to Creon she told him the words shown in the text above. In these words Antigone claims that she would not defy the king's order for a son or for a husband, because she could have another husband and other children, but she cannot have another brother and so she disobeyed the king. In this moment, Antigone shows how family relationships are important to her.

Select the correct answer.
Read the following advertisement.
New Age Travels. Have you ever wished to travel to the backwaters of Kerala in India or trek through the Amazon? Do you want to know what it’s like in the South Pole? Or what makes Burmese food so tasty? Then we are the people you’re looking for. We can take you anywhere. We have a lot of expertise, and our staff is passionate about traveling. They will help you choose your destination and create a memorable holiday for you within your budget. What are you waiting for? Call now!

Which words or sentence in this advertisement do you think could work well as a tagline?

A.
New Age Travels
B.
We have a lot of expertise and our staff is passionate about traveling.
C.
We can take you anywhere.
D.
What are you waiting for?
E.
Have you ever wished to travel to the backwaters of Kerala in India or trek through the Amazon?

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Answer:

c... :)

Explanation:

C. We can take you anywhere

When should you include a comma before a coordinating conjunction?
when one complete thought is included in a sentence
any time the words and, or, but, and so are in a sentence
when there is only one independent clause in a sentence
when a coordinating conjunction separates two independent clauses

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yes same i really want to know what it is

Explanation:

In the sentence below, the underlined portion is a clause. Identify the type of clause.
I can't go to the movies since I don't have any
money.
Independent clause
Dependent clause
Non essential clause
None of the choices

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Answer:

The answer is a dependent clause

10.
Which sentence is written in the active voice?


A. A perfectly preserved woolly mammoth was found frozen in ice by scientists.


B. Scientists found a perfectly preserved woolly mammoth frozen in ice.

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Answer:

B

Explanation:

The subject (scientists) comes right before its action (found), which is the active voice.

B active why because it’s done by the scientist the subject is the science hopefully u understand

Discuss the types of motion you can add into your presentations.

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Answer:

Action Button. A built-in button shape that you can add to your presentation and then assign an action to occur upon the click of the mouse or with a mouse over.

After Previous.

Animated GIF.

Animation.

Animation Pane.

Annotation.

Basic Custom Slide Show.

Chevron.

Explanation:

Answer:

Explanation:

A built-in button shape that you can add to your presentation and then assign an action to occur upon the click of the mouse or with a mouse over.

An animation command that begins the animation sequence for the selected PowerPoint slide element immediately after the completion of the previous animation or slide transition.

A file format made up of a series of frames within a single file that creates the illusion of animation by displaying the frames one after the other in quick succession.

The area that contains a list of the animation effects added to your presentation. From this pane, you can add or modify effects.

Any type of motion or movement that occurs as the presentation moves from slide to slide. 2. A special visual effect or sound effect added to text or an object.

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Answer: The 2nd option: Starting with irene

Explanation: It gives the most information with the most detail out of all the others.

Example:

Hi I'm tony and I like to swim.

Hi Im tony I love to swim, golf and sometimes play.

It is obvious the 2nd one is beter because of the information its giving.

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A review is a type of Persuasive Writing.
True
False

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Answer:

True.

Explanation:

Surprisingly, this is true! I know, I was suprised when I first learned it too. It persuades the reader that the story or whatever is worth reading or not worth reading.

Answer:

false

Explanation:

a persuasive writing is something/someone trying to get someone to think how they think or see their side of the argument which is where the phrase "put yourself in someone else' s shoes" takes a part, a persuasive writing is written to pursue a opinion  

Please help. Don’t answer if you don’t know the answer. Thank you

Write a compare-and-contrast essay about traditional broadcast network television and
modern niche programming. Use the information you learned in this unit's lesson on media literacy as a source.

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I can't write a whole essay, but I can definitely give you some main points for it.

Back in the day, when TV's still had knobs and antennas, there weren't many channels to choose from (obviously). Even when each American household had a TV in 1965, there were still only three channels to choose from, CBS, NBC, and ABC. Any TV shows or news broadcasts were primarily on those stations. However, by 1970, that number had skyrocketed to over 700 UHF and VHF channels, and advertisers had jumped on the opportunity to market to Americans through it.

The need for niche networks arose from a need from consumers to easily find things they gravitate towards, such as soap operas, science shows, cooking shows, etc. It also arose because advertisers wanted to market via the niche method. Instead of marketing to a whole bunch of people and hoping the ones they really want to target receive the message, they go right to the source with niche TV, tailoring their advertisements to increase their consumer awareness and potential sales.

Assignment Summary
For this assignment, you will use a graphic organizer to monitor and analyze multiple global news outlets
across a period of time
. Once you have completed your organizer, you will answer key questions about
the media's coverage of a story and how this coverage changed and developed over time.
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Also need help on part 2

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Answer:

Do u still need help with this or did u post this a while ago?

The hundred dresses - 1 is about teasing of Wanda being polish and having a strange names by white girls . It also borders on ragging and raccium indirectly . Decribe how does it affect you and how do you evaluate it ? ( CLASS 10 THE HUNDRED DRESSES )​

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Answer:

of the hundred dreses whic below on the anser

Memes are life.
A. Personification
B. Idiom
C. Simile
D. Hyperbole
E. Metaphor

(And explain why)

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Answer:

D. Hyperbole

Explanation:

It is hyperbole because it is heavily exagerated that memes are your life.

Has anyone read Jasper Jones and can help me with an essay?

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Answer:

yes i have read i lost the book

please send pics and i will help you

Explanation:


1
In the first 2 paragraphs, the author poses a number of questions regarding the origins of the word “ghetto.” How do these questions contribute to our understanding of the text?

A.
The questions illustrate the fact that every country has ghettos
B.
The questions illustrate the fact that it’s difficult to nail down the original use of the word
C.
The questions illustrate that the author is unsure of the origin of the word
D.
The questions illustrate that the definition of “ghetto” has always had a negative connotation

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i believe it is b, goodluck

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Answer:

Imagination because fiction isn't real.

Answer:

Facts

Explanation:

Non-fiction is based on factual data and real life information that is true, and proven to be true

Astro dad by readworks

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Answer:

Its nice!

Explanation:

It’s really good actually.

change from active to passive: An earthquake destroyed the town​

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The town was destroyed by an earthquake

7. What was Hitler's "Final Solution"? What role did the Germany military and citizenry play in helping
achieve this plan? When and how was it thwarted?

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Answer:

- The “Final Solution” plan was a plan that happened during WWII to exterminate Jewish people in Nazi-occupied Europe. It was the most deadly phase of the war and it caused the destruction of Jewish communities in continental Europe. The plan was based on the belief that Aryans were in power and the race should be preserved, therefore gypsies, Freemasons, Jehovah's, and Jews were considered “inferior races”. Homosexuals, mentally deficient and incurably ill people were also targets of this plan. These people were forced to relocate into ghettos, their property was taken, and after they were moved to concentration camps. The healthy ones were forced into labor, the weakest ones were killed. It is estimated that 11 million people were killed during the Final Solution Plan.

- The Germany military participated in Nazi crimes, including the Final Solution Plan. The military perpetrated crimes against civilians and prisoners of war and also facilitated the Plan.

- Citizens in a certain way also helped the Plan, first because some of them were supporters of the Nazi regime, not because they believed they were racially superior, but because Hitler came to power by saying that the outcome of WWI was unfair to Germany, and many Germans agreed with that. Also, concentration camps were located in remote areas so it was not the visible for the major urban population.

- The Plan only ended with the end of War, the American troops and Soviets troops liberated a series of concentration camps at the end of the war, many prisoners were abandoned by the Nazis.

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Do you see any similarities between George Floyd's murder and Emmett Till's? Explain.

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Answer:

They both had their breath taken away by a white person because of black cruelty. I don't really know how to explain it.

Explanation:

Look at https://abcnews.go.com/US/wireStory/george-floyd-emmett-till-families-parallels-loss-77224618

is a good book 1000 or 200 pages​

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Answer:

200 pages

Explanation:

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Part B

A How does the section "Supply-Side Strategies for Water Suppliers" contribute to the structure and organization identified in Part A?

B It explains how accounting for water and water loss control are methods to achieve sustainability.

C It debates whether water loss control or accounting for water is more effective to achieve efficiency.

D It describes how and when water meters were first used to measure water usage.

F It provides detailed instructions for using a water meter and locating where leaks are most likely to occur.

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The answer that sounds the best to me is D sorry if I’m wrong

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As you learned in this lesson, there are many storyboard formats, each designed for a different type of project. What kind of project would benefit from a storyboard with many frames on each page?
Select one:

a.
a presentation based on an existing structure or organization

b.
a presentation with a lengthy and very detailed script

c.
a project with slides that will contain many detailed visual elements

d.
a project consisting of ideas that may need to be rearranged

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Answer:

I think it's B............ hope this helps

The kind of project that would benefit from a storyboard with many frames on each page is a project consisting of ideas that may need to be rearranged.

What do you mean by a project?

A project can be defined as carefully planned to achieve a particular aim.

The kind of project that would benefit from a storyboard with many frames on each page is a project consisting of ideas that may need to be rearranged.

Therefore, D is the correct option.

Learn more about the project here:

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Which story premise is most clearly a classic tragedy?
O A. Heavy rains flood a musician's basement, ruining his equipment.
O B. Jesse tries his best to restore an old car, but the thing won't run.
O C. No matter how hard she tries, Tris just can't succeed at anything.
D. A successful business owner loses everything because of her
greed.
SUBMIT

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i think it’s B


explanation:




The past perfect tense is made up of two parts what are they? 

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Answer:

The Past Perfect tense in English is composed of two parts: the past tense of the verb to have (had) + the past participle of the main verb.

When they arrived: we had already started cooking

I had saved my document: before the computer crashed

John had gone out: when I arrived in the office

He was very tired: because he hadn't slept well

Explanation:

I hope it's help u Have a great day

Answer:

The Past Perfect tense in English is composed of two parts: the past tense of the verb to have (had) + the past participle of the main verb.

I had saved my document: before the computer crashed

John had gone out: when I arrived in the office

When they arrived: we had already started cooking

He was very tired: because he hadn't slept well

What is the form of the word media?

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singular form

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A summary does not include

A.Setting
B.conflict
C.theme
D.characters

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Answer:

A summary does not include the setting

Explanation:

Answer:

A summary doesn't include a setting, because there would probably be multiple settings in the story.

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Which best describes the relationship between
character and conflict in the excerpt?

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Answer:  is a dynamic character because the external conflict with causes her to change.is a dynamic character because the external conflict with causes her to change

Explanation:

- Nelson Mandela

“The greatest glory in living is not falling, but rising every time we fall."

Former President of South Africa
What does this quote mean? make it at least 2-3 sentences

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Answer:

it means that failure isn't the best thing but getting us and learning from that failure is truly the glory, therfore if we don't learn from our mistakes there was no point in making them. we give significance to our mistakes and that significance is only good if we get up and learn from it

Explanation:

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Answer:

When Nelson Mandela said, "The greatest glory in living is not failing, but rising every time we fall," he was speaking about the power of persistence. More specifically, the power to get up day after day and fight all over again. That's what brings the greatest glory.

The poem says a lot about the theme of time passing and looks fading. The woman in the poem regrets the loss of youth and beauty. What is your definition of beauty? Is it a physical feature? Is there such a thing as “inner beauty? What kind of beauty might that be? Write your answer in two hundred words.

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Answer and Explanation:

This is a personal question about your opinion. I will provide an example below. Feel free to add or edit anything to fit your beliefs and opinions:

My definition of beauty does go beyond looks, although I must agree that all of us probably still judge people first based on their appearance. Still, I believe personality, character, manners, and actions are a better way to convey one's true beauty. Indeed, it is what most people would call "inner beauty", and I truly think it exists.

If someone despises or mistreats others, no matter how physically beautiful that someone is, we will end up finding them ugly because their actions and traits are ugly. The same happens the other way around. A person may not be considered very attractive, but if they are gentle, polite, and intelligent, for instance, we will perceive that person as beautiful and will prefer their company over the attractive but rude person.

Answer:

My definition of beauty does go beyond looks, although I must agree that all of us probably still judge people first based on their appearance. Still, I believe personality, character, manners, and actions are a better way to convey one's true beauty. Indeed, it is what most people would call "inner beauty", and I truly think it exists. If someone despises or mistreats others, no matter how physically beautiful that someone is, we will end up finding them ugly because their actions and traits are ugly. The same happens the other way around. A person not be considered very attractive, but if they are gentle, polite, and intelligent, for instance, we will perceive that person as beautiful and will prefer their company over the attractive but rude person. Plath’s poem, “Mirror,” which she wrote in 1961, is a poignant poem that touches on the themes of time passing and beauty as a mirror (the speaker of the poem) that relates its experiences with a woman who has grown old and is no longer beautiful. Having the mirror narrate the poem is an example of personification. Notice that it speaks with objectivity of a child who just reflects on surface realities and is too young to understand deeper nuances.

Explanation:

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