1
Alina realizes she has provided a weak thesis for her paper. Which of the following could
replace sentence 5 and provide a more effective thesis for Alina's paper?
A The truth is, when you go to summer camp you make so many new friends that you
never want to go home.
B. The best thing about summer camp is that the counselors are kind and friendly,
and you learn so many new things.
C Summer camp provides the kind of rich experience that every child should enjoy if
possible.
D Summer camp is important to me because it has allowed me to become part of a
loving community, attempt new things, and learn valuable lessons for life.

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Answer 1
What is the fifth sentence is there any more information to this question?

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Which of the following choices creates the most logical transition within sentence 2 (reproduced below)?
It may be too soon to start planning your Martian vacation, however: there are good reasons to doubt that humans will be able to undertake long distance space flights in the foreseeable future. А (as it is now) B therefore in other words instead meanwhile​

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Answer:

A

Explanation:

(as it is now)

Answer:

as it is now

Explanation:

took the exam

Pleaseeee helppppppppppooppp just A

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Answer:

5 cos they left for the moon first

1 they landed on the moon and built their house

2

3

4

6

7

Which sentence contains a pronoun with an unclear antecedent?

Lily and Stephanie went to the same school, but they were in different classes.

Timothy played basketball with his friends every afternoon.

Percy carried her stuffed animal everywhere she went.

Tim and Tom went to the park together, but he had to leave early to finish his homework.

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Answer:

The 4th one.

Explanation:

Because I don't know whether it's Tom or Tim that had to leave early.

Answer:

d

Explanation:

because took the quiz

Do you think women experience pain differently than men?

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Answer:

I think that both men and women experience a type of pain but I think women experience more pain than men.

(Please help ASAP!!!! 25 points!)

Read the poem.


The Charge of the Light Brigade
by Alfred, Lord Tennyson


1

Half a league, half a league,

Half a league onward,

All in the valley of Death

Rode the six hundred.

“Forward, the Light Brigade!

Charge for the guns!” he said.

Into the valley of Death

Rode the six hundred.

2

“Forward, the Light Brigade!”

Was there a man dismayed?

Not though the soldier knew

Someone had blundered.

Theirs not to make reply

Theirs not to reason why,

Theirs but to do and die.

Into the valley of Death

Rode the six hundred.

3

Cannon to right of them,

Cannon to left of them,

Cannon in front of them

Volleyed and thundered;

Stormed at with shot and shell,

Boldly they rode and well,

Into the jaws of Death,

Into the mouth of hell

Rode the six hundred.

4

Flashed all their sabres bare,

Flashed as they turned in air

Sabring the gunners there,

Charging an army, while

All the world wondered.

Plunged in the battery-smoke

Right through the line they broke;

Cossack and Russian Reeled from the sabre stroke

Shattered and sundered.

Then they rode back, but not

Not the six hundred.

5

Cannon to right of them,

Cannon to left of them,

Cannon behind them

Volleyed and thundered;

Stormed at with shot and shell,

While horse and hero fell.

They that had fought so well

Came through the jaws of Death,

Back from the mouth of hell,

All that was left of them,

Left of six hundred.

6

When can their glory fade?

O the wild charge they made!

All the world wondered.

Honour the charge they made!

Honour the Light Brigade,

Noble six hundred!


What effect does the meter in “The Charge of the Light Brigade” have on the reader?


(a) It gives it a light-hearted effect.


(b) It gives it an upbeat effect.


(c) It gives it a forward-moving marching effect.


(d) It gives it a funeral effect.

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D it gives it a funeral effect.

Do you think the Ice Bucket Challenge would have had the same success if the management at
ALSA initiated the challenge?

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Answer: yes

Explanation:

Answer:

i dont freaking know i just want some taco bell

Explanation:

PLZZ SOMEONE PLSSS HELP ME I TRIED AND I STILL CAN'T GET IT I WILL MARK BRAINLIEST. IT SAYS LABEL THE NOTES WITH SOLFEGE.​

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Answer: f, g, g, a,b flat, c, a, b flat, a g f

Explanation:

5 years of violin

Answer:

do, re, re, mi, fa, so, la, mi, fa, mi, re , do

Explanation:

6 years in band and choir. anyways those are it luv.

1. Which is NOT true of drawings in informational text? They can illustrate topics for which there are no photographs They can help bring the past to life. They are bashy on knowledge of the topic. They are usually completely imagined.​

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Answer:

They are usually completely imagined

Explanation:

If drawings appear in informational text, they are based on something in the real world

Answer:

They are usually completely imagined

Explanation:

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Write a letter to your mother who lives
Abroad asks her to you for at holes
thias you need, and exton why you from 2015 bece past question​

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Dear mother,

I noticed that you asked me if I need anything at home. I am doing okay, but thank you for asking. I'm not sure why Exton is from 2015, because I don't know what you're talking about.

Love,

Your child

I tried my best to understand the question, hope this helped.

Find 3 x2

5
6
17
or 32
one
5
5
or1
우이
or 12​

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Answer: 3 x2=6

Explanation:

The passages provide evidence to support the
conclusion that
O Esperanza's mother is happier about the
consequences of her choices than Arturo's abuelo is.
O Arturo's abuelo is happier about the consequences of
his choices than Esperanza's mother is.
O Esperanza's mother and Arturo's abuelo are both
happy about the consequences of their choices.
O Esperanza's mother and Arturo's abuelo are both
unhappy about the consequences of their choices.
No

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Answer:

B

Explanation:

Arturo’s abuelo is happier about the consequences of his choices than Esperanza’s mother is.

Answer:

B

Explanation:

HELP ASAP!!
Summarize the Mountain Meadow Massacre in 8 sentences

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Answer:

     The Mountain Meadows Massacre was a series of attacks which resulted in the mass murder of 120 members of the Baker–Fancher emigrant wagon train. The massacre occurred September 7–11, 1857 at Mountain Meadows in southern Utah, and was perpetrated by Mormon settlers belonging to the Utah Territorial Militia (officially called the Nauvoo Legion), together with some Southern Paiute Native Americans.

      The leaders of the militia, wanting to give the impression of tribal hostilities, persuaded some Southern Paiutes to join with a larger party of militiamen disguised as Native Americans in an attack. During the militia's first assault on the wagon train, the emigrants fought back, and a five-day siege ensued. Eventually fear spread among the militia's leaders that some emigrants had caught sight of white men and had likely discovered the identity of their attackers. As a result, militia commander William H. Dame ordered his forces to kill the emigrants. By this time, the emigrants were running low on water and provisions, and allowed some members of the militia—who approached under a white flag—to enter their camp. The militia members assured the emigrants they were protected, and after handing over their weapons, the emigrants were escorted from their hasty fortification. After walking a distance from the camp, the militiamen, with the help of auxiliary forces hiding nearby, attacked the emigrants. The perpetrators killed all the adults and older children in the group, sparing only seventeen young children under the age of seven.

       Following the massacre, the perpetrators hastily buried the victims, ultimately leaving the bodies vulnerable to wild animals and the climate. Local families took in the surviving children, and many of the victims' possessions were auctioned off. Investigations, after interruption by the American Civil War, resulted in nine indictments during 1874. Of the men indicted, only John D. Lee was tried in a court of law. After two trials in the Utah Territory, Lee was convicted by a jury, sentenced to death, and executed by Utah firing squad on March 23, 1877.

Is this a simple or a compound sentence?
They had no ice cream left at home, nor did they have money to go to the store.

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Answer:

This is a : Compound sentence

~hope this has helped you out, have a gr8 day my friend!~

Explanation:

What does Dr. King mean when he refers to the Emancipation Proclamation as a great beacon light
of hope?
I

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Answer:

What does king mean when he refers to the African American as an "exile in his own land"? ( Hint para.3) he means that African Americans were separated and they weren't as majority. they weren't seen as citizens. They didn't have the same rights.

Explanation:

Is it hard to get discovered and signed to a record label ? I’m scared

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Answer:

If you go on a singing TV show like The Four, The Voice, AGT,or something else your more likely to succeed and get someone to sign you to a record label.

Explanation:

How do passages 1 and 2 present the interaction between rip van winkle and his daughter differently ?

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Answer:

what passage?

Explanation:

N/A what are you talking about?

How does each writer feel about animals? Explain how you know this. (Reasons)

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Answer:

poop

Explanation:

hhjhjhhhkhhkhh

is it were or where?????

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Answer:

Your answer is were

Explanation:

I hope this helps

Have a nice day/night

mark brainiest, please :)

Fingers crossed for you to get a 100%

it’s were
hope you have a good day!

What method best describes the rhetoric John F Kennedy uses in his speech to convince people that Germany is undergoing a revolutionary moment?

A. an analogy of wave and communism
B. an anecdote about the Roman past
C. comparison of Rome and Germany
D. repetition of a phrase for emphasis

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Answer:

D. repetition of a phrase for emphasis

Explanation:

According to the speech made by John F Kennedy on June 26, 1963, he condemned Communism and tried to make a case to show that democracy is better.

The method that best describes the rhetoric John F Kennedy uses in his speech to convince people that Germany is undergoing a revolutionary moment is the repetition of a phrase for emphasis

The phrase "Let them come to Berlin" was used repeatedly.

What is the meaning of the adage "Live and let live"?


It is nice to be independent.


It is unkind to find fault with someone.


Allow people to do what they want.


People should live where they want.

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I like to think it is “mind your own business”

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Exercise
A. Write the correct forms of verbs given in the brackets:
1. The headmaster made us all ......... in at 4 o'clock. (stay, to stay, stayed)
2. Can you make the truck ....... .? (go, to go, gone)
3. I can't make it ...... ..... anything. (do, to do, done)
4. Salim made his son
hard. (work, to work, worked)
5. The colonel made the soldiers
30 km every day. (run, to run, ran)
6. His mother made him .............his medicine. (to take, take, taken)
7. His shoes are dirty, he will get the cobbler ...... them. (to polish, polish, polished)
8. How can he have his car ......... in two days? (repair, repaired, to repair)
9. I can't make this radio
(work, to work, worked)
10. Children have their tiffin .......... (prepare, prepared, to prepare)​

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Answer:

1.(stay)

2.(go)

3.(do)

4.(work)

5.(run)

6.(take)

7.(to polish)

8.(repaired)

9.(work)

10.(prepared)

Explanation:

1. (verb infinitive or verb1 only is applicable when there is 'make' or its varients as causative verb along with Subject and Agent in the sentence)

2. (to + verb infinitive or verb1 is applicable when there is 'get' or its varients as causative verb along with Subject and Agent in the sentence)

3. If there is no Agent but Subject and object, either 'get' or 'have' or their varients come with Verb3 used after the object.

I teach these grammar lessons everyday to my beloved students.

Animals inherit certain behaviors from their parents. They also learn certain behaviors. Which behavior results from both instinct and learning?Immersive Reader
(1 Point)

A cat shakes water from its fur.

b baby kangaroo climbs into its mother's pouch as soon as it is born.

c dog sits in front of its owner when a treat is offered.

d cat pounces on a mouse.

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Answer:

b............................................

can someone write me a 5 body paragraph essay 100 pts. DUE TODAY!!!!!!!!!

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Answer:

ENJOYING OUR CAPAIGN TRIP

Each year, thousands of people throughout the United States choose to spend their vacations camping in the great outdoors. Depending on an individual's sense of adventure, there are various types of camping to choose from, including log cabin camping, recreational vehicle camping, and tent camping. Of these, tent camping involves "roughing it" the most, and with proper planning the experience can be gratifying. Even with the best planning, however, tent camping can be an extremely frustrating experience due to uncontrolled factors such as bad weather, wildlife encounters, and equipment failures.

Nothing can dampen the excited anticipation of camping more than a dark, rainy day. Even the most adventurous campers can lose some of their enthusiasm on the drive to the campsite if the skies are dreary and damp. After reaching their destination, campers must then "set up camp" in the downpour. This includes keeping the inside of the tent dry and free from mud, getting the sleeping bags situated dryly, and protecting food from the downpour. If the sleeping bags happen to get wet, the cold also becomes a major factor. A sleeping bag usually provides warmth on a camping trip; a wet sleeping bag provides none. Combining wind with rain can cause frigid temperatures, causing any outside activities to be delayed. Even inside the tent problems may arise due to heavy winds. More than a few campers have had their tents blown down because of the wind, which once again begins the frustrating task of "setting up camp" in the downpour. It is wise to check the weather forecast before embarking on camping trips; however, mother nature is often unpredictable and there is no guarantee bad weather will be eluded.

Another problem likely to be faced during a camping trip is run-ins with wildlife, which can range from mildly annoying to dangerous. Minor inconveniences include mosquitoes and ants. The swarming of mosquitoes can literally drive annoyed campers indoors. If an effective repellant is not used, the camper can spend an interminable night scratching, which will only worsen the itch. Ants do not usually attack campers, but keeping them out of the food can be quite an inconvenience. Extreme care must be taken not to leave food out before or after meals. If food is stored inside the tent, the tent must never be left open. In addition to swarming the food, ants inside a tent can crawl into sleeping bags and clothing. Although these insects cause minor discomfort, some wildlife encounters are potentially dangerous. There are many poisonous snakes in the United States, such as the water moccasin and the diamond-back rattlesnake. When hiking in the woods, the camper must be careful where he steps. Also, the tent must never be left open. Snakes, searching for either shade from the sun or shelter from the rain, can enter a tent. An encounter between an unwary camper and a surprised snake can prove to be fatal. Run-ins can range from unpleasant to dangerous, but the camper must realize that they are sometimes inevitable.

Perhaps the least serious camping troubles are equipment failures; these troubles often plague families camping for the first time. They arrive at the campsite at night and haphazardly set up their nine-person tent. They then settle down for a peaceful night's rest. Sometime during the night the family is awakened by a huge crash. The tent has fallen down. Sleepily, they awake and proceed to set up the tent in the rain. In the morning, everyone emerges from the tent, except for two. Their sleeping bag zippers have gotten caught. Finally, after fifteen minutes of struggling, they free themselves, only to realize another problem. Each family member's sleeping bag has been touching the sides of the tent. A tent is only waterproof if the sides are not touched. The sleeping bags and clothing are all drenched. Totally disillusioned with the "vacation," the frustrated family packs up immediately and drives home. Equipment failures may not seem very serious, but after campers encounter bad weather and annoying pests or wild animals, these failures can end any remaining hope for a peaceful vacation.

These three types of camping troubles can strike campers almost anywhere. Until some brilliant scientist invents a weather machine to control bad weather or a kind of wildlife repellant, unlucky campers will continue to shake their fists in frustration. More than likely, equipment will continue to malfunction. Even so, camping continues to be a favorite pastime of people all across the United States. If you want camping to be a happy experience for you, learn to laugh at leaky tents, bad weather, and bugs, or you will find yourself frustrated and unhappy.

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Look at this illustration from A Black Hole Is NOT a Hole.

A film strip with 3 images of a red circle with a black dot in the center and a black ring. Image 1 shows an arrow entering the top left of the frame. Image 2 shows the arrow straight over the circle and starting to move downward on the right side. Image 3 shows the arrow spiraling into the center of the circle.

Which image has a similar purpose?

A small sphere followed by a long tail.
A black sphere back lit by several stars.
A cloud of gases.
Gases extend away from a star and spiral into the center of a black hole.

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Answer:

Gases extend away from a star and spiral into the center of a black hole.

The image that has a similar purpose is D. Gases extends away from a star and spirals into the center of a black hole.

What is a Text Purpose?

This refers to the use of literary text to send a message to the readers through the use of literary devices or other means.

Hence, we can see that from the given illustration, there is the use of narration to show how a black hole works by showing different film strips and the spiraling of gases contains a similar purpose (option D).

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What is the diffrent between communcation produivity and fixed
referen?

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Answer:

The difference between is a communications system with productivity and one with fixed reference is that productivity allows infinite sounds, where as fixed reference is a signal in the system of language that is fixed, and aren't manipulated.

Explanation:

Which statement best evaluates the effectiveness of this conclusion paragraph?
Thesis: Soccer is an exciting and popular sport that deserves more recognition and support in the United States.

Main Points:
Soccer is the most played sport in almost every country around the globe.
Soccer events are constantly some of the most watched sporting events on television.
Soccer is the most popular sport in almost every other country.
Conclusion: The United States should embrace the exciting sport of soccer, just as the rest of the world has. Soccer continues to be one of the most played and watched sports in the world, and it is only becoming more popular. In almost every other country in the world, the popularity of soccer far eclipses that of any other sport.


A.
The conclusion is ineffective because it fails to restate the thesis statement in a new way.

B.
The conclusion is effective because it adds new information not addressed in the main points.

C.
The conclusion is effective because it summarizes the main points of the essay.

D.
The conclusion is ineffective because it does not include a satisfying closing statement.

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The statement that best evaluates the effectiveness of this conclusion paragraph is this:

D. The conclusion is ineffective because it does not include a satisfying closing statement.

How effective is the conclusion?

The conclusion of this passage is not really effective because the closing statement that it bears is not really persuasive or forceful.

The conclusion is that part of a speech where the author should strive to restate his main point and include a call to action. All of these elements of an effective conclusiona re missing in the closing statement above.

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Read the following lines.

Dozens of kids circle
the worn wooden floor
on old rental skates,
and none of them wear
helmets or pads

In these lines, the poet's tone can be described as

ОООО
- playful
- cheery
- concerned
- bitter

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Answer:

Concerned

Explanation:

Answer:

Concerned

Explanation:

not 100% sure but I believe they're concerned.

Have any of you guys been getting those weird links in your answers? ¿Have you guys pressed it? I find it weird and sketchy.

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Answer:

yes mam/sir/toaster but i havent clicked the link cuz not an idiot

Explanation:

In this scene, Hamlet considers the performance of an actor, and reaches the conclusion that
A)
he is really only an actor himself.
B)
he is a better actor than the actor.
the actor's performance is unconvincing.
D)
he has greater cause to be upset than the actor,

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Answer:

D

Explanation:

i just did it

Which of the following statements is correct about pressure?
a. Pressure is directly proportional to the area of contact.
b. Pressure is inversely proportional to the force.
c. Pressure is inversely proportional to the area of contact.
d. Pressure does not depend on the area of contact.​

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Answer:

c.

Explanation:

The statement is correct about pressure is Pressure is inversely proportional to the area of contact. Thus the correct answer is C.

What is pressure?

The force delivered parallel to the ground to an object's surface in relation to its area is known as pressure. The pascal (Pa), or one newton per square meter (N/m2, or kg/m1/s2), is the SI unit for pressure.

The relationship between applied force and pressure is direct. In contrast, the pressure is reduced as the area expands. Because of this, the area of contact has an inverse relationship with pressure.

Therefore, option C is appropriate.

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