How does this sound?
Ever wondered what it's like for the mill workers each day? Well, they aren’t that good. The daily life of a worker is to wake up, eat little food, get to work on time, stand for about 15 hours, head to the dorms, eat poorly again, then sleep while being crammed in between 2 other people. Workers have to do gruesome tasks that can cause lots of health problems later on, such as arthritis and Postural orthostatic tachycardia syndrome. They were also not fed properly which can lead to…
• osteoporosis and bone fractures.
• infertility.
• developmental problems.
• a weakened immune system.
• malnutrition.
• increased risk of surgical complications.
• anemia.
• And chronic fatigue.
Some of these diseases can be treated, but some can’t. In conclusion, workers are treated very poorly. A lot of people have died while working there, and a lot are sick. These workers need to be treated better, they are human beings like the rest of us.
Answer:
I'd say you did a very fine job! You have a nice balance of description and facts.
The sentence "Well, they aren't that good" needs work, and could be changed, especially the phrase "aren't that good" seems quite passive.
You've used "a lot" repetitively, consider changing to "many" in the conclusion sentence.
Other than that its wonderful! Fix up tiny things and you should be very proud to turn that in.
Alexander Hamilton's economic plan was designed to - help build the national economy strengthen the powers of the state governments O prevent congressional control of interstate commerce O encourage British imports
Answer:
try listenig to the musical ”alexander hamilton” first Set!!! I’m sure you will find something!!!
Explanation:
i tryed it and it works!!!
What was the name of Leonardo's da Vinci pupil who was a model on some paintings for this artist (Saint John the Baptist)?
Gian Giacomo Caprotti da Oreno, better known as Salaì was an Italian artist and pupil of Leonardo da Vinci from 1490 to 1518.
How was the government of Sparta similar to the government of Athens? How was it different?
Answer:
They are different because Athens was a democracy and Sparta was a strictly-ruled military state.
Explanation:
Which of the following best summarizes the early history of Turkey?
a. Britain discovered the area and made it a colony.
b. Rule over the area changed many times.
c. The Byzantines founded the area as the center of the Roman Empire.
d. Rule stayed consistent under the Hittites until the Ottomans conquered the area.
More than three million people signed a petition that was sent to Congress. What is a petition?
Answer:
Explanation: A petition is a formal written request made to an official person or body