5. What does revision mean? How is revising
different from editing?

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Answer 1
During revising, you add, cut, move, or change information in order to improve content. During editing, you take a second look at the words and sentences you used to express your ideas and fix any problems in grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure.

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Which piece of evidence would better support the claim?

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Answer:

is there a passage or article ?

Explanation:

where are the answer choices? i could try to help but i dont see anything else

Answer:

there's no passage or answer choices

Explanation:

can you provide answer choices so i could help

Match the following vocabulary words.
1. an expert in designing or building machines, roads, bridges, etc.

2. based on trials or tests to discover something unknown, to prove a hypothesis, or to illustrate some known truth

3. having to do with a mechanical or industrial art or applied science

4. a person skilled in the technicalities of applied science

5. planned or worked out in the mind; based on theory but not yet proved or tested

6. explanation based on limited observation and reasoning, especially one that has not been confirmed




experimental

engineer

theory

technician

applied science

theoretical

technical

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Answer:

1- Engineer

2-Experimantal

3-Technical

4-Technician

5-Theoretical

6-Theory

Explanation:

Grammarly says that this is an intricate text writing issue.

Sentence: "My input to the conversations not only provided a different perspective but also brought attention to global topics like greed and justice that further led to a meaningful discussion."

Can anyone fix the sentence without changing the meaning?

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Answer:

When inserting the input of the conversation that occured, I strived to present a multivariate perspective while also keeping global topics like greed and justice in the lense which ultimately led to a meaningful and driven discourse. Hope this helps, I would recommend breaking the sentence up into 2 but thats your decision! Rate positively and give brainlist

Which of the following most closely describes one way the author of The Choice" transforms "The Road Not Taken"?

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Answer:g

Explanation:y

Answer: the choice modernized the road not taken

Explanation:

What inspired Anupama?​

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Answer:

hope it helps you a little

Designer Anupama Dayal's collection for the upcoming WIFW and LFW is inspired by Alfred Tennyson's poem The Lotus Eaters.

Katniss' hope for her sister's surivival while she is in the games surrounds Gale being gracious and Prim's goat?
True or False
hunger games 9th grade english

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Answer:

true i think

Explanation:

Find the resultant vector pf A - B where A = (9, 3) and B = (2, 4).

A) (7, 7)
B) (7, 1)
C) (7, -7)
D) (7,-1)​

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The answer is D (7,-1)

What is another term for a document created at the time of or by a person who was present at a historical event?
A primary source
00
fictional account
n
secondary source
D
unreliable resource
20 points HELP PLEASE

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Answer:the answer

Explanation:A primary source is a document or physical object which was written or created during the time under study. These sources were present during an experience or time period and offer an inside view of a particular event.

HARRY POTTER PPL PLS ANSWER: At The Burrow, Fred, Ron, and George

A) locked the gnomes in Harry's trunk.
B) had to de-gnome the garden.
C) were made to de-flea the ghoul.
D) showed Harry their favorite spot.

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Answer:

Had to de-gnome the garden.

Explanation:

This doesn't need an explanation...

When an ambulance passes you, the pitch seems to change as it speeds by. This is called the Doppler Effect. Please use complete sentences in your answer.

1-Describe what happens to the sound waves as the ambulance approaches you. How would you hear the sound waves? (2 pts.)

2-Describe what happens to the sound waves as the ambulance moves away from you. How would you hear the sound waves now? (2 pts.)

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Answer & Explanation:

As the ambulance approaches you, the distance between the source of the waves and the observer decreases. As a result, the siren sounds more shrill as the pitch of the wailing siren sounds "higher" than its original value, as sound waves reach you more frequently due to the shorter distance.

The opposite occurs when the ambulance moves away from you. The distance between the ambulance (source of sound waves) and the observer increases. As a result, the siren sounds less shrill and sounds "lower" than its original value since the wave reach you less frequently given the greater distance.

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What can the reader infer from the message on the back of the photo Martha carries?

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Answer:

The message from back of the photo suggests that Ben and Jamal must be Martha's family, and asking Martha not to give up on what they've got together as a family.

Explanation:

'Martha, Martha' is a short story written by Zaddie Smith. The story is about a young girl aged twenty-two, named Martha. Martha is looking for rented apartment and when Pam shows her an apartment of Yousef and Amelia, her behavior changes seeing a family-husband, wife, and a baby girl.

She rushes to bathroom and sees a photograph of a grinning, long-lashed boy of about eighteen months old and a young black man. On the back of the photograph was written a poem from Ben and Jamal. The poem gives the readers hint that Martha may have a family, which includes Ben and Jamal. And, Ben and Jamal are asking Martha to not give up on what they have. The poem also suggests that Martha have many dreams which can be interpreted as that Martha might have left her family to fulfil her dreams.

Addie owns the Knead to Know Bakery and has decided to open a website.

But first she needs to choose a domain name.

Take a look at her ideas and select the best domain name by crossing off the rest.

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This question is incomplete. Here's the complete question.

Addie owns the Knead to Know Bakery and has decided to open a website. Take a look at her ideas and select the best domain name by crossing off the rest.

(A) www.knead2know.com

(B) www.kneadtoknowbakery.com

(C) www.Addies.com

(D) www.i-knead-it.org

(E) www.mybakery.com

Answer: (B) www.kneadtoknowbakery.com

Explanation:

This is the best domain name from Addie´s ideas because it provides the information required for most customers to find the website. Stating the business name and the type of business it is (a bakery) in the domain is the best way for customers to find the website.  The other options don´t have key information such as the name or the kind of business, and they add numbers or dashes that may make it difficult to find.

Which statement describes what is gained or lost during radioactive decay?
Atoms gain other atoms.

Elements take in energy.

Atoms lose smaller particles.

Elements gain smaller particles.

only one answer

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Answer
Atoms lose smaller particles.

Answer:

C. On Edge.

Explanation:

Based on the passage, what does Reggie's response reveal about Georgia's actions throughout the passage?

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Answer:

Georgia needed to work hard in order to improve her artistic skills, and dedicating time to practice helped her become successful.

This journal entry will be completed in two parts. In this lesson, you will examine how different sentence types can add variety and interest to writing. Part of your learning will involve revising your own writing to improve sentence variety.

Now, before continuing with the lesson, you will complete the first half of your entry. Write a short, four- to five-sentence paragraph about a topic of your choosing.

Then, after you have completed this lesson, come back to the paragraph you wrote. Analyze your writing to identify areas where you could revise using different sentence types to add interest to your work. Revise the paragraph using the techniques you have learned. Your completed journal entry should have both your original and your revised paragraph.

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Answer:

After reading the labels, I think we don't need soda, candy and ice cream because it can affect your health. Breakfast cereal, Canned and frozen fruit are the most nutrient food. Cereal will provide you some source of sugar and energy in the morning, canned and frozen fruit will provide you the most nutrient during the day and evening. Ice cream, candy bar and soda are the least nutritious food because they have excessive amount of sugar and it's not good for your health to consume a lot of sugar in a day.

Explanation:

If you were President of the United States, what would you have done to
combat the Coronavirus pandemic that has been devastating much of
our nation and the world?

Be specific. Provide at least two examples.

Please help

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I personally would've done these two things:

Publically order Gates, Fauci, and all other traitors complicit in this Rothschild NWO public conditioning project to public hanging.

There is without a doubt in any thinking man's mind, that what's happening is a multi-purpose project in order to inflict damage on our society. I mean, come on, they can't even hold up the narrative that it originated in a Wuhan food plant, or that it even isn't man-made or just a natural occurrence. Personal example, both of my 80 year old grandmothers, one of which smoked for decades, got over their illness that took their taste and smell in a week! Same goes for myself, less than a week! The economic damage, baseless tyrannical measures, supply chain issues, increased self harm rate, and social polarization and havoc this pandemic has caused clearly isn't worth a "pandemic" with a fatality rate under 1% just like any other illness such as the flu.

The solution to this communist plan is to completely take up arms to take back and restore our now corrupt political systems and take power away from the Talmudic Edomite Jews who have been infiltrating our governments for all of history, even as the Pharisees did in biblical times, and we'd make sure not to allow their return or make them equal again. No, in all seriousness, there will be probably worse done.

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How did early Romans clean the floors

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Answer:

They used sawdust (i dont know how putting saw dust on the floor is cleaning it tbh)

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Answer:

What are we supposed to answer?

There is nothing?

Explanation:

I’m not sure what to answer here?

I bet the butcher the other day that he couldn’t reach the meat that was on the top shelf. He refused to take the bet, saying that the steaks were too high.

hyperbole
pun
symbolism
pun

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The answer is pun, nothing is being necessarily exaggerated so it’s not hyperbole and nothing is being symbolized so not symbolism the answer is pun

What kind of tone do people usually expect a news article to have?
emotional
humorous
biased
objective

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Answer:

objective

Explanation:

Answer:

Objective

Explanation:

The reason for it being objective is because news articles want to get to the point.

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What intangible affects Tim O’Brien/Lieutenant Jimmy Cross? Explain.

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This question is incomplete. Here's the complete question.

Read The Things They Carried  by Tim O’Brien

What intangible affects Tim O’Brien/Lieutenant Jimmy Cross? Explain.

Answer:

Tim O’Brien carries guilt and fear because when he got drafted he first decided to escape to Canada to avoid fighting in a war he didn´t believe in. It´s only the fear of disappointing his family that made him go to Vietnam.

Lieutenant Jimmy Cross also carries guilt. He blames himself for Lavender's death because he was distracted thinking of his college crush when it happened.

Explanation:

O’Brien describes the things the soldiers in the Alpha Company took on to war, differentiating the tangible ones from the intangible ones, such as guilt and fear.

Her ______ to her daughter is truly inspiring.
a.
skepticism
c.
devotion
b.
tolerable
d.
none of the above

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i think C or D :p am i am not a smart person but. lol

Answer: It was actually C not D so it is C!!!

(devotion)

Explanation: eg 2020 :P

which type of severe weather is related to high pressure systems ?????

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Answer:

Heat waves

Explanation:

the new baby is a bundle of joy.

A. idiom
B. simile
C. metaphor
D. alliteration ​

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Answer:

Idiom

Explanation:

Your answer is idiom because this could not be a simile ,with a simile you need"like or as",with alliteration you need your sentence with the same letter like" peter pickles pan",with metaphor you don't need like or as.It is an idiom because the meaning of the new baby is a bundle of joy means a new baby that is welcome to the family.

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in your home a clause or a phrase​

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Answer:

The answer is a phrase!!

Explanation:

A phrase is any collection of words that behaves like a part of speech, like a noun phrase (“my brother Stu”), an adjectival phrase (“in a different shade of blue”), or an adverbial phrase (“with elegance and tact”). A clause is any noun phrase plus a verb; they can be sentences, but they don't always have to be.

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what are the different reactions of
people to the abs cbn shutdown.​

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Angry and Sad..........

Who is Adam? Why does the first Gravedigger say Adam was a gentlemen

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Answer:

Adam is the first man on earth created by God (in the book of Genesis) and kept in the Garden of Eden.

And to the first gravedigger, Adam was a gentleman because he worked with his own tools and labor to survive instead of depending on others.

Explanation:

William Shakespeare's "Hamlet" revolves around the revenge tragic play of Hamlet and his want to avenge his father's wrongful death. The play focuses on issues such as loyalty, greed, right and wrong, honor, religion, and death.

Act V scene i of the play shows two gravediggers digging a grave for the dead Ophelia who had killed herself. They began to discuss and argue about what type of burial she will get and how it all is a corrupt system. Anyone who commits sui cide is not worthy of getting a Christian burial but considering Ophelia and her family who are influential and rich, she will be given one despite the condition of her death. And in this discourse, the first gravedigger mentioned how Adam was also an aristocrat, for "He was the first that ever bore arms" and dug. According to him, Adam's profession of tilling the ground with his own hard work is an aristocratic status, one who works for his life, rather than depending on or feeding off others' hard work.

In this scene, the Adam referred to is the first man created by God and kept in the Garden of Eden. And according to the first gravedigger, he (Adam) was a gentleman/ aristocrat because he worked for himself and not depend on others for his survival.

Which of the following details is present in the texts and in the visual depiction of the myth?
A.
Prometheus steals the holy fire from the gods and teaches man how to use it.
B.
Prometheus moans in distress as he slowly freezes in the bitter, cold night.
C.
Prometheus is chained to a rock on the cliff and a bird attacks him.
D.
Prometheus and Zeus argue over man's right to use fire as a source of knowledge.

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Answer:

C. Prometheus is chained to a rock on the cliff and a bird attacks him.

Explanation:

The following details that is present in the texts and in the visual depiction of the myth is that in both the text and the myth, Prometheus is chained to a rock on the cliff and a bird attacks him.

This can be seen in the myth where Prometheus is powerless to defend himself against the attack of the bird.

Answer:Prometheus is chained to a rock on the cliff and a bird attack him

Explanation:

Identify some personal experience which manifests freedom of choice and explain the consequence of this choice on your life.​

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Answer:

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Explanation:

Which of these best describes the main conflict that Natalie faces?

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Answer:

do you have a picture of the paragraph or something ?

Explanation:

i cant rly help if i dont know who natalie is.

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